Alleys in the rain
Dai wangshu
Holding an oil-paper umbrella alone
Wandering in the long, long
Lonely rain lane,
I hope to see
Like cloves.
A girl with a grudge.
She does.
Clove-like color,
Lilac-like fragrance,
Sad as cloves,
Mourning in the rain,
Sadness and hesitation;
She lingers in this lonely rain lane,
Hold an oil-paper umbrella
Like me,
Like me.
In silence,
Cold, sad, melancholy.
She approached quietly.
Get close and throw again.
Breathing eyes,
She floated by.
Like a dream,
Sad and confused like a dream.
Floating like a dream
A lilac,
I passed this girl by;
She went away silently, far away,
A crumbling fence,
Walk through this rainy path.
In the lamentation of the rain,
Remove her color,
Scattered her fragrance.
Disappeared, even hers
Breathing eyes,
Lilac is melancholy.
Holding an oil-paper umbrella alone
Wandering in the long, long
Lonely rain lane,
I hope to float over.
Like cloves.
A girl with a grudge.
Precautions:
(1) partridge (chìchù): It looks like walking slowly in small steps.
② chóuchànɡ: Sad and depressed.
3 sigh: sigh loudly.
④ tuípǐ: collapse.
Creative background:
Rain Lane was written in the summer of 1927, after the bloody "412" massacre. The poet is 22 years old. The poet, who was arrested for taking part in the revolution, fell into pain in the face of the white terror that enveloped the whole country. He lives in seclusion in a friend's house in Songjiang, Jiangsu, chewing "being the distress of China people in this era", "sitting in the night listening to the wind and sleeping in the night listening to the rain", expecting a gorgeous rainbow to float in the haze. But living in poverty, poets can only seek comfort in "old footprints", "colorful clothes of youth" and wandering under the stars. The softness of personality and the pressure of the times make Rain Lane a projection of reality darkness and disillusionment in the poet's heart, full of feelings of hesitation, disappointment and sadness.
Author:
Dai Wangshu (1905—— 1950), a native of Hangzhou, Zhejiang, is a famous modern poet in China. 65438-0925 entered Shanghai Aurora University to study French and began to be influenced by French symbolism. 1926 Join the * * * Youth League. After 1928, he became one of the authors of the ink painting society and later Modern magazine, creating modernist poems. 1932 to study in France and Spain. 194 1 At the end of the year, Hong Kong fell, was imprisoned by the Japanese army for resisting Japan, maintained national integrity in prison, and was rescued from prison the following spring. After the victory of the Anti-Japanese War, he returned to Shanghai to teach,1went north to the liberated areas in the spring of 949. 1950 died of illness. The collection of poems includes My Memory, Wang Shucao, Wang Shushi and Disaster Year. Early poems mostly describe personal loneliness and have a strong sentimental atmosphere. Influenced by western symbolism, these images are hazy and implicit. The poems in the later period showed strong feelings of loving the motherland and hating the invaders, and eager for a better future, with clear and sincere poetic style.
Rain Lane is Dai Wangshu's early masterpiece. After the poem was published, it had a great influence, so the poet was called "Rain Lane Poet". Poetry depicts a gloomy picture of Jiangnan alleys during the rainy season, which constitutes a lyrical artistic conception with strong symbolic color.
Appreciate:
Dai Wangshu's poems are full of graceful and graceful poetic style in China's classical poems, but influenced by the French symbolism poetry school, his early poems generally show a kind of loneliness, melancholy and depression.
"Rain Lane" has both reality and reality, and it is hazy and trance. "I" seems to be full of worries and infinite worries, but I don't want to make it clear or say it. "I" seems to be looking forward to something and pursuing something, but the goal of looking forward to and pursuing seems so distant and slim. "She" appeared, maybe it was an illusion, or it could be true, but "she" appeared so quickly and passed away so quickly, flashed by and disappeared in front of her eyes, "as sad and confused as a dream". "I" only feel sorry for myself and feel sorry for myself. The "girl" in the poem can be regarded as a real reference, a beautiful, noble and melancholy girl that the poet has been waiting for for a long time. But we can also regard this "girl" as a hazy ideal and pursuit in the poet's heart, which represents the poet's hazy vision for the future when his life is depressed.
Rain Lane starts with an oil-paper umbrella and wanders alone in a long, long and lonely rain lane. I hope to meet a lilac with sadness and resentment.
Girl. "This is a scene in an alley in Jiangnan during the rainy season. In the drizzle, "I" walked alone in a long remote alley with a lonely and melancholy mood and a faint hope. "I hope to meet a girl like lilac/with sadness." At the beginning of the poem, it is pointed out that the main purpose of Rain Lane is to express the "hope" pursued by the poet. The "rain lane" shrouded in drizzle is "very long, very long", with no end, implying no hope. "Loneliness" and "loneliness" imply that the poet's bosom friend is hard to find, and he is lonely and hesitant. What is hope? I hope it's the "lilac-like girl with a sad heart". So, who is this "girl"? What kind of sadness does the poet have in his mind? Is this the poet's pursuit of the ideal of life? Is this the poet's longing for love? Maybe both, maybe none. Then, let's follow the poet's footsteps, in the rain lane, hide aside and peep quietly.
Section 2: "She has the same color, fragrance and sadness as cloves, and she is sad in the rain, sad and hesitant." The poet repeatedly compared lilacs to girls. Lilac is a common image in China's classical poems. In China's ancient poems, there are many famous lines that sing about lilacs: "Lilacs fall in the rain and worry about nothing", "Lilacs are weak and messy, and the branches are about to fall", "Bananas don't show lilacs, so they are worried about the spring breeze" and so on. Lilacs bloom in mid-spring, and poets often hurt spring when facing lilacs, saying lilacs are troubles. Lilacs are white or purple, and the color is not frivolous, so they often win the favor of poets who lead an honest and clean life. In a word, clove is a trinity symbol of beauty, nobility and sadness. The lilac-like girl described by the poet is as beautiful as lilac in appearance, elegant and holy in personality and melancholy in mood. What is she worried about? Is it a sad and ungrateful husband or a husband who wants to be satisfied? Maybe, maybe not. Her sadness is like her appearance, like her heart, elegant and holy, beautiful and moving.
In the third season, "she wandered in this lonely rainy lane, holding an oil-paper umbrella like me, and being as sad, indifferent, sad and melancholy as me." This lilac-like girl, in the long-term expectation of "I", finally came. She is "like me, like me". After reading these, we suddenly realized that this lilac girl is "me" and "I" is this lilac girl. I am as beautiful as a girl, noble as a girl, and sad as a girl. His heart is my heart, and that girl is my heart. That girl is my sweetheart? Girl is the embodiment of my pursuit and ideal? Maybe, maybe not. We don't have to be so specific or answer so accurately. Because poetry is poetry after all, as the predecessors said: "Poetry is solvable, unsolvable and does not need to be solved." Especially in Dai Wangshu's early poems, most of them are not direct imitations of reality, but often catharsis of hidden souls. As a poet said, "A person reveals his subconscious in a dream and his hidden soul in a poem, but it is only as hazy as a dream. In this case, we appreciate poetry ... between expressing ourselves and hiding ourselves. "
The fourth quarter "she silently approached, approached, and took a breath. She wanders like a dream and is as sad and confused as a dream. " "She approached silently"-it seems that "however, I felt the harmonious heartbeat of the sacred unicorn". Two hearts have been approaching, getting close to each other and understanding each other, but in the end, they passed by and let me down. She also "breathed a sigh of relief" and the distance between them widened again. Both wanderers suffered from the same depression, so they couldn't bear to leave each other and had to leave each other, so they were in the same boat. But because of the same symptoms, I couldn't get back to each other and had to break up. That's how they hesitate and pursue in hesitation, pursuing ... "She is erratic/dreamlike,/dreamlike sadness and confusion." Is the encounter between me and the girl a real life opportunity, an illusion caused by my deep thinking, or just a dream?
Section 5 "Like a lilac field floating in a dream, this girl floats beside me; She walked away silently, far away, to the broken fence and across the rainy path. " "I" watched Lilac Girl drift away, and she came to the end of the rain lane, "to the decaying fence". The Corrupt Fence gives a great shock to people's hearts. Lilac girl is so beautiful, beautiful things should naturally grow in beautiful environment and holy soil, but Lilac girl has "reached the decaying fence". This huge contrast causes people's association! Is that destroyed fence really the girl's home? Is lilac girl in danger? Could it be that Lilac Girl's life was ill-fated and suffered a heavy blow? Is this a sad girl's misfortune, or is it lamenting that she was born at the wrong time?
Section VI "In the elegy of rain, her color faded, her fragrance dispersed, even her sighing eyes and the melancholy of lilacs." This section literally describes the disappearance of girls, but actually describes the destruction of beauty and hope. In the "rotten hedge", "her color faded,/her fragrance dispersed,/dissipated, even her/sighing eyes,/lilac's melancholy." Everything about the girl "dissipated" and the beauty was completely destroyed! The poet's pursuit of hope is completely shattered! Is this hope of destruction a poet's holy love or a poet's noble ideal?
Section 7 "Holding an oil-paper umbrella, wandering alone in a long, lonely rain lane, hoping to float past a girl with a lilac knot." The girl disappeared and her hopes were dashed, but "I" still didn't give up the pursuit. At the end and the first paragraph of Rain Lane, I still wander alone in the long and lonely rain lane, expecting hope in disappointment. "Every time" has been changed to "wandering", so that the poetic story ends in a more hazy and confused dream.
Expanding Reading: Dai Wangshu's Excellent Teaching Plan in Yuxiang
First, teachers and students read and introduce new lessons.
(Boy): You said that you were once lost in the boundless sea of suffering, lonely in the cold rainy season, only because of the girl holding an oil-paper umbrella who met in the rain, because of the transparent and shining eyes and the faint melancholy at the corner of her mouth under the umbrella. A bitter woman like lilac makes your heart bloom quietly like a flower that hasn't opened for a long time.
Oh, girl, did you really fly from the air to wake up my long-sleeping heart in this lonely rainy season? How can I describe your beauty? I won't be surprised if you disappear in an instant, because your appearance is a miracle. If you really disappear, I will look for you in ancient paintings. By the faint pool, I will use my colored pen to outline your lilac-like feelings on the horizon.
(Girl): Gently, I walked through the rainy lane and endless love poems. In this way, I came to the rainy season when lilacs fell. You don't have to be surprised or ask more questions. I just want to jump out of the yellow poem page. I just want to relive the melancholy of wandering in deep alleys during the rainy season when lilacs are in full bloom.
(Collective): Who ever described me as a gentle and melancholy beauty in wonderful words? Who is it, playing for me with a sweet wooden flute as fragrant as cloves; Who is it, playing my confidante for thousands of years with flowing guzheng?
(Teacher): A beautiful poem is a butterfly that floats lightly for thousands of years, a holy and melancholy lilac that floats through endless misty rain. Ah, lilac-like girl, the faint sigh and sadness when you turned away have become a figure that will never disappear and will always remain in the heart of every love poet! Ok, let's walk into Dai Wangshu's Rain Lane and approach the girl with a lilac knot!
Second, listen to the video reading.
As we all know, there are three links in appreciating poetry: reading, tasting and understanding.
Reading aloud is an essential first step when we appreciate poetry. Through reading, we can fully appreciate the beauty of artistic conception and phonology of poetry. Now, let's enjoy the video recitation of this poem and get into the situation. Pay attention to the following three questions: ① The basic content of this poem. ② What "images" are written in the poem? (3) What kind of emotion does this poem express?
Accompanied by affectionate poems, soothing notes and gloomy tones, our thoughts seem to fly into the deep and lonely rain lane in the south of the Yangtze River, full of sadness and sadness.
Section 1: "I" wandered alone in the long and lonely rain lane.
Verse 2-6: The imaginary girl like lilac passed by me through the rain lane.
Section 7: Write the hope of "I" in the form of repeated chapters.
Drifting process: approaching silently, approaching-leaving-and finally disappearing.
Third, approach the author's era.
Brief introduction of the author
Dai Wangshu, a native of Hangzhou, Zhejiang, is a representative of modernist poets in China. Became famous in the 1930s. After Xu Zhimo, he is another brilliant star in China's modern poetry. The turbulent times and personal experience made his poetry creation go through a development process from praising personal joys and sorrows to expressing patriotic feelings and national integrity. The main poetry collections are My Memory, Wang Shucao and Disaster Year. Among them, Wang Shucao marks the completion of the author's artistry, and the years of disaster mark the improvement of the author's ideology. Representative poems include Rain Lane in the early stage and I Use Damaged Palm in the later stage.
Early stage: personal loneliness, sentimentality, obscurity and reserve.
Later period: love the motherland, clear and sincere.
Dai Wangshu was born in Hangzhou. Wang Shu is his pen name, which comes from Qu Yuan's Lisao: "Wang Shu was a pioneer before, and Fei Lian was a subordinate after." Wang Shu is the god who drives away the moon in myths and legends. He is pure and gentle, affectionate and chic.
Fourth, the beauty of product image, artistic conception and image.
"Image" is the basic unit of poetry, which is composed of emotion and scene. It is the synthesis of meaning and image, the embodiment of the author's subjective intention and objective image, and the unity of spiritual content and material form. Next, we try to explore the image charm of Rain Lane from the characteristics of individual images in Rain Lane.
Clarity: people, scenery and things written in poems-image people-me and girls.
Scenery-rain alley, fence, paper umbrella, lilac.
The first one is an oil-paper umbrella.
In which story did you first hear about the oil-paper umbrella? Legend of the white snake.
Oil-paper umbrella appeared in the legend that White Snake first met Xu Xian, in the misty rain in the south of the Yangtze River written by Dan Qing, in the exquisite dancing of girls and in the beautiful melody of songs. Unconsciously, the oil-paper umbrella has been fixed as a beautiful background and embellishment. -this is a common thing, but it is rare in traditional poetry. Just wear Wang Shu and put it in the rain lane, so that the oil-paper umbrella can hold up a thick poetic feeling. For this real rain gear, the author didn't make too many specific descriptions, but gave the reader room for imagination. The advantage of this writing is that on the one hand, it will avoid usurping the role of the master, on the other hand, it will leave an artistic conception of misty rain and oily paper umbrella. Because the oil-paper umbrella itself has the characteristics of retro, nostalgia, mystery and mist, it is well combined with the rain lane. Time in the late spring, in the lonely rain lane, added a cold and sad atmosphere, shaping the image of holding an umbrella to dissipate the soul independently.
The second is the rain lane in the south of the Yangtze River.
1. Jiangnan is a dream. 2. Rain Lane
When I was young, the author lived at No.8, Tower 2 Lane, Hangzhou. He spent his youth in an alley paved with green slate by the West Lake. Those criss-crossing long bluestone roads left his youthful footprints.
China people have a deep affinity for hutongs. Northerners call it hutong, while southerners call it alley.
Mr. Wang Zengqi said in Hutong Culture that Beijing Hutong "not only makes people feel nostalgic, but even a little sad" and "makes people feel disappointed"; Alleys in the south can give people a similar feeling. The nostalgia for these traditional images is actually the poet's unique yearning for a leisurely, lonely and barren living environment. This is also the typical mentality of China traditional literati. In traditional literature, Dai Wangshu has typical traditional literati characteristics (when most writers blindly abandon tradition and create new literature, he writes poems with traditional images, which is so unsociable but so valuable)-melancholy, depression and nostalgia. The long, vicissitudes and deserted alleys are the best lodging places for the poet's lonely mood. The rainy south lane is less crowded, more touching and more vulnerable to injury.
In the rainy season in the south of the Yangtze River, the drizzle floats in the lane, and the misty rain is hazy and exciting. The combination of rain and lane constitutes a unique image, which was initiated by Dai Wangshu. No wonder Ye Shengtao called him "Poet in Rain Lane". Rain Lane is more sentimental and sad than a single rain or lane. This is a beautiful artistic conception. The alley is deep and quiet, and the drizzle makes the artistic conception full of hazy beauty. Rain alley, fence wall and dream together constitute the hazy beauty of poetry.
The third kind is lilac.
The vague artistic conception of the whole poem lies in the word "clove". Good things are always associated with girls. Lilac-like girl, lilac-like sadness, why choose lilac?
Lilacs are shaped like a knot. Lilac is a precious flower unique to China. It has a long history of cultivation. Flowers bloom in April, with lavender or white flowers, fresh and elegant, and rich fragrance. Lilacs are often favored by poets who live a clean life because their colors are not frivolous. Lilacs bloom in mid-spring and wither easily. Poets see lilacs often hurt spring, saying that lilacs are a product of sadness and a trinity symbol of beauty, nobility and sadness. Lilacs in the rain add a lot of sadness and sadness.
The poem "A girl with a lilac heart" in Rain Lane comes from Jing Li's words:
Roll up pearls to make curtains and hang hooks. In the tall building, I look like before, and my depression is still locked. When the flowers fall in the wind, who is the master?
The messenger didn't bring news to the pedestrians far away. The lilacs in the rain reminded me of sadness. Looking back at the blue waves and dusk, I will meet the sky.
The fourth is Lilac Girl.
Dai Wangshu inherited the traditional cultural connotation of clove in Rain Lane, which made the meaning of clove more melancholy. What's more, the poet depicts the "Lilac Girl" in the rain, which is quiet and quiet, adding a little sparseness. The poet greatly downplayed the external form of lilac, and used the radical phrase "a girl with worries and grievances" to personalize, objectify, abstract and humanize the image of lilac, making "Lilac Girl" an image different from the traditional meaning. This new image is a real person-a girl, but it is also an abstract image. Here, the poet speaks poetry attentively in the rain lane, and people and things are naturally one.
It symbolizes that the girl may be the love that the poet longed for but didn't get; It may be the unpaid ambition of youth; May be a wish when I was a child; Perhaps it is the empty nostalgia of the girl I once met. ...
Lilac girl symbolizes a beautiful ideal.
The poet described the lilac-like girl as elegant, beautiful, ethereal and sad, which made this rain lane contain rich contents, symbolizing the poet's belief and pursuit of ideals, life and beautiful things, and also showing emptiness, disillusionment and emotion. Rain Lane is a painful song of the poet's lonely heart. The poet turned a beautiful life into a lilac-like girl. The poet clearly saw her, but he couldn't get close to her, coming like a dream and leaving like a dream. Therefore, Lilac Girl is a symbol of all fleeting beautiful things (a beautiful and easily disillusioned ideal; A beautiful and unattainable life).
Desirable beauty (lyrical mode);
"Guan, GuanLuo dove, in Hezhou, my fair lady, a gentleman is good. Mix shepherd's purse and salvage it from left to right. A beautiful and virtuous woman wakes up to pursue her. If you can't pursue it, the black nightclub misses her during the day. Long, tossing and turning. " (The Book of Songs)
"A day of sight, such as March xi; I haven't seen you for a day, such as Sanqiu ·Xi；; If you don't see it for a day, it's like Sanqiu. " (The Book of Songs)
"The white dew is frost, and the so-called Iraqis are on the water side." (The Book of Songs)
The fifth is the hedge wall.
Depressed, broken and desolate.
The sixth is "I"
Hesitation, confusion, pursuit.
Summary: What is the artistic conception and emotion expressed by poetry?
Lilac girl's expectation, confusion about the status quo and deep pursuit of ideal beauty.
The poet is a progressive young man who experiences pain, helplessness and suffering in the collision and loss between reality and ideal. This kind of hesitation and sigh can't be said to be purely personal grievances, but the projection of the darkness of reality and the disillusionment of ideals in the poet's heart, which clearly shows us the pain and pursuit of some young people after the disillusionment of their ideals.
Under the situation at that time, Dai Wangshu suddenly fell into the abyss of night from the passionate revolutionary youth. He can't find the future of the revolution and the hope of progress. He was lost in pain, eager for new hope in disappointment, and looking forward to a beautiful rainbow in the haze.
This is a deep confession, a confession of disappointment. However, from this conversation and confession, we can clearly see the pain and pursuit of some young people after their disillusionment.
Fifth, listen and read again and feel the musical beauty of poetry.
Mr. Ye Shengtao once praised this poem: "It opens a new era for the syllables of new poetry." Let's listen to the teacher's reading aloud, walk into the deep rain lane again and think about the beauty of his music.
Qing: Singing three sighs, circuitous and repeated, touching and harmonious, reading like a soft and thoughtful serenade.
Get the following * * * knowledge:
Rhyme is soothing and melodious: long, inner, mother, confused and melancholy. ...
There are six lines in each section, and each section rhymes two or three times. The rhymes are repeated in lines not far apart, such as Rain Lane, Girl, Fragrance, Melancholy, Sight, etc., so that a sound is deliberately repeated in people's hearing, thus creating a reverberating melody and smooth rhythm.
② word repetition: long, sad and close. ...
(3) Repetition of sentence patterns: lilac-like, like me, like a dream.
Such as "Sadness,/Sadness and Wandering" and "Like me/Like me", it is circuitous and harmonious, and a lonely and painful melody echoes repeatedly in the whole song and haunts our hearts.
④ Repetition of stanzas
Judging from the whole poem, the first verse and the last verse are exactly the same except that "meeting" is changed to "wandering". In this way, the same theme appears repeatedly in the poem and echoes from beginning to end, which not only aggravates the poet's wandering and depressed mood, but also enhances the musicality of the whole poem.
Sixth, the conclusion, listen to the song "Rain Lane"
In the bustling city, there are high-rise buildings everywhere. The rain lane that Dai Wangshu walked through may have disappeared long ago, and he may not find a long rain lane. But the charm of Rain Lane lies not only in the long and lonely deep lane, but also in the beautiful and sad artistic conception woven by lilacs.
Reading this "Rain Lane", there is always sadness that I can't get out. Although the poet is far away from us, the language of poetry is like the brilliance of stars, shining in the sky forever. I know that the rain lane of the soul will go on, and so will the lonely rain lane. Whenever it is drizzling, whenever you are confused, please think of our class today and Dai Wangshu's Rain Lane. Please remember that in that yellow poem, there is a beautiful and sad lilac girl floating around you.