Modern wenyiduo
This is a backwater of despair,
The breeze doesn't move at all.
Why don't you throw more rubbish,
Throw out your leftovers.
Maybe copper will turn green into jade,
A few petals of peach blossoms are embroidered on the tin can;
Let greasy weave a layer of Luo Qi,
Mold steamed some clouds for him.
Let the stagnant water ferment into a ditch of green wine,
Filled with pearly foam;
Little beads' laughter turned into big beads,
I was bitten by a flower mosquito who stole wine again.
A desperate backwater ditch,
And a little image.
If frogs can't stand loneliness,
Dead water again. It is singing.
This is a backwater of despair,
This is definitely not the beauty,
Why don't we leave it to ugliness to cultivate,
Look at the world he created.
Dead Water is a poem by Wen Yiduo, a modern poet. Through the multi-angle and multi-level composition of "semi-feudal and semi-colonial old China", the corrupt old society was exposed and satirized, and resentment and deep patriotism against the ruling environment at that time were expressed. Every verse of this poem rhymes, and it reads with a distinct rhythm and rhymes sonorously; The appearance is square and tidy, forming the beauty of balance and symmetry; Pay attention to the color sense of language and form a hint picture with different beauty and ugliness.
"Dead Water" pays attention to rhetoric, and strives to use rich and delicate words without repetition. For example, the verbs used in the following phrases are by no means the same: "Green becomes emerald", "Rust produces several petals of peach blossom", "Weave a layer of Luo Qi", "Steam out a few clouds", "Ferment into a ditch of green wine" and so on. Writing here, it concludes that the stagnant water is "somewhat vivid". But the "unusual" here is only a faint color. Then he showed the "sound" of stagnant water. This voice is also very unique, with "laughter"-"Little beads laugh into big beads"; There is also "singing"-"If frogs can't stand loneliness, they will still stop singing." What a terrible silence.
"Dead Water" is also a masterpiece of metrical new poetry, and its style is extremely rigorous. From the appearance, there are nine words in each sentence and four sentences in each section, which are arranged very neatly. From the internal rhythm, each sentence is composed of four sentences. Due to the high harmony of internal rhythm, coupled with the strict double-line rhyme and the acoustic effect of one rhyme per verse, the rhythm of the whole poem is very beautiful.