How to evaluate an original poem? There are cases.

Dongli picks chrysanthemums and Nanyuan writes.

-Analysis of Leng Xiangxin's Autumn Feeling in the Alley

Fan Conghua/Wen

Leaves are falling. Wild goose crosses without trace. This is a kind of life, just like a speck of dust. The red maple shines in the shadow and the water is misty. Pick up a stringed piano, a half-stringed moon and a string of truth.

Collected from Dongli and written from Nanyuan. Seeing autumn water is just pleasure. Some memories, who sealed them? Yes, chrysanthemum tea, osmanthus wine, Hosta soul.

"Leaves fall one after another, geese pass without trace". Festivals are symbols of late autumn. This is actually an "illusion". The author's true meaning is the late autumn of life. How hot and sour is life under wonderful words? "Calculate every life, as if light dust. The red maple shines in the shadow and the water is misty. " Ordinary life, such as faint dust flying, like the swaying shadow of Qiu Feng, if the clouds fall ... Alas, what have you got in this life? However, "Pick up a piano, half a string of moon, a string of truth", although only ten words, makes people feel heavy for no reason. No matter how grand the ideal is, it is impossible to play the Sanskrit of heaven and earth in reality; How many thoughts and thoughts are left in the sky; In fiction and fact, what's the regret of being silent and protecting even a little truth?

Since Tao Yuanming can retire from the officialdom and collect chrysanthemums from the east fence, the author can also be indifferent to the secular world and write prose in Nanyuan. This is actually the purpose of the whole poem, which is to let nature take its course. The premise of letting nature take its course is the denial of secular values; It is a complete stripping of values such as power, status, wealth and honor recognized by society from ancient times to the present. Therefore, the author takes "seeing autumn water is just pleasing people". Some memories, who sealed them? "To cater to their unchanging life orientation. This "coziness" belongs not only to people, but also to water. People are leisurely and comfortable, and the water is still and deep. At that moment, it seemed that there was a melody with the same meaning, which was played together from people's hearts and merged into a light music. So these things can be integrated into "chrysanthemum wine, osmanthus tea, Hosta Soul". With the image of wine, tea and Hosta, let us understand and chew.

To sum up, I think this word has reached a considerable height in both rhythm and artistic conception.

Finally, I don't think "Hosta Soul" fits the sentence pattern of the first two flowers. On the whole, it is better to use "Snow Soul".