Appreciation of the poem "Broken Magnolia" 1 original poem
Candles swaying, cold and sparse, just want to wake up. Don't sleep alone without thinking about it.
The sky is blue and there is an appointment between heaven and earth. It is difficult for a silver-haired man to communicate with a China man, but he is willing to endure the wind and rain.
Translation translation
Lonely lights go out, cold leaves sleep alone. If he wants to sleep, he will wake up. If he can't think, his heart will break.
Heaven and earth are separated by yin and yang, and even a promise can't change the original life. I am eager to meet and reunite, even if I have to endure the wind and rain of the Milky Way, I am willing to start from scratch.
Annotation explanation
Candle flower swaying: indicates that the candle shadow is swaying.
Sparse quilt (qρn): thin quilt.
"Stay" sentence: It means not to miss each other.
Blue sky: blue sky. "Blue sky" is the first building in the East as Taoism says. Because it is full of blue sky, it is called "blue sky".
Keep a promise: keep your promise.
Han Yin: The Milky Way.
Resist: endure. Storm: a metaphor for trouble. Wish: wish. Start: Only. From: I hope.
Appreciation of poetry and prose
This song "Broken Magnolia" seems to be a pregnant work with "Tanabata" as the background.
"Candle flowers are swaying, cold and sparse, just want to wake up." At first, it was a confused and desolate scene, with flickering candle shadows and a rude awakening. "Candle flowers swaying" is a typical poetic image. There is a saying in the Song Dynasty poet Fang's "Gathering Back to Beijing", which is a wonderful flower among flowers. There is also a sentence in Song Dynasty Hong's "Huanxisha": "The candle shakes obliquely and blows tears." In Nalan Ci, the image of "lamp" appears many times. This is probably because "lights" can bring warmth and light to people on cold and lonely nights, and have a peaceful home atmosphere. But lonely people have different arms and endless thoughts in their hearts. In fact, Nalan Rong Ruo wrote a life detail in many of his previous mourning speeches: "Half a month ago, he was ill, scissors sounded, and there was a silver plaque." Half a month before his wife died, he also cut snuff for help, so that the sound of scissors lingered in Nalan's ear for a long time. This detail of cutting candle flowers may be an opportunity to interpret "Candle Flowers Shake Shadows". "Cold and sparse" and "sparse" refer to the quilt that becomes loose and sparse because a person sleeps alone. The word "cold" is a subjective feeling of people, because loneliness is cold. A word "Tou" means that I am extremely sad inside.
"If you don't think about it, don't sleep alone." The candle shakes the shadow, and the fragrance disappears. Don't think about it at this time. Have you ever forgotten each other? This "wait and think" seems to come from Su Shi's "Jiangchengzi Mao Yimeng on the 20th of the first month": ... If you don't think about it, you will never forget it. ""I don't sleep alone "seems to come from the sentence" I expect heartbroken every year, and the moonlit night is short in Songshan ". This is just the irony used by Nalan Rong Ruo here. At that time, it was the time when my thoughts were confused and I was lonely and heartbroken.
"The sky is blue, and there is an appointment between heaven and earth." Bai Juyi's sentence "Looking for a blue sky on the top, looking for a yellow sky on the bottom, I can't find it in both places" is a sentence by Nalan Rong Ruo, with a very broad artistic conception and powerful writing style. Then, Nalan expressed his loyalty and trustworthiness to love with "the love between heaven and earth is a promise". This sentence can arouse many associations of readers. Here, "the sky is boundless, and heaven and earth promise" expresses Nalan Rong Ruo's attitude towards love commitment from the front, that is, "the mountains have no edges, and heaven and earth are in harmony, but they dare to break with you." This eternal love oath.
"Silver-haired people are hard to cross, and they are willing to start from the wind and rain." This conclusion is obviously a difficult commitment. "It's difficult for the silver and the Chinese to get through" explains that the vast galaxy is difficult to cross, which is the allusion to the meeting of cattle and women on Tanabata. "I hope to endure the wind and rain", the galaxy is difficult to cross, and only by enduring those hardships will we get what we want.
Tang Xianzu said in Preface to Peony Pavilion: "I don't know what happened, but it continued. The living can die and the dead can live. Those who are born without the dead and die without resurrection are not affectionate. " Even if the Milky Way is blocked, even if the silver and the Chinese are far apart and the years are boundless, life is so short. Nalan's first sentence just tells people that love will only accompany you for life with perseverance and perseverance.
Appreciation of negative magnolia II negative magnolia poetry
Angus Wang
Draw a bridge and flow, but the rain can't afford to fly.
When the moon breaks dusk, the fragrance in the curtain smells immediately.
Wandering silently, where is the dream soul going tonight?
Unlike weeping willows, flying flowers into the bridal chamber is still a plan.
Appreciation of Wang Anguo's Ci
This small print is a feeling that will always be in my heart. It is euphemistic and moving, and is famous for its subtlety.
At the beginning of the word, I painted a beautiful picture with a beautiful pen: draw a bridge and flow, and the rain will not take off. Painting a bridge like a rainbow, flowing water like a ribbon, drizzling spring rain, falling red in an array, what a sight of late spring! All this is shrouded in the moonlight that breaks through the dusk mist, as if covered with a soft gauze, which is even more quiet and elegant. On such a clear and picturesque night, by the flowing water of the painting bridge, the hero in the poem met the woman he fell in love with. The moment the hero's horse approached the fragrant car, his excitement and excitement were self-evident. Although there is no positive portrayal of women here, through the lingering fragrance outside the curtain, you can vaguely imagine the good looks and graceful charm of the woman Juan.
The next part turns to the mood of the protagonist after the car leaves. First he lingered, then he felt lost. Where did the dream soul go tonight? His tone was extremely sad. He lingered because he didn't know what to say, because he had nothing to say, because it was difficult to send him away tonight, and because he was uneasy in his dream. At this moment, everything around us, small bridges and flowing water, spring flowers and bright moon, seems to be suddenly eclipsed. He no longer has any interest, only the pieces of poplar flowers flying in front of him caught his attention. Looking at the free flight, he couldn't help but be moved by it. Thinking of his own fate, he couldn't help but sigh: unlike hanging from Yang, he still got the flying flowers into the bridal chamber. It is said that Huayang can enter the house with a curtain and fly into the bridal chamber with his lover, but he can't even go to his dreams. These two sentences are both scenery description and lyricism, which convey the hero's dedication implicitly and euphemistically through strange associations and seemingly unreasonable metaphors.
Appreciation of negative magnolia poetry 3 negative magnolia races
Huang Shang
The red flag was held high and flew out of the deep willows. The drums hit the spring thunder, straight through the smoke, and returned far away.
Cheers shook the earth and scared away the fighting spirit of ten thousand people. Jinxiu Building West won the first place in the championship.
To annotate ...
Subtract Mulan: epigraph name, abbreviated as Minlan. Zhang Ziye's ci poetry entered the forest, and his movements were set in tune. Two-tone forty-four characters, that is, the first and third sentences of Magnolia are subtracted from three words and changed into flat rhymes, and two rhymes in each piece become two flat rhymes.
1. Race crossing: rowing competition. The annual Dragon Boat Festival (the fifth day of the fifth lunar month) is a traditional custom that people express their respect and commemoration for the great patriotic poet Qu Yuan.
2. The red flag flies high out of the deep willow grove: In a small state where the old people are densely covered with willows, a team of dragon boats flies high.
3, spring thunder: describe the drum sound like spring thunder. Straight through the smoke waves, retreating far away: the dragon boat went forward bravely, broke through the still water, formed a smoke, and then turned back from a distance.
4. Shocking the morale of thousands of people: The fierce momentum of the dragon boat race is like fighting, shocking the audience.
5. Jinxiu Building West: The award-winning office (also the podium) is richly decorated.
6. Winning the first place: The ship that won the championship, with its head held high and its mouth open, put the champion in the dragon's mouth and be the first to return.
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Huang Shang's first poem is about dragon boat racing, which is of great historical value. Dragon boat race, that is, dragon boat race. According to legend, the great poet Qu Yuan threw himself into the Miluo River on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month. In order to commemorate him, people often hold races every Dragon Boat Festival, symbolizing the saving of Qu Yuan's life and expressing respect and nostalgia for patriotic poets. This activity later became a folk custom. Local residents prepare light and fast boats, select excellent crew members, go to festivals and hold competitions in nearby rivers. Men, women and children, officials and people gathered in the competition area to watch and entertain. The Chronicle of Jingchu written by Zonggu in the Southern Dynasties has been recorded about race. Song Naide Weng's book "Ji Sheng of the Capital City" specifically records all kinds of situations in Hangzhou, the capital of the Southern Song Dynasty. Its "Zhouzhou" has a cloud: "There is a dragon boat race in the West Lake in spring, and there is a dragon boat race in Zhejiang in autumn, which is light and considerable." During the dragon boat race, some people hold high the red flag, while others beat gongs and drums to boost the morale of rowers and increase the warm atmosphere of the race. This festive scene attracted poets of all ages. Huang Shang likes writing about natural scenery very much, and the scene of dragon boat race also attracts him. His first poem, The Race, describes the fact that he won the bid in the dragon boat race.
The first movie was about racing cars. The red flag was held high and flew out of the deep willows. The game has started. A team of dragon boats with red flags flying high flew out from a small continent deep in Liu Yin. The word "flying out" is very vivid, which makes people feel as if they can see the rowing competition on the spot. The red flag fluttering in the wind on the regatta was dazzling and first came into view. As the dense Liu Yin on the sandbar blocked the view, the regatta seemed to fly out of Liu Yin. "Zhu" is a small continent in the middle of the water. Pointing out Yang Liuzhu is not only to set off the scenery, but also to show the seasons and climate. Here, the author uses "flying out" to describe the rowing boat that came in a hurry, which truly reflects the feelings of tourists.
"Spring thunder, straight through the smoke." During the competition, not only people hold high the red flag on each boat, but also drummers beat drums to unify the rhythm of rowing. There are many paddlers in the yacht race. They all rely on drums to coordinate their actions. Therefore, the author said that the drums on the rowing boat, like spring thunder, broke through the water vapor hanging over the river and spread far away in all directions, echoing in the air. The word "straight break" describes the momentum of the ship's fierce advance. In this way, the tense atmosphere of the game is rendered.
The next movie is about winning the bid. Competition, arrive at the destination first to win the championship. The climax of the rowing competition appeared at the moment when the rowing competition was close to the champion, and the outcome was about to be known: "The cheers shook the world and scared off the fighting spirit of ten thousand people." The sea of people gave the winner earth-shattering applause. In this deafening noise, the leading contestants on the dragon boat paddled desperately and rushed to the finish line, showing the decisive spirit of being desperate and brave. The heroism (fighting spirit) of the athletes who won the championship in the battle simply made thousands of people panic and retreat. It seems that there are thousands of viewers watching it. Here, the author only used eleven words to tell the most spectacular scene in the competition, together with its intense atmosphere and thrilling momentum.
"The splendid building in the west won the first place in the championship". In ancient times, the champion, that is, a colorful satin flag, was usually hung on a bamboo pole on the shore of the finish line, which was a reward for the winner of the race and could be picked up from the dragon boat. In the race described by the author, the shore of "Golden House West" is the place where brocade is hung. Such as Jin Sibi (Jasper), describe the wealth of this pavilion. The winner finally reached the finish line first, won the first place in the championship from there, and successfully returned to China. Why use a word "title"? "Bite" means to put it in your mouth. In ancient times, the dragon boat was carved with symbolic dragon head decoration on the bow. It seems that the winner hangs it on the "tap" of the bow after winning the championship, just like a real dragon holding the top of the brocade in its mouth. "Bite" is a word born out of dragon boat. Using the word "title" is interesting and vivid.
This word uses the technique of line drawing, focusing on depicting the warm and tense atmosphere of winning the bid through color and sound. At the same time, words also reflect people's enthusiasm and nervous mental state. Dragon boat flying, spring thunder calling, is to write about the contestants' nervous movements and heroism. Cheers are shocking, which is to write about the warm emotions of the masses. Returning with a title is to write out the image and mood of the victorious athletes full of joy. In this way, the dragon boat race and the audience are truly reproduced. The words are so vivid that if the author doesn't have the real feelings of being there, he can't write them; If the author has real feelings, but lacks the ingenuity of cutting, the kung fu of capturing impressions and the pen power of rendering the atmosphere in art, then it is difficult to write such a colorful, layered and imposing style, which makes people feel immersive when reading.
Brief introduction of the author
Huang Shang (1044— 1 130) was born in Yanping, Zhong Mian (now Nanping, Fujian). Yuanfeng won the top prize in five years (1082), and was tired of being an official until he got a bachelor's degree in Duanmingtang. The pawn gave it to Xiao Fu. He is the author of "Collected Works of Mr. Yanshan" and "Yanshan Ci". Huang Shang was a famous writer and poet in the Northern Song Dynasty. His words are bright and beautiful, such as spring water and jasper, which is fascinating. He is the author of Collected Works of Mr. Yanshan and Yanshan Ci, the most famous of which is Xinyi, which is widely circulated.