Composition primary school review 1 1, you are very good at observing life and can keenly capture meaningful moments; You are a student with great potential.
2. The language of the article is fluent, which also shows the teacher's feelings. You are the teacher's bosom friend. I hope we can learn from each other and collect a bunch of fragrant flowers in the garden of literature.
Sorry, the teacher didn't understand this paragraph. Would you like to explain it to the teacher again? Thank you.
Your handwriting is neat and beautiful. Teachers should learn from you. If the material selection of the article is novel, it will definitely complement the writing style. what do you reckon ?
5. After reading your article, it seems that a stream flows before my eyes, pure and lovely. I hope you can keep this style of writing and express rich connotations in pure language.
6. Writing is like being a man. From your life experience, you can see that you are a good young man who makes progress. You have your own unique insights and profound understanding of things, which is really commendable.
7. With concrete examples, vivid and beautiful language and novel and unique writing style, this paper expresses sincere praise for the beautiful mind.
8. Devotional praise, deep mourning, revealing the true feelings of every word, pouring out joys and sorrows, and measuring gains and losses. The little author tailored the classroom for everyone with the poet's language and philosopher's eyes. The whole article is like a sculpture full of artistic courage, broad and heavy, strong and simple and natural, which embodies the young author's superb language control ability, heavy mind and keen light. Exquisite language, rigorous structure, profound speculation and extensive knowledge are all pleasing to the eye.
9. Xu Pengfei, today the teacher was nervous and excited when she was admiring your excellent works. As if in the fierce competition. You are patriotic, otherwise, how can you get up from your sweet sleep at 4 o'clock in the morning to watch this live broadcast? Look carefully, you clearly put that exciting scene into the text.
10, you read widely and accumulated a lot of words. Therefore, when describing the movements and expressions of characters, they can be vividly expressed with appropriate words. The teacher is glad to have a student like you. Keep trying. Your dream as a writer will come true.
1 1. Your extracurricular life is really wonderful. From your article, the teacher knows that you are a good chess player. Not only is the chess skill good, but also the chess style is better. I'll learn a trick from you anytime. Study for a few more years and take part in the chess game, and you will definitely win the prize.
12, the corner of the campus you wrote is really beautiful. Flowers, grass, trees and corridors all contain unparalleled feelings. You are a person who can observe life. Teachers and classmates appreciate you very much!
13, the article melts into the scenery, describes the scenery while expressing emotions, and is good at using analogy to make the article vivid and concrete.
14, the article is novel in content, reasonable in structure, fluent and coherent, and naturally accessible.
15, this article is based on real life, with appropriate materials, great originality, clear paragraphs, natural transition, full of interest and strong readability.
16, with fluent full-text language and free and easy writing, is a relatively successful work.
17. Although the language of this article is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, with rich and true emotions, which is pleasing to read.
18, the structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is also very profound and thorough. The full text is forceful, hit the floor.
19, the article is narrated in children's language, natural and simple, like a clear spring. The finish line played the role of finishing touch.
20. The article is vivid and sincere, especially the article about the right to use is very infectious and thought-provoking.
2 1, the narrative is clear, the verbs are used correctly, and the metaphor is appropriate and vivid. Make suggestions and get education from them after reading them.
22. Simple and natural childlike innocence is reflected in the article, which makes the article exude a fresh and lively atmosphere.
23. You are getting better and better! Your composition really opened my eyes. Your mother is more beautiful. She is passionate about patients, meticulous and extremely responsible. How worthy of our study is this spirit! I am also proud that you have such a good mother!
24. Reading your travel composition seems to be immersive. You have written a two-story giraffe vividly, and the naive giant panda, clever little monkey and cunning fox are vividly on the paper. Reading your article is my greatest enjoyment. Keep working hard, your article is our favorite.
25. The "biological corner" in your article is colorful, lively and lovely. Bright flowers and green leaves are lifelike; Colorful goldfish are lifelike and swimming around, which makes people never tire of seeing them. By using the total score method, every cute little creature in the biological corner is clearly displayed, and its beauty comes into being.
26. From this little diary, I can see that you are a careful student, who can carefully capture a little thing in daily life and write your inner feelings in plain language. The picture is short and pithy, and the language is plain, which can cause the soul to sing.
27. "Give up your seat" is a common thing, but your composition is refreshing. You not only wrote things, but also wrote the complicated inner world before and after you gave up your seat, with distinct levels, vivid sentences, natural plots and touching charm. In addition, the social problems you raised are thought-provoking.
28. Lou Qianbei, you are amazing! Looking at your composition and savoring the good words and sentences, the teacher can't believe that you wrote it at a young age. Qianqianbei, the teacher is proud of you. I hope you will continue to work hard and paint a colorful life and a colorful world with your pen!
29. Great! Your article reproduces the simplicity and frankness of the northeast people, which makes readers feel refreshed. The language is extremely fluent, and the use of synaesthesia is particularly clever. Your writing style is conquering and attractive. Work hard and create more glory!
30. Careful observation, vivid description, clever arrangement, flexible description, relaxed style, correct theme, meticulous performance, novel story and clear words.
3 1, elegant writing, vivid narration, lyrical narration, concise and to the point, fresh, smooth and natural interest.
32. The writing is vivid, the scenery is picturesque, the details are rich, the description is profound and vivid, the sentences are beautiful, the narrative is vivid and profound, and the structure is rigorous.
33. The materials are novel, the writing is excellent, the structure is rigorous, the narrative is detailed, the content is substantial, the writing is fluent, the writing is free and easy, the layout is novel, and the text is concise.
34. Clear organization, rigorous structure, lively and interesting notes, touching, touching words, touching.
35 ... practical, containing simple and profound philosophy, exciting and moving to read.
36. The praise for the characters at the end is sincere and touching.
37. I think this article reflects your heart. The road of life is indeed tortuous and long, but as long as you work hard and persevere, the crown of success will definitely belong to you.
38, make full use of the combination of static and dynamic writing, supplemented by metaphor personification and other techniques.
39, the article is miscellaneous but not chaotic, but it can be detailed and focused.
40. For the description of the scenery, the language is concise and accurate, while the association is touching the scene, and the scene naturally blends into one.
4 1 can lead reasonable imagination and embody meaningful philosophy. The writing is fluent and concise, giving full play to your imagination, isn't it good? The article is elegant, fluent and clear-cut, especially the humor of the characters' language, coupled with the use of some subtle words, which invisibly adds a lot of interest to the article.
42. The story is vivid and concrete, and the words and deeds of the characters conform to their respective identity characteristics.
43. Most of the data are sketched by lines and lack of point-by-point description.
44. The ending is full of expectation and enthusiasm. Words are done, meaning is still unfinished.
45. This article is vivid and rich in information, novel and refreshing in language and unique and reasonable in structure.
46. This article is full of passion. Between the lines, we can understand the little author's love for …. The full text has distinct levels and fluent sentences.
47. Multi-angle material selection fully reflects the personality characteristics of the characters, and the characters are full.
48. The end of the article is unconventional, giving people the feeling of wanting to rest.
49. The materials are close to modern life, novel and unique, grasp the pulse of the times and show the flavor of the times.
50. The article uses proper words and beautiful sentences, which makes readers feel comfortable.
5 1. The tone of the article is simple and humorous, full of fun, and people can't put it down.
52. The language of the article is vivid and readable.
53. Writing is like being a man. From your life experience, you can see that you are a good young man who makes progress. You have your own unique insights and profound understanding of things, which is really commendable.
54. The full-text language is vivid and accurate, and the plot is wonderful and tortuous, which seems to bring readers into a happy paradise and make people smile.
55. What a beautiful autumn you wrote! From your composition, the teacher saw the high blue sky, golden rice fields, flying geese in the south and falling yellow leaves, all of which made me feel the beauty and magic of autumn. How I want to say to autumn: autumn! Turning decay into magical autumn, how beautiful your students' compositions are!
56. Although the story is ordinary, it is sincere, full and touching.
57. The full-text language is vivid and accurate, and the plot is exquisite and tortuous, which seems to bring readers into a paradise and make them very happy. The full text is easy to understand and meaningful.
58. The ending is just right and the center is clear. The language is simple, profound and intriguing.
59. Focus on expressing emotions at the end, give consideration to the beginning and summarize the full text. Coherent from beginning to end, in one go.
60. Writing is like a man, and your article is as simple and open-minded as your' being a man'. Your writing skills are very good, which is also the crystallization of your long-term tempering. I hope you will feel and appreciate life with your heart and write more touching articles in the future study process.
Composition review primary school 2 1. The narrative is simple and rough, with only a frame structure, and the characters lack distinctive personality characteristics.
2. The details are not properly arranged and the priorities are not clear enough.
3. The content is mostly outlined by lines, lacking detailed description based on points.
4, inconsistent with the atmosphere of the times, the content is too old and aging.
5. The theme is prominent, the center is clear and the thinking is clear.
6. The views are clear, and the likes and dislikes are clear, which makes people clear at a glance.
7. The theme is directly prominent in content, clear and to the point, and there is no redundancy.
8. The theme is serious, the thought is noble, and the enterprise is strong.
9. The center is not clear enough and the concept is not clear enough.
10, the theme is vague, the meaning is vague, and the writing purpose is unclear.
1 1. Although there is a central theme, the expression is not strong enough and the words are not true.
12, the expression is not clear and the persuasiveness is not strong.
13, the theme is not serious enough, and there are still dross in thought.
14, the plot is tortuous, and the narrative process has a certain sense of ups and downs, which reflects the curve beauty of the plot and is fascinating.
15, the plot is strong in faltering, and accidents happen at ordinary times, which can attract readers' attention.
16, the plot changes irregularly, with occasional suspense and waves, which is unexpected. The development process of the event embodies the author's innovative ideas.
17, the plot develops smoothly and lacks certain ups and downs.
18, the plot changes unremarkable, lacking new ideas.
19, the plot is straightforward, there is no suspense, and it seems to be a running account.
20. The process is very detailed, but the ending is short and incomplete. The structure is unreasonable, giving people the feeling of anticlimactic.
Composition primary school review 3 1. You are good at observing life and can capture meaningful moments. You are a student with great potential.
The language of the article is fluent, and the teacher's feelings are well written. You are the teacher's bosom friend. I hope we can learn from each other and pick a bunch of fragrant flowers in the garden of literature.
Sorry, the teacher didn't see this paragraph clearly. Would you like to explain it to the teacher again? Thank you!
Your handwriting is neat and beautiful. The teacher wants to learn from you. If the choice of the article is novel, it will definitely be reflected in the style of writing. What do you think?
5. Great! Your article reproduces the simplicity of the people in Northeast China, which makes readers feel refreshed. The language is extremely fluent, and the use of empathy is particularly clever. Your pen is very convincing and infectious. Work hard and create more glory!
6. Observe the micro-observation, describe the materials vividly, arrange the description skillfully, relax the tone, correct the theme, detail and novel the story, and make the text clear.
7. Beautiful words, vivid words, simple narration, real lyrics and fascinating questions. Fun is fresh, smooth and natural.
8. Vivid words, exquisite finishing touch, vivid and profound description, vivid and beautiful sentences, vivid description and rigorous structure.
9. The materials are novel, the writing is exquisite, the narrative is meticulous, the words are fluent and free, the layout is novel and interesting, and the words are concise.
10. Structured, rigorous, vivid, interesting, sad, sad, moved, moved, heartfelt, moved, moved, moved, moved, moved, moved.
1 1. Simple and interesting, quite good idea, clear and emotional speech. If you realize something unusual, go one at a time.
12. This article is very short, which means a profound writing style. The aftertaste is endless.
13. The description is meticulous, interesting and elegant, but the words are appropriate, the artistic conception explains the details well and the language is appropriate.
14. Proper wording and fair arguments can be very concise. They are orderly and fluent.
15. The style of writing is mellow, the correct viewpoint structure is rigorous, and the argument is open and easy.
16. Reasoning is reasonable, writing is frank and clear, viewpoints are correct and simple, analysis is clear and clear, and writing is free.
17. The use case is appropriate, the explanation is clear, the text is acceptable, the description is not exciting enough, and the sentence is fluent, but the beginning and the end cannot echo.
18. The content is not enough, the structure is not compact enough, the text is gorgeous, the content is rich, the narrative is smooth, and even the exquisite text is shoddy and can't achieve the goal.
19. The words are in a hurry, and the meaning of rhetoric can be achieved without rhetoric. Then the rhetoric of seeking rhetoric is also called fluency, and if it lacks conciseness, it is repetition and jumble.
20. There are too many words, and the paragraphs are not vivid and clear enough. Don't invert too much gossip before and after, and try to be concise and profound.