In this beautiful March in Ruyan Liu, my old friend Meng Haoran will leave Yangzhou, a city with beautiful flowers and curtains. Li Bai, a good friend, invited Meng Haoran to the Yellow Crane Tower near the Yangtze River to see him off.
It was only six o'clock, and there was a reddish glow in the sky. Li Bai took out a bottle of wine from a small wooden box. He said, "Brother Meng is leaving the Yellow River Collection, so I will give you this vintage wine.
When you go to Yangzhou in this beautiful season, I envy you very much, but I am reluctant to give up. You will go to the East, I don't know when you will come back ... "Meng Haoran interrupted Li Bai:" Brother Li doesn't have to give up, but my younger brother just goes to Yangzhou, which is not far from here. Li Ge missed me, so he came to Yangzhou to get together with me, and we'll get drunk again ... ""Meng Haoran, the boatman shouted below. "Brother Li, goodbye!" Meng Haoran clenched Li Bai's hand.
"See you later, take care!" Li Baidao. Meng Haoran hurried downstairs and boarded the ship.
Meng Haoran's ship set sail, and Li Bai stood on the Yellow Crane Tower and reluctantly waved to his old friend. He watched the boat sail, took his old friends farther and farther, and finally disappeared at the end of the blue sky.
At this time, only the surging waves rushed to the end of the blue sky, as if catching up with old friends. Li Bai stood there staring into the distance and thinking for a long time.
All this lingered in Li Bai's mind, so he picked up a pen and wrote a farewell to Meng Haoran on his way to Yangzhou: an old friend left the Yellow Crane Tower in the west and fireworks went down to Yangzhou in March. In late spring and March, the Yangtze River is misty and full of flowers. Bai bid farewell to the great poet Meng Haoran on the Yellow Crane Tower.
The Yellow Crane Tower flies from the eaves and walks on the wall, overlooking the Yangtze River. Li Bai and Meng Haoran look up at the blue sky and white clouds for a while, and overlook the scenery on the river for a while, both deliberately not touching the feelings of parting hidden in their hearts.
Finally, Li Bai raised his glass and said, "Master Meng, your personality is admirable, and your poems are famous all over the world. I have always regarded you as my brother and teacher since I met you.
Today, you will go downstream to Yangzhou. I don't know when we will meet again. Please fill this cup! Meng Haoran picked up his glass and gulped it down, then said, "Wang Bo said it well,' However, as long as China keeps our friendship, heaven will still be our neighbor." Although we are temporarily separated, our friendship will always be like the waves of the Yangtze River. "
Willows are weeping on the shore, and Sha Ou is dotted on the river. A friend got on the boat.
The white sail faded away with the kawakaze and disappeared at the end of the blue sky. Li Bai is still standing by the river, staring at the distance, only seeing a spring flowing to the horizon ... Li Bai couldn't help but be excited and immediately sang a well-known poem-"Yellow Crane Tower Farewell Meng Haoran on the way to Yangzhou": An old friend left the Yellow Crane Tower in the west, and fireworks went down to Yangzhou in March.
My friend's sail shadow faded away and disappeared at the end of the blue sky, only seeing the first line of the Yangtze River and heading for the distant horizon. Fireworks In March, Brother Meng and I rode to the Yellow Crane Tower, where we often go.
Today is the day when Brother Meng will go to West Yangzhou. I have prepared farewell wine and snacks for Brother Meng. Meng Xiong and I boarded the Yellow Crane Tower and sat at a table by the window, drinking wine and eating our snacks.
At this time, the breeze was blowing gently, blowing Meng Xiong's clothes and mine. (The author has a rich imagination. From this detail, we feel the feeling of spring and endow the article with dynamic beauty. Brother Meng and I put down our glasses, went to the window and looked at the ocean of fireworks outside. The river is sparkling and flocks of birds are flying freely in the blue sky.
(from the previous narrative to the description of the scenery, naturally. ) In such picturesque scenery, Meng Xiong and I had a great interest in poetry, and we drank good poems one after another.
When we were happy, we began to talk about our worries, ambitions and ideals. After a long talk, it's getting late and Brother Meng is leaving.
Brother Meng and I can only drink one last glass of wine. I stood up with a hip flask in one hand and a glass in the other. I slowly filled Meng Xiong with wine and poured myself another. Meng Xiong and I picked up the glass together. The description of the scene makes the reader feel immersive. Brother Meng said, "Hey! All good things must come to an end. Let's say goodbye today. I don't know when to meet again. Come on! Let's have a drink. "
Say that finish, we drink off. At this time, Brother Meng packed his luggage and said, "Dear brothers, I'm leaving."
"I'll give you another ride!" I said. Say that finish, Meng Xiong and I went downstairs together.
This sentence is not in harmony with the artistic conception of the article, so the first sentence below can indicate the destination. ) We walked hand in hand on the tree-lined path, and the scenery on the road was really beautiful, so full of spring scenery.
The green grass is dotted with wild flowers, and the trees on the roadside are sprouting and turning green. The wind is blowing, the river is sparkling, and a free bird is chasing behind us, singing with its euphemistic song, as if singing a farewell song for Meng Xiong. In such a vibrant scenery, we have no intention of enjoying it.
We were silent all the way. The beautiful scenery creates a deep sadness of parting.
With a stroke of a pen, the sadness of parting was subtly highlighted. ) came to the river, the ship has arrived, Meng Xiong was about to board, I grabbed Meng Xiong, (too suddenly, Li Bai and Meng Haoran were quite natural and unrestrained about this separation.
There will be no such dramatic performance! ) said: "I don't know when I can meet again. I wish you a pleasant journey and peace. "
Brother Meng said gratefully, "We will definitely meet again." Brother Meng got on the boat and stood at the bow. Our eyes met. He took my hand and said, "Goodbye!" The boatman paddled and the boat paddled slowly forward.
Meng Xiong stood at the bow and waved to me all the time. I waved and silently blessed Meng Xiong. The ship left and disappeared on the horizon where the water meets the sky, only the shadow of the ship could be seen.
Nearby, I saw the waves beating layer by layer and rushing to the shore. The shadow of the fish is reflected in the water; In the distance, the river is sparkling and rolling forward.
I have been standing by the river and never left. Watching, I sang a poem: An old friend said goodbye to the West Yellow Crane Tower, and fireworks went down to Yangzhou in March.
My friend's sail shadow faded away and disappeared at the end of the blue sky, only seeing the first line of the Yangtze River and heading for the distant horizon. 1 Drinking the bright moon alone Li Bai 2 seeing off his friend Li Bai 3 Yellow Crane Tower 4 Parting Li Bai 5 Bai Xuege seeing off Tian Shuji Wu going home 6 Deep Mountain Autumn Night Wang Wei 7 seeing off his old friend Zhuang Meng Haoran 8 You Zhou Tower Xie.
2. It is best to describe the ancient poems in the starry sky as reference materials in the composition. One of the Nineteen Ancient Poems of Han Yuefu is Cowherd Star and Jiao Jiao Hehan Girl. Delicate hands, firm machines to express; Tears fall like rain all day long; How clear and shallow the river is! In the Tang Dynasty, Li Shangyin's "Chang 'e Mica Screen" has a deep shadow, with the long river gradually falling and the stars sinking. Chang 'e should regret stealing the elixir, the sky is blue and the night is bright. During the Northern and Southern Dynasties, Shen Yue bent the river vertically and horizontally every night, and the Beidou was horizontal and straight. If the stars are empty, would you like to have memories? The lonely lamp is warm and unknown, and the cold machine is still woven. The crow sighed, Who are you crying to? The autumn wind is bleak, the weather is cold, and the vegetation is frosty. The guests were heartbroken when the flock of geese bid farewell to Nanyan. If you miss your hometown, why did you send it to stay for a long time? My concubine lived alone, worried about her husband, afraid of forgetting her, and burst into tears, feeling stained with clothes. With the help of the piano, she can sing the strings clearly, and short songs won't last long. The bright moon shines on my bed, and the stars are shining, and the night is still young. Cowherd and Weaver Girl face each other from a distance, why are they confined to the river beam alone? On the night of June 20th, Su Shi fought across the sea all night, and the bitter rain finally cleared up. Who decorated the clouds and the moon? Clarify the nature and color of the sea. In my spare time, I know the music played by Xuanyuan. I don't hate dying in the south, so I travel for the rest of my life. In fact, Li Qingzhao's Fisherman is proud of seeing clouds and fog, and the Milky Way wants to dance with Qian Fan. It's as if the dream soul belongs to the emperor, and Wen Tian asks me where to go. I report a long way. Near the Mid-Autumn Festival, there is no charm at all. Jade Sword Qiongtian covers an area of 30,000 hectares and holds a leaf in my boat. The moonlight is bright, the Ming river is sparkling, and the face is clear. I have a carefree heart, but that beauty is hard to tell you. It should be remembered that the mountains show the years, and I am lonely and self-conscious, and my courage is ice and snow. My short hair is thin and cold, steady and wide. If two kinds of feelings last for a long time, they are still there, day and night.
3. It is conducive to writing poems about poems and songs, and textbooks are the main ones. It is not recommended to recite other materials. On the one hand, poetry is generally not used for composition; On the other hand, mastering textbook recitation can not only prepare for the grading of recitation in Chinese single-subject exams, but also leave a good image for teachers who use textbook materials to mark papers in their compositions.
If you are a high school student, you'd better not read any more famous books (I have a deep understanding). On the one hand, due to time constraints; On the other hand, reading famous books has no obvious effect on improving literary literacy.
I am a senior three graduate, ranking first in Chinese (the whole school 1000 people), and my composition has been published many times. I can talk about my own experience.
In a sense, the best reading material to improve composition and Chinese performance is the composition book. But attention is not a new concept composition, because "new concept" can no longer be called an exam-oriented composition. Recommend an anthology of full marks and high marks in college entrance examinations over the years.
You take some time to read your favorite articles every morning and evening before self-study, and it will have a good effect after one month. If you are a girl, you should pay attention to observing life. Articles with warm language are easy to get high marks until full marks.
Girls write lyrical narratives or essays. Here are some excellent articles with strong lyricism or beautiful language over the years. There is an essay "I want to hold your hand" in Shanghai college entrance examination (author, Shi, Wang Zhaojun, Yang Guifei). An article entitled "Don't let clouds cover your eyes" (rhyming lyrical); An article entitled "Forever Su Wu" (majestic sentence); There is also an article "Mist and rain are coming". .. because there are many, so I won't say much.
Anyway, you can read more articles that you think are suitable for you, and then you will unconsciously recite them. You can recite the composition according to your own preferences, and you don't have to force it.
There are regional differences in getting high marks in composition. I come from Zhejiang, so philosophical articles are more popular. You can find out what kind of compositions your teachers like there. In this way, I believe you can also get high marks in the college entrance examination composition.
Let's talk about famous sayings. Using one or two famous sayings in the composition will create a bright spot for the composition. But accumulation is a big problem at ordinary times, and there is often a feeling that you have accumulated but don't use it. Here's a secret to tell you. You can give your composition a bright spot without accumulation. You write a deep sentence, and then you label it (what others say), because it's something you can't learn. A person has said so many words all his life, how does the marking teacher know if that sentence was said by a celebrity?
If you want to write part-time, don't be too rigid, just follow your heart. But this is usually after the college entrance examination, because I experienced the tension in high school.
4. Better ancient poem Jiang Sushi
On the 20th of the first month, Yi Mao remembered her dreams day and night.
Ten years of life and death,
Never think, never forget.
A lonely grave thousands of miles away is sad everywhere.
Even if we don't know each other when we meet,
Face covered with dust, temples like frost.
When night comes, the dream suddenly comes home.
Xiao Xuan window, get dressed.
Care for each other without words, only a thousand lines of tears
It is expected that the annual sad place,
Moonlight night, short matsuoka.
Jianyimei Red Lotus Root Fragrant Yu Can Qiu Chan Li Qingzhao
Lotus root is fragrant, and jade is lingering in autumn.
Gently untie Luo Shang and go to Lan alone.
Who sent the brocade book?
The word goose returns, and the moon is full of the west building.
Flowers bloom and fall, flowing water gurgles,
One kind of lovesickness, two places of leisure.
I can't eliminate this situation,
Only under the eyebrows, but in my heart.
5. Recommend some well-written poems "Facing the sea, spring blossoms"
-Haizi
From tomorrow on, I want to be a happy person;
Comb hair, chop wood and travel around the world.
From tomorrow on, I will care about food and vegetables.
Living in a house facing the sea, spring is blooming.
From tomorrow on, write to everyone I love.
Tell them my happiness,
What did the lightning of happiness tell me,
I will distribute it to each of them.
Give every river and mountain a warm name.
Stranger, I will also wish you happiness.
I wish you a bright future!
May you lovers get married!
May you be happy on earth.
I only want to face the sea and spring blossoms.