1October 6th is the Mid-Autumn Festival. My parents, grandparents and I went to the long-awaited Yongchuan Wildlife Park to play. Here, I personally experienced the truth, goodness and beauty that can be seen everywhere in life. We went to the zoo square by bus. As soon as we got off the bus, we heard a beautiful song, "As long as everyone gives a little love, the world will become a beautiful world …". At this moment, I found a group of children waiting to visit the park with their parents.
I have carefully observed this group of children and their parents, and they don't look like an ordinary family. I got suspicious and asked someone else. My uncle next to me told me, "These are children from the orphanage. Today, the city * * * recruits compulsory parents to accompany them for the Mid-Autumn Festival! " Oh, I see. In the square, the children and their parents held a flag-raising ceremony of love, and then we went to visit the zoo by bus.
At every tourist attraction, I saw every child concentrating on observing animals. At this time, some mothers lovingly touched the child's head, some mothers vividly told the child all kinds of fairy tales about animals, and some mothers looked at the child silently. What kind eyes! The children jumped up and down with excitement, and their faces were filled with excitement and happiness. After the visit, parents and children organized parent-child entertainment activities in the leisure area of the zoo. They sing, dance, play games and tell stories together ... The square in front of them has been singing and laughing for a long time. Finally, a song "Grateful Heart" ended today's happy and unforgettable activity.
On the way home, I recalled today's scene and my heart was full of ups and downs. In today's harmonious society, children with parents are happy, and children without parents can also be happy, because our motherland is a harmonious family, and they can get more care from society. They can not only live a good life, but also spend every holiday happily.
Think about myself. In my life, I should cherish every wonderful time and be honest and trustworthy. In my study, I will study hard, speak actively and make progress every day. When I grow up, I will become a pillar of the country, contribute to the construction of our great motherland and contribute more love to our harmonious society.
2. Write a composition with the examination room as the topic. Some people say that life is a teacher, but I didn't understand its meaning when I was a child. When I grew up, my father said to me, "Life is an examination room everywhere." Until that Friday afternoon, I still had some doubts-
After lunch, I sat on the sofa in the living room, holding the remote control in my hand and constantly switching pictures on the TV. Just as I was watching the TV series with relish, my father pushed open the door and came in.
"Hey, why don't you go to school? It's already half past one. " Father looked at his watch.
I pointed my finger at my foot-swollen like a piece of bread (an accident in physical education class), and then my eyes focused on the TV.
My father is a little angry. He sat next to me and said, "You won't go to school with such a minor injury? Still watching TV at home? You are in the sixth grade now ... When I was in school, the pain was much worse than yours ... "I pursed my lips, turned off the TV and limped to the bedroom.
"Stop!" Father shouted, "Go to school!"
I looked at my father's firm eyes and felt very wronged. However, knowing my father's stubborn temper, I dare not argue with him again.
I changed my clothes, put my schoolbag on my back, and my eyes were full of tears, rubbing against the stairs step by step. The loose shoes used to be very narrow today, which makes my feet hurt. I looked back at my father standing at the door. He locked the door, picked up my schoolbag and looked at me with encouraging eyes. I want to lie on my father's broad back again, but ...
"Let's go. Dad has a backache today and can't carry you. " My father saw through all my little thoughts.
I gritted my teeth, grabbed the handrail and walked with difficulty step by step. Every step, my feet hurt like needles, and my tears are coming down.
"Eleven, twelve ..." Father patiently cheered for me.
Finally finished, I breathed a sigh of relief. My father slowly reached out and wiped the sweat and tears from my face. I turned my head and refused to speak.
Father said, "In fact, every time you walk, my heart hurts.". I know the pain is terrible, but … you can't always spend your life on your parents' backs. You have to face the ups and downs of the future yourself. "If these steps can't be overcome, what will you do with your life?"
I nodded slightly.
"Today, you walk down these dozens of steps, just like you have stepped onto a new step."
I see. What does my father want to say? I beat him to it: "Life is an examination room everywhere!" "
Father smiled, and so did I.
3. Write a composition with "in the examination room". The noisy classroom became quiet.
It's so quiet around, you can hear the sound of the needle falling on the floor. This is our examination room, this is our classroom, this is the battlefield where we are about to fight, and this is the place to test our study this month.
I really envy those students who stay put. They are calm, confident and smiling, waiting for the papers to be handed out.
My heart is almost beating out. Why can't the old city be quiet? Suddenly, I seem to see a pair of eyes staring at me. Ah, it is my dear teacher's gentle eyes, my mother's kind eyes, and countless classmates' encouraging eyes.
Why, uncle Lei Feng's sharp eyes also stared at me meaningfully: you must believe in yourself if you get the test level. At this moment, I calmed down and picked up the pen that condensed everyone's high hopes and fought hard! "Jingle, jingle ..." The crisp sound of * * * sounded, the horn of the battle sounded, and the classroom was quieter, only the sound of pens writing on paper was heard.
The teacher smiled and encouraged everyone: "I believe everyone can do well in the exam." Don't be nervous. " I feel more confident.
The first big question was finished in a short time. The second big question, the first 1, the second, third, fourth and fifth sub-questions were also done, and the sixth sub-question, alas, was stuck when the first one was empty.
One minute, almost two minutes, sweat seeped from my forehead. I racked my brains and thought hard, but the door of memory was closed. I carefully recalled the teacher's story. Well, I didn't listen well. I really deserved it.
Ok, let's do the next question. Just as I was about to start writing, suddenly a light appeared at the door of memory.
Ha, I figured it out. If it weren't for the examination room, I would jump with excitement. I glanced around proudly and saw that everyone was doing the problem at the fastest speed. I'm awake. Now is not the time to be happy. I severely blame myself, "the person who laughs best always laughs last", so don't take it lightly! My pen slipped on the smooth paper again ... the problem was finally finished. I'm not laughing. Please ask the teacher to check my academic performance! I hope my answer sheet will satisfy the teacher.
The examination room is so noisy! I am reviewing nervously in my seat. At this time, * * * broke the news, the invigilator came in and handed out the papers ... Although I was sick, I struggled in the examination room for a day and a half until the last exam-mathematics-my most distressing subject.
Time lingers in this series of questions, and my neck is stiff. I looked up and was shocked! Some students pass the answers when the invigilator turns around; Some students openly took other people's papers to their desks ... I was at a loss. Is this fair competition? No wonder some people relax before exams. It turns out that they also have their own "preparation" methods. I feel so angry that my work has been ridiculed that I really want to stand up and give up drinking.
But, I didn't. At this time, a series of questions appeared in my mind: "If someone offered you an answer, would you want the answer that you had been thinking hard for a long time and couldn't think of?" Or will you be fooled by nervousness and unconsciously ask people for answers? ..... ""When we step into the society, can we also solve all kinds of exams in life in this way? "Knock, knock, knock ..." The bell rang and my thoughts were interrupted. Finally handed in a math test paper with incomplete answers.
4. How to write a good composition is a headache. "
But even if you have a headache, students still have to write and write well. What do we do? After years of practice, I have the following experiences. First, polish your eyes and find the material. "A clever woman can't cook without rice."
Students are often at a loss when they pick up a pen. Therefore, the teacher's first task is to help students find materials for practice.
When I come to a new class, I always engage in some small activities to help students practice writing, such as: one-minute speech, poetry recitation, story telling and so on. Then use the existing materials to guide students to write, so that students have something to say and think that writing is not difficult, as long as they write their own experiences and feelings well.
In fact, the material of the article is everywhere in life, such as: the theme class meeting is held in the class, the school sports meeting is held, and the school organizes a visit to the factory ... If the teacher can consciously guide the students in advance, the students will certainly learn to observe life purposefully and learn to grasp the touching scenes in life. Because these materials come from familiar real people and stories, students will naturally look for the source of their compositions from their colorful lives.
Second, the model essay leads the way, and being diligent in creating materials does not mean that you can write a good article. The guidance of writing methods is a crutch for students' composition, and I encourage students to imitate and learn model essays. Even if imitation is mechanical at first, be sure.
When I speak the text, I pay attention to the infiltration of writing knowledge. In order to emphasize the importance of the structure of the article, when I was teaching "Spring and Snow in Qinyuan", I once again highlighted the structure of the text, writing about the scenery and writing about it, and linking the scenery with the discussion with "so many beautiful mountains and rivers attract countless heroes to compete for beauty".
When writing a scene, always write the distant snow scene first, and then write the snow scene, the imaginary sunny day, so that there is a distinction between reality and movement in the snow scene. Xia Gan used the word "pity" to attract comments on the protagonist, and finally pointed out the main idea.
After repeated reading, the students were very impressed. In addition, the use of composition, weekly comments, to show the students' works to everyone.
For example, Shen borrowed the idea of "I am proud, I am a tree" and skillfully used "The Self-report of a Gun" to review the vicissitudes of life 60 years ago from many angles. Because of his unique conception, he won the first prize of "Anti-Japanese Essay".
The students' successful works have narrowed the distance between everyone and their compositions. With a little comment, the skills in students' works are more acceptable to everyone.
In addition, I choose some excellent historical works to print out for students to read, and make appropriate comments on the good techniques or good ideas in the articles, which not only increases the reading volume of students, but also has a certain guiding role for students who can't read and write. Over time, they will naturally master many new forms.
Third, keeping a diary is often accumulated in the usual composition teaching. I emphasize that every student practices writing at least once a day, from his own feelings about current events to the words and deeds of the teacher in class. Even if it's just a reading excerpt, a comment, and a training in wording and sentence making, he won't miss a day. He will write down what he has seen and heard and express his feelings incisively and vividly. After failing in the exam, Fu Mingtao wrote Thank you for the exam, which was first published in the eighth issue of Qinhu and later published by Yancheng Evening News.
Practice makes perfect. After practice, I am familiar with writing and have more materials. I must be handy when writing articles. In short, in the process of composition teaching, guiding students to polish their eyes to find materials, guiding students to learn to imitate and transfer, encouraging students to keep diaries, and organizing students to create and contribute articles will inevitably stimulate students' interest in writing and improve their writing ability.
5. How to write a 600-word composition 1 in the examination room? First of all, you should draft a composition, and you should outline what you should write in each paragraph.
2. Then there is the topic: there is a good topic that people can't wait to see: for example, "I have an appointment with Spring" and "I will grow to the end". We can use the names of famous sentences or sketches such as Spring Festival Evening! These can deeply touch people's hearts.
3. It is the beginning: There will be some guiding words on some composition papers in the general examination room, which are generally beautiful and may be copied down.
4. It is the middle: it depends on everyone's extracurricular reading ability and the application of words. In order to make the sentence at the end of the sentence look beautiful, it is best not to add "le" and! In the article, such as "death!" Can't appear in "scared to death" and "worried to death". Also, sentences should be short, but not as short as an idiom, which is not acceptable. Another is that the language should be beautiful! The words used are very important! For example, you can change the word "silence" to "silence". Does it sound more attractive? The last point is that there are more segments. Jiexiu once said that there were too few paragraphs, which was said by the teacher. So segmentation is very important, and it is best to match the details! What is "detail collocation"? This means that your center must be pointed out! For example, if you want to go to a place to play, (this is omitted →) but you can pass by on the road and concentrate on the process of your play. (This is detailed) This is a detailed collocation. If you write an article, don't write it online, for example: Warcraft! CS！ CF！ These will make your composition boring. Another is that if you digress, but you have to go around again, don't go further and further!
5. The last one is the ending. You can be the same as the title, for example, the title is "careless me" and the ending can be: this is careless me. Another one can be the same as the beginning, so the writing score is the highest! This is called the total score! But you can't just copy it down. It's better to write a few endings before copying them down, but most of the total score can be used in the exam.
6. Write a composition about the experience in the examination room. Everyone has gone through the exam. Some people like exams, but others don't. What about me? I don't like exams. Let me talk about my exam experience.
One day on Monday, I went to school happily. On the way, I met my classmate. I called her, but she didn't seem to hear me. I patted her on the shoulder and she woke up at once. I saw that she was a little sad, so I asked her what was wrong. She said, "Aren't you worried about the exam?" If I do not do well in the exam, my parents will scold me again. If I do worse in the exam, I can't pass it. What about you? Are you worried? Hearing this, my good mood immediately became worse and I felt a little depressed. So we came to the classroom without talking all the way. I saw all the students come to school early to review their Chinese. I also quickly packed my schoolbag and took out my Chinese.
How time flies! The exam is coming in a blink of an eye. I am nervous and anxious. I reviewed the Chinese book and read the sentences. My heart was pounding when the teacher handed out the test paper. The first problem is reading pinyin and writing words. I finished reading Pinyin and writing words at the fastest speed, but I met some problems, so I have to think again in the future! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Reading is my weakness, but today's topic is so difficult, alas! ! ! ! ! Finally, I finished reading and wrote a composition, which is my favorite. I drew a line with a ruler, so I wrote it. I looked at my watch. I should be able to finish my composition in 30 minutes. I don't want to worry so much. I wrote the composition at 7: 02, and it was only 20 minutes after I finished writing it. I quickly thought about the topic I didn't do before. When I finished all the questions, just after class, I thought:
This exam is really thrilling, but I also escaped a knot, ah! ! I really hope I don't miss the exam again! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
7. Five tips for getting high marks in writing a good composition in the examination room.
1, examination questions
Step 2 have the right idea
Step 3 write an outline
Step 4 write calmly
5, check and modify
The on-site answer sheet of composition is conducted in a limited time, but the quality of the answer sheet depends on the long-term efforts before the exam, which reflects the examinee's usual language learning ability. Therefore, if you want to achieve satisfactory results on the spot, you must do it in peacetime. If there is a "secret" in composition, it is what Mr. Lu Xun said: "Read more, think more, read more and write more."
There are many compositions and skills in the composition E station of the entrance examination page of China Middle School Students' Union Network, hoping to help.
8. The topic is how I wrote my composition in the examination room.
Opened the door of time, and time began to go back. I went back to my naive childhood. Childhood is a pure land without weeds and pollution, and a clear sky without shelter and barrier. There is innocence and sweetness flowing here, which will always make people have good memories. Once, on my birthday. My father gave me 100 yuan directly from Zhang. I don't know what this is for, because I am too young and ignorant. I ran to ask my friend, and he said, "You are so stupid that you don't even know this. This thing is a bookmark and can be clipped in a book. " Hearing this, I was ashamed to think: I thought it was a good thing, but it turned out to be a broken bookmark. I walked home in frustration and happened to meet my mother. She asked, "Son, what are you doing with money in your hand?"
As soon as I heard this, I was puzzled and asked, "Mom, since you just said that I have money in my hand, what is the money for?" Mother pretended to be very knowledgeable and said, "money can buy things." After listening to it, I still didn't know whether the paper was money or a bookmark, so I hid it under my pillow. A few days later, I saw my mother throw a big pile of money into the oil drum. I looked at a big pile of money in my mother's hand, one of which was exactly the same as the one my father gave me. I ran to the bed and took out the 100 yuan, thinking: didn't mom say that she could buy things if she had money? Then why did he burn the money? Maybe my mother is afraid that I know that money is useless. I rushed to my mother and handed her the money. She burned it without asking. In the evening, my father said to me, "Son, bring your 100 yuan and buy you some books." I said angrily, "Don't lie, that 100 yuan can't buy anything at all." Dad said, "Why not? Bring it quickly. " I said, "Ask mom for it." After hearing this, dad immediately ran to the kitchen and asked his mother, "What about 100 yuan, son?" Mom quickly said, "I didn't take it again, so I asked * * * what." I rushed over and told the story from beginning to end. Dad smiled and said, "Your mother burned paper to worship the god of wealth, and your money is specially used for shopping." I couldn't help laughing when I was blindsided. I had a wonderful childhood. I was so naive when I was a child. I will cherish this childhood movie and keep it in my heart forever.
9. How to write a composition? Provide some writing methods.
First, observe carefully.
Careful observation is the golden key to improve the writing level. The article is the product of objective things reflected in the author's mind. To reflect the object, you don't have to treat the objective things.
Observe carefully. Only by careful observation can we find broken jade from the mineral deposits of life phenomena and grab the shining treasure from the mixed sediment. Don't master it,
"Observation" is the golden key to open the door, and the "iron gate limit" of composition can never be crossed.
Second, read more books
Extensive reading is the premise of improving the level of composition. To write a good article, you must read more books. "Reading is like a million volumes, and writing is like a god." "I am familiar with three Tang poems, I can't write poems and I can't sing." Mr. Lu Xun also advocates reading more books. "You must pick many flowers like bees, so that you can brew honey. If you bite in one place, your income will be limited and boring. " We emphasize that we should not only read more, but also read selectively, and even more, understand the structural skills and language characteristics of the articles we read, and master the composition from them, so as to be more profound and diverse.
Third, clever selection of materials.
Careful selection is an accelerator to improve the level of composition. The requirement of material selection is novelty. The so-called novelty means that the batch should choose something that ordinary people have never touched, or turn a blind eye to it with profound meaning. Once the author writes in a book, it will make people think deeply about exciting materials. The angle of material selection should be small, we should see the big picture from the small place and write the materials in everyone's eyes instead of what everyone wrote. To this end, we must compare, analyze and synthesize various materials in our minds, remove the rough and extract the fine, and transform and process them. Only in this way can the materials be novel. And this kind of positive thinking and repeated deliberation is very helpful to improve the level of composition.
Fourth, practice writing often.
Regular writing practice is the key to improve writing level. Want to enter the door of composition, make continuous progress, and more importantly, practice more. As the saying goes, "it is better to write one than to read ten articles." This tells the truth that writing practice produces true knowledge. After learning an article, we understand the structural methods and writing characteristics of the article, so we must learn to use these knowledge and methods to practice and make it our writing ability. In fact, we can all practice writing after learning the first text. However, fragment practice is a good way to practice writing, which takes a short time and achieves the purpose of practicing writing. Keeping a diary is also an effective way to practice writing. Keep a diary every day, and then the Russian foundation will be solid.
Fifth, review frequently
Repeated revision is a catalyst to improve the level of composition. Revision is an essential step in composition and an effective measure to improve the quality of composition. The predecessors said well, "the article is never tired of changing." "The article has changed." Cao Xueqin wrote a dream of red mansions, read it for ten years, added and deleted it five times, and Tolstoy's War and Peace was revised seven times. Mr. Lu Xun advocated that "it is not a pity to read it at least twice after deciding and try to delete unnecessary words, sentences and paragraphs." It can be seen that article revision generally refers to the process from the first draft to the final draft. When repairing, we should do five things: whether the text is fluent, whether the theme is clear, whether the structure is compact and whether the language is beautiful. In short, "the article has changed." Generally speaking, the article is always getting better and better, so we should work hard on "revision".
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