Ming, memorable. "Like the beginning, the end is also very important. If an article with a clear theme and a novel angle is read to the end, it is
It's a pity that the ending is not good! The ending should not only serve the content and center of the article, but also be restricted by the "beginning", so that
Speaking of which, the ending is even harder to write. People call the end of a good article "leopard tail". Judging from the composition of the senior high school entrance examination, although there is no need to have an article.
The endings are all "leopard tails", but the endings are also required to be concise, vivid and just right. Generally speaking, the common mistakes at the end of students' compositions are: ①.
Gild the lily. Is the full text has ended, intriguing, but the author is still not at ease, determined to shake a few words, hand over the whereabouts of people who do not need to explain.
Only by staying can this meaning be realized. Empty slogans. Finally, in order to show his position and attitude, he shouted that it had nothing to do with the content of the article.
Shouting, this ending is a big theme. 3 sloppily. The meaning of the ending is clear, but it is too late to finish, which conflicts with the theme of the article.
From this point of view, the ending of the senior high school entrance examination composition is particularly important. How to write a good ending and improve the quality of exam composition? The following closing technique,
Are commonly used in the composition of the senior high school entrance examination.
1, natural beam. No matter what style the article is, after expressing the content, it is natural to collect the full text without designing the connotation.
A philosophical statement with profound implications is called "natural ending" without carving out rich symbolic forms. Completely avoided gilding the lily.
The end fault of foot moaning without illness is simple, lively and unpretentious, which is widely used in the composition of senior high school entrance examination. The composition atmosphere in the examination room is tense and the competition is fierce.
It is impossible to pay too much attention to "form" and "law" because of fierce competition. As long as you are passionate and comfortable, you can write wherever you want.
It is a good article to express your feelings in different categories, but paying attention to "nature" does not mean arbitrariness and rashness, but nature that develops with literary thinking.
The trend is over. There are many such examples in the learned text, so I won't repeat them here.
2. Echo from beginning to end. The end should echo the beginning, write sentences that echo the beginning, and don't simply repeat. This way of ending is varied.
The common beam acquisition method in this paper. This method can arouse readers' psychological aesthetic feeling and produce a feeling of rounded head and tail. such as
"A Precious Shirt" begins with "At my home, there is a very cool white shirt". At the end, it reads: "In the past four years, this work
Precious shirts, I carefully collect, I am not willing to wear them once. "Praise of Poplar" echoes from beginning to end: "I want to praise Bai loudly.
Poplar! "
3, the pawn Zhang Xianzhi style. This way of ending depends on the content of the full text and puts the theme at the end of the article in concise language.
Express your thoughts clearly, or explain your writing intention clearly at the end of the full text, so this ending method is also called "making the finishing point"
Type ". For example, at the end of Jujube Kernel, it reads: "Changing nationality does not mean changing national feelings. No nation is so attached to its homeland as we are. "
Yes At the end of "Remember a Spinning Wheel", I wrote: "It is a pleasure to struggle with difficulties. -Remember a spinning wheel. "
4. Famous sayings and epigrams. Ending with famous aphorisms and poems is intended to extend the article and reveal the true meaning of some kind of life. It often appears in a scattered form.
At the end of the article, narratives and essays, in a few words, express a profound and thought-provoking philosophy or warning content, which is deeply imprinted on
In the reader's mind, there is an effect of "endless words and endless meanings". At the end of "Pear Blossoms in the Post Road", it reads: "Pears in the Post Road are everywhere."
5. Lyric discussion. Ending an article with lyrical comments can express the feelings in the author's heart, arouse the emotional waves of readers and cause
The voice of the reader has a strong artistic appeal. This way of ending is mainly used for narrative, but also for exposition and discussion.
Writing of literature. There are various forms of lyric discussion ending, which makes the ending more free and a good "lyric discussion" ending.
The ending is bound to give readers a real and full feeling. For example, the end of "Flower Market" wrote: "She stood in a hundred flowers with a smile, too.
Like a flower, like a beautiful and elegant orchid. "Another example is the two natural paragraphs at the end of Memories of Mother, which is a typical lyric argument.
The end of.
The composition should be done in one go, and the ending should be in the same strain as the previous text, which is indispensable. The end of the composition is different from the beginning, but it is also
There are rules to follow. The above ending methods are just some common ending methods, so don't copy them mechanically. The really good ending lies in the exam.
Students' usual solid training lies in the improvisation and "extra-poetic merit" of candidates.
Please look at the end of the examinee's composition:
If life is no longer green, we are still looking for it, why not take action to protect green and the environment, so that we can have green forever. At that time, green will sing: "I come gently, just like you (desert) walk quietly ..." (Anonymous "If Life is Without Green")
Comments: The author naturally thinks of green from the environment, and then starts a topic around "If life is no longer green". Starting with the comparison of "past", "today" and "tomorrow", the article emphasizes that the environment is deteriorating and the green is decreasing, which will naturally lead to anxiety. Then, he skillfully used the beautiful sentence in Xu Zhimo's Farewell to Cambridge, which triggered thinking about life without green, leaving room for imagination. Middle school students' friends, there is no fixed method for writing. Which ending method you use depends on the stylistic requirements and your own preferences, and you can't copy dogma. If some can be discussed, some can be described, some can be suspended, some can be quoted, and so on. Middle school students' friends also need to exercise more and experience more in practice, and try their best to explore in order to achieve the same effect. In this way, I believe that the students will be able to write the ending of "When the bell rings, the reverberation will be around the beam".
Migration training
The ancients said: "A good ending is like chewing dried fruit and tasting fragrant tea, which makes people memorable." Like the beginning, the ending is also very important. It would be a pity if an article with a clear theme and a novel angle was ruined by an ominous ending when it was finished! How to make the ending profound and powerful, lingering and memorable is the key for us middle school students to practice ending writing. The following are several training questions for students to learn from.
Segment training questions:
1. Write a composition on the topic of "reading".
Writing Tips: "Books are the nourishment of human beings" and "Books are the ladder of human progress". Masters say that books are the crystallization of human wealth and are also our students' mentors and friends. We students must have something to say about this broad topic. How to do it better, we should also pay attention to the following points: ① The angle should be new and small, and the story of reading a book and a problem in reading will be written deeply and thoroughly because of the small angle. (2) Write your own experiences and feelings, write real feelings, do not write false and empty content, and do not write cliches. (3) Give priority to one expression, and avoid disunity in style. At the end of this composition, you only need to summarize the full text and ask questions at the end of the article. At the end of the article, for example, life tells me that only those who can really read "extracurricular books" are outstanding children of the times! I seem to feel the wind of the times passing by my ears, leaving a sentence: be careful! I would also like to advise thousands of colleagues in Qian Qian: read more carefully and distinguish carefully! For our beautiful tomorrow! ("I watch extracurricular reading")
2. Lyrics writing skills in winter: An article can express strong feelings, soft feelings, deep feelings and light feelings. The key is from what angle the author writes. This lyrical article. When writing, we should inject the author's true feelings, so that the article can have life and vitality. We encourage students to write stories and express their true feelings, so that the ending can naturally play a finishing touch and sublimate their feelings. Otherwise, the empty lyric at the end will only make people feel like a poster posted casually, which is very uncoordinated.
At the end, for example, "If winter comes, can spring be far behind?" This famous poem has been quoted repeatedly for decades and is nothing more than a symbol of hope. In this transparent winter, people can clearly understand the road under their feet with a clear head. Walking step by step, lying still or taking detours will delay the realization of hope.
3. Write a composition on the topic of "window" from your own point of view. Except poetry, the style is not limited, and the topic is self-made
Writing Tip: Building projects must have windows. The human eye is called the window of the soul ... There are too many connotations attached to the window and too many extended meanings, which are worth exploring. As a topic, there are many ideas to elaborate. Write from a familiar angle according to your own feelings. At the end of this kind of composition, you can use the finishing touch. The ancients compared the ending to a bell in order to produce the artistic effect of lingering sound. If the ending can leave readers room for imagination, it will be memorable and will undoubtedly add luster to the article.
Not long ago, grandma left, taking away laughter, greetings, windows and my heart. I know, that window is the most beautiful memory in my life ... ah! Old people, true feelings, small windows ... ("Grandma's Small Windows")
Fan Wenxuan analysis
Ruthless character
Reading Zhu Ziqing's back reminds me of my parents' back. But it's not completely different, because Zhu Ziqing's article shows his father's concern for him, and my parents' back leaves me only ruthless regrets. When I was five years old, I was taken to court, and my grandmother held me in a chair. When I saw my parents, I called them loudly, but they ignored me. My father and mother argued endlessly in court. Finally, I heard that it was awarded to my mother, and my father left the court. I shouted "Dad-",but the "shadow" left me without looking back. Since then, I have lived with my mother and grandmother.
But a few days later, my heartless mother also left me. Grandma wanted to leave me, but she couldn't bear it, so she left me, so I was like a child without mom and dad, living with her all day.
In the days when my grandmother accompanied me, I often remembered the scene of living with my parents: my father rode a car, took me to play in the street and took me fishing by the river; My mother took me shopping and bought me clothes. I can't stop crying when I think about it.
Later, my grandmother sent me to school, and the tuition was provided by my uncle. When my classmate invited me to his birthday party, I really envied seeing other people's parents give their children beautiful gifts and make wishes in front of candles. I thought about my birthday more than once. I don't want that sweet and delicious cake, and I don't want that exquisite gift. I just want my parents to make up and wish me a happy birthday, but I've been looking forward to today, but I haven't.
When I learned from my uncle that my mother remarried and my father got married, I cried bitterly. Grandma came over and said, "Don't cry, son. They are heartless things. They don't deserve your grief. You should study hard and do something big for them. " At this time, grandma's tears flowed down unconsciously.
Dad, mom, I want to have a home, a warm and happy home, I want to have the love of my parents, but I can't get it. Dad, mom, you know, your departure has brought me infinite sadness and resentment, made me feel the pain of losing my loved ones, and made me a child with parents but not caring for them experience many ups and downs in the world! Once again, I call from my heart: "Dad, Mom, have pity on me and marry again ..." However, all I can answer is the echo and the shadow that is getting farther and farther away from me and getting smaller and smaller in my eyes. ...
Final comment: Parents' divorce has brought indelible trauma to children's minds. The little author expressed his yearning for his parents in the article, especially at the end, which was touching and tearful. The real call for parents to remarry seems to haunt us for a long time, leaving endless thoughts and aftertaste.