Question 2: The technique of blending scenes (setting off or expressing feelings through scenery is also acceptable) (2 points). Neck couplets write autumn wind and autumn leaves to set off its loneliness and sadness; It's hard not to think about it when writing lonely lights and rainy nights. The end of the couplet is tied to the scenery, and it is chilly with the rain of the phoenix tree at night, which constitutes a sad mood (2 points). The whole poem expresses the pain of national subjugation and the yearning for hometown (2 points).
Question 1:
Test analysis: the first sentence of Zhuanlian said that there was a golden platform in the sky, and the second sentence said that the song of Jasper was wrong. It not only repeatedly stated the lonely situation and mourning feelings of the author and Wang Qinghui in the Yuan Dynasty, but also stated their loyalty and integrity, and did not associate with the nobles of the Yuan Dynasty and the giants of the Song Dynasty. Necklace couplets first write "Wanye" trembling in the autumn wind to set off other dreams, and then set off the rest with lonely lights and rainy nights-naturally, the "hometown heart" here still expresses the memory of the Song Dynasty. In writing, the first two sentences express feelings directly with allusions, and the last two sentences contrast rural hearts with environment. Technical improvement has achieved good results.
Comments: Poetry itself is relatively simple and easy to understand. Appreciating the expressive skills of poetry, whether focusing on the whole article or one sentence, the rule of answering such questions is generally to clearly point out which skills are used first, then explain how to use this skill with poetry, and finally point out how this skill conveys the poet's feelings or plays a prominent role in the theme. As for the number of words, it can be decided according to the score.
Question 2:
Analysis of test questions: Neck couplets write autumn leaves to set off their loneliness and sadness; It's hard not to think about it when writing lonely lights and rainy nights. The end of the couplet was deliberately put aside, and it was changed from lyricism to scenery writing. It uses the rain and vitality of the phoenix tree to form a sad mood, and designs a deep echo of nature for the feelings that have been brewed in the above article, thus making the author's "thick" sorrow full of air conditioning and encroaching on the skin.
Comments: To analyze the author's emotions, we should start with images, which generally have fixed meanings. Image is closely related to the author's emotion, and it is also the need to know people and explore the world. The general author's mood is also closely related to the author's experience.
Poetry appreciation reference:
Silence is the greatest sorrow. Xin Qiji's "Ugly Slave" has such a sentence: "Now I know the taste of sadness. I want to say that I want to take a break, but I say" this is a cool autumn ",which is to write my sadness to the extreme. Wang Yuanliang's poems began in this way. Among them, "when you are worried" is always mentioned. The following is divided into pouring wine, carrying a lamp, looking at the sword and crying. Poetry is no longer sad, but you are sad. In this place, Xin speaks with words and Wang speaks with deeds, which is exactly the same. In addition, the second sentence uses the sentence in Xin Qiji's "Broken Array", which vividly reproduces the image of a man with lofty ideals who has no way to serve the country. It's just that this poem uses the word "deep tears", which shows the psychological state of a court musician after the national subjugation, and can't be compared with that of Xin Qiji.
The connection between chin and neck, one sighs for few bosom friends, and the other expresses hometown feelings, should not only answer questions, but also show that only Wang can be cited as a bosom friend, and also show the author's creative intention of hiding the pain of national subjugation with hometown thought. According to Shanggu County Records, Huang Jintai is located 18 miles southeast of Yixian County, Hebei Province, and Yan Zhaowang put his daughter on it to prolong the world, so it was named after this. In addition, the fourth and fifth volumes of Yuefu Poetry quoted Yuan Yue's Jasper Singer, which was also written by King Runan of Song Dynasty. Jasper, the name of the concubine of King Runan. The first sentence of the couplet said that there was a golden platform, and the second sentence said that the song of Jasper was misused. It repeatedly stated not only the lonely situation and sad feelings of the author and Wang in the Yuan Dynasty, but also their loyalty and integrity, and they did not associate with the nobles of the Yuan Dynasty and the surrenders of the Song Dynasty. Necklace couplets first write "Wan Ye Ji" shivering in the autumn wind to set off other dreams, and then think about it with lonely lights and rainy nights-naturally, the "hometown heart" here still expresses the memory of the Song Dynasty. In writing, the first two sentences express feelings directly with allusions, and the last two sentences contrast rural hearts with environment. Technical improvement has achieved good results.
The end of the couplet was deliberately put aside, and it was changed from lyricism to scenery writing. It uses the rain and vitality of the phoenix tree to form a sad mood, and designs a deep echo of nature for the feelings that have been brewed in the above article, thus making the author's "thick" sorrow full of air conditioning and encroaching on the skin.