It is still Chen Qi's business to write five or six sentences that the old farmer had to pick wild fruits to satisfy his hunger because of his livelihood: "At the end of the year, hoe the plow to leave an empty room and call acorns to climb the mountain." However, this is a thought-provoking fact: after working hard for a year, I won an "empty room"-nothing, which really makes people "how can I die?" In winter, farm tools that have worked hard for a year can rest against the wall, but people who have worked hard for a year can't rest. The grain is hard to harvest, but the acorns are harvested. The connotation of the two sentences is not exhausted. The word "Hu Er climbs the mountain" means that the old farmer is old and weak, and he wants his sons to go out together and pick wild fruits on the mountain. Acorn is an oak tree, which looks like chestnuts and can satisfy hunger. Writing "Tiger Picking Acorns on the Mountain" does have the flavor of living in the mountains, which reminds people of Du Fu's famous sentence "Picking Acorns with Snipers at the Age of 20, Living in a Deep Valley in Cold Dusk" ("Seven Songs in Tonggu County, Gan Yuan"). It is difficult to write without life experience and in-depth observation of life.
Before the old farmer's words were finished, the last two sentences were a slap in the face, which led to the sentence "Xijiang Jiake". The waters of Guangxi, Guizhou and Chongqing meet in Cangwu County, Guangxi, and flow eastward to Xijiang, also known as Shangjiang. "Xijiang Jiake" refers to a businessman engaged in jewelry business in Guangxi, so the poem says "Zhu Baihu". Its location and its people seem to have nothing to do with Shan Nong's wildness, and there is no narrative language in the poem, which is extremely jumping. However, on the one hand, the youngest climber is extremely poor to pick wild fruits; On the one hand, "dogs eat meat on the boat" is extremely extravagant and constitutes a sharp contrast. People are inferior to dogs, which reveals a very unreasonable social phenomenon. Dogs kept on boats are different from hounds and domestic dogs. They are simply full and idle all day, and this image itself can also cause meaningful associations. At the end of the author's poem "The Joy of Estimating Customers", there is a phrase "No matter how heavy the farmers are, they would rather give up selling treasures", but the technique is similar to this, but it has lyrical elements, and this poem doesn't even have such a literal meaning, so it is more implicit.
The whole poem seems to be practical, just like an unfinished story, which is completely contrary to the practice of "dying to show one's will", but it is thought-provoking. The poet's ideological tendency is very clear and the practical significance is extremely profound. Its main technology lies in the contrast of images. There are two kinds of contrast in the poem, the former is more subtle, the latter is more obvious, and the application is rich in change. The choice of the image of the old man, especially the cruelty of feudal exploitation and the irrationality of the world, is typically short in length and rhymes repeatedly, giving people a lively and round impression; Even if the language is approachable, it has the advantages of white poetry.