A poem of seven words and four sentences. You don't have to read rhymes, and the standards can be flexible.
It rhymes well. Some friends who like poetry don't know rhyme, but just copy down the sentences line by line, then
What should I do?
I basically expressed my joy.
If there is a problem, it is that the theme is not clear and the artistic conception is not deep enough.
Writing a poem is a feeling, a clear theme and rich artistic conception.
The theme is why did you write this poem?
The requirements of artistic conception will be more complicated, so let's not say it for the time being.
Your last sentence is very good, but the first three sentences can't explain the fourth sentence, so the fourth sentence is a bit empty.
The third sentence here is crucial, and it is "turning around"-the reason why I want to start writing the fourth sentence again-
For example (random example): Happy to move to a new house-I hope Joule has finally landed for a long time. ...
This is your theme, very clear.