How to evaluate the poems of primary school students who burst into a circle of friends?

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Poetry in the age of ridicule.

But because of the true feelings of some children,

Become interesting.

One,

The first poem is simple, sentence by sentence. In the dark, the lamp is like a bright hole. Using heat as a verb also means that the lamp has a temperature.

Second,

The second poem is also in a dark environment, using the light of a flashlight as a crutch. This metaphor is really interesting.

The child likes some interesting metaphors. Both light and lamp have positive energy.

Third,

This third poem "War", if I live in wartime and others rush to the front, I can only shout "Come on".

Language is so popular that some children can't figure out what they want to express. Does he want to express his aversion to war, or his helplessness to war, or does he not want to go to war?

Fourth,

In this fourth poem "Eyes", children write eyes well, eyes are big enough to hold the world, eyes are small enough to hold tears.

The pattern of the first half of the poem is greatly enlarged, and the pattern of the second half of the poem is restored to personal feelings.

I really dissected my eyes deeply and fell in love with this poem.

Five,

This poem is also quite simple. When children draw pictures, they will draw colorful trees. When they look at the monotonous points of birds, clouds, ponds and flowers, they are "not worthy" of trees.

Six,

This is the true feeling of a four-year-old child. I will do everything well slowly, let time pass slowly, grow up slowly, and my parents will not get old.

Seven,

This poem is also my favorite, because it is very interesting. When we were young, we asked our mother where we came from, and she always replied that we picked it up. The child's ideas are very novel. Father and brother have the same surname, and mother is different from us. My mother picked it up. It's really childish to feel glad but not tell her the secret.

Eight,

The child wants to turn himself into a tree. When he is happy, he shows his happiness. When he is unhappy, he shows his unhappiness and does not hide his feelings.

Truth, goodness, beauty, light and love,

What poetry should pursue,

Poets need to learn from their children.