The composition about snow mainly consists of three parts. First, make clear the theme of this composition and describe the specific situation about the subject you want to record (including the object, time, place, etc.). ), and then describe in detail the impressive things (including but not limited to things, people, things, etc.) in the subject matter you want to record. ). Finally, summarize the new gains or new insights about the narrative theme.
Snowflakes are falling from the dim twilight, and a group of white elves are wearing translucent hexagonal hats, each with a different pattern, which is more beautiful than the window cut by grandma in the New Year. It must have been carefully cut by a skilled weaver girl and sent to the earth as a New Year card! Oh, beautiful little snowflake.
Like a group of little dancers in white gauze skirts, accompanied by Yue Xian from the palace, they danced and spun gently in the air, and danced a more moving dance than Swan Lake, such a brisk posture and elegant dance. Oh, the magical little snowflake.
Snowflakes are fluttering and falling gently on the branches of the tree, which is very close to him. Is it a comfort not to grieve for the loss of green leaves? Or quietly tell it the news of spring? Snowflakes are fluttering, falling gently beside the delicate wheat seedlings, resisting the invasion of the north wind with their own bodies. Snowflakes float gently and fall gently. Are you afraid to wake up our dreams? Oh, kind little snowflake.
There are more and more snowflakes in the sky, all white, just like catkins covering hometown in spring. Snowflakes are calling for friends, hugging each other tightly, roaring down from the high sky and spinning excitedly. Oh, brave snowflake.
Trees wear bright white clothes, buildings wear warm white velvet hats, and the cracked mouths of wheat seedlings are sucking the sweet snow water. These are all gifts from snowflakes. Looking at the hope shining in people's eyes, the smile flowing out of their mouths. Isn't it a gift from snowflake, too Oh, generous little snowflake.
Comments:
The little author not only described the beauty, magic, kindness, courage and generosity of the little snowflake with pen and ink, but also formed a set of parallel structures, which were promoted layer by layer and achieved in one go, giving people beautiful enjoyment. The article also uses appropriate metaphors and personification rhetoric to beautify the expression effect, which is a good exercise.
Look, it's snowing! I was attracted to the corridor by the sound and looked out. It was really good. The little snowflake is falling slowly, and my heart can't help but give birth to joy. I hope it can bring us a real heavy snow. Soon, the city was gently covered by this gentle snowflake. Every snowflake gently spirals and falls, becoming a small part of a layer of snow on the earth, and every snowflake merges into a beautiful landscape, making the earth white.
Facing the snow, I want to recite some poems I have learned, but I can't remember them. It seems that what nature has given us cannot be expressed in words. Although I can't say it, I can listen, listen to the sound of snow.
It was snowing heavily, and the snowflake danced in various postures in the air, flying or hovering, or falling straight and quickly, laying on the ground. At this moment, everything is beautiful, a person is silent, standing at the window, but the laughter of those snowflakes echoes in my ears. I can hear their joy.
Before the snow stopped, the children couldn't help coming out to play and have snowball fights. Although it was still snowing, they had a good time regardless of their parents' opposition, full of childhood joy. Snow lets us roll them into fluffy snowballs and then throw them at each other. Although his body was smashed everywhere, they never complained. Give us happiness is its happiness. It warms our hearts with its unique language, and I can hear the sound.
Snow is a good sign for a good year, and it should be a good sign for a year on the eighth day of the eighth lunar month. Snowflakes fall slowly, accompanied by firecrackers, giving people joy. I like to watch the snow quietly, watch the snow fall quietly, and listen to the faint sound of snow, I will feel very peaceful and happy. I saw a group of children having a snowball fight, dodging left and right on the road. I saw a layer of snow covering the young leaves on the lawn, protecting them. I can hear their voices proud of taking on this important task.
The pure snow on the ground bathed in sunshine and enjoyed the last moment of joy. Are they crying for dying lives? No, they are laughing and proud. They finished their task and spread the joy to the world. They gave their lives and played their strengths. They are great, and I can hear the happiness in their lives.
When it snows again, let's stand by the window and listen to a life legend.
Comments:
This article depicts a beautiful snow scene for us in vivid language. For the description of scenery, the language is concise and accurate, and for the description of children having snowball fights, the language is lively and fresh. It is a good exercise to touch the scene, arouse association and blend the scenes naturally.
Today is a very special day. With the beginning of winter, we have the first snow of the year. Snowflakes flew down and landed lightly on the eaves and the earth. Small trees are surrounded by sparkling snow, just like Christmas trees. The road has also turned white, just like laying a white blanket on it, preparing for the arrival of new guests.
I want to take the snowflake with my hands. It floated into my hand and slipped through my fingers. Integrate into the earth and become a group. The snow is still falling, like goose feathers, sharp; Like an octagonal starfish, it is also like paper cutting. Sticking to the window may be a unique scenery. Some are in groups of three or five, and thousands of butterflies in Qian Qian dance, just like the goddess scattered flowers; Some are like arrows, which can guide us into paradise on earth.
This is indeed a paradise, a white paradise; It is also a fairyland, a peach blossom fairyland; It is also an ocean of joy. Children are playing in this world. On the other side of happiness, enjoying the fruits of happiness, beauty and happiness. Look! Those snow dogs, fat bodies, flat ears, drooping black eyes, small and exquisite noses and curved mouths are like inverted eyelashes. There is also a small hat similar to a gentleman, going to the wedding reception. It makes people feel cute at first sight. The work of genius.
Walk gently and touch the snow. It's so loose, just like a pile of scattered leaves, it won't mix together. Pick it up, so soft, like a ribbon. If the snow is still falling, it must be a floating ribbon. The snow is really soft. People who see snow for the first time will think it is a pile of cotton. To be honest, I really want to step on it, just like walking on the beach. Unfortunately, it's cold. Can't be ignored.
Sometimes I think snow is really fun. Pinched into a circle, like a dazzling pearl on the Shanghai Radio and Television Tower. Knead into a square, it looks like a sweet and delicious Osmanthus Jelly. I really want a bite. If there is enough snow, knead it into a big circle and carve some patterns, maybe it can be played as a football; Knead it into a rectangle, maybe it can decorate things.
Ah! It snows slowly! It is you who have given mankind a beautiful world. You gave the children an ocean of joy. It is also you who have brought the other side of the motherland, a brand-new side, and a paradise wrapped in silver with beauty.
Comments:
This article depicts a snow scene. The article begins with a topic, the middle part describes the appearance of snow and the joy it brings to everything in the world, and the end summarizes the full text. In this paper, the description of snow is vivid and lifelike, the words and sentences are appropriate, the scenery is born with the feelings, and the scene is blended, which is a masterpiece.
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