Keywords: 300 words in grade three of Yeqiangwei Primary School
Words: 300 words composition
This article is suitable for: the third grade of primary school.
Composition source:
This composition is about 300 words in grade three of primary school. The title is Wild Rose. Everyone is welcome to contribute enthusiastically. Bai Yutang's sweet smile, elegant and generous for the first time, is a light source ... In the afternoon, black tea dessert flows into the flowers and rain drops on the wild rose. The elf woke up from sleep, and the petals floated into my hand to thank me for giving it. The water vapor of wild rose and love make a wish, and the drift bottle also flows into my heart, making me make a wish like an elf. Grow up. The mysterious wild rose garden teacher's comment: The article praises the beauty of wild rose in the form of poetry, which is very clever. The second half of the full text is written smoothly and well expressed. The words "May a drift bottle flow into my heart and let me make a wish like the elves-grow a mysterious wild rose in the garden" are very emotional. The first half of the article feels that the context is a little incoherent, the meaning between sentences turns suddenly, the reading is not smooth enough, and the rhythm of poetry is slightly lacking, which needs to be improved. (Xue Le China: Teacher Lin Yaoji) 2009-11-26 22: 54: 00