Meeting others in somewhere tomorrow may be an emotional comfort; Meeting with nature may be a baptism of the soul; Meeting with books may be a mental edification; Meeting with history may be a spiritual sublimation. One meeting will touch our hearts and warm our lives.
please write a composition with the theme of "meet once and be warm", with a style of your choice, no less than 6 words, and no real school name or person's name.
writing guidance
The composition "Meet Once and Be Warm" for the senior high school entrance examination in Nantong in 215 still continues the propositional ideas and styles of "There is a voice in the depths of memory" in 213 and "Such a picture makes me linger" in 214. The topic of the composition is not only very poetic, but also highlights the sunshine, paying attention to guiding students out of textbooks, going to society and paying attention to life. So how do we write a good composition? Can be considered from the following three aspects.
1. examine the meaning of the question accurately. When we read the essay, we must grasp two key words: one is "a meeting" and the other is "warmth". Writing is about "meeting" instead of "getting along" and "once" instead of "several times". Therefore, we must write about a meeting between "I" and "he (she or it)" in life, which is accidental and short-lived, rather than happening at any time and place. This meeting is warm, that is, it can bring me love, beauty, emotion, confidence, enlightenment and other beautiful things, which has benefited me a lot. Because it is "meeting", there must be verbal or emotional communication between "I" and "he (she or it)", rather than just superficial writing about "seeing" or "hearing" a thing. At the same time, it is necessary to understand the internal relationship between these two words, that is to say, why did this "meeting" bring me a "warmth"? How beneficial it has been to the growth of "me" should be the key to the examination of the questions.
2. Define the scope of material selection. The prompt of the composition gives the category of material selection. The "meeting" can be people, nature, books and history, and the scope of material selection is relatively broad. But whether it is people or things, since it is "meeting", there must be emotional communication, which can touch our hearts and warm our lives. To write such an article well, when selecting materials, we should avoid stereotyped and outdated materials, and we can see the big from the small. We can choose materials that people don't have in life, such as telling an unforgettable trip, meeting strangers by chance, finding different beauty in a familiar landscape, etc. Through some fresh life experiences, it is not difficult to get good marks.
3. Emphasize emotional experience. When writing, many candidates pay attention to writing a complete story of "I" meeting xxx, but lack their own emotional experience. If there is no unique emotional experience, how can we highlight the "warmth" of the text? Therefore, when writing, we should not only narrate completely, but also write our own unique experiences and feelings. It is worth noting that the experience and sentiment we write must be closely related to the narrative, because it is "warm" because of "meeting". If the sentiment is divorced from the case, such an experience will be meaningless.
examples of excellent works
1. Meeting at a time is a warmth
In life, there will always be some things that become wounds on my heart. Although it has scabbed, there will always be involuntary pain at some time. But that accidental meeting healed my wound and brought me a warmth ... < P > Walking on the way home, I recalled the identical achievements of this school and my wound began to ache again. When I got home, my father reached out and took my schoolbag and said, "Don't be discouraged. This exam has passed, so don't think about it. Your mother is on a business trip. I want to take you to Erbo's house. I have something to discuss with you." I nodded and went to Erbo's house with my father overnight.
The next afternoon, I followed my father to Erbo's tea garden. I looked up and looked at the beautiful fields. The setting sun, like a watery red strawberry, dotted on the top of the mountain shrouded in dusk. The wings of the returning birds across the head were painted with rouge, and the green grass fluttered in the evening breeze. Looking at this beautiful scenery, my heart's melancholy has also been reduced a little.
Suddenly, my father crouched down and grabbed a green plant from the dry and yellow weeds. I was immediately attracted by this plant. I found that the plant was cut off by roots, but it was still very green. When my father saw that my eyes were fixed on this plant, he raised the plant in his hand and told me that it was called thistle and was the "stubborn enemy" of the tea garden. "Then its roots have been cut off, why hasn't it withered?" I am very surprised. "Yes, this plant is hateful, but its tenacity is awe-inspiring." Father stroked the thistle in his hand, and then said, "When the root is cut, it will shed white blood and quickly coagulate into scabs on each section, so it will take root and sprout again, so it will not wither like other weeds."
after listening to my father's words, I can't help thinking: even a plant can recover quickly and regenerate hope, waiting for another rebirth. Why can't I be stronger? I should be strong and try again. I should have a stubborn and simple heart like thistle. I should make the failed wound form a scab, and let the wounded section sprout new hope with a fresh and optimistic attitude! Thought of here, my heart is firm. Because of this beautiful meeting, I regained my courage and gave birth to new hopes.
My father smiled and said, "It seems that you have regained your confidence. Look at the clusters of thistles over there. They are also congratulating you." I followed the direction of my father's finger and saw clusters of thistles without beginning or end. The deep and shallow green seemed to flow, laugh and twinkle in the sun. When you look closely, the purple flowers on the big green banner are like full sails, braving the wind and waves in the green ocean. Because of this meeting, I am full of confidence and calm down.
Because of this meeting, my anxiety and depression disappeared, and the dark clouds of exam failure gradually dispersed. This beautiful meeting brought me warmth and enlightenment. Facing the setbacks in the progress towards the goal, I will overcome it with firm faith ...
Comment: Candidates wrote about the meeting of "I" with this plant "Thistle" in Erbojia Tea Garden, and with the help of the dialogue between "I" and "Father", they wrote about the life enlightenment brought by "Thistle" to me. The selection of materials is full of individuality and concrete narration. The description of scenery in this paper not only adds the situational beauty of the article, but also renders the mood of the characters well. Pay attention to the emotional change of "me" as a clue throughout the whole text. "The wound is beginning to hurt again"-
"My depression has also decreased a little"-"My heart is firm"-"I am full of confidence again", which is compact, insightful and accurate, and can yet be regarded as a masterpiece in the examination room.
2, a warm meeting
I will never forget it, that unexpected meeting, I will never forget it, the warmth it brought me ...
It was cloudy, and it rained intermittently from time to time, and the wind was chilly, and there was a bone-chilling cold on people's faces.
I curled up and supported a big umbrella. I gripped the handle of the umbrella with both hands, and I couldn't wait to shrink myself into the big umbrella. I bent down and walked silently, feeling more and more humble in my heart.
when I entered the supermarket, I put down my umbrella, with my head still low and my eyes staring straight at the road. I didn't return a kind smile to the salesman, and I didn't pay attention to other people's words. I just walked straight to the daily necessities area.
with a bang, my head hit a person's back. Maybe I was distracted just now, but I didn't notice it.
I looked up slowly, and just wanted to say sorry, only to find that the face of the person in front was so familiar. Ah, it's Mr. Cao, the head teacher in the sixth grade of primary school. "Miss Cao ..." I let out a cry timidly in a low voice. Teacher Cao smiled and nodded. "Ah, it's Xiaojie." Her eyes widened to reveal surprise. There was a surge in my heart, and a slightly apologetic blush came to my cheeks. Teacher Cao looked at me: "You are still as shy as before." I listened and bowed my head shyly, as if I had made a serious mistake.
"Come on, straighten up!" She propped up my waist and tidied up my clothes again. "Come on, walk straight. Shyness is a good thing, but if you overdo it, you feel inferior. This is unacceptable. The teacher hopes that you can be confident! " I was a little surprised, but I couldn't help but straighten my waist and stand as tall as a pine. I looked at Teacher Cao with great expectation, and she laughed as happily as a little girl: "Look, confident girls are the most beautiful. I hope you can do this forever! " Say that finish, the teacher nodded to me again, waved and walked away.
I stood there, still straight, as if Mr. Cao was still watching me. My heart seemed to be flooded with sunshine, which made my heart particularly warm. Teacher Cao's words and hopeful eyes made me involuntarily raise my head, and my heart was full of confidence.
I stand up again, hoping to stand more upright. This meeting is very warm, and it makes my heart confident. "A confident girl is the most beautiful." I remembered teacher Cao's words.
Up to now, I still remember the unexpected meeting in the supermarket, which brought me a warmth ...
Comment: This paper describes the scene where I met Mr. Cao in the supermarket. Although things are small and vivid, the phrase "straighten your waist" and "confident girls are the most beautiful" changed my inferiority complex and made me feel confident again. This also gives us enlightenment. There is no need to write much when selecting materials for the composition. The key lies in how to skillfully conceive and how to accurately deduct the topic. Of course, there are many things that we can learn from this article, such as concise beginning and end, and echoing the loop, which makes the article seamless. The detailed descriptions in the article are vivid and accurate, such as "I can't wait to put my body into that big umbrella" and "my head is still low", which lays the foundation for writing "I straighten my waist" below, and writing a sentence by Teacher Cao "Keep my waist straight", with prominent points and no branches. This article can be described as a model of "seeing the big from the small", which is worth learning from.
3. Meet a warm alley
at a time. It's drizzling, gently pushing open the wooden door left unlocked, and bringing elegant blue and white porcelain. You meet me with such a beautiful gesture and break into my world.
"Strange porcelain is like jade, but you are the only one in the world." No matter how beautiful the language is, it can't describe your beauty. It's different from the simplicity of Qin Terracotta Warriors and Horses, the splendor of Tang Tri-colors, the graceful and delicate Song porcelain. Your exquisite porcelain is attached with a wandering pattern like a dragon, winding, hovering and rising, and the tiny sunshine is gently sprinkled on your smooth bottle mouth, outlining a perfect radian, flowing with touching and soul-catching brilliance. Your look determines that our meeting is beautiful.
just one look, and I will never forget it.
It seems that I am possessed. I step by step towards you on the ground mixed with ceramic tiles, and my breathing seems to be disordered. Eyes glued to your porcelain, greedily scanning inch by inch, as if to engrave your charming posture one by one, rooted in the depths of my memory and treasured forever. The rotating lamp overhead spilled soft light on it, and the light stayed at your bottleneck like a fluttering butterfly, unable to bear to leave. I'm staring at you like this, and my vision is gradually blurred. I seem to see you from an ordinary piece of clay to shape, and then thrown into a hot blast furnace for forging. Day after day, night after night, after many nights of nirvana and waiting, you were carefully taken out. You know from the amazing eyes when the world looks at you that you are finally born again! How many days of painful waiting finally turned into joy after rebirth. And your amazing gesture of being reborn like a phoenix has completely surrendered me. At this moment, my heart is filled with warmth, just like the joy when facing the sea in spring, and I can only hear the sound of spring flowers in my ears. Your persistence and perseverance doomed our meeting to be beautiful.
at this glance, love is deeply rooted.
I don't know whether it was your beauty that made me fall in love at first sight, or your strong forbearance that impressed me, but I only know that that beautiful meeting deeply imprinted you into my life, which made me gain a warmth and have the courage to crouch in trouble and wait for rebirth.
celadon appears, flying in a wandering pattern, regretting meeting, and tying the knot with one heart. The alley is close at hand, drizzling, elegant and charming celadon, and you meet me with such a beautiful gesture and break into my world.
Comment: This is a masterpiece in the examination room with beautiful language. The author uses the brushwork of cultural prose to describe the warmth and emotion gained by the meeting of "I" and blue and white porcelain. Depicting blue-and-white porcelain, from the appearance to the inner spirit, goes deep layer by layer, and presents the beauty of blue-and-white porcelain to readers. "Just one look, I'll never forget it" and "One look, deep roots of love" not only combine the structure of the article well, but also sublimate the author's feelings. At the end, "The alley is just a stone's throw, and it's drizzling" pays attention to the change of language, and echoes the beginning well, making the article seamless and full of literary beauty.
4. A warm meeting at a time
Listening to the sound of rain, ink stained clothes, brought me back to that warm meeting.
Last summer, I was lucky enough to visit the ancient city. Blue tile houses, white walls, sparse, silent in the rain. The house lined up with the river cliff, connected with the river bank, and gradually faded, from dark green to lush grass color, and then the green of the river, like a faded bronze ware. That's what the "small bridge and flowing water family" is like. I walked in this natural ink painting, and it was here that I met her.
Like an inexplicable magic, I was attracted by a painting and calligraphy booth, and the woman in front of me came into view. The slender hands are holding the writing brush, and a quaint hairpin randomly disturbs Wusi behind her head, wearing only a blue calico garment, emitting a quaint fragrance. Two bends are like frowning eyebrows, and a pair of eyes are like happy eyes. Oh, my God, she can't be Lin Daiyu! Seeing me staring at her, she smiled shyly.
I said I wanted to buy a painting, and she showed it to me gladly. I carefully looked at this stall, and the simple and beautiful ink paintings were neatly placed. The brush and inkstone seemed to be a little old, and it could be seen from the fine lines on it that the owner must be stroking it every day. By the rainy river, this stall blends in with the surrounding scenery. It's really beautiful!
I bought a smudged ink painting, and she happily wrapped it for me. I am puzzled that although her painting skills are outstanding and her works are exquisite, she seldom sees customers. She said, "This is a stall left by my father. When I was a child, I studied painting with my father. At that time, the business of the stall was booming, but now ..."
I am speechless. I am just a spectator and can't change anything. As she spoke, she took a piece of paper, rolled up the picture, and carefully wrapped the picture. It was a very skilled but lonely action. She handed it to me and said with a smile, "Although there are not many customers, I insist on doing it. This is not only the inheritance of my father, but also the inheritance of this art. I will not disappear! " What a firm word, what a beautiful painting, what a beautiful woman, what a beautiful meeting.
yes, inheriting art. Nowadays, people work aimlessly only for profit, and how many people pursue vanity, but they never pay attention to the beauty, the beauty of the art itself.