Flowers bloom and flowers fall several times in cold and summer
Time, with a flick of a finger
The course of full moon, ebb and flow
The years are back
Stepping into the campus, is your heart happy?
Respect the stone statue, showing the elegant demeanour
Magnolia flowers bloom and the garden is full of fragrance
Campus is poetry, campus is painting?
the campus is a long river of history?
The campus is like the red leaves in Xiangshan
Dear 79 Middle School,
please allow me to open your picture poetically
please allow me to listen to your confidences devoutly
please allow me to set the exciting notes on your happy face
please allow me to sing for you with the purest, truest and most beautiful sound quality
enjoy your glorious journey together
trace back your glorious long journey
relive the sonorous singing of time along the way
. Far
the past has gradually faded in the washing of time
We will never forget
those who have searched up and down. Dedicated teachers
We won't forget
those who worked hard, Unswerving elite students
We will never forget
all the glorious and holy souls and firm and heroic figures
When the bell blows over the branches of the years
When the salute lights up the fireworks of the celebration
Thanks to this land of youth
Accepting my footsteps
Germinating my enlightenment
Grateful for its prosperity, Proud 79-year-olds
When the camera frames the moment as eternity
We always look back, and you are magnificent and elegant
We always call for your wisdom and responsibility
Sincerity, success
Let us use youth, sweat and life
from generation to generation. Endless
*** Narrating this eternal legend
Expert comments:
This poem praises the young author's alma mater, which is an eternal legend, which arouses readers' interest in reading, and readers will ask how it is legendary, which requires readers to read it carefully. In fact, each of our alma mater is a legend, so we must remember her and care about her. The article is lyrical and literary.
"Eternal" Tea
Inscription-Tea is available in every household, but each tea contains different feelings. Don't underestimate tea, which may be a good medium to convey feelings.
"Eternity", maybe people will think that there is any eternity in this world. Those are all deceiving children, but I think those who claim to be adults may not even be as good as children. They don't believe that there is eternity in this world, which is their ignorance. I think there is eternity in the world, and eternity can also exist in our hearts.
The colorful spring girl didn't know where she went, and the hot summer girl came without notice. As soon as she arrived, Miss Xia gave us a gift of "ghost weather"-it was sunny for several days, and it rained heavily for several days. This ghost weather makes me super uncomfortable, maybe it's getting better recently, but as soon as the ghost weather disappears, it's of course a hot and hot day. I'm very thirsty these days, and I feel like I'm seriously short of water. Nevertheless, I will feel happy and warm as soon as I get home. My mother will prepare me a cup of fragrant chrysanthemum tea no matter how busy she is, not just for one day, but since the hot summer girl came. I don't know whether my mother will make it in the future, but I know that this cup of tea is eternal now. This cup of tea is eternal, just like my feelings for my family, and it will never change.
Mom, even if this summer has passed, no matter what season it is, you should remember to make me chrysanthemum tea, because it is eternal.
Expert comment:
This narrative is lyrical, and the feelings are sincere and simple to express the little author's gratitude and love for his mother. However, the structure of the article is not very good, and the language is relatively dull. In addition, I hope that the young author will not say eternity easily, and the definition of this word will gradually change with the growth of people's age.
Forever shoulders
When loneliness becomes a kind of enjoyment, there is nothing to worry about, but when I am really lonely, I always want to find a shoulder to lean on, so I think of you-my classmates and my friends.
I have many friends, which are implicated by fate. Because of fate, we know each other, know each other and cherish each other. In the youth, we spray each other, walk through the wind, frost, snow and rain together, feel love and hate, and weave our dreams together, a true and pure legend about the world.
I still remember that warm comfort. After several consecutive exams, I began to get confused and lost my direction. It was you who stayed with me, comforted me, encouraged me and helped me, which made me regain my confidence. Once in the monthly exam, I took your blessings and expectations and finally achieved excellent results. At that time, no matter how difficult and frustrated I was, I would never despair or be depressed again. I know that you will always be by my side. You are the shoulders that I can always rely on.
Remember ...
Looking back, the sea of memories is pure and blue, and the details of the past have passed away, blowing in the wind. In front of everything, we no longer have it, all we do is not to forget it. When the shell of memory shines again, I will still sing the song we once sang together with the rhythm of the waves:
I am your shoulder, and I can see the whole world is sad in the distance behind you, watching you fly freely and freely. You are my shoulder, and all kinds of people will fight hard because the fragrance we face is our dream.
Expert comments:
Ambiguous views
Eternity
One amazing time, the other gentle time.
from what words can describe the past, what words can describe the past.
The flooded river steamed suddenly under the solar halo, so I looked at the prospect with relief and suddenly fainted to the ground. Blurred years blurred time, and the pale day left a clean mark.
inscription, heart. Repeat forever. Such as the source of the undercurrent in the eyes, staring at the blue sky for a long time, turning into a sad sight. Red, blue, black, straight lines. In fact, the knot in the heart is actually the touch of the soul; Far away, deeply relieved. I can't feel it anymore.
I can't talk about it any more. The camphor tree has flooded our youth. Looking at the sky at an angle of 45 degrees, there is still light, but you are not there. I don't need sunshine to go to mansha to live every inch of my world.
to my friends, to you who was once the only one, to my past forgetfulness, my stupid belief, my childish persistence, and thank you for letting me die in the sky.
The sky is still blue and pure, and it will be warm in late autumn because of clothes. Let the dust of hundreds of millions of planets disappear silently.
amazing the past of time, and I finally crushed it. Reason is just a cruel idea, stitched so perfectly from beginning to end. The light dissipates the wind. The years continue to be tender and gentle.
goodbye, past.
Expert's comment:
The thoughts and feelings are superficial, and the language is not fluent
Eternal time. You
The noise downstairs is still so loud. He hates those sounds, but there is nothing he can do. These sounds are really magical, just like drinking a cup of coffee, which is very bitter. "Why is this happening?" His tone was so low that he couldn't even hear himself in the tunnel. He began to recall, but unfortunately it wasn't called memory, because his mind only had that charming and sunny smiling face.
"the original self?" He stood in front of a school, which was strangely quiet, so quiet that he could only hear his breath. This was his original campus. He searched by memory and found a classroom. There were only two people in the classroom, one was himself and the other was her: his beliefs and his dreams. At this time, his face was filled with a bright smile, but no one paid attention to him because others could not see him. He used to smile, but his eyes were full of confusion and sadness, because the semester was coming to an end and she would leave her at any time, and everything began to turn yellow.
He cried, but she smiled, smiling innocently and confused, but she didn't love him deeply, and even became disgusted and silent. He was crying desperately, but they couldn't hear him, and he couldn't hear him. He tried to touch her hair again, but he couldn't touch it. Finally, he left disappointed.
In the evening, he had a dream. He dreamed that he and she were sitting on two roulette wheels of time, but she smiled and waved to him, and then slowly disappeared into the endless darkness.
Expert's comment:
Expressing the eternal energy of lack of literary talent
The eternal energy of love lies in the gap between people. The eternal love is clear, because everyone is lonely. People are not only thrown into this world, but also thrown away separately!
In God's place, before the soul was imprisoned in the body, at the beginning of life two, two, three and three, there was no difference between me, you and him, and the news of great existence was seamless, and it was everywhere. Then the world was born, the world was born, in fact, it was limited. The news of great existence was divided into hundreds of millions of small bodies and small cages. Crossed into the world, there are always some running silently, some shouting loudly, some eclipsed and drifting with the waves, some shining brilliantly, there are always weak and weak, and there is always Wang Zhongwang-no matter in what way, no matter what sign, no matter with a sword, money or words.
Nietzsche was right. Power will, all seeds want to sprout, all seeds want to grow up, and all thoughts want to spread. There is nothing we can do. Let's gather the weak together to be safe, and the strong will emerge from the weak. Let's pile the strong together to be equal, and the weak will precipitate from the strong. How about separating people one by one? Get together again and do nothing!
Expert's comment:
The language of discussion is not infectious and the discussion is not profound
Will it be eternal?
Time has changed, places have changed, friends have changed, ideals and pursuits have also changed ... What is eternal in the world?
in the vast universe, both planets and stars will be destroyed one day. Ignorant people naively say: "Spirit can last forever, it is a symbol of eternity!" " Is that really the case? I think people always think too well of everything.
people are always fickle.
A few days ago, I met a primary school classmate. He told me that he was learning to smoke and drink now. From her words and demeanor, I found that he seemed to be proud of it, a trendsetter and a show-off capital ... She was still a junior one student ... How could this happen? In the past, she was lively and cheerful. Although her academic performance was average, she was a good student who abided by discipline. Now she has gone astray!
I can only be surprised and sorry to see her like this ... Fortunately, I didn't choose the wrong path like her. I am changing step by step, and I have become a girl as tenacious as grass who dares to persist in her dreams, strive for her goals and strive for progress. I lost my childishness and ignorance, so I slowly changed ...
Great and selfless affection, pure and noble friendship, and undying love, no matter how warm, beautiful and vigorous, will not last forever, and it will die with the passage of time ...
Expert comments:
The expression is not literary, and the details are not appropriate.