Compare Yang Guang's Yewang with Ma Zhiyuan's Tianjingsha Qiu Si.

Tolstoy once said when talking about the correct path of literary creation: "Learn from what our predecessors have done, and then move on." This is especially common in China's ancient poems. For example, the image of "West Western jackdaw" in Jing Tian Sand Ball is a clever adaptation of Wang Ye, the predecessor of Sui Emperor Yang Di, and both of them have reached a new artistic height. As the initiator of the image of "Western jackdaw in the West", Emperor Yang Di Yang Guang laid a sad tone for "Western jackdaw in the West". The poem begins with a distant view of western Western jackdaw, and then combines "lonely village" and "sunset" to form a vast territory. Finally, the expression of "the dark and disappeared soul" is full of sadness and sadness. "Wild Hope" Sui Yangguang flies a little in Western jackdaw in the west, and the water flows around the lonely village. Where the sunset was about to set, I looked at the darkness and disappeared. "Tianjingsha Qiu Si" The withered vine and the old tree are faint, the small bridge is flowing, and the old road is thin and thin. When the sun sets, heartbroken people are at the end of the world. The whole article is 28 words, arranged into 5 sentences, without any function words and redundant words. 12 nouns and 12 kinds of scenery constitute a picture of a quiet and distant trip to Qiu Si. What makes people admire is that there is no autumn word, no thinking word, no far word, no sorrow word, no line word, and no temporary word when thinking about injury. However, if we read these words in reverse order, we can see Nong Yu's vivid means like a magician: the vine dries up, the leaves wither, and the crow lives in the tree. The bridge is narrow, the water flows away, and Chai Feiguan. The road is long, the wind is bleak, and the horse is sparse. The night is bleak, and the horizon is heartbroken. Five-color ink coke, dry and wet shades. Four sentences of rendering and one punctuation. Autumn is like condensation, and autumn is like inclination. The evening scenery is bleak and the desert is old. Move and be quiet, be quiet and think for a long time. I don't feel well. What is the sunset? Lonely words, loneliness after parting. Since ancient times, it is unparalleled. More than a masterpiece of the Yuan Dynasty? Summary: Use images such as "sunset" (or "sunset"), "an isolated village" and "Western jackdaw in the west" (or "a crow") to render a bleak and desolate atmosphere. In content, Maqu inherited the image of Yang's poems, but it was innovative. Maqu is written from the "old vine" in front of you to the "floating family" in the distance, and it is a lonely and depressed narrative perspective centered on the poet. As for the color, Maqu started from "an old tree with withered vines", injected indeterminacy at the beginning, and then wrote all the way to the peak of melancholy.