I'm so dizzy that I can't modify it. Didn't you say that you appreciate dnadann - the third-level scholar's statement?> He talks about people's moods. Quoting your words, "But my "pale frosty day," "The peach blossoms bloom in April," the artistic conception is not good. The slight frost in winter is not the same as the warm floral fragrance in spring? ", aren't you contradicting yourself? You are talking about the scenery, so you are writing about the scenery, but you have to understand what "sideburns" is talking about. Look it up in the dictionary to find out what frosty sideburns mean. After that, it means the sun is shining brightly, so change "槧" to "ying" Maybe there is a better one>, it is a big mistake to describe the scene, you made another mistake, you changed the temples to Han,
in pK, No. 1 has nothing to do anyway and is bored, so I just want to have a good chat with you. Are you not using the poems that have been passed down through the ages? The sun is close to the mountains, the Yellow River flows into the sea, and I want to see thousands of miles away. , to the next level. Do you want to compare? , let me compare it with you, quoting the words of Shixian jsbywf1, "This song is an eternal masterpiece. When you read these two lines of poetry, you will see a magnificent picture in front of you. The next two lines are the essence of inspiration. The so-called evaluation of Wang Wei "There are paintings in poems, and there are poems in paintings." It's nothing more than that." The poems in the poem are very appropriate, especially the second sentence of the Yellow River flowing into the sea, which can describe both the scene and the poet's mood, laying the foundation for the next two sentences. It’s a foreshadowing, how to say it? <Looking at it with a clear eye, I think everyone<poets too>had that kind of mood and excitement when they saw the turbulent current of the Yellow River. Foreshadowing, his poems are consistent from beginning to end, with profound artistic conception, but your sentences are inconsistent with your so-called "poetry", and your understanding of poetry is also very poor. I agree that poetry is not a word game, but the perfection of artistic conception and soul. Combining,
Furthermore, among all your sentences, I only appreciate, "Yi Hai Lin Feng". These four words may be related to my personality. You have to understand what the meaning of "Yi" is: "Yi Hai Lin Feng" It refers to the meaning of leisure, comfort and quietness, etc. Everyone understands the meaning of the sea, the meaning of approaching, and the wind. Everyone understands the meaning of the whole sentence, which means yearning for the tranquility of the sea, because it makes people feel relaxed and comfortable. The feeling when you are close to the wind in the sea, remember, the sea is facing the wind, not the jade tree facing the wind. It has a very free, elegant and refined feeling. The heart is as deep as the valley.
If you insist on saying that there is a meaning, then we can reluctantly calculate it, because most people who yearn for the sea have a chic, elegant, and refined character.
Actually, it is not directed at you, but I have a question. Didn't you say "Frost on the temples on a pale day" describes a person who braves the severe cold and faces the pale sun alone in the winter, with his temples covered with frost. But I don't understand that frost can only occur at night and not during the day. , how to face the sun if it is night? Besides, the poem is intended to make readers feel a sense of excitement. How many people in the world would go out on a cold winter night and let the frost hit their heads? I don’t understand, it’s just a discussion, question