Looking at the smoke from the kitchen,
It seems not far from the cabin.
I don't know how to go up and down the mountain.
A walk is half a day! ?
The road is tortuous,
Turn left, then turn right. ?
This is obviously on the edge of the village.
Why can't I see a family? ?
There are trees everywhere,
Ivy hangs on the eaves ...?
Thanks to the barking of the puppy,
Call the guests to the door.
Shanzhai is a poem. Although this poem is short, it is very interesting. Although the title of the poem is "Shanzhai", the author focuses on the wonderful sight he saw on his way to Shanzhai. The poet went from visiting the hut
Angle, wrote the location of the hut, the surrounding environment, but also expressed a cheerful mood. The straight-line distance to the cottage is short, the actual distance is long, and the forest is covered with trees, so a very interesting phenomenon is produced: look closely and walk.
It's far. "Look at the smoke coming out of the kitchen."
"Obviously at the edge of the village", it says watch; "Go up and down the mountain for half a day", "Turn left and turn right, you can't see a house", which says that it is a long way to go, and the mountain road is long and curved.
"Trees are everywhere in the forest, green vines are hanging on the eaves" and "no one is seen" are the characteristics of the cottage.
The poem ***3 section, section 1 from the feeling to write:
"Look at the floating smoke, it seems not far from the hut. I don't know how to go up and down the mountain. Walking for a long time! " In just two sentences, the characteristics of mountain roads are written: seeing closely and walking far; Two words "seven turns and eight bends" were used in the second quarter.
Turn left and turn right describes the twists and turns of mountain roads; The third section not only writes "Trees are covered by trees and green vines hang eaves" on the roadside and huts, but also pays attention to constructing artistic conception from the auditory aspect, which is a "barking" dog guest.
Take it into the cottage and take it to the door of the cottage. The whole poem is in one go, seamless and full of interest.
The poet's mood is ups and downs: first, he thinks that the distance is not far, and he is full of expectations to climb the mountain, but he knows that "it takes half a day to walk"; "At the edge of the village", I realized that "no one has seen it". The puppy "greets guests" while groping among the green vines in the forest. Every paragraph is a positive and a negative, which gives people a surprise.
This poem is also very distinctive in language. The first two sections are first raised and then suppressed, and the last section is first suppressed and then raised. Poetry is written in spoken language, full of emotion; Exclamation sentences and rhetorical questions also add emotion to poetry.