? Common argumentative structure modes: parallel, progressive, contrast (contrast), total score, comprehensive, etc.
There are two types of coordinate structure: argument coordinate and argument coordinate. The former can better show the depth of speculation.
juxtaposition of sub-arguments
(1) Meaning: After the central argument is established, the central argument is first decomposed into several parallel sub-arguments in reason or logic, and then how to demonstrate the sub-arguments is considered.
For example, say "think"
1. Cultivate the habit of thinking more (general argument)?
2. Thinking more can bring knowledge to life (sub-argument 1)
3. Thinking more can make inventions (sub-argument 2)
4. Thinking more can make you use your brain more and more (sub-argument 3)
(2) Basic requirements of sub-argument
1. The position of sub-argument should be at the beginning of each part.
2. Two or three arguments are appropriate.
3. The language of sub-arguments should be concise, generally controlled at 15 words.
4. The statement of sub-arguments should be as close as possible to the key words of the topic to ensure that each paragraph is deducted.
5. The structure of sub-argument sentences should be consistent to form parallel or quasi-parallel sentences.
6. Each argument is in the same position, and it is not repeated, not included or crossed.
examples?
? Live a wonderful life
? Xu Ziwei
Nietzsche said: "Even if life is a dream, we should dream it with relish and don't lose the emotion and fun of the dream;" Even if life is a tragedy, we must play this tragedy vividly and don't lose the grandeur and comfort of the tragedy. " Life, rough or smooth, is no longer important, and fate is in your own hands. Live, or struggle, or decadent, or optimistic, or negative. Living a wonderful life is what we should pursue.
To live a wonderful life, we need to have an optimistic attitude towards life. Someone said, "If you see a shadow in front of you, it means there is sunshine behind you." Tragedy or comedy, the key lies in yourself. When frustrated, Li Bai sang "since heaven gave the talent, let it be employed!, spin a thousand pieces of silver, all of them come back!." Indulge in drinking, not depressed. How many difficult days and nights have Chilean miners trapped underground lived with an optimistic attitude to come to the rescue. Although Li Guoxian, a girl from Guizhou, is facing the difficulties of drought, water shortage and poverty, she still actively said, "I have a dream" to impress you and me. An optimistic attitude towards life is precious. I believe that "sunshine is always after the storm" can regain confidence in adversity and make high progress.
to live a wonderful life, we need to make unremitting efforts. Maybe we can't change the tragic life, but we can grasp life; Deduct a wonderful and magnificent life movement. Ju Xiaolin, a migrant worker, devoted all his spare time to study and study, creating a model for migrant workers to rewrite construction textbooks. Zhang Keshan, the village party secretary, worked hard from overwork, and even if a lung was cut off, he still worked tirelessly to build the messy Bagou into a new countryside full of flowers, willows, grasslands and apartments. Mo Tianchi, a candidate with cerebral palsy, made unremitting efforts to achieve a success of 64 at the speed of only 1/3 of others' writing speed. Although Wei Ruihong, a porcelain doll, was born with brittle bones and lived by others, she never gave up, actively obtained a degree from a famous university and helped more people like her. Live a wonderful life, not empty dreams, but more sweat.
To live a wonderful life, we need to strengthen our dreams of life. The poet Liushahe said: "Ideal is a lamp, illuminating the way forward, and ideal is a road, accompanying you to the dawn." Without a firm dream of life, like a ship without a compass, it will lose its way. Now that we are on the edge of the entanglement of "life is not right, we can't afford to die", why not strengthen our beliefs? Thoreau pursued an elegant life and finally found a spiritual home in Walden Lake. The painter Rembrandt was not appreciated by the world before his death, and there was no Bole, but he still painted according to his own ideas. Nowadays, his paintings are appreciated by the public, so why not be wonderful? Xu Wenchang let his own uninhibited writing get the appreciation of later generations. Although he was not understood by the world before his death, he had a wonderful life after all.
live a wonderful life, even if it is a dream. We should also have this dream with relish. Life is limited, but people's ability and potential are infinite. As long as they are well excavated, they will be able to shine a different kind of light.
The first paragraph of structural analysis puts forward the central argument: to live a wonderful life is what we should pursue. Then, at the beginning of the second, third and fourth paragraphs, three sub-arguments are listed, and each paragraph uses examples. The last paragraph draws the conclusion.
material 2? Every year, many people explore the virgin forests in South America, and the guides are all indigenous people of local tribes. The aborigines are very alert and funny. They have a very strange habit of calling their names every time they walk. The aborigines say this is to prevent their souls from keeping up with their bodies, and they have to call themselves back.
A philosopher said that everyone is the architect of his own destiny, and only by constantly awakening himself can his life climb to the peak.
? Please write an article of no less than 8 words on the topic of "Awakening yourself", and choose your own style (except poetry)
? Wake yourself up
Xu Ziwei
The aborigines who live in the virgin forest areas of South America have a strange habit of being guides for people who go to explore. Every time they walk, they have to call their names to prevent their souls from keeping up with their bodies. They have to call themselves back.
Indigenous people should call back their own souls. Similarly, as a member of human beings, everyone is the architect of his own destiny. Only by constantly awakening ourselves can we make our life climb to the peak.
wake up yourself and your sleeping conscience. In the flashy world and materialistic society, people gradually lose their conscience and their kind nature. Instead, it is the worship of money, the strong desire for vanity and the contempt for humanity. From the "My dad is Li Gang" incident, Li Qiming left a malicious word and walked away after hitting others, and there was a tragedy where the "rich second generation" hit someone to mend the knife. May I ask, is people's conscience really buried in the dark abyss while the material is constantly enriched? Another example is the "Peng Yu case" in which the old people who were helped repeatedly beat the rake, and the infuriating consequences caused by more "false" incidents in real life. Should we wake ourselves up? Both "the second generation of officials" and "the second generation of rich" should awaken their conscience.
wake yourself up and wake up your dreams. Maybe at this time, you are still in the prime of life; Maybe at this time, your hair is gray. However, we should still insist on having our own dreams. ZhangZetian, a senior three student in the middle school attached to Nanjing Foreign Studies University, gave up her role in Love with Hawthorn Trees and became a "girl-seeking". She stuck to her studies and realized her dream of becoming a successful woman. It is rare for her to choose her studies among fame and studies, and this is the performance of her persistence in her dreams. Fu Xinhua, a graduate student of Wuhan University of Science and Technology, persisted for more than ten years to find the firefly in his heart, regardless of the severe winter and heat, and took pains to realize his dream. In order to save the country, Qian Weichang insisted on studying physics and made great contributions to strengthening national defense. Dreams are sails that guide forward, awaken dreams in the heart and realize the value of life.
? Wake yourself up, wake up the lost innocence. We are no longer "babbling", and there will never be "the sun comes out and the moon comes home?" Doubt, also won't shed tears because his little paper boat was knocked over by the river, also won't do stupid things because he couldn't bear to eat ice cream until it was eaten by the sun ... People often say that what children say is the most pure, not influenced by the secular. But with the growth of age, we no longer have a tender face, and we learn to be smooth, snobbish and vain, and it has become a thing of the past to blurt out the truth without heart. However, isn't this kind of pure heart needed in social communication? Awakening the lost innocence will make life more warm and trust.
wake yourself up, wake up your soul, maintain that precious conscience, dream and innocence in your heart, and go through a limited life in a colorful way. Wake yourself up, stick to yourself, and add a touch of brilliance to your life.
structural analysis the structure of this article is the same as that of the previous one, and readers can compare and analyze it by themselves.
Xu Ziwei, a senior high school graduate of Shangrao No.1 Middle School in 211, got full marks in the composition of the college entrance examination. These two selected essays are her usual classroom practice.