Life is like a river flowing eastward. He gathered many streams, synthesized a powerful Hong Tao, ran down and enjoyed everything that happened to him along the way; Sometimes, when he meets a steep rock, he rushes up excitedly until he rushes down this dangerous cliff. Sometimes, after a fine sand leveling, he sees red peach blossoms on the shore, and he spends this romantic journey happily and shyly. At this time, he just wanted to rest and sleep, but the force of progress still urged him to move forward ... Finally, one day, he saw the sea from a distance, ah! He has reached the end of the formation, and the sea solemnly extended its arms to accept him, and he flowed into his arms without thinking. He melted, naturalized, unspeakable happiness, and no sadness! Maybe one day, he will rise from the rain on the sea and fly to the west, forming a river and rushing down the stone walls on both sides to look for peach blossoms on the shore.
However, I dare not say the afterlife, and I can't believe it!
Life is like a small tree, which gathers a lot of vitality from the ground, stretches under the snow and ice, and bravely and happily emerges from the wet soil in early spring. When he meets extravagant spring, he may be full of flowers, bees and butterflies flying around him, and birds singing on his fingers; He grew to the most lush middle age, and he stretched out a shade like a cover to cover the flowers and plants under the tree; He bears countless fruits to show the endless sweetness of the earth and the pride of flowers. Not the happiness of the result, but the peace and joy after success! Finally, one day, he danced feebly in the air and groaned under the roots. The earth solemnly extended its arms to accept him, and he silently threw himself into her arms. He has melted and naturalized, and he is not happy or sad! Maybe one day, he broke out from the underground nuts again. And grow into a small tree, and then through the thick cover, and then listen to the singing of the oriole.
However, I dare not say the afterlife, and I can't believe it.
The universe is a big life, and we are a breath in the cosmic atmosphere. The river flows into the sea and leaves take root. We are a leaf in a big life and a drop in a big life. Not every river can enter the sea, and those that don't flow will become dead lakes; Not every seed can become a tree, and those that don't grow will become empty shells! Life is not always happy, nor is it always painful. Happiness and pain complement each other. We should thank life in happiness and also in pain. Happiness is exciting, but isn't pain beautiful?
The author's understanding of the essence of life is: the road of life is tortuous, and it has to go through all kinds of hardships, including pain and happiness, and pain is also a kind of happiness; Life exists in sports, and the process of life is a process of progress and struggle; Individual life is a part of the big life in the universe and will eventually return to the mother of the big life in the universe; The experience of life is fresh at first, then calm, and finally returns to the mother of big life, without joy or sorrow ... The essence and law of life lies in vigorous growth and brave progress, which can not be stopped or suppressed by any force; It is weak at first, then powerful, and finally dies, in which happiness and pain are accompanied by twists and turns. What is stated here is the author's understanding of the nature of life, rather than talking about the individual's understanding of his own life.
Taking A Spring River and A Little Tree as metaphors, this paper reveals the process and general law of life from growth to growth and then to decline, as well as the same law of life's joys and sorrows, expressing the will to struggle in life and the spirit of open-mindedness and optimism. Structurally, there is only one paragraph in the text, that is, there is no subsection in the middle, but the thinking is clear and the rules are strict, so it is easy to see the writing level. The following is a brief analysis of his thoughts and feelings, way of thinking and language use.
"Talking about life" is a very common topic, but at the beginning of this article, there is a commotion, not saying "what is life", but saying "what is life". "What" is the definition; "What do you like" is a literary expression, which determines the image, aesthetics and metaphor of the full text. In short, the opening words are to alert the eyes and prompt the topic.
Next, it describes the whole life course of "one river spring water". There are several situations in the process of human life, but the "sometimes" situation described here, in terms of the nature and state of things, does not correspond to the stages of human life one by one, but shows the richness of human life. "He gathered many small streams ... thousands of miles away." These sentences are very coherent, powerful and powerful. Several important words, such as "Happy and Brave", "Enjoy", "Anger" and "Roar", are all emotional and play a great role in shaping the image of "spring water" and expressing the author's mind.
Then describe the whole life course of "a small tree" Different from the previous layer, these successive stages, from "emerging from the shell" to "growing to the most prosperous middle age" and then to "naturalizing with others", outline or indicate the course of human life. But it is consistent with the previous level in tone and meaning. The first few words, "life is like ... standing in the hot sun!" " In close reading, we can feel the impulse and forge ahead of life force, in which words such as "gathering", "breaking shell", "stretching out" and "breaking free" play an important role in expressing this meaning; In addition, the words "happiness", "singing", "dancing" and "tranquility and joy" express the same thoughts and feelings as the previous level.
Finally, summarize the full text, clarify and deepen the theme. At this level, the author reveals the essence of life (from humble and insignificant to growth and evolution), and lighting music and pain is the basic melody of the song of life. The first few words are unusual, "the universe is a big life ... a drop in a big life", and the tone is high and powerful, revealing the author's broad thoughts and broad mind. "Life is not always happy, and it is not always painful. Happiness and pain complement each other. " In happiness, we should thank life, and in pain, we should also thank life. "These two sentences are the most thoughtful and emotional sentences written by the author with decades of life experience, and they are also full-text sentences. The author refines profound philosophy, showing his outlook on life, attitude towards life, and profound understanding of society, nature and life. The full text has a high-pitched, passionate and philosophical artistic conception, which is more obvious at the end.
This paper has both perceptual and rational characteristics. As far as the former is concerned, "a spring river" and "a small tree" are figurative expressions, which vividly and implicitly describe their progress and growth process and give people beautiful enjoyment. This is the remarkable feature of this article as a literary novel, poem and literary work. As far as the latter is concerned, the article reveals the general law of life, the dialectics of bitterness and pleasure in the process of life, the diversity and richness of happiness, and the relationship and interaction between cosmic lives, which are the embodiment of the philosophical implication and rational spirit of the article.
In addition, this paper is also very distinctive in the use of language, all of which are pure white, but clear, ingenious, meaningful and charming. Many words suggested above are examples. There are also repeated sentences, such as "Life is like …" and "Life is like …", which not only become the symbol of writing level, but also have the feeling of melody turning and repeated singing. "The sea (the earth) solemnly extended its arms to receive him, and he silently flowed into (landed in) her arms. He melted, naturalized, unhappy, not sad! " "But, I dare not say the afterlife, and I dare not believe the afterlife!" This repeated sentence is solemn and alert, vivid and full of thoughts. Among them, "not happy or sad" is a special feeling. Perhaps in the feelings and imagination of ordinary people, death is painful and sad, but the author has transcended these and reached an ideological height that an extraordinary person can reach. The sentence seems ordinary, but in fact it contains profound feelings and meanings.