1, repeat, recite fluently, and perceive the scenery description method of this word.
2. Understand Liu Yong's position in the history of Ci.
3. Master the basic knowledge of some words.
Second, the teaching focus:
1, Liu Yong's pioneering significance to the long tune of slow words.
2. The scenery description method of this word.
Three teaching difficulties:
1, the style reflected by the use of quantifiers.
2. Sketch and description skills in scenery description.
Four teaching methods:
Read aloud, discuss and push.
Five bibliographies:
1, The History of China Literature (III), edited by You Guoen, People's Literature Publishing House.
2. Lecture by famous poets in Tang and Song Dynasties, Wang Zhaopeng, Guangxi University Press.
3. China Ancient Poetry Appreciation Series: Liu Yong, edited by Zhao, Wuzhou Communication Press.
Six class hours arrangement:
Two class hours
Seven teaching processes:
The first link: oral training.
(1) Introduction:
Yan Shu, a representative poet in the early Northern Song Dynasty, wrote a lot of graceful, graceful, lyrical and uplifting poems. /kloc-after entering the DPRK at the age of 0/4, he has held important positions, from official to prime minister of Renzong Dynasty. He loved literature all his life and liked to recommend talents. Zhang Shunmin, a poet in the Northern Song Dynasty, wrote a note called Painting Spectrum. The first volume of the book tells that when Liu Yong first went to Bianjing to prepare for the imperial examination, he wandered around Huajie Liuxiang and failed to become famous. There is a saying in his field. Reluctant to be superficial, change to shallow singing? We offended Emperor Injong, and the official department refused to let him be promoted for a long time. Liu Yong went to see Yan Shu, a prime minister and poet in the Tang Dynasty, hoping to help him. But Yan Shu satirized him? Do you want to sit with Iraq? Love words like that, and then what? An article that deeply condemns flashiness? Like Emperor Injong, he looked down on his vulgar and flashy ci style and naturally refused to help him. However, this Yan Shu is a very honest person. He can write at the age of seven and is called a child prodigy. When he took the imperial examination at the age of fourteen, Song Zhenzong summoned him and asked him to attend an interview with Jinshi in the imperial court. After reading the questions in the exam, Yan Shu played to the emperor:? I wrote this article ten days ago, and the draft is still there. Please give me another name. ? The emperor praised his honesty and gave him a scholarship in public. It was his honesty that won the trust of the emperor and finally helped him get promoted in the officialdom. My story is over. I'll leave the time for the students who speak.
(2) Oral expression:
Topic: Students can combine a book they have read, a famous saying, a character story in a film and television, and a person or thing that happened between classmates to make a keynote speech on the topic of perseverance.
Training: Please invite five or six students to take the stage and give a five-minute keynote speech.
Comments: According to the students' speeches, comment with the students on whether the theme is clear, whether the language is fluent, whether the speech is infectious, and the attitude of the speech. And score on the spot, as usual.
The second link: text teaching
First, the basic common sense of words:
(1) Origin of Ci: Ci originated in the Tang Dynasty, prevailed in the Song Dynasty, and was widely circulated in the Tang Dynasty, first in the Song Dynasty? Pop songs? . Words are lyrics, which refer to a poetic style that can be sung in harmony with music, that is, words are a kind of poetry.
Words have many nicknames, such as? Long and short sentences? Yu Shi? Qu Zici? Qu ci? Lyrics? Wait a minute.
(2) About epigraph and title: The title of a word is the concentrated expression of the content of the word, which summarizes the main content of the word; A epigraph is the name of a word tone.
(3) the classification of words
According to the number of words, it can be divided into Xiao Ling (within 58 words) and Zhong Diao (59? 90 words), long tune (above 9 1 word)
According to the number of paragraphs, it can be divided into single tone, double tone, three tone, four tone and so on. Hey? Or? Movies? )
According to the genre style of writers, it can be divided into wild school and graceful school (the main writers of wild school are Su Shi and Xin Qiji; The main writers of graceful and restrained school are Liu Yong, Qin Guan, Li Qingzhao, Zhou Bangyan and Jiang Kui.
Second, the author's life and creation:
Liu Yong (987? 1055), formerly known as trilateral, the word Jingzhuang, later renamed Yong, the word Qiqing. Ranked seventh, man? Liu Qi? Originally from Hedong (now Yongji, Shanxi), he moved to Chong 'an (now Fujian). Grandfather Liu Chong, in the name of Confucianism, and his father Liu Yi, a native of Southern Tang Dynasty, served as assistant minister of the Ministry of Industry after entering the Song Dynasty, and served as supervisor of the empire. When I was young, I stayed in Bianjing and had a hearty meal in the Qin Lou Chu Guan. Later, it went west to Chengdu and Jingzhao, and crossed Jinghu and wuyue. In the first year of Jing You (1034), he became a scholar, and successively served as Zhou Mu Yong ying promotion officer, Yuhang Ling, Dinghai Xiaofeng saltworks supervisor, Sizhou judge, Dr. Tai Chang, and Yuan Wailang, the last official, and became famous all over the world. Liu Putian? . He lived in exile in his later years and died in Runzhou (now Zhenjiang, Jiangsu). As a bohemian, he was down and out all his life. There is no biography in the history of Song Dynasty, but deeds are scattered in notes and local chronicles. Good at writing poems. Are not handed down from generation to generation, only moxibustion population with music? . As the first poet in the Northern Song Dynasty, he not only developed the theme of ci, but also created a large number of slow ci, developed narrative skills, and promoted the popularization and colloquialism of ci, which had a great influence in the history of ci. Liu Yong was the most popular poet in Song Dynasty. Really? Where there is well water to drink, where can you sing Liu Ci? This conclusion had an important influence on later poets, Jin and Yuan operas and novels of Ming and Qing Dynasties.
Liu Yong's collection of words, Le Ji, has spread all over the world, with more than 200 words. These words can be roughly divided into three categories:
A class of words describing the content of detention. Before Liu Yong, it was not that there were no words about detention, but Liu Yong was the first lyricist to write a lot about detention. He had been wandering for a long time before he became an official; I have been to many places since I became an official. According to local chronicles and his poems, he has been to Bianjing, Hangzhou, Luoyang and Chang 'an. His ci often borrows what he saw and heard when he boarded the water, vividly expressing the lament of a lonely and frustrated scholar. For example, compared with the poetic style of writing boudoir in the Five Dynasties, "Klang Ganzhou" can be described as a work expressing talent, frustration and pain, transplanting the function of traditional poetry into the field of words, and such words also contain a broader social life, breaking the narrow expression space of five pronouns.
One is about the prosperity of the city and the lifestyle of the citizens. During the reign of Song Renzong, it was an era of peace and prosperity, and the urban economy was unprecedentedly prosperous. Bianjing, Hangzhou and Suzhou are all very prosperous metropolises. Liu Yong is quite good? Civic awareness? He loves this prosperous and rich city life, and there are many words describing the prosperity of the city in the music collection. "Looking at the Tide of the Sea" (Victory in the Southeast) is about Hangzhou. This is the first long and slow poem written by a scholar, which vividly depicts the beauty and prosperity of Qiantang River.
A description of love between men and women. Liu Yong wrote many words reflecting the life of Qin Lou Chu Guan and the love between men and women. Among them, there are indulgent joys, gaudy teasing, parting sadness and sincere thoughts. This kind of works are mixed, which has a great negative impact on his reputation. Although most of Liu Yong's ci works are despised by the upper circles of the literary world, among them, Wu Fengqi (leaning against a tall building) and Yulinling (chilling) are highly praised by them.
Liu Yong sang in the fireworks alley all his life, and most of his words were born in songs and dances and embroidered quilts. At that time, the voice of geisha was: I don't want to be called by the king, I want to be called by Liu Qi. I don't want thousands of gold, I want to get Liu Qixin; I don't want to see the gods, I want to know the seven sides of the willow tree. ? Liu Yong was poor in his later years and died penniless. It was his geisha sisters who raised money for the funeral in the camp. After death, there were no relatives to pay homage. Every year in Tomb-Sweeping Day, geisha meet to visit graves, and they are used to each other. What is this called? Hanging willow seven? Or? Weeping willows? .
Three. Background introduction:
There is a very interesting phenomenon in Song Ci: most famous works often have skills, including stories created and spread. In the Song Dynasty, Luo Dajing recorded in He Lin Yu Lu that the word "Wang Haichao" spread to the Golden List. After listening, Zhu Jin Yan Hongliang was glad to have a scene. Sanqiu devil, Shili Lotus? ,? Set out across the river with a whip? This inspired his determination to occupy the Southern Song Dynasty. The legend that a word actually triggered a war may not be very reliable, but at least it shows the wide spread and great influence of the word.
What I just said is the story spread by this word. In fact, this word also contains Liu Yong's personal purpose in his creation. The creative ability of this word is that Liu Yong is frustrated and wandering around looking for ways to be promoted, hoping that someone can promote him. After Liu Yong arrived in Hangzhou, his old friend Sun He was working as the governor of Hangzhou, but Sun He's access control was very strict. Liu Yong is a civilian and can't see Sun He. Liu Yong had no choice but to write this poem, invited a famous local singer and told her that if Sun He asked her to sing at a banquet, she would sing this song "Watching the Tide of the Sea" and nothing else. Later, the singer sang the first word repeatedly at Sun He's party. Sun He asked the author of the first poem, and the singer said that it was written by your old friend Liu Sanbian, before Liu Yong changed his name. Sun He invited Liu Yong to eat a meal and sent him away. I haven't promoted him much since. Judging from this story, this word is an abusive word, with the purpose of getting the other person to recommend himself.
Fourth, the overall perception:
(1) Through teachers' reading, students' reading together and free reading, words are perceived as a whole.
(2) Combine the notes of the text with the teacher's explanation to understand the general idea of the words.
(3) Students discuss, teachers stop and appreciate:
1, Teacher: What did the bird write?
Clarity: Describe the natural scenery and prosperity of Hangzhou.
? Southeast shape wins, Sanwu city, Qiantang is prosperous since ancient times? ,? Southeast will win? , written from the geographical and natural conditions. Hangzhou is located in the southeast, with an important geographical position and beautiful scenery, so: Sheng Xing? . ? Three or five cities? , is written from the social conditions. It is an important city in Sanwu area, where people gather and goods gather, so it is said: metropolis? . ? Qiantang has been prosperous since ancient times? This sentence is a summary of the first two sentences, because Hangzhou has these special conditions, so? Prosperous since ancient times? . Right down there? Sheng Xing? 、? Metropolis? And then what? Prosperous since ancient times? Spread the story.
? Willow bridges, wind curtains and green curtains, 100,000 different? Right? Three or five cities? Description of the expansion. ? Clouds and trees surround the bank and sand. The raging waves roll with frost and snow, and the natural risks are endless? Right? Southeast will win? Description of the expansion. Here, I chose Qiantang River and Jiangchao to write. ? The city is full of jewels, and every household in Luo Qi is competing for beauty? Right? Qiantang has been prosperous since ancient times? Description of the expansion. It describes two aspects: first, the business and trade situation is a good example. The market is full of precious commodities such as jewelry, and the treasures on the market represent the prosperity and prosperity of business; Second, the clothing situation, household Luo Qi? Every household is covered with silks and satins. ? Fighting for luxury? It also summarizes all kinds of prosperous scenes in Hangzhou. Of course, the prosperity of Hangzhou is not limited to these two aspects, both of which are commonly used by women as decorative items, implying the prosperity of the city.
2. Teacher: What is missing?
Qing: Write the peaceful and quiet life scenes of Hangzhou people.
? Thick lakes overlap and are clear. And Sanqiu cassia seed and Shili lotus? Write about the beautiful scenery of West Lake in Hangzhou. Is this a further description? Southeast will win? At the same time, it is the background of Hangzhou people's amusement. ? Sink the lake? , write the lake itself, the West Lake has an inner lake and an outer lake; ? Overlap? , write lakeshore, peaks and valleys. The West Lake is green and beautiful, so? Ting Anne? . ? Sanqiu? Care? Overlap? Two words, write osmanthus in the mountains. ? Shili Lotus? Care? Sink the lake? Write about the lotus in the water. Red flowers and green leaves, fragrant lotus seeds, are also the scenery that best reflects the characteristics of the West Lake. Yang Wanli of the Southern Song Dynasty said:? It is the scenery of the West Lake in June, which is really different from other seasons. The next day, the lotus leaves are infinitely blue and the lotus flowers are of different colors. (See Lin Zifang at Jingci Temple at dawn)? Sanqiu? From the time point of view; ? Ten miles? From the perspective of space. Flowers bloom in autumn and lotus flowers bloom in summer in Guangxi, writing the beautiful scenery of West Lake in different seasons.
The West Lake is beautiful in any season and at any time, so there are tourists to visit it. And write? Qiang Guanqing, Song Ling all night, catching Lotus Baby for fun? ,? Guan qiangqing? It's about the melodious flute sound of people during the day. Ling Ge Pan Ye? It is about people singing happily at night. Have fun fishing for lotus dolls? It is a summary of the first two sentences, so this sentence is about the amusement of Hangzhou people. ? A thousand riders have high teeth. While listening to Xiao Gu's drunkenness, while enjoying the clouds? It is about the amusement of Hangzhou officials, which is written in two aspects. One is? Drunk while listening to Xiao Gu? The joy of a feast, what's the second? Enjoy cigarettes? Joy of mountains and rivers. It is a compliment to local officials, implying that these officials enjoy the same happiness with the people. ? Will the future map be good, and boast back to Fengchi? It is a direct praise to Sun He, and it also explains the intention of offering in the conclusion of this word.
How does this word describe and praise the richness and charm of Hangzhou?
Ming: Judging from the conception of words, Sheng Xing? And then what? Prosperous? It's the word eye. ? Sheng Xing? Is the beauty of the natural environment; ? Prosperous? It is economic prosperity. ? Smoke willow painting bridge, wind curtain green curtain. ? Clouds and trees surround the dike sand, and the raging waves roll frost and snow, and the natural hazards are endless. ? They all show the beautiful natural landscape of Hangzhou. ? The city is full of jewels, and every household in Luo Qi is competing for beauty. ? Uneven 100 thousand families? It shows the economic prosperity of Hangzhou.
4. What are the characteristics of the use of this word quantifier?
Clarity: The use of quantifiers in words is particularly clever. Three or five cities? 、? A hundred thousand families? 、? Sanqiu? 、? Shili Lotus? 、? Does the rider in front have high teeth? And so on, or real writing, or imaginary writing, or exaggeration, create a bold momentum, the whole poem presents a broad-minded and heroic style, close to the bold style pioneered by Su Shi.
5. As a dedication, does this word show servility?
Clear: No, in the works praising the peace and prosperity and the lakes and mountains, the word is high-spirited.
Verb (short for verb) Homework:
1, write a scenic spot like this word.
2. Recite "Looking at the Tide" (Southeast Victory).
The third link: reading guidance of related articles.
Mourning autumn is a very common theme in China's poetry creation. Liu Yong's ci also contains a lot of sad autumn works. In addition to Lin Yuling, which we learned in middle school, this textbook also chooses another very famous work by Liu Yong, Klang Ganzhou. In addition, Du Fu's Eight Poems of Autumn Prosperity (Part I), Fan Zhongyan's The Fisherman's Pride (Qiu Lai's scenery is different), Yan Shu's butterfly lovers (Chrysanthemum Sorrow, Smoke, Blue Tears) and Ma Zhiyuan's Two Tones? Whistle? The return of great-grandfather and so on. It's all about autumn. These works have different genres and styles. Students can do a comparative reading to see whether the images they choose are similar, whether the artistic conception is the same, and what emotions writers usually express in autumn.
The second teaching content of Wang Haichao's teaching plan: Professor Wang Haichao.
Teaching process:
The first teaching department? Know the author and background.
(Song) Luo Dajing's "He Lu" Volume 1:? Sun Heshuai Qiantang, Liu Yiqing wrote "Looking at the sea" as a gift to the clouds? The news spread, and the owner heard it, and he was very happy to admire Sanqiu devil and Shili Lotus? There is a ambition to throw a whip across the river. ?
Accordingly, the creation time of this word can also be set before the first year of Jingdezhen, Song Zhenzong (1004). This is also the earliest word that can be checked in the Collection of Movements.
At the beginning of the Northern Song Dynasty, after five generations of wars, the urban population was small, and there were 100,000 households in Hangzhou, which was comparable to Bianjing, the capital of the Northern Song Dynasty, so Liu Yong was able to spread its prosperity.
Wang is a new epigraph created by Liu Yong, and Qiantang River Tide is a wonder of the world, so we should take its meaning when adjusting its name.
The second teaching section-the interpretation of words and sentences, the overall perception.
1. Read the text together and understand the main idea of the words with notes.
2. Emphasize the sound, form and meaning of the following words:
(1) Xingsheng: The geographical situation is important.
⑵ rugged: describe the rugged pavilions.
(3) Natural moat: A natural moat, which describes the grandeur of Qiantang River here. Hey, Qi? n .
(4) Heavy lakes overlap each other to clear Jia: long, y m 4 n, mountain peak. Ting Anne, it's beautiful.
[5] Gao Yanei: Originally referred to as the flag in front of the army, it was named after the flagpole was decorated with ivory. The generation in the word refers to Sun He, a senior official.
[6] The future map will be beautiful: draw it. Will, auxiliary words, meaningless.
3. What does this word show? Qiantang? Prosperity?
Hint: historical evolution, city scale, city appearance, characteristic landscape, life prospect and so on.
Teaching-Taste the language and appreciate the image.
1. If? Clouds and trees surround the embankment, and the raging waves roll frost and snow, and the natural hazards are endless? In the sentence? Volume? Change to? Push? Okay, why?
Tip:? Frost and snow metaphor spray? Angry waves roll frost and snow? Shows the momentum of the Qiantang River at high tide. Push? Relatively dull, without strength, without momentum? Volume? Strong, not as good as the modal description of spray splashing? Volume? Vivid image.
2.？ Qiang Guanqing, Song Ling all night, catching Lotus Baby for fun? What kind of life scenes are shown?
Tip: these words are very interesting in life, the sun is shining and the music is melodious everywhere; Lingzhou flooded the night and there were bursts of songs; Old people are happy to go fishing, while young children are happy to pick lotus. What a prosperous scene!
The fourth teaching link-learning expression skills and analyzing expression effect.
Recite "Looking at the Tide of the Sea" and discuss: A Survey of Art by Qing Liu Xizai? Lyrics and song overview:? The word is a little, having an affair? Is it an expression of words? Dot dyeing? It has both abstract comments and concrete descriptions, which are closely linked and show distinct emotions. What is this word used for? Dot dyeing? Please explain the technology.
Tip: Top first? Qiantang has been prosperous since ancient times? And then describe, smoke willow painting bridge, wind curtain green curtain, staggered 100 thousand people. Clouds and trees surround the bank and sand. The raging waves roll with frost and snow, and the natural hazards are endless. Pearl in the city, Luo Qi in every household, competing for luxury? , using the combination of dynamic and static, metaphor, exaggeration and other methods, trying to layout, from different angles to show the prosperity, beauty and richness of Hangzhou.
Task:
1. Recite the whole word from memory.
2. Use your imagination and rewrite the following sentences into a landscape text, no less than 100 words.
Clouds and trees surround the bank and sand. The raging waves roll with frost and snow, and the natural hazards are endless.