I can't write poetry, so help me revise it ~

Modern poetry pays attention to the general rhyme, mainly relying on the presentation of images. Poetry is hard to be good without corresponding images.

Drawing lines is a typo.

Night comes.

The smile turned into romance.

Eyes represent commitment.

Don't need roses

already

Forever and ever-forever and ever

This image is not used well, and the word romantic is not true. Learn to hide words when writing poems. The so-called hidden words are not popular embedded words in Baidu, but small games that children ignore, but hide what you want to express. Some things seem to be nothing and know nothing.

Night comes.

Smiling darkens the stars and moonlight.

Look in your eyes and don't forget each other.

Who will look for the fragrance of roses?

hear nothing of

This place will always exist.