Write down two or three stories that happened between you, focusing on the deep friendship between you or the mutual help and progress between classmates.
2. It can be an object. Like your favorite book, a pair of running shoes.
You can write down the time you spent with it. If you write a book, you can write it to give you courage when you are in trouble and enlighten you when you are confused. Running shoes can write down the unforgettable sports days that accompany you. They accompany you through every inch of land under your feet and through every sweaty morning.
You can write something abstract. Such as childhood, youth, friendship.
For example, friendship, you can write that you have encountered many difficulties along the way. It is friendship, never giving up, always giving you courage, but also friendship, sharing joys and sorrows with you.
Writing instruction
Time is a long river, what passes is time, and what remains is memory. Open the dusty past, there will always be some people, things and things that you will never forget. They are the objects to be narrated and described in Let's Go Together.
A few years ago, Nantong senior high school entrance examination composition questions all appeared in the form of "prompt+topic", probably mainly to reduce the difficulty of candidates. This year, the composition questions of Nantong senior high school entrance examination changed the previous propositional way and omitted the hints. The emergence of this new propositional form may be closely related to the propositional form of Jiangsu college entrance examination composition in recent two years, and the change of this propositional form cannot but attract our attention.
How should such a composition question be examined?
(1) The three keywords "we", "together" and "crossing" in the title must be tightly buckled. "We" means that the "I" in this exam composition is accompanied, definitely not a single "I", and at least two or more people should be written; "Together" means that "we" are always together in the described events; "Walking" means describing the past, not what happened now, at least what happened before writing this article. This "walk" also contains the meaning that it is not easy to walk, which is worth remembering and cherishing.
(2) Choose good materials. Undoubtedly, "Let's Go Together" has a lot of materials to use, and you can walk with a specific person: walking with the teacher can feel the care and teaching of the teacher; Walking with your classmates, you can feel their sincere and pure friendship; Walking with the elders, you can feel the love of grandparents and their unforgettable nostalgia and feelings; Walking with your parents, you can often feel the warmth of home, smell the smell of home and hear the laughter of your family. Of course, you can also walk with books and enrich your spiritual world in the process of interacting with books. In addition, you can also use anthropomorphic and imaginative methods to write a beautiful day with animals and plants, so that this common experience can become a beautiful memory.
In a word, "We Walk Together" came through the process of cooperating with people or things, helping, caring, working hard, sharing weal and woe, overcoming difficulties and even experiencing setbacks. In these days and nights, I realized the power of affection and friendship, and the value of this power.
(3) maintain a good style of work. Although the writing of the composition sheet in this examination room requires "no style is limited except poetry", narrative should be chosen first when choosing the style, because "walking" is a process and a period of time, which requires us to write clearly and in detail the ups and downs in this process, and to be point-to-point and in detail when writing this process.
In a word, the composition topic "We Walk Together" provides us with a lot of writing materials and many memorable days.
We walked together.
Sunset, gathering the last ray of light-
In the twilight, the bright luster of the countryside was erased, leaving only a deep and disappointed silhouette. Yan Zi, who came back late, drew some whispering dotted lines in the dark like an elf.
I picked up the dusty windmill and ran away. ...
When I was a child, my parents worked outside, and my grandmother became the only relative I could rely on. Grandma made a four-leaf windmill with a short stick, which knitted my wonderful childhood. ...
Every sunset and dusk, I always appear on that country road with my grandmother. The breeze blew, the windmill turned slowly, and the creaking sound of the windmill floated to the horizon, echoing in my childhood dreams.
One day, grandma and I appeared on that path again. However, there is no wind at this time, and the windmill is actually motionless. Grandma saw it and smiled. I muttered to myself, "What if there is no wind and the windmill can't turn?"
"Son, there is no wind, go and find the wind."
"But where is the wind?" I asked doubtfully.
"You can find it by running!" Grandma said mysteriously.
So, I started running slowly and the windmill creaked. I shouted happily: "I found the wind, she is here, right here!" " "
Looking back, the sky turned into a sea of clouds, and grandma's smile rippled into brilliant clouds.
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Childhood is so beautiful and short. Whenever I recall the days I passed with my grandmother, the wind car in my memory will squeak and play the most beautiful songs of my childhood. ...
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Now, when I come to this path again at dusk, I am alone. The scenery of the old year is still brilliant, but my heart is empty. ...
A breeze is blowing, and the windmill in my hand is still playing an eternal melody. It suddenly dawned on me that I was standing at another starting point of my life, and the wind source of my life was still waiting for me to pursue.
So, I wrote at the beginning-let grandma's love walk with me. ...
We walked together.
The class teacher began to adjust seats again. I packed my bag and prepared to go to the next cold position. After the noise of the table moving and the dust flying, I sat down and said hello to my new deskmate, so I buried myself in writing.
Someone told me afterwards that this new deskmate is not good. So, I thickened my armor and sat in my new seat a little uneasily. The new deskmate is really difficult. She naturally crossed the "38th parallel" with her elbow in class, and occasionally asked me to wait on her with a ruler, pencil and eraser when doing her homework. He speaks occasionally in the morning reading class, and he only has a short sentence or two. Looking at the countdown card, I suddenly want to escape, escape from the cold.
I have been at the same table for a long time, and I am familiar with each other's temperament. In fact, my deskmate is a person who likes to talk. Although I have bad feelings towards him, I have to be on my guard, but he broadcasts "Morning News" and "Music and Painting Fashion" in my ear every day, and sometimes gives me some sports information, which is endless. I was bored at first, and gradually began to admire the quick-talking language ability. I also learned to laugh from him. This heartfelt smile, which I have never seen before, makes me feel so relaxed and happy!
Life can be so nourishing! The heart that was originally filled with cold homework problems gradually began to be filled with the happiness of walking with him. I vowed to get along well with my deskmate and live through our junior high school life. ...
The ice and snow melted, and a clear spring gurgled in my heart.
I began to recite with my deskmate in the morning reading class; During the break, I discussed with me the problems I met last night. Handout handed down, deskmate busy, I helped him get the handout, folded it and handed it to him; I gave him a puzzled look when I was doing my homework. He understood and handed me a note full of explanations. When bored, talk about the ideal of life, or he holds a personal concert ... The original boring life is filled with poetry by our little laughter.
Although my deskmate will still borrow stationery from me from time to time and ask me all kinds of tricky questions, I am no longer bored and always respond cheerfully.
The countdown board on the blackboard always reminds us that such time is getting less and less. So we cherish it more, be more sincere and work harder.
Thanks to my deskmate, he made me realize that our youth can't be proved only by scores, but should be full of the happiness we walked together.
In the future, I will use all the happiness we have passed together to melt all the unhappiness, and let this happiness take root in my heart forever, sprout, blossom and never give up!