2. Hope comes from disappointment, and rise begins with worry. As a poet said, people who feel hungry must digest well, people who feel anxious must be efficient, and people who feel crisis must make rapid progress.
Don't wander under the tree, don't meditate in the rain, and don't cry in the dark. Look forward, don't look back, as long as you face it bravely and raise your head, you will find that the haze of scores is just a short rainy season. Looking ahead, there is still a bright day, and people will not feel confused.
4. The soft sunshine hangs obliquely on the branches and leaves of pine and cypress, which looks so quiet and solemn. On the green lawn and the white cement road, the footsteps are so light, but everyone's heart is so excited and thoughts are surging.
The ocean of life is not as blue as Xizi Lake. As time goes by, it is sometimes as calm as a mirror, sometimes the waves splash, and sometimes the waves soar into the sky ... People often become stronger after being tested by big winds and waves.
6. When you are immersed in warm air, birds and flowers, green mountains and green waters, fertile fields, you will be intoxicated; When you face the golden autumn season, you will be ecstatic. Have you ever thought that abundant spring scenery is heroic after severe cold baptism, but the beautiful scenery in autumn is the crystallization after melting in hot summer? ............... (He Tingting)
7. If you want to harvest fruits in the autumn, then in the early spring when the chill invades people, you should roll up your trouser legs and tirelessly open up wasteland, sow seeds and cultivate until the day of harvest.
8. Life is a winding path in the mountains, with bumps on the side and cliffs on the side. If you fall, cry if you want. What are you afraid of? Stop pretending! This is honesty, not weakness, because crying does not affect the road, but you can be careful. The mountains are full of flowers and the scenery is pleasant. If you are intoxicated, smile happily, don't pretend to be reserved! This is honesty, not pride, because smiling does not affect the road, but can increase self-confidence.
9. Love is the sunshine in winter. People who are hungry and cold feel the warmth of the world. Love is a clear spring in the desert, and people who are on the verge of despair have seen the hope of life; Love is a shower sprinkled on the long-term arid land, which makes the lonely and helpless people get spiritual comfort immediately.
10, days always pass through your fingertips like spun yarn, and slip away inadvertently. Those sadness and misuse, with the waves gently faded, leaving the joy and smile, will always remain in the depths of memory.
1 1, the melancholy mood vanished. 12, faded memory. 13, another peaceful home is smoking.
14, some memories are burned, some memories are buried in the bottom of my heart, and the age of innocence is like flowing water across the golden age.
15, I want to melt in the pink peach petals and erase the worries in your heart all day. 16, I completely read my parents' hearts.
17, maternal love is a masterpiece that I can't finish reading all my life; Motherly love is the sky that I can never fly out. ..... Zhang Weiwei
18, when the yellow autumn leaves are swaying in the wind and floating out of the school gate in late autumn. In the moonlight, my father's shadow is very long, and my skinny father is wrapped in a huge windbreaker, and my heart is sour.
19, the true feelings in the world are like a big net, which warms people's hearts all the time, just like maternal love, which is endless.
20. Time is a poem, a philosophical poem of the richest man. Time is a camel carrying the dreams of countless people.
2 1, the fate of the ship lies in drifting; The fate of sails lies in chasing the wind and waves; The fate of life lies in grasping, grasping and believing that life can make you young and innocent.
22. Past events are like songs. In the journey of life, despite ups and downs and full of regrets, the beauty of youth has not been lost. Believe in yourself, there is always hope. Let's remember that sentence: I won't cry if I miss the sun, otherwise I will miss the moon and stars.
If you fail in life, please don't write sad tears on your face. Failure is also a gain. The most important thing in life is to have full courage and the courage to start a business.
24, once thought that a helpless cry, the memo is all the vicissitudes of the world; A small setback and a memo are all failures in life. When I was fourteen, I told me ...
25. The moonlight is quiet. Raindrops pattered on the hut. In the dim light, mother sewed the homeless clothes tightly. Suddenly, a cold wind squeezed into the window gap of the hut. My mother seemed to have caught a cold and coughed a few times with deep tiredness. I woke up in my dream and stared at my old mother under the lamp. ...
26. At night, the spring breeze blows gently. I sat on the colorful steps with my chin cupped, and another unforgettable thing came to my mind.
All right, extra points.
2. What does the first paragraph of the landscape composition describe 1? Cut to the chase.
Cut to the chase is to put pen to paper and directly deduct the topic. For example, a passage at the beginning of Bing Xin's ode to cherry blossoms sets the tone of the whole article, which is to praise the cherry blossoms and the friendship between the Chinese and Japanese people. I began to use two "firsts" to write that people who go to Japan always "think of cherry blossoms" and "speak of cherry blossoms". Japanese friends always take cherry blossoms as an emotional bond when they receive guests' regrets or hold people's regrets or retain them. Cherry blossoms, like Mount Fuji, are a symbol of Japan and a bond of friendship between the Chinese and Japanese peoples, which is also the theme of this paper. The article is described around this theme from beginning to end.
To write a composition with this opening method, we must accurately grasp the theme of the article, that is to say, we must not only determine the performance center according to the materials, but also accurately summarize it. The advantage of this opening method is that when you are writing a composition, you can always consider describing around the center, so that the center of the article can easily stand out. It is also convenient for readers to grasp the essentials, grasp the basic content and deeply understand the theme of the article.
3. Write a few articles with the word 100+comment 1. The type of article is optional, as long as the autumn morning is beautiful for writing, with unpredictable white clouds, misty fog and energetic people ... which constitute a beautiful and moving autumn morning. Whenever you walk between the autumn fog in the morning, you have the ability to walk like a fairy. It makes people feel a little cold. The autumn fog is hazy, like a mysterious veil, which turns pedestrians on the road into vague shadows, puts a white gauze coat on the earth, puts a beautiful white garland on the river and casts a shadow on the trees. In my mind, fog is colorless and tasteless, but I think it is as fragrant and charming as the perfume worn by a little girl. There are white clouds in the sky. White clouds in the sky are unpredictable. In an instant, some are like running white horses, some are like white rabbits, and some are like barking puppies ... They are fleeting and unpredictable. Suddenly, your eyes are blurred. Wipe your blurred eyes and shine at the moment. A series of Xia Hong appeared in the east, and the surroundings of Xia Hong were bright. The sun is about to rise from the lawn, and the yellow leaves on the trees are rushing. The sun rises slowly, emitting dazzling light, making the earth golden and brilliant. After watching Xia Hong, look down at the people dancing gently in the wind! Grandparents greedily breathe the fresh air and enjoy the beauty of the morning. Some grandfathers are beating Tai Ji Chuan, with slow movements but steady steps. Not to be outdone, the grandmothers organized a dance with * * *, which was flexible and agile. It constantly reminds people that they seem to relive the good times when they were young. Children also do morning exercises. Young people also seize the good time in the morning to exercise in various ways. After observing people's beauty in the morning, don't forget to look at the beautiful lotus flowers in the distance. Among many flowers, the lotus is my favorite, and the lotus that "emerges from the mud but is not stained" is also a good example for me to learn now! Look at that beautiful lotus, it is in full bloom. Big leaves like umbrellas hold up pink petals and open them. Although some have not blossomed yet, they have blossomed a little like shy girls. This is an autumn morning, colorful and beautiful. I love the beautiful scenery in autumn, and I love autumn mornings even more. Comments: This article is generally well written, with clear thinking and rigorous structure. The authors are arranged in chronological order. Through careful observation, he wrote about the autumn morning, the weather changes in the autumn morning and some people's activities, which can be said to be full of scenery and things. The little author also used many rhetorical devices to express his true feelings and wrote his love for autumn morning well.
4. Describe the writer's composition with details. At noon that day, only my grandfather and I were at home. Grandma goes to the vegetable market to buy food, and mom and dad go to work. Now the house is as empty as a pumpkin without pumpkin seeds. Grandpa and I are going to clean the house together, because we feel bored. I found that there were almost no eggs in the kitchen refrigerator, so I ran downstairs to the supermarket to buy eggs.
Although there is everything in the supermarket, the price is too expensive. I took the bag and filled the eggs carefully, praying in my heart that there must be no mistakes. But it backfired. Just when I took the last egg, it was probably because I was relieved. As soon as I relaxed, my hand slipped and my egg hit another egg like a boulder. The first time, a big stone hit you on the head for no reason. Still have to be wronged to death? Eggs wronged, I also wronged, feel unlucky. I have to pay for it.
So, I ran over and asked the assistant aunt how much an egg was. She said, "An egg costs about 50 cents." I'm relieved. Fortunately, I paid the original price of the egg, and I still have fifty cents left. It's a blessing in disguise. If an egg is one yuan, then I will be twice as sad. I told my aunt who paid the bill, and she didn't blame me, just asked me to pay 50 cents. When I got home, grandpa asked me why I came back so late. I told him, and he said, "You are so honest. If you were someone else, you would even say that a thief is a thief. " I'm thinking: if I hadn't lost that fifty cents, I might still be bitter and ashamed.
Now I think: Why? It is worthwhile to spend fifty cents to get an "innocent body" and a "free body". Why are you so stingy? Wouldn't it be more comfortable to live honestly and securely? At least I think so. This incident made me understand a lot of truth, which I will never forget.
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Look! Standing in front of you is a "handsome boy" with big eyes and a little boy's unique intelligence. His face is black, and grandma once said that he fell to the ground and couldn't find it. He pouted and rolled his eyes and said, "Black is a healthy color!" "Grandma was speechless. Like all little boys, he is very playful. Just give him something, even a piece of paper, and he can keep playing.
Who is he? Let me tell you: he is my 6-year-old brother.
My brother has one of the biggest characteristics-his mouth is particularly greedy. This summer, the weather was hot, and grandma bought a lot of ice cream at one time. This is a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity for my brother. I saw him eating in his right hand and holding it in his left. After a while, six ice creams all entered his stomach, but his tongue kept licking his lips, as if he were tasting the ice cream. He skipped home again, opened the refrigerator and prepared to buy ice cream. This time, I was stopped by my grandmother who was cooking:
"Well, you've already eaten six, and you still have to eat." Grandma advised with concern, "if you eat your stomach again, you will eat it badly."
"Nothing, my stomach is cold!" The younger brother patted his "general's belly" as he spoke.
"No, this can't be eaten."
"Good grandma, let me eat." "no!"
Seeing grandma's "iron will", my brother sat helplessly on the sofa, his chin propped up in his left hand, frowning and thinking hard about something. After a while, he jumped up like "discovering the new continent" and came to his grandmother: "Grandma, I forgot to tell you. While you were cooking outside, grandpa called and said he would come back from Shenyang at ten o'clock and asked you to pick him up. Look, it's ten o'clock. Go! "
After listening to what my brother said, grandma suddenly remembered that when grandpa left the day before yesterday, he said he would come back today. So she took off her apron and walked to the station. Seeing the "conspiracy" succeed, my brother grinned and took two ice creams out to play.
This is not enough, my brother's "drama" is still behind!
This year 1 October1day is grandma's 60th birthday. There are three layers of cakes on the dining table, which exude attractive fragrance from time to time, which has attracted my brother's mouth watering. But no one was on the table. As a junior, my brother dare not act rashly. He looked at the cake and then at his grandmother. He had a new idea. He approached his grandmother and said, "Grandma, do you think this cake is delicious?"
"I think it must be delicious." Grandma answered with a smile.
"Do you want to eat?" The younger brother asked again.
"think!" Grandma said, touching her brother's head.
"That's good!" My brother dug a big piece of cream with his hand. His behavior happened to be discovered by my aunt. She scolded me and said, "You are so rude ..." Before my aunt finished, my brother said loudly with big watery eyes:
"It's not that I want to eat, it's that grandma wants to eat!" As she spoke, she stuffed cream into grandma's mouth. Grandma only licked a little and said, "You can eat the rest." This is exactly what my brother wants. He quickly licked the cream and stared at the cake on the table. Everyone said, "You, eat the bowl and watch the pot." Hearing this, my brother blushed and smiled.
My brother is very greedy, so we gave him a "good name"-"Little greedy cat".
5. About writing 1. Observe carefully and pursue the truth. What is observation? The so-called observation is to see with your eyes, "observe" from a distance, pay attention to everything, always pay attention to it, and form a habit.
Mo Bosang, a French writer who is known as the king of short stories in the world, studied under Flaubert, a famous writer at that time. One day, he told Flaubert the story of sitting in his room and preparing to write a novel. Flaubert said, "I advise you not to be busy writing these virtual things." You ride a bike outside every day and record everything you see on the road accurately and carefully. "
So Mo Bosang realized that Flaubert had taught him the basic skills of observing, knowing and practicing with his eyes. From then on, he spent a year or so, went out to observe every day, and finally wrote the novel Dim Sum, becoming a world-famous novelist.
Therefore, learning to observe is the first factor to improve the writing level. In my years of teaching, I often hear some students say, "I'm afraid of writing. I always have a headache when I pick up a pen, and I can't learn to write. "
Some simply said: "I don't know what to write, where to start." Although I have also handed in some compositions, if you look closely, you will find that there are too many, and even some content is added, which is empty and divorced from reality.
Why is it difficult to write a composition? Generally speaking, I lack observation and realism, so I can't write. How to change this phenomenon? I think we should learn to observe first.
When I was teaching the text "One Side" written by Alei, the third volume of junior middle school Chinese, I pointed out that Alei wrote his "thinness" five times when describing Lu Xun's appearance. Three of them write the appearance features clearly and carefully from far to near.
Why is the author's description of Lu Xun so vivid and typical? Mainly because the author is good at careful observation and has a unique feeling in his heart. Therefore, I attach great importance to observation and content when guiding students' writing training.
Therefore, every week, I take my students out of the classroom and write on the spot. Sometimes I observe campus plants, bamboos, trees and flowers on campus. Sometimes I travel in the wild on weekends, write in the wild and enjoy the beautiful natural scenery. After such training, it not only stimulated students' interest in writing, accumulated rich themes, wrote real content, but also cultivated moral sentiments, so that students enjoyed beauty.
Second, accumulate materials and apply what you have learned in teaching. I met many students who rarely read extracurricular books, especially books on Chinese extracurricular reading. Some even don't have an extracurricular reading except textbooks. They seldom read books and newspapers, and their writing knowledge is poor, and even their sentences are not fluent. When writing, they want to write sentence by sentence and feel that they have nothing to say and write. Or just started, perfunctory words, hastily ended.
The content is vague and unintelligible, so I am afraid to write. In order to change the fear of writing, so as to be eloquent and articulate, we should read more books and accumulate more writing materials at ordinary times.
As Du Fu said: "Reading is like breaking ten thousand volumes, and writing is like being a god." "If you read a hundred books, you will understand what you mean."
Read more books, make the past serve the present, write articles, and be confident and handy. However, experience tells us that reading more books is not enough. "Han Yu, one of the eight masters in Tang and Song Dynasties, once said:" Learning means ploughing and reading, and learning means gaining ".
This means that reading is the forerunner of writing. Without the "cultivation" of reading, there will be no "harvest" of writing. Therefore, on the basis of emphasizing students' reading, they should be familiar with the books they read and think carefully.
Accumulate material, make it the "source of living water" of your own writing, and learn to use it, so that the content of the composition will be born from the pen, like a fountain, full of content. There are many model essays in the texts we have learned, which are real materials written by the author through careful observation of people or animals.
For example, the description of Lu Xun in "One Side", the flying posture of cranes, and the fighting scene of cranes and eagles in "The Flying of Cranes" can all become useful things as long as they are carefully read and accumulated. In addition, in addition to accumulating materials from books, we can also accumulate them from daily life, for example, the emergence of new things, various useful propaganda, natural phenomena, social news, international current affairs and so on. These are excellent materials. As long as you pay attention to people and things in this area, you will naturally have rich materials, so that when you write, you can write wonderfully, skillfully and freely.
Third, advocate imitation and cultivate interest. Imitation is a form of reference, but imitation is not a simple copy, but a creative reference. Imitation is characterized by strong pertinence and regularity, which not only reduces the difficulty of writing, but also receives obvious results.
For students with low writing level, we should actively advocate imitating and drawing lessons from model essays, gradually cultivate their interest in writing, make them step by step on the road of writing, and gradually improve their writing ability. Even the mechanical imitation at the beginning should be praised and affirmed to arouse their interest and desire in writing.
Many writers in history have imitated the writing style of the ancients and become a generation of demeanor. For example, Wang Bo's famous phrase "The sunset and the solitary heron Qi Fei, the autumn water and the sky are the same color" is detached from Yu Xin's "The fallen flower and the cheese cover Qi Fei, and the field willow and the spring flag are the same color". Another example is Zuo Qiuming's Zuo Zhuan and Sima Qian's Historical Records. Their writing style was imitated by later essayists, novelists and playwrights.
Many articles in the textbook are good model essays. After learning the text, students can imitate writing and apply what they have learned. For example, I taught Zheng Zhenduo's class "Cats" and asked students to imitate writing with another animal as the topic. Many students succeeded in imitating writing and turned text writing into their own ability.
Although imitation is the first step to improve writing ability, it should not be imitated blindly. Once the composition starts, you can imitate it. But after getting started, we must break away from imitation, take the road of innovation, pursue our own writing style and have our own characteristics. Fourth, talk more and write more. In our daily life, we will encounter many examples. Some students are very talkative and eloquent, but they rack their brains when writing a composition and can't write much. What is the reason? Because there are many opportunities to "speak" in daily life, it is as easy as blowing off dust, and there are few opportunities to "write".
How to improve the writing level by talking and not writing? Therefore, in writing training, I focus on guiding students to speak and practice.