The essay writer

1. Funny video clip

One day, Eggplant was walking on the street and suddenly sneezed very loudly.

It wiped its nose and said angrily: "Damn it! Someone took a group photo again!" There were 30 frogs in a pool, and only one was wearing underpants. Why? (Because he was a bather!) There was a pig who walked and walked until he reached England. What did he become? ----Pig. The teacher was doing a spot check on memorizing the text in class. Piglets, puppies, and kittens all raised their hands. Who would the teacher call? --Puppy, because of Wangwang senbei. Butterfly, ant, spider, centipede, they work together, in the end which one doesn't get paid? -- Centipede, no reward for no merit. The elephant in the zoo has the longest trunk, so who is the second longest? --Little Elephant. Which fruit has the worst eyesight? --Mango. Which two fruits have mobile phones? --Carrots and greens, each has its own love. If there is a car, the driver is a prince and the passenger is a princess, whose car does it belong to? --If it is metal, wood, water, fire, and earth, who has the longer legs? ——The ham cobra went on a date with the elephant. After some pleasantries, he said, "Come on, you're welcome to lead such a big pig." I think, as long as I have some modest qualities, I will A perfect person.

One day, Mung Bean broke up with his girlfriend. He was so sad that he kept crying and crying and crying.

Results.

It sprouted.

~~~. 2. Video on how to write a good composition

1. Keep your eyes open and find materials

"It is difficult for a woman to make a meal without rice." Students often feel at a loss when they pick up a pen. Therefore, the teacher’s first task is to help students find materials for their exercises.

When I take over a new class, I always organize some small activities to help students practice writing, such as: one-minute speeches, poetry recitations, story telling, etc. Then use existing materials to guide students in writing, so that each student has something to say. They feel that composition is not difficult, as long as they write down their own experiences and feelings.

In fact, the material for the article can be found everywhere in life, such as: the class held a theme class meeting, the school held a sports meeting, the school organized a factory visit... If the teacher can consciously provide guidance to the students in advance, Of course, students can learn to observe life with purpose and learn to capture the touching scenes in life. Because these materials come from real people and real events that everyone is familiar with, students will naturally look for the source of the composition from the colorful life.

2. Model essays lead the way and create diligently

Having materials does not mean that you can write good articles. Guidance on writing methods is a crutch for students to write. I encourage students to imitate and reference examples. Even if the imitation is relatively mechanical at first, it should be affirmed.

When teaching texts, I pay attention to the penetration of writing knowledge. In order to emphasize the importance of article structure, when I was teaching "Qinyuan Spring Snow", I once again highlighted the analysis of the structure of the words, describing the scenery in the upper column, and discussing the lower column, using "the country is so beautiful, attracting countless heroes to bend their waists". The description of the scene is connected with the discussion. When describing a scene, I always write about the distant snow scene first, and then write about the snow scene and the imaginary sunny scene. In this way, the snow scene can be divided into reality and reality, movement and stillness. The word "xi" is used at the bottom of the column to introduce comments on the hero, and finally points out the main theme. During repeated readings, the students were deeply impressed.

In addition, students’ works will be shown to everyone through comments on compositions and weekly journals. For example, "Classmate Shen Qianqian drew on the concept of "I am Proud, I am a Tree" and skillfully used "The Self-Report of a Gun" to review the vicissitudes of sixty years ago from multiple angles. Because of its unique concept, it was rated as a school First prize in the "Anti-Japanese Essay Contest". The students' successful works have brought us closer to the composition. With a little comment, the skills in the students' works will be more easily accepted by everyone.

Also, I Select some historical masterpieces, print them out for students to read, and make appropriate comments on the good techniques or ideas in the articles. This not only increases the amount of students' reading, but also provides some guidance to students who cannot read and write. Over time, they will improve. Naturally, they will master many new forms.

3. Keep a diary and accumulate more

In my daily composition teaching, I emphasize that every student should practice writing at least once a day. Feelings about current events, as small as the words and deeds of the lifelong teacher in the class, even if you only make one reading excerpt, comment, or one training in choosing words and sentences, don't let a day pass by, write down what you see and hear, and write down what you have seen and heard. My feelings were vividly expressed. "Thank you for the exam" written by Fu Mingtao after he failed in the exam. His inner feelings were sincere and touching. It was first published in the eighth issue of "Qinhu" and later published by "Yancheng Evening News".

Practice makes perfect. After practice, if you become familiar with your writing and have more materials, you will be able to write articles with ease.

In short, in the process of teaching composition, we should guide students to sharpen their eyes. Finding materials, guiding students to learn to imitate and transfer, encouraging students to keep diaries and accumulate them, and organizing students to create and submit articles will definitely stimulate students' interest in writing and improve their writing ability.

3. A 380-word essay on small scenes in life

Life is like a movie with twists and turns, and each wonderful shot makes up a colorful scene. I love life, and I also love a small lens in life, which allows me to be educated and inspired.

That time, I took the bus to my grandma’s house alone. Halfway through, an old woman came up, walking slowly on the aisle with a cane and leaning on the handrail. She looked around and saw that there were no empty seats. She sighed and stood next to me.

I was startled and began to hesitate again: to give in or not to give in? There seemed to be two villains arguing in my heart: "I must give up, I am happy to help others!" "But it is still far from grandma's house! If I give up, can my feet bear it?" "Isn't it worthy of the red scarf on my chest? "Some people gave up their seats without even saying thank you!" "Is it just for the sake of saying 'thank you'?" "No!" "No!" …

Just when I was hesitating. A sincere voice came from behind: "Grandma, sit here!" Following the sound, a boy about 17 years old stood up from his seat, walked to the grandmother, and helped the grandmother sit on the seat, but he himself Stand. The old lady praised: "This child is so sensible!" At this time, I wanted to find a crack to get in right away. Several young people in the car also lowered their heads in shame.

This lens inspired me a lot and also taught me a lot. Helping others is a noble quality. If everyone could be as helpful as the person who gave up their seat, why would society worry about disharmony? 4. Write a short excerpt

The Taoist "Landscape Theory" has a profound saying that "the wise enjoy mountains and the benevolent enjoy water". The sea takes the concept of water to the extreme. Facing the sea, all dwarfs become giants; facing the sea, all giants become dwarfs. Only by facing the sea can we understand the vastness and fraternity; only by facing the sea can we feel the risks and conquests; only by facing the sea can we truly understand the ups and downs of life and the ebb and flow of life... …

1. “Poverty-wide love but close to benevolence”

When we face the wide sea, we realize her broad mind. She can accommodate thousands of tons of giant ships and can accommodate the sea. Thousands of creatures, even on the sea level that day, the water was the same color, she contained the sky.

Confucianism advocates "general love and close benevolence". It is advocated that human beings should understand fraternity and tolerance. I never understood Morrie's phrase "love or die" before. After reading O. Henry's "The Last Leaf", I realized that one's love for others can cost one's life. With the fraternity of the sea, the owner of "Hokkaido Noodle House" can cook an extra bowl of noodles for the mother and child in adversity; with the tolerance of the sea, people can feel the care of their parents, teachers, and friends. Facing the sea, we must understand fraternity.

2. "Hang the clouds and sail directly to help the sea"

The tolerance of the sea does not cover up the boldness of the sea. Facing the sea, you can see a sheltered harbor and enjoy the rough waves. Perhaps this is what is called risk and tribulation.

Santiago fought against the waves for three days and nights, and told us in a firm tone: "People can be destroyed, but they cannot be defeated." Perhaps we will encounter countless risks and endure many hardships in our lives. But we must be prepared to attack the sea and have the courage to challenge the giant board. Only by conquering the sea and the huge waves can we conquer difficulties and ourselves. I believe that "there will be times when strong winds and waves break, and sails will sail across the sea."

3. "Watch the ebb and flow of the ocean"

Due to the power of nature, the ocean ebbs and flows; due to the social circle, life ebbs and flows.

Facing the sea and the tide, we always have a peaceful mind. All rivers will eventually return to the sea. When the seawater evaporates, precipitation will return to all rivers. Leaves will always fall in autumn, but how can fallen leaves not be a kind of peace that "turns into spring mud to protect flowers"?

We should also have this kind of peace when facing life. Both Jia Yi and Su Dongpo suffered unfair treatment from the court at that time, but their mentality was different. After Jia Yi was demoted, he wrote "Ode in Diao Qu Yuan" and died of depression; Su Dongpo still became a representative figure of the "bold school" after being charged with the "Wutai Poetry" case. Facing the ups and downs of life, we should have the open-mindedness of Zi Zhan and the coolness to watch the ebb and flow of the ocean.

Facing the sea, I learned that we need tolerance and fraternity; facing the sea, I learned that we need to struggle and fight; facing the sea, I learned that we should look at it with a peaceful heart Life... only in this way, the mind will no longer be narrow, and the sea will have no boundaries. 5. 50-minute video of primary school integrity composition class

Today, I took an integrity class

Suiping No. 3 Primary School

Rong Maozheng

< p> Ah, I finally came to ** Mountain, which I have longed for for a long time. ** Mountain is known as the National Forest Park.

When I saw it today, it really lived up to its reputation.

There were so many people today, there was a long queue at the Shanmen ticket office. The tour guide was

a young and beautiful aunt who brought us a lot of laughter along the way.

To be honest, I quite like her.

The tour guide greeted us while busy buying

tickets. A few children and I walked around the hall curiously.

Hey, handsome guy, come here."

I instinctively turned around and took a look. The tour guide

Walking towards me with a smile, he was indeed calling me. The tour guide bent down and said to me in her special pleasant voice:

"You kids don't need to buy tickets, just go through the mountain gate." You should lower your head when you do it.

Don’t stand too straight.

Remember? ”

I understand it but not clearly. , but still nodded.

As we started to enter the mountain gate, I followed my mother and moved forward slowly with the flow of people.

I forgot all about what the tour guide had just told me. I kept standing on tiptoes and stretching.

Long neck,

always complaining about walking so slowly.

Finally it was my mother's turn to show her tickets.

I wanted to squeeze in front of my mother, because my mother and I were the only ones in our tour group.

"Whose child is this? Go and pay for the ticket."

I heard the cold voice of the staff

in my ears.

I was stunned for a moment,

Are you talking about me? Only then did I remember what the tour guide said.

However, she clearly told me that I didn’t need to buy a ticket. My mother was also a little surprised at this time, but she still reluctantly turned me around. I feel that there are many pairs of eyes behind me. 6. "Small shots in life" essay 600 words

Life is a colorful kaleidoscope, a wonderful movie... Every shot in life will be an inspiration. , tell you the truth of being a human being. It is precisely because of this small lens in life that I understand the joy of helping others.

Once again, I was taking a car home. Halfway through the car, an old grandmother came up. She seemed to have something wrong with her legs. She was limping and walked to the middle of the car. He looked around. I looked around and saw that there were no seats left. I sighed in disappointment, "Hey, there's not even an empty seat." Then he stood next to me where I was sitting.

At this time, the two mischievous little guys, the righteous villain and the evil villain, came out again. The evil villain said: "Don't give up your seat to this old lady. It's still more than twenty minutes before we get to your house. Let her sit down while you stand. Your feet will hurt, so don't give up your seat." "No, look at this Grandma is so old, and she is not good at pushing. Let her stand for one minute, which is equivalent to standing for half an hour! Besides, if you don't give up your seat, you deserve the bright color on your chest. If you don’t give up your seat, are you qualified to be a young pioneer? Get up and say to the old lady, “Grandma, please sit down!” said the righteous villain anxiously. "Don't give up your seat! No!" "Give up your seat! Get up!" "No!" "Give up! Give up!" After arguing, the two villains actually started fighting.

"Okay, don't fight, just listen to me." I said, "I, I give up?" The evil villain next to him sighed. "No?" I was conflicted and hesitant. The righteous villain next to him also sighed. "I..." "Grandma, sit down." A little boy who looked two or three years younger than me stood up. "Well, you are such a sensible kid, thank you!" the old lady said gratefully. "You're welcome, of course. If you don't give up your seat, how can you deserve the bright red scarf floating on my chest?" The boy smiled.

I was both ashamed and remorseful, and some people in the carriage also lowered their heads in shame. I thought: Hey, the old grandma is so close to me, I also thought about giving up my seat, but... Hey, I won’t say anything anymore, this little boy, he is my teacher, my forever teacher...

< p> Look, it’s such a small lens, such a small thing with a little effort, and it contains a truth: respect the old, love the young, and help others. This will not only warm others, but also make you very happy. , my heart is full of warmth. This small lens inspired me: everyone has a responsibility with a little effort. The 2008 Olympic Games is coming, let’s start from the little things bit by bit! For the sake of others, for yourself, and for the stability and harmony of society, everyone should "raise your hand once"!

Please adopt

Does this solve your problem? 7. How can primary school students write a good composition video (Chinese composition'

Establish a comprehensive concept of composition and organically combine listening, speaking, reading and writing

First, we must pay attention to reviewing the topic; second, we must make it clear The purpose of writing must be new; third, the material selection must be well-founded; fourth, attention should be paid to article planning skills and the structure of the chapter; fifth, attention should be paid to the paragraphing of the article, and subtitles and composition outlines should be listed in advance; sixth, attention should be paid to the writing method of the article and the usage according to the text. ; Seventh, use language wisely and use your thoughts to mobilize your language. Learn five ways to create ideas: praise people with things, express your feelings directly, use things to describe things, touch scenes to evoke feelings, and express your ambitions through things.

4. The year-by-year goal of writing. Level breakdown:

First grade words, second grade sentences, third grade fragments, fourth grade chapters, fifth grade comprehensive, sixth grade improvement.

5. Implementing five trainings

Based on the principle that understanding is the core of composition, and around this core of developing students’ psychological mechanisms, five trainings were carried out in a down-to-earth manner:

(1) Word training. Learn to master a large number of words. Master the golden key to using words: connect with things you are familiar with; connect with the reality of your own life; connect with the language and word knowledge you have learned. Use the method of "Shi Yin Shuo" to combine word learning with speaking training. The "Ten Leads" are: 1. Analyze glyphs; 2. Use teaching aids; 3. Learn words based on pictures; 4. Group words and expand words; 5. Select words to fill in the blanks; 6. Match words; 7. Adjust word order; 8. Touch Use words for scenes; 9. Word classification; 10. Connect words to form sentences. It enriches the content of speaking training, enables you to accumulate a large number of words that you can speak and use, and lays a solid foundation for writing essays. 8. Composition of small scenes in life

You can refer to it when writing your composition

Before you know it, it’s December. The weather is so cold today. The sky was gray, and the north wind kept whistling in my ears. The powerful force lifted the scattered hair of pedestrians, and everyone on the road was "fully armed." In this weather, even if you gave me one million yuan, I wouldn't step out of my house. But God was not kind and the shoes were broken, so I had to brave the cold and strong wind to mend them. Sigh...

On the road, the wind blew hard, making my face hurt. I couldn’t help but wonder: Will the shoe cobbler come out in the cold weather? A series of question marks popped out of my mind! While riding, I saw the vague figure of a shoe cobbler in the distance. As I got closer, his shabby and thin cotton-padded clothes and wrinkled old face came into my eyes without any obstruction, and there was a faint sense of pity and sympathy in my heart.

"Grandpa, please repair my shoe, it's broken."

The shoe repairman took it, ah, these are a pair of calloused and vicissitudes of hands. ! The cold wind turned his hands red and blue. The shoe cobbler shook his hands and started working hard. I stood aside and watched, feeling inexplicably moved in my heart. A kind of warmth spreads throughout the body, flowing forever...

The shoes are mended, and my eyes are filled with tears, I don’t know why.

When I left, I looked back and saw that the skinny figure of the shoe cobbler suddenly became taller.

Ordinary, beautiful!

A person with a beautiful soul

Ni Ruochen, Class 4, No. 18, Tian District

There is a mother of a classmate , although I have only met her three times and do not know her name, her beautiful heart and noble moral character are deeply engraved in my young heart.

On a Sunday morning before summer vacation, I came out early with the two yuan my grandma gave me to buy food. At this time I saw the mother of a classmate walking in front of me. I was just about to walk over and say hello to her, when suddenly a person appeared in front of me. The man was about forty years old, wearing a straw hat, dirty clothes, and there was a lot of mud on his pants. He was holding a sack in his hand. There were many lively frogs in the sack. What are they talking about? snort! There must be nothing good going on! I think. So I ran to a place where they couldn't see me and eavesdropped on what they were saying? Just listen to that person saying: "Miss, this is a high-quality frog. It is delicious and nourishing. I will buy it for fifty yuan." "Frogs are beneficial insects and can help you catch pests, but you caught them If you sell it, you won't have a good harvest." Now the man said anxiously, "Do you want to buy it? If you don't, I will sell it to someone else." She thought for a while and said, "Here, it's five." Ten yuan, I bought it." Then, I saw her carrying a sack and getting on a bus to the suburbs. Out of curiosity, I followed her to the suburbs. It turned out that she was here to release frogs.

Although I spent the two yuan to buy the ticket and was very hungry, thinking of her noble qualities, I couldn't help but feel a warm current in my heart.

On Saturday morning, my mother took me to play in Lotus Pond Park.

The park is very quiet, only the birds on the branches are singing happily, as if saying to me: "Welcome! Welcome!"

Walk along the path inside , tall bamboos rise from the ground on both sides, green trees and dewy grass make the entire park look like spring.

Go straight ahead, which is the bridge. Walk up the stone steps and reach the highest point. Looking around, you can have a panoramic view of the beautiful scenery of the park. The milky white thin fog covers the entire lake like a veil, making people feel like they are in a fairyland; the mirror-level lake reflects green trees, cyan rockeries and beautiful pavilions in the middle of the lake; yellow and green willow branches Like a little girl's braid blowing on the water with the wind, what a beautiful landscape this is!

Walking on the stone road covered with fallen leaves, we arrived at the Huxin Pavilion. The pavilion in the center of the lake is surrounded by tall trees and green shrubs. Suddenly, I heard a "wow, wah" sound from the water. It turned out to be a few brown waterbirds playing on the lake. One of them plunged into the water and disappeared. It took a while before it emerged from the water. I thought it must be I caught a delicious fish.

The scenery of Lotus Pond Park is so beautiful! We should protect the environment and strive to make every corner of Hanzhong as clean and beautiful as a park. 9. Video explanation of how to write a good composition

1. Improve the ability to understand and express things. Mr. Ye Shengtao, a famous educator in my country, pointed out: "Writing anything depends on knowledge and experience. Only with what kind of knowledge and experience can you write what kind of things. On the contrary, if you do not have the ability to express knowledge, you will not be able to write a good composition. ".

2. Take the cognitive structure as the core of composition, including learning knowledge, observation and accumulation, memory storage, training thinking, enriching imagination, cultivating emotions, and exercising will; from speaking to writing, revising carefully, reading more and diligently Write.

3. Establish a concept of great composition and organically combine listening, speaking, reading and writing

First, we must pay attention to reviewing the topic; second, we must clarify the purpose of writing and have new ideas; third, we must select materials carefully According to; fourth, we must pay attention to article planning skills and arrange the chapter structure; fifth, we must pay attention to the paragraphing of the article, make subtitles and composition outlines in advance; sixth, we must pay attention to the writing method of the article and use it according to the text; seventh, we must make clever use of language and use our thoughts to mobilize the language. Learn five ways to formulate ideas: praise people with things, express your thoughts directly, use objects to describe principles, touch scenes to evoke emotions, and use objects to express aspirations.

4. Grade-by-grade breakdown of the major goals of composition:

First-grade words, second-grade sentences, third-grade fragments, fourth-grade chapters, fifth-grade comprehensive, and sixth-grade improvement.

5. Implementing five trainings

(2) Sentence training. As long as it is a sentence, it includes two aspects: one is the person, thing, object, and scene it talks about, and the other is the purpose. However, when some teachers guide students to say a sentence, they do not use pictures and things to seriously teach students how to observe, understand, analyze, and express. They just take out a picture or an object and let the students say and write a sentence. The students do not know Why should I write a sentence, how should I write a sentence, what sentence pattern should I write, and what sentence pattern should I write? This leads to a monotonous, dull, and inactive tone in the composition. Instead, students can be asked to use pictures, look at objects, have conversations, and practice speaking and writing a sentence with four complete elements of time, place, person, and event, four sentence patterns, and nine sentence patterns. Only then will students be able to use different sentence patterns and patterns in their compositions to express different thoughts, feelings, attitudes, and purposes.

(3) Duan training. Combine eight types of paragraphs: development of things as sequence, time sequence as sequence, spatial transformation as sequence, summary and sub-description structural paragraphs, cause and effect paragraph, turning paragraph, progressive paragraph, and parallel paragraph. In this way, we can understand the occurrence and development laws of objective things. No matter what type of paragraph is used, it all records the development of the narrative and people's understanding of things, that is, the content and center of the paragraph. Like a sentence, it is also a description of people, things, objects, and scenery, and it also expresses a meaning. It's just to make a sentence clearer and more profound.

(4) Chapter training. Chapters are composed of paragraphs. Through the knowledge and methods of reviewing topics, conception, material selection, article planning, formula and terminology, through the four expression methods of narration, description, lyricism and argumentation, the beginning and end of articles, transition and echo methods, and the knowledge and methods of various article genres . Learn to write narratives and practical essays that have a clear focus, complete meaning, and appropriate details.

(5) Live on-site training. Use real-life training to better understand "starting from the content" of writing essays. Through various composition teaching activities, such as "Determining the Center Seminar", "Material Selection Seminar", "Composition Consultation Meeting", "Xiao Zhuge Question Review Meeting", and "Wonderful Word Competition", we can learn composition knowledge vividly and concretely from the activities and writing methods. In addition, you can also carry out various activities inside and outside the school, such as rope skipping, tug-of-war, shuttlecock kicking, ball games, and endorsement competitions, so as to learn how to write competition essays; carry out voluntary labor inside and outside the school, learn how to write about labor scenes; hold poetry recitations and lectures , learn how to write about meeting scenes and what you see at the meeting; learn how to write visit notes and travel notes by visiting and browsing places of interest. Learn how to observe and pay attention to the things and events around you. "Paying attention to everything is knowledge, and mastering human feelings is writing." Through on-site life composition, we further realize that life is fertile ground for composition. In this way, you can learn to tell things, express true feelings, cultivate the sentiments of truth, kindness and beauty, and cultivate a good writing style.

Implement "mutual evaluation and mutual modification" to cultivate students' independent thinking and creativity. After the students have finished writing their essays, they are organized to be reviewed in the group. First learn the advantages of other people's compositions, and then use a critical eye to point out the shortcomings in each other's compositions and point out suggestions for improvement. Re-write on this basis, so that students can gain something every time they write an article.

Write your own honest words

“Write your own honest words” is what the old educator Mr. Ye Shengtao said. Aiming to create a colorful world of "independent" composition. The so-called "autonomy" means not being restricted by rules and regulations, allowing students to think freely and write freely. "Autonomous" composition means "speaking from the heart", acting spontaneously, showing one's own style and reflecting distinctive personality. 10. A 400-word essay on a small lens in life

A 400-word essay on a small lens in life Words

Life is like a kaleidoscope, colorful, and like scenes of wonderful movies, which are always presented in front of our eyes. Now I will introduce to you a small scene in my life!

In life, there is one person who has touched me. She is my mother. My mother is of medium height, with bright eyes, red lips and thick eyebrows.

I remember one morning, it was a rainy day, school was over, and all the classmates followed their parents. I was the only one standing at the door of the classroom, thinking: Will my mother come to pick me up? At this moment, my mother came to pick me up with an umbrella. I waved to my mother to come over. I saw that my mother only brought an umbrella. She threw the umbrella towards me, but her clothes got wet. Ah, mother How great. She was afraid that my clothes would get wet and I would catch a cold, so she held the umbrella towards me. At that time, I was so moved and sang the song "Only Mom is Good in the World" in my heart...

In the cold winter, my mother got up at five o'clock. She started to work before she had time to get dressed. When I got up, my mother had already prepared milk and breakfast for me. After I finished breakfast, my mother sent me to school and picked me up after school, back and forth. Looking at my mother's red, steamed bun-like hands, I couldn't help but shed tears from my cheeks.

Students, what kind of small scene is this in your life?