Song, Li Qingzhao
The rain stopped suddenly last night. Deep sleep won't leave a hangover. I asked the shutter man, but he said, "Haitang is still there." You know what? You know what? It should be green, fat, red and thin.
Poetry appreciation
After waking up from the dark, Xiaoyu asked about the description of flowers, which euphemistically expressed the poet's feelings of loving flowers and hurting spring. The language is fresh and meaningful, which makes people think deeply. How to understand the first two sentences is controversial. Since it is "a deep sleep does not consume residual wine", how do you know that "it suddenly rained last night"? Isn't this a contradiction? The poet's original intention is not here, but to express his infinite love for flowers through these two words.
The next three or four sentences are an inevitable reflection of the psychology of loving flowers. Although he was drunk all night, the first thing Xiao Qing cared about after waking up was the begonia in the garden. The word "try" expresses the poet's ambivalence that he cares about flowers but is afraid to hear the news of flowers falling, and he can't bear to see them with his own eyes but wants to know what is going on. "But Haitang is still there." The maid's answer surprised the poet. Originally, I thought that after a night of wind and rain, the begonia flower must have withered and deformed, but the maid rolled up the curtain and looked out, but casually replied: the begonia flower is still the same.
"You know what? Do you know that?/You know what? It should be green, fat and thin. " This is not only a rebuttal to the maid, but also a soliloquy: this careless girl, do you know that the begonia in the garden should be lush with green leaves and few red flowers! "It should be", after all, she didn't see it with her own eyes, so she left room when she spoke. Although Haitang is heartless, it can't bloom forever. In short, there is endless helpless love for flowers, but the predicate is shallow and profound. And this layer's affection for flowers is naturally invisible to the "roller blinds" and does not need more attention. After all, she can't be as delicate as the hostess and have a deeper understanding of nature and life. This may be the reason why she made the above answer.
The last sentence "green and fat and red and thin" is the perfect pen of the whole word, which has been praised by the world. "Green" replaces the leaves and "red" replaces the flowers. The original four words are so vivid and vivid after the combination of poets. Associated with these four words, doesn't "red thinness" indicate the gradual disappearance of spring, while "green manure" symbolizes the coming of summer with green leaves? This very common language is really amazing.
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Through reading and appreciating this poem, we can sum up the main role of metonymy in poetry creation:
Highlight the essential characteristics of things, enhance the image of language, make the writing concise and clear, and make the language rich in change and sense of humor; Attract people's association, so that the expression receives outstanding images, distinctive features, concrete and vivid effects.