You are a freshman in high school. First of all, I want to tell you a mistake. That is, this poem is written by Zheng Chouyu, not Dai Wangshu. Dai Wangshu wrote about Yuxiang. Now there are two poems. I found them all for you
Error - I walked through Jiangnan
The face waiting in the season is like the blooming and falling of the lotus
The east wind does not come , the catkins do not fly in March
Your heart is like a small lonely city
Just like the bluestone street facing the evening
The sound is silent, March The spring curtain is not lifted
Your heart is a small window tightly closed
My dada’s horse hooves are beautiful mistakes
I am not a returnee , is a passerby...
The poem "Error" has nine lines and ninety-four words. It is not long, but the artistic skills it shows are not only praised by others, but also praised by others. Recited orally. From a structural point of view, there are two clues, vertical and horizontal. The clearly visible vertical lines run from the big scene to the small scene, with clear layers. The first two sentences take the vast Jiangnan as the background, then move the camera to the small town, then to the streets, curtains, windows, and finally fall on the horse's hooves and break the silence in front of them. This writing method is quite similar to the spatial treatment in Liu Zongyuan's "Snow on the River", starting from the big scene of "thousands of mountains with birds flying away", and finally settling on the small scene of the fisherman fishing alone in the middle of the river, which pushes the poetic sentiment layer by layer. Towards climax. Judging from the horizontal lines, the first two sentences should be the ending, precisely because "I" walked from Jiangnan to the woman's place without entering. The woman's expected "face is like a lotus blooming and falling", and the passion of waiting turned into the heart Disheartened. The last two sentences should have been "I am not a returnee, but a passerby", so "My dada's horse hooves are beautiful mistakes", here the poet used a small inversion sentence. This arrangement creates unevenness in the structure, which makes it even more poetic and shines brightly in the disharmony. Another touching thing about this poem is the beauty of its language, especially the "Beautiful Mistake" number. This sentence is originally contradictory. "Dada's horse's hoof" strikes the heart of the woman who hopes to reunite, so it is beautiful. However, the sound of horse hooves was just passing by and did not stop for her expectation, so it was a mistake. The ups and downs, and the reversal of the scenes before and after, produced a high degree of drama, and formed a dynamic trend of ups and downs. If associated with the Chineseness of this poem, it is also similar to the artistic conception expressed in Wang Han's "The luminous cup of grape wine, I want to drink with the pipa immediately". At the same time, Zheng Chouyu also used the images of traditional Chinese classical poetry in his poems, such as "lotus", "catkins", "horse hoofs", and "spring curtains". In particular, the image of "east wind" is taken from the "image" in Li Shangyin's "Untitled" It's hard to say goodbye when we see each other. The meaning of "the east wind is powerless and the flowers are withered" once again expresses the most fundamental aspect of Zheng Chou's Chineseness. Yang Mu's long article in "The Legend of Zheng Chouyu" said: "Zheng Chouyu is a Chinese poet in China. He writes with good Chinese characters, has accurate images, gorgeous voice, and is absolutely modern." This emphasizes the Sinicization of Zheng Chouyu's poetic language. Thus reflecting Chinese thoughts and emotions. The purity of words is another virtue of this poem. When Zheng Chouyu talked about the skills of writing poetry, he said: "When writing poetry, you must be loyal and honest to yourself, rather than bluffing. If you are not sure about what you write, it is unfaithful." Therefore, Zheng Chouyu's "Mistakes" emphasizes It is pure and neat, fresh and light. It does not play games with words or pile up words. It strives to show the poet's most loyal feelings with the most faithful words. This is a true and sincere poem. "Mistake" can still touch the heartstrings of countless readers. I think the most important factor is not winning with words, but touching people with its inner emotions. This kind of emotion is not disguised or embellished. It harmonizes the scene in the poem and produces endless artistic appeal.
In this popular and widely recited poem, the lyrical protagonist imagines that his wife or lover is missing him deeply. The structure of the poem is very special, it is an inverted writing method. The first two sentences of the poem should have been the end, that is, the protagonist walked past the door of the house but failed to enter, so the beloved woman was disappointed, and her long-awaited face bloomed like a lotus; her passionate love was disheartened. But if these two sentences are placed at the end according to the normal structure, on the one hand, the idea will appear too gray and cold, and on the other hand, the structure of the poem will appear bland. After the poet reversed it, the idea and structure of the poem suddenly became much more novel.
The middle section of the poem describes the mood of missing a wife. If the east wind does not come, the catkins in March will not fly, which means "the east wind is powerless and all the flowers will be withered". If you can't wait for the return of your loved one, your heart will naturally not be filled with fluffy catkins, so your lonely heart will become a lonely town. The heel has not sounded, the spring curtain of March has not been lifted, the footsteps of the beloved cannot be heard, the mood is lazy, the hair is unkempt, and the little heart is like a closed window. How serious is the lovesickness of this missing woman!
The last two sentences also use an inversion sentence pattern. "My Dada's horse hooves are beautiful mistakes" comes from "I am not a returnee, but a passerby", which is the final word of "I". Feeling. But "I" pass by the house without entering, not in order to more powerfully control the woman's heart and pervertly satisfy "my" selfish desires. Otherwise, "I" would not think of "I am not a returnee, but a passer-by." It comes down to "mistakes". The word "mistake" actually reveals a deep regret and even guilt.
Why does this "error" occur? Is the protagonist's "traveling across Jiangnan" a real action or a fantasy (what Freud calls a "daydream")? The poet does not answer, but leaves endless room for the reader's imagination.
"Mistake" is short in length, but the poet wrote it with twists and turns, which added room for imagination to the poem and the lingering feelings. The poem uses lotus as a metaphor for people, which is in line with the appearance and heart of beautiful girls from the south of the Yangtze River. It uses oxymoron to reveal the characters' inner hearts, which has a unique charm. It is an excellent poem about boudoir and a shining star in Chinese poetry. Pearl.