However, the time left for writing in the Chinese exam is limited, and it takes at most 10 minutes to review the topic. Therefore, we should not only correctly examine the questions, but also concentrate our thoughts and grasp the thinking of examining the questions as soon as possible.
So, how can we achieve this goal? In addition to stabilizing emotions, eliminating distractions and overcoming the habit of going its own way in free writing, we should also understand the characteristics of propositional composition in the senior high school entrance examination paper. With the continuous advancement of the new curriculum reform, topic-based propositional composition has gradually become a common propositional way for proposers, and its fairness in choice is better than material-based composition or propositional composition with strict restrictions.
However, as a selective examination such as the senior high school entrance examination, there must be restrictions anyway. The difficulty of reviewing questions does not mean that there is no need to review questions. The "topic" has not been proved, and there is still the possibility of digression. Therefore, the examination of questions is still one of the test-taking skills.
How to examine the questions, we take the composition of the 2007 senior high school entrance examination as an example to analyze. First, review the composition topic: Topic: Rainbow in my heart Tip: Have you seen the rainbow in the sky? Whenever the rain clears, red, orange, yellow, green, blue and purple, a colorful overpass often appears in the air, that is, a rainbow.
Her gorgeous, her beautiful, caused us how many beautiful daydreams. Will there be a beautiful "rainbow" in your heart? If so, what would she be? Is it a good memory or a precious experience for you? Is it your firm belief or the realm you yearn for? Is it your youthful expectation or your unremitting pursuit? ..... No matter what she is, she is spiritual food, spiritual pillar, and spiritual strength to accompany your young life to maturity.
You've been excited for her, working for her. Please write what you think at this moment with full emotion and fluent words. Requirements: ① according to the content and expression characteristics of the article, choose the appropriate style (except poetry and drama); ② No less than 600 words; Please avoid using personal names, school names and place names related to you.
Generally speaking, this essay question consists of three parts: title, prompt and requirement. It not only limits the topic and writing scope, effectively prevents the phenomenon of quick success and instant benefit, but also has a relatively broad writing space because of its rich connotation and wide coverage, which is conducive to candidates to fully display their talents.
The composition topic "Rainbow in My Heart" is a propositional composition with partial phrases. When writing this kind of composition, we should pay attention to careful examination of the questions, and let the spark of wisdom generate come out. According to the guidance of the prompt, accurately grasp the connotation of the central word "rainbow"
The rainbow here is not a natural phenomenon in nature, but an emotion, attitude or experience with metaphorical meaning. According to the prompt, we can understand it as beautiful memories, unforgettable experiences, firm beliefs, beautiful fantasies (dreams, ideals), persistent pursuits and so on.
On the basis of grasping the connotation of the topic, we should make a fuss about "novelty", "strangeness", "smallness" and "profundity", and choose materials from different angles to make the composition of the senior high school entrance examination "different year after year", thus achieving eye-catching and surprising results. As far as examination is concerned, the meaning of examination must meet the requirements of "accuracy" and "depth"
The so-called "accuracy" means accurately understanding the intention of the proposition and grasping the restrictive conditions of the topic; The so-called "deep" is to expand and enrich the meaning of the problem from various angles from the outside to the inside, within the scope allowed by the problem. As for the composition topic "Rainbow in My Heart", you can write about the specific thing "Rainbow" in nature, but you should attach "Rainbow in My Heart", or you can write about specific things as beautiful as the rainbow and write about aesthetic feeling. As you can see from the prompt, you can also write "beautiful memories", "precious experiences", "yearning realm" and "one"
After doing the above-mentioned accurate examination, we should continue to dig deep into the topic and open up new ideas. We can expand the rainbow in my heart as follows: First, articles about family, friendship, teacher-student relationship and hometown love are often written by middle school students. In fact, under this topic, we can show the fragments of memory from the perspective of time and experience the beautiful emotions in real life.
Or show the changes of hometown, campus, city and community from the perspective of space. Second, the power of example is infinite. Many students are in idolize. In fact, there is a certain spirit in a star that is worth learning. Isn't that a spiritual rainbow? From this, we can write the rainbow in our hearts by describing some of the characters' experiences or spirits.
Third, in life, we may encounter countless new things, a small experiment, an adventure, an unusual activity and so on. These are all precious experiences in our lives, and what we gain from them is not the rainbow-like beauty of life. Fourthly, dig the abstract meaning of the word "rainbow" from the perspective of metaphor and symbol. After careful consideration, we find that the rainbow is like a bridge, which connects the two ends of the road and has the function of communication, so we can write the exchange and communication of thoughts and feelings. Fifth, from the perspective of support, we can write the rainbow in the hearts of the silkworm and the eagle, but we should pay attention to expressing the rainbow in the author's heart through the hearts of the silkworm and the eagle. This idea is both difficult and easy to write.
After this kind of examination, I believe that students will never worry about having nothing to write. In normal teaching, teachers should pay special attention to cultivating students' divergent thinking, expanding their thinking and examining questions from multiple angles. In order to improve the ability of examining questions and understand the meaning of questions, students must also master certain methods of examining questions. Here are a few examples: first, compare similarities and differences.
When you encounter familiar questions, you are easily disturbed by thinking patterns. You need to compare them with similar questions and analyze their respective characteristics. For example, I love teachers, yes.
2. Beautiful rainbow, how to write a composition Current location: Guangdong College Entrance Examination Network > Common Documents > Composition > Time: 2014-04 09: 40
Beautiful rainbow
-The dividing line.
Beautiful Rainbow Composition Part I: Beautiful Rainbow
The downpour finally stopped. The dark clouds all over the sky seem to be intoxicated by the beautiful scenery after the rain. They don't want to destroy this beautiful and elegant atmosphere and hide quietly. The sun, which has been hiding behind the dark clouds, is not willing to lag behind. It jumped out of the clouds happily and returned its light and heat to the earth.
Suddenly, a dazzling light appeared in the sky, which gradually turned into a layer of red and gradually became thicker under the irradiation of sunlight. At the same time, both sides of the red road continue to sag to the bottom, forming a "bridge" shape. "Ah, the beautiful rainbow came out, so beautiful!" I am filled with joy.
Then in the inner layer of red, there is a kind of elegant orange yellow, and then it also expands and thickens, but it is not as beautiful and bright as red. They are very close to me, and I lean against you and make out like a little sister.
After a while, purple, pink, blue and green also scrambled to appear in the sky, and together they formed the beautiful scenery of nature-rainbow. This colorful and beautiful "bridge" is exactly the same as the real bridge. How I want to touch its beautiful and colorful clothes. I reached out my hand, but I didn't touch anything. At this time, a few snow-white clouds floated not far away, and they surrounded the rainbow as if praising it. There are also a few clouds floating around the rainbow, gently attached to it, adding a little tenderness and elegance to it.
What a beautiful rainbow! It's like a poem, a painting and a beautiful music.
Write a composition with beautiful autumn colors as the theme, with a total score. I like autumn best all the year round, because it is colorful and fragrant. The earth changed into colorful clothes.
In the orchard, after a summer, the apples were suffocating, but it was still very hot outside, and I left my keys at home, so my face flushed. Grapes want to learn to swim, and they have been holding their breath and turning purple. Persimmons imitate lanterns and hang red on trees, trying to bring a glimmer of light to the earth. Chestnuts couldn't stay any longer. They jumped to the ground, fell into the soil and climbed out.
In the garden, small flowers are in full bloom. Sunflowers have been looking at the sun and want to know the secret of the sun. Chrysanthemum is as red as fire, as pink as chardonnay and as white as snow. It is very beautiful. Flowers are swaying from time to time, as if welcoming Miss Qiu.
In the forest, the leaves are naughty! They play hide-and-seek with Mother Tree. One by one, they hid at the foot of mother's tree, so that "mother" could not find them. Ginkgo garden is like handfuls of small fans; Maple leaves are red like burning fire, and they are soft when walking on the road, because there are leaves!
Ah! What a beautiful autumn! I like autumn!
4. How to write a rainbow composition After the storm, a colorful rainbow will quietly appear in the quiet sky; Similarly, every time my heart experiences a storm, a rainbow will gradually rise in my heart, from vague to clear, soothing my uneasy heart a little.
Red. Hot and unrestrained red is the color of enthusiasm, which is in sharp contrast with the lead gray of the heart after the storm. People can't help but want to talk about the integration of the two colors, so the heart slowly stretches, the sky slowly clears up, the red slowly warms up, and the sun slowly begins to fill my heart ... Red tells me to keep enthusiasm and enthusiasm forever and face the upcoming setbacks with confidence. It is not advisable to be discouraged, only to fall down.
Orange. Soft and solemn orange is a warm color, the comfort of mother's gentle voice, and an introversion. After the storm, we should think about its back and forth, and have some feelings ... orange reminds me to put my mind right, study the enlightenment given by the storm and keep it in mind.
Yellow. Dazzling bright yellow is a kind of advanced color, which drives away the haze in my heart like sunshine and dark clouds and finds my original self ... Yellow encourages me to open a bright smile, hold my head high and face the residual wind and rain.
Green. Bright green is a vibrant color, bright green is full of vitality, and healthy green is full of vitality, which makes people feel full of vitality. It's true. If we look at the world after the storm instead of just indulging in it, we will find that it will be a quiet morning after the storm ... Green, teach me to look at my success or failure in another way.
Blue. Broad and boundless blue is a quiet color, light, like a normal heart ... Blue, frankly tells me: "Face it with a normal heart, don't be nervous, don't lose heart, believe in yourself, and you will succeed."
Indigo Indigo, which shines on you better than blue, is a transcendent color.
Storms are not stagnation points that hinder people's progress. It is just a stop for people to relax, increase their experience, broaden their minds and prepare for the next storm. This is a place where people can improve their own realm, so as to surpass the previous ... indigo, and let me prepare for more progress. Purple.
Fantastic and wonderful purple is the most ideal color. Wind and rain can't stop us from walking. We have our own ideal, and we will keep moving towards it. People can't fall. Where they fell, they should stand up, dust themselves off, pack their bags and keep walking ... Purple calls me to continue my pilgrimage to the palace of success. When this colorful rainbow appears in my mind, I will remember the lessons of the storm instead of letting its shadow cover my heart. I will adjust my mentality and devote myself to life with better body and mind.
So, under her instructions, I struggled step by step, step by step. The seven-color rainbow was pulled from Dalai Lake, and it just drew a semicircle on the sky full of water drops.
It is about 300 miles long, because it is on the north bank of Dalai Lake and the south bank of Dalai Lake, just 300 miles north and south. The sky full of water droplets is transparent, and colorful rainbows also reflect a seven-color rainbow in the inner sky.
Some clouds are heavy and still moving down, while others are light and still rising. The reflection of the lake and the rainbow in the sky are still changing rapidly.
Duanmu Hongliang's "On the Grassland" "Look, the rainbow! The rainbow is coming! " We looked in the direction of his finger and saw a semicircular ribbon hidden in the light smoke and mist on the chest of the waterfall. The sun is getting closer and closer. It throws its own light and heat into the waterfall and pushes away the lingering smoke with thick hands. The colorful exercises in red, yellow, green and blue are becoming more and more colorful.
Hui Changlin's Rainbow Dream I saw a huge rainbow with bright colors, which appeared in the blue sky after the rain. It is like a colorful arch bridge, spanning the peak forest and reaching the deep valley.
Judging from the background of the sky, it is so far away from us and so high. From the background of deep valleys and peak forests, it is so close to us, so low, as if you can touch it with your hands.
On the left foot of the canopy of Jun Qing's Diary of Tianzishan, there is a rainbow: pink, beige, light blue and dark ochre. Against the blue sky, like a vague overpass, is it to lure fairies to fly? ..... Is that a rainbow? Wet and colorful Shan Ye, that layer of traces is full of paintings: a layer of peaks: silver ash; A layer of trees: lush; A layer of ripe litchi: bright red; A layer of crystal white highway: many light blue cuboids are flying.
Oh, layers of scars and colors, that's a fairy's dance skirt, flying across the earth like Wei Yun? Ripples, but life in Di Hong is shining? Fu Zhimei's "Clouds, Water and Beautiful Feelings" has a walking rainbow on one side of the ship's rail, which is thrown into the air for dozens of feet. Its foam is like scattered beads and fog, and the sun is bright and dazzling. This compound with seven colors is dancing like a butterfly. Wang Wenjie's Pacific Storm is colorful and really beautiful.
Look at it, it always sticks to the blue sky so softly and quietly. It reflects the colorful light, the rushing rivers on the earth after the rain, and the crystal water drops on the grass, surrounded by a soft and quiet atmosphere. From time to time, our cowherd children will jump out of the Woods and sing sweetly: "The rainbow is bent, the boat is bent ..." When we are tired of singing, we will lie prone on the wet grass, look up at the rainbow and unconsciously tell the story of the rainbow.
Li cheng's rainbow fantasy when I look up again, duh! A clear rainbow pierced the blue night sky. I don't know when to come out; But now it is like a long bridge, winding from the back of the white house on the top of the mountain in the east to the higher castle peak in the north.
After a shower, Mao Dun's rainbow competed with the fiery red sun. A radiant rainbow rose from Huaying Mountain and bent into the distant sky. The rainbow reflects the blue sky and the cool wind blows gently. The beautiful scenery on both sides of Jialing River is even more touching.
Luo Guangbin Yang Yiyan.
5. How to write a composition about rainbows after rain? About 100 words, rainbow after rain.
There is a song that says, "The sun is always after the storm, please believe there is a rainbow …" Yes, no matter how fierce the storm is, it will stop one day and the sun will shine on the earth again. However, I have hesitated, hesitated and lost in the face of difficulties.
When I was in primary school, I was used to the teacher's inculcation and my mother's nagging. I will always "listen" at that time. At that time, I was still very young and self-aware and would not resist the "enemy." Therefore, I am very eager for middle school life. I hope one day I can fly in the Sahara desert like an eagle!
In middle school, it is very different from primary school that the amount of homework in middle school is huge! Speaking languages alone, there are ancient Chinese besides modern Chinese every day. There are 10 copies of this article in the exercise book, composition book, excerpt book, exercise book and preview book ... English is not lost to Chinese; Book number 1, book number 2, book number 3, book number 4, book number 5, new coordinates ... other small students were still sleeping in the morning, and I was already in the classroom. There is still the danger of being "deducted" by Teacher Lu for nine classes every day. Maybe I'll go home at 7: 30 and almost faint when I see the dense ancient prose. It's also very vivid. That guy, whose horn was dark, jumped up and down, his eyes were dizzy and the elephant fell to the ground. "I feel very tired. I contradict the teacher and hate the classroom, and even blame the Education Bureau. ...
With the encouragement of my mother and the care of my teacher, I gradually adapted to the life in middle school. Because of the large amount of homework, I want to attend classes well; Because of the large amount of homework, I have to do my homework hard ... After countless days and nights, I finally ushered in the dawn of a beautiful rainbow.
Recently, my math score has made a great leap: the average score of weekly exercise paper and monthly examination paper is above 80, especially in the mid-term exam this semester. I got 83, and my efforts in these months have not been in vain! My score can knock down a large number of students. For ancient Chinese, I now have my own trick: 1: I can recite it easily when I go home. 2. Take notes and review quickly when you get home. 3. Think about the meaning of each sentence while reciting ancient Chinese. This will make me remember. Every time I practice weekly and monthly papers, my scores in ancient Chinese are quite high! Therefore, I like learning ancient Chinese.
You see, my study is full of sunshine now. After this difficult period, my thoughts gradually matured. I think: every difficulty will have a sunny day. When the sun walks after a storm, how can it see bright sunshine and beautiful rainbows? I survived and learned that everyone should bravely face challenges, overcome difficulties and greet the rainbow after the storm.
6. How to write a composition with the total score structure How to write a composition with the total score structure:
1, the so-called total-sub-total structure, as the name implies, is that this composition is roughly composed of three parts: total, sub-theory and summary, and find the layout of the article.
2. Then, the composition will enter the "sub-theory" part, and discuss the phenomena, problems or viewpoints mentioned in the general part from different levels and angles in several parts, put forward the sub-arguments of each part, and then find arguments to demonstrate and discuss. And there is generally an inherent logical relationship among sub-theories, which is gradual and deepening, obeying and serving the core issues of composition.
3. The conclusion is followed. From the content point of view, its purpose is to echo the beginning of the composition, and at the same time summarize the sub-arguments formed in the sub-discussion part to present the research conclusion; Formally, a summary can be a summary by listing a title or just one or two paragraphs. Then the composition is over.
This is to talk about the overall structure from the perspective of the overall picture of a composition. If it is an internal "sub-theory" component, in fact, each sub-theory may also present a variety of organizational structures.
Extended data:
The significance of the overall structure of the total score: the "total" at the beginning either puts forward the topic or the argument; The "total" at the end is generally to reiterate the point of view or deepen the argument. What is more complicated is the middle part: it can be the juxtaposition of arguments, arguments from different angles, contrast and juxtaposition, and progressive extension.
It should be noted that no matter what kind of "division" it is, it must be dominated by and serve the "general". The general structure of the total score should be properly marked, especially in the "score" part, and there should be relatively consistent sentence patterns or words that take care of each other to express the relationship between "scores", so that the article can be clear to readers at a glance.
7. How to write two words when the total score of rain composition in my hometown is 400 words?
Last night, the rain in my hometown nourished my dreamlike night.
The rustling spring rain landed silently, pushed away thousands of trees and flowers, and moistened Wan Li Woye.
In my dream, I stood alone in a long, lonely alley with an oil-paper umbrella, singing with light rain:
Sasha Vujacic, Sasha Vujacic ...
The drizzle is as light as silk, as light as fallen leaves, as thin as a needle tip, as long as a line, and floats up a little, falling aimlessly on the ground and roof, washing away the dust and the melancholy in my heart.
The rain in my hometown is the most beautiful fairy tale, comforting every child with the sound of warm drizzle;
Rain in my hometown is the most beautiful ballad, and its gentle musical language shakes everyone's heart.
The rain in my hometown is the warmest hand. He gently touches you to make you forget your unhappiness.
And I, in the rain, have a faint scenery, covered with continuous drizzle. Ah! I really want to fix this gentle rain in a photo frame or combine it with a manuscript, and then slip it into the mailbox quietly-send it to a distant place with a beating heart to solve my biting thoughts.
Rain in my hometown! He lingered gently, dancing lightly under the breeze, forming a harmonious movement, a very rhythmic and monotonous movement, and sometimes soothing. Sometimes it's good ...
As if in the alley of my hometown, I met a girl with lilacs, a girl with dreams and clouds. ...
Last night, the rain in my hometown moistened my dreamy night again! ……
Look! Groups of small ants are carrying food, which indicates that heavy rain is coming. Sure enough, the rain really came. White clouds were pushed aside by domineering clouds, and the sky was overcast at once. At this time, lightning, like a vigorous golden dragon, tore the dark clouds to pieces. Then, there was a faint thunder on the horizon. The thunder is getting louder and louder and closer. Finally, the thunder thundered and rained down.
"Wow, wow," the heavy rain fell like waves. It can be said that it was poured down by a pair of angry hands. Obliquely woven, as dense as curtains, forming countless diagonal rain walls. It whipped, sprayed and drowned everything ... everything became foggy and the scenery in the distance could not be seen. I can only see the golden barrier floating in the rice fields in the distance. When I walked into the field, I saw that the rice was flooded by rain and nodded frequently. Sometimes, they shake their heads from side to side, as if enjoying this cheerful song. Slowly, the rain gradually subsided. Listen to the "splash" sound on the eaves, the crunchy sound of rain hitting the banana, and the rustling of the wind and drizzle, as if enjoying a wonderful ditty.
The rain gradually stopped. After the rain cleared, the blue sky was washed, and the rainbow appeared on the horizon at this moment. Her soft body, like a gorgeous ribbon, is covered with a blue robe. The birds began to cry. The countryside is particularly quiet after the rain.
8. How to write Winter Snow?
I saw a vast expanse of whiteness between heaven and earth, and snowflakes fell from the sky, like a white tent was pulled up around, and the earth immediately turned white. I can't help but think of a poem, "Like spring breeze, night comes and blows open the petals of ten thousand pear trees". How beautiful!
Snow is as white as jade. Is it General Xiaotian sent by the Heavenly Palace or the jade leaf falling from the laurel tree in the Moon Palace? Snowflakes are like beautiful jade butterflies, dancing with ecstasy; Like a dandelion blown off; Like flying; Like a little white flower given by an angel; Scattered and gathered, fluttering leisurely, gently Ying Ying, is undoubtedly the masterpiece of the earth! I saw the snow in front of me as naughty as a butterfly, falling under the eaves for a while, falling on the branches for a while, and floating on the faces of pedestrians from time to time.
It was snowing heavily, and the snowflake danced in various postures in the air, flying and hovering, or falling straight and quickly and laying on the ground.
Snow makes people feel that there is only one word-cold. The earth is silvery white and clean, but snowflakes still fall from the sky like catkins, cotton and goose feathers.
When it first snows, the snowflakes are often neither big nor dense, such as catkins that float lightly with the wind. The wind is blowing harder and harder, the snow is getting denser and denser, and the snowflake is getting bigger and bigger, like a white net, and things in the distance can't be seen clearly.
Snow covered roofs and roads, crushed branches, covered the appearance of various objects, blocked roads and traffic, and snowflakes flying all over the sky made heaven and earth melt into a white whole.
The wind is getting stronger and stronger. Xiaoyun became a thick white cloud, slowly rising, expanding and gradually covering the sky. It is snowing lightly. Suddenly, a large piece of snow fell. The wind roared and the snowstorm came. In an instant, the dark sky merged with Xue Hai, and everything was out of sight.
It's snowing. What a beautiful snowflake. When early winter comes, snowflakes report the coming of winter in time. After class, the students ran to the playground, some cheering, some jumping, and some opening their hands to pick up the flying snowflakes. Look, look, the snow has covered the earth. There is snow everywhere in the sky and on the ground. White land, white house, white forest.
Snow, I love you, and I love your purity. You decorated the earth with silvery white, and how beautifully you dressed it.
In the evening, large tracts of snowflakes fall from the dark sky. At the moment, mountains, rivers, fields and villages are all covered with snow.
On the willow tree with all the leaves, it is covered with fluffy and shiny silver bars; Evergreen pines and cypresses in winter and summer are full of fluffy pines and heavy snowballs.
Snow fairy waved her sleeves heartily; In the fluttering performance, the sky, the earth, the river and the mountain are pure and clean, and there is no quagmire.
Wow, I saw tiny and dense snowflakes falling between heaven and earth, the bigger and denser, like countless fairies spreading flowers to the world, conveying the blessings of spring. After a long time, the snow slowly stopped. I saw a thick layer of snow on the railings of the platform and promenade. The branches and leaves of the flowers in the flowerpot are supported by clouds of snow. The snow on the clothes rack is like a winding path. The snow on the red tile roof is like rows of piano keys, and rows of red tiles are covered with a layer of snow, which is so neat and amazing.
On the roadside, the snow covered the sidewalk with a white quilt, which left a string of footprints. Snow coats the trees with white, which makes them more powerful.
When the snow suddenly begins, the winter sun seems to have narrowed the distance with people, which is particularly clear and dazzling. But the temperature of the sun seems to be cooled by snow and ice, so it can't be heated.
There are four seasons in a year, and each season has different scenery. I like the magnificent scenery when it snows in winter best. In winter, people seem to have come to an elegant and quiet realm of heavy snow and a crystal clear fairy tale world. The fragrance of pine and the ice fragrance of snow give people a cool and shining comfort. Everything is filtering, everything is sublimating, and even my heart is purifying and becoming pure and beautiful.
The snow at dusk, deeply cut, seems to be inextricably linked with emotions, and it is as turbulent as sea water, which can drown everything, and there is a sense of * * * like uncovering the head and tail. Snowflakes are colorful and crystal clear, like soldiers who go out to war, covered with silver armor, and like pieces of sailing ... The scenery in the snow is magnificent, and there is only one piece of silver between heaven and earth, as if the whole world is decorated with silver.
After the snow, the world is decorated with continuous white snow, with lush foliage and jade. This is a gratifying scene of heavy snow.
I love snow, I love snow scenes, and I love winter more. Winter is the ring of the soul. Although winter is very cold, it has incomparable warmth and hope.