Write poetry with fu

1. The application of "Fu".

The poem "Vatan" has three paragraphs, and the first two sentences of each paragraph are "outspoken", which is directly described by the method of fu.

"Kan Kan", an onomatopoeic word, is like a live recording, which vividly describes the logging site. We seem to hear the sound of chopping wood, shouting, falling trees, breaking branches, and of course, we also hear the exclamation: what a heavy job! Not only should the tree be cut down, but it should also be transported to the river, slope and water edge, so that it can be carried out by water. How difficult it is to finish all these hard work by manpower! However, hard work did not bring any benefits to slaves, and all the fruits of hard work were occupied by slave owners. How unfair! We seem to hear the heartbeat of the slaves from the logging of the Kan Kan.

From the perspective of the whole poem, "Fu" is manifested in the discussion of something in each paragraph, such as the scene of logging and transporting firewood, the situation of "Erting County", criticism and satire, etc., which are expounded from different sides and levels. One is "speaking frankly" and the other is "spreading", which are the two main characteristics of Fu.

2. Use of "Xing".

"The river is clear and rippling with blue waves", which is expressed by the clear river. When the cool wind blows, it rolls up a layer of ripples, which actually implies the inner injustice of the slaves. The ripples on the water surface are a portrayal of the ripples in their hearts, so there are a series of questions and ironies as follows. Writing water means writing the heart, writing the heart first, "say something else first to cause the words to be sung."

The function of "Xing" is mainly realized through association. In a specific environment, two unrelated things go from here to there through association. The "river" and "woodcutter" here are two unrelated things, but in the specific environment of "logging", we naturally think of the angry voice of "woodcutter".

3 Bi: Storytelling compares the greedy slave-owner class to "storytelling" (big mouse).

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