The whole process of Xiangling's poetry creation under the guidance of Dai Yu can be roughly divided into two stages: Dai Yu's poetry reading guidance and Xiangling's poetry creation practice. In her two conversations, Daiyu first briefly talked about the composition, antithesis, and flatness of metrical poems, and emphasized that "even the flatness is not true with strange sentences", which inspired Xiangling deeply.
Then, Daiyu also pointed out that "conception" is the most important thing in poetry. "If the meaning is true, even the words don't need to be modified, which is good"; At the same time, she warned Xiangling not to love those shallow poems, and gave her a bibliography and arranged the reading order. At the end of this conversation, Daiyu lent Wei a Collection of Five-character Poems, asking her to study in red circles and "read one by one".
The second time was after Xiangling finished reading Wang Wei's five-character poems, which Daiyu called "paying attention to discussion", in fact, to test Xiangling's understanding of Wang Shi's poems. Xiangling really lived up to expectations, and spoke of the refining kung fu in Wang's poems.
2. About the composition of Xiangling's poems, Xiangling's poems can be roughly divided into three steps. First of all, I worshipped Daiyu as a teacher and tasted Wang Wei's poems under the guidance of Daiyu. Secondly, he tried to write poems while reading Du Fu's poems. The third is that it has experienced two failures and finally succeeded. Xiangling's first poem is naive and straightforward, piling up the words used by predecessors to chant the moon and putting them together. The biggest problem is that the whole poem does not express true feelings, so there is nothing new.
The words "laurel", "jade mirror" and "ice plate" used in the poem are all platitudes, so Daiyu said that she was "bound by him", but she couldn't jump out of the trap of her predecessors. Her second poem has made progress, which can be compared with "floral fragrance" and "light frost", set off by scenes such as "people walking" and "curtains", and gradually let go of her hands and feet. However, the words "jade plate" and "jade fence" still have old flavor, and the whole poem is about moonlight instead of the moon itself. Some of them are off topic, so Daiyu said, "This song is so boring."
This poem is a success. Except for the first couplet, it seems that every sentence is not written about the month, but every sentence is related to the month. The dictionary is elegant and implicit, with novel and unique meanings. Especially the couplets, which are steady in workmanship, profound in meaning and exquisite. Its greatest advantage is that it conforms to Xiangling's own life experience, cherishes the moon and shows her true feelings. In this way, poetry is not empty but has content.
Xiangling's success, on the one hand, shows her own intelligence and elegant quality, on the other hand, it also shows a truth, that is, the novel has been written forty-nine times, and everyone has read her third poem, "Where there is a will, there is a way." It makes more sense for Xiangling to live in the Grand View Garden, and it is logical that she is the first person in the supplement.
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3. Xiang Shi, the composition of A Dream of Red Mansions, tells the story of Xiang Shi.
Xiangling has a bitter ambition, and Jingxue is sincere. She walked leisurely in front of the bamboo forest, digging her heart and searching for courage, without listening or staring, and devoted herself to writing poems. I couldn't do it during the day, and suddenly I dreamed eight sentences.
His poem says: the essence is difficult to hide, and the shadow is cold. The sound of the vast Ye Yuanyin coming to Yi Dao, the rooster crowing at night will be able to stop the waning moon still hanging on the horizon.
Wanderers in Qiu Jiang are more melancholy when they listen to the flute, and the young woman upstairs leans against the railing at the end of the night. To win Chang 'e, you have to ask yourself why you don't get together forever.
Everyone looked at the company and claimed it was good. Since then, there has been another talented woman who can write poems in the Grand View Garden. Xiangling knew little about writing poems before entering the Grand View Garden.
But later it was a blockbuster, and his poems won unanimous praise. What is the course of Xiangling's study of poetry? How much inspiration can it give us? I dare talk nonsense.
First, when did Meng Guang take a resounding case-how to cultivate his interest in writing? "When did Meng Guangjie take the Hongliang case" was originally a lyric in The West Chamber. Baoyu borrowed it to ask when Daiyu and Baochai were reconciled.
The author also uses it for the time being to explore when Xiangling became interested in writing poems. When did Xiangling become interested in writing poems? Not after entering the Grand View Garden, of course.
Xue Baochai is the most understanding. She asked Xiangling to accompany her to live in the Grand View Garden, because she knew that "it is not a day or two for you to envy this garden in your heart."
What attracts Xiangling is not the luxurious life in the Grand View Garden, but the strong literary atmosphere of Haitang Poetry Society. At Tanchun's initiative, Baoyu and others gathered in Qiushuangzhai to write poems.
Romantic can finally feast on poets; Curtain apricot brook peach, also can fly drunk. Poets in the poetry club have their own nickname and can sing good poems.
All this is like a magical magnet, which deeply attracts Xiangling. It was the poetry club in Grand View Garden that gave Xiangling the dream of writing poems.
Because of this dream, Xiangling has the possibility of becoming a poet. Are there any dreams for students in our writing teaching? Many teachers may dismiss this.
But the reality is that interest is the best teacher. Let students have a dream of writing, which can stimulate his interest and will, and let him mobilize all his strength in order to realize this dream.
When did the students have the dream of writing? It can be said that this is directly related to the success or failure of writing teaching.
How to help students weave their writing dreams? As a teacher, we should be good at creating an environment to stimulate students' enthusiasm for writing. In teaching, I always look at students' compositions with appreciation. I can always find a smart personality behind the slightly childish words and shine with wisdom in the middle of the fragments.
How happy the students will be if they fully affirm their success and give him the title of "composition star" without stint. So there are always some "composition stars" born in my class.
Of course, I will not create a "composition star" professional household, so that other students will be discouraged. Although students' level is uneven, as long as they make progress, they can become "stars of composition".
I won't let them become "stars of composition" too easily, and things that are too easy to get are generally not cherished. Create moderate competition so that each of them can see hope.
Grasp the students' psychology and let them cast envious eyes on the winners, but at the same time, an unyielding voice rings in their hearts: nothing, they will definitely surpass you next time! Second, borrow a wisp of plum blossom soul-how to guide extracurricular reading "Borrow a wisp of plum blossom soul" was originally "Ode to the White Sea" sung by Lin Daiyu. When this sentence came out, everyone was deeply impressed. Lin Daiyu is an outstanding figure in the Grand View Garden, and she is good at "borrowing a plum blossom soul".
Xiangling walked into the garden with the dream of writing poems. The best teacher she met after entering the park was Lin Daiyu. Lin Daiyu first asked Xiangling to read more books.
What book did she show Xiangling? The complete works of Wang Shamen, Lao Du's seven-character poems and Li Qinglian's seven-character quatrains are all excellent works worthy of recommendation. This is very scientific.
"Love when you see shallowness. Once you enter this mode, you will never learn again. " If an eagle and a sparrow learn to fly together, it will never fly for nine days.
Only by reading more famous books and reaching the realm of "trying to figure it out with your heart" can you subtly improve your literary accomplishment and gain the charm of famous writers. The key to winning the charm of famous artists lies in "carefully pondering" their works.
This obviously puts higher demands on teachers. First of all, like Lin Daiyu, you should be able to recommend famous books suitable for students to read.
Secondly, you should "ponder" these famous books first. As a teacher, we should study hard and constantly enrich ourselves.
To guide students to read famous books, I generally divide them into three levels. The first is the teacher's guidance.
I am a Chinese teacher and head teacher. I always use my position to "use it for other purposes" and turn my afternoon class into a "story meeting". When I was talking about A Dream of Red Mansions, there was an extra youth edition of A Dream of Red Mansions in students' schoolbags.
Because the afternoon class is short, every time I talk about the highlights, the class is over. Students are still wanting more, so open your books and have a look.
There is no need for the teacher to say more, and students consciously read extracurricular books. This is the advantage of the teacher telling stories. Secondly, I pay attention to providing students with quiet study time and reading excellent children's literature works such as "The Grass House", "Old Things in the South of the City" and "Today I am a Flag-bearer".
Only when students calm down and read can they feel the freshness and purity of Cao Wenxuan's novels. Experience the deep lovesickness and faint sadness in Old Things in the South of the City; Appreciate Mix's masculinity. Finally, I also pay attention to providing students with opportunities to be "storytellers".
This is the best way for students to "ponder" literary works carefully. To tell a good story, you must memorize it and be able to translate the written language into your own language.
A student can tell a story vividly, which shows that he has gained the charm of a famous artist. Third, how to make a composition to guide "Birds flying everywhere and falling flowers" was originally a poem that Lin Daiyu lamented. When she sobbed sadly, she saw flowers falling and birds flying, touching the scene and singing loudly.
She felt sorry for the "birds flying everywhere", but as a "teacher", she almost caused the consequences of birds flying. You can't improve your composition just by reading other people's articles.
A certain amount of writing.
4. Write an article (about 400 words) with the theme of "the inspiration of Xiangling's poems". First, read more books. Dai Yu asked Xiangling to read Wang Wei's five-character poems 100, Du Fu's 120 and Li Bai's 120 quatrains. "Reading poetry a hundred times is very correct and necessary for us to learn to write poetry." Your language perception of poetry will become stronger and stronger, and your reading level of poetry will become higher and higher. It's like building a house. The more solid the foundation, the bigger the house can be built. Reading is not only the basis of learning poetry well, but also the fundamental way to improve one's appreciation ability. Secondly, Daiyu believes that learning poetry must be first-class. Wang Wei's five-character poems are the best, and no one can catch up with him except Du Fu. If Du Fu scored 100 on the seven-character rhyme, I'm afraid it's impossible to find 80% again. Later, a Li Shangyin was ok. The seven-character quatrain means that no one can write better than Li Bai. Among these three people, Li Bai is a poet, Du Fu is a poet, and Wang Wei is called Shi Fo. The three of them have the highest achievements in Tang poetry, which has always been evaluated like this before. Later, Bai Juyi replaced Wang Wei, because some of his poems reflected the life and thoughts of the working class, as well as his novels. But it has always been led by Li Bai, Du Fu and Wang Wei. Lin Daiyu's point of view is also correct. If you want to learn first class, you can become second class. If you learn second class, you can only learn third class or fourth class. When reading, we should also choose works that are both literary and aesthetic, which is very beneficial to cultivate our sentiment and cultivate pure literary interest. Third, we should boldly create and dare to imagine. The meaning of "the moon is bright" is said throughout. Therefore, Daiyu said that beginners seldom read poems with indecent words, so they should be bold and imaginative. This is also true. Engels stressed when commenting on the German poet Plato: "Writing poetry must have bold imagination." It can be said that without imagination, there is no thinking in images, and there is no poetry. The process of thinking in images runs through. Bold imagination can make ordinary life scenes glow with peculiar beauty and quality, which is refreshing. The creation of other styles is also inseparable from bold imagination. These literary and artistic creation theories in Xiangling Shi Xue have great enlightenment to us.
5. Inspiration from Xiangling's poetry Your approval is the motivation for my answer. I hope my answer will be helpful to you. It is no accident that Xiangling wrote such a good poem as soon as she learned to write poetry. She devoted all her energy to writing poems and pursued her goals persistently. This is the main reason for her success. In addition, there are some factors that cannot be ignored. First, Xiangling has a good qualification. After entering the park, she listened to Daiyu's poems and reacted quickly. For example, when Daiyu said that "there are strange sentences that are not even true or false", she immediately realized that "style and rules are actually the last things, as long as the words are novel", which proved that her perception ability is extraordinary. Secondly, there are good guides, both Dai Yu and Baochai, who guide Xiangling by means of inspiration, and point out the key points in a few words. The Grand View Garden is a beautiful place, which is in sharp contrast with the dark and dirty environment outside the garden. Xiangling's coming here is like coming to another world, especially the love and praise from Baoyu and Tanchun, which made her feel the warmth of the world. She was liberated spiritually, and her intelligence was finally revealed. Xiangling is not only eager to learn, but also good at studying hard, and finally achieved impressive results with her own efforts. Xiangling has a kind of calligrapher and calligrapher's blood in her bones. Her study of poetry is definitely different from the leisure of boring aristocrats and the persistent elegance of vulgar people, but a persistent and tenacious self-return, which is a poetic daughter's persistent pursuit of poetic feelings, poetic personality and even poetic ideals. Xiangling is good at learning poetry and enjoys it, so she gets twice the result with half the effort. Xiangling studies very well. She not only listens to the teacher carefully, but also presses. And pay attention to sort out and summarize what the teacher has taught and digest it in time. In the process of learning, pay attention to reading, understanding and feeling, and pay attention to accumulation and application. After reading, understanding and talking about poetry, you will naturally write poetry. Xiang wrote three poems about the moon. The first two times were either dull or boring, but she was not discouraged. She carefully summed up her writing experience and found out her own shortcomings. Finally, write vivid poems. As the saying goes, "there is no end to learning, but there is no end to learning." In the process of learning poetry, Xiangling relies not only on cleverness and understanding, but also on bitterness and diligence. She has been thinking hard persistently, but finally won the favor of the muse with her painstaking sincerity and found a good sentence. The third poem looks like a dream, but it is true. The first stage is "suspense": "Last night, the west wind withered the trees, and I went up to the tall building alone and looked at the horizon." The second realm is the "bitter rope" stage: "My clothes are getting wider and wider, but I don't regret it." The third realm is the "epiphany" stage: "The crowd looked for him for thousands of Baidu, and suddenly looked back, but the man was in the dim light."
6. Detailed description of Xiangling's poetry Xiangling's poetry: Let's just say that after Xiangling met everyone, Baochai and others went to grandma's house after dinner and went to Xiaoxiang Pavilion themselves.
By this time, Daiyu had recovered more than half, and she was very happy to see Xiangling coming to live in the garden. Xiangling smiled and said, "I'll be free when I come. At least it's my luck to teach me to write poetry! " Daiyu said with a smile, "If you want to write poetry, you can worship me as a teacher.
Although I don't understand, I can still teach you. "Xiangling laughed." If that's the case, I'll take you as my teacher.
You can't be bored. Daiyu said, "Anything difficult is worth learning! It's just a connection, in which there are two pairs of connections, flat voice to sound, virtual to real, and real to virtual. If there are strange sentences, they are even true and false. "
Xiangling said with a smile, "Strangely, I often find time to read one or two old poems. Some are right and some are wrong, and I heard that'135 doesn't matter, 246 is clear'. Looking at the poems of the ancients, some are very fluent, and some are 246 wrong, and I wonder every day.
If you listen to me now, it turns out that these styles and rules are actually the last things, as long as the words are novel. Dai-yu said, "Therefore, it is important to decide whether to speak or not. "。
If the meaning is true, even the words don't need to be revised, which is good. This is called' don't hurt your meaning with words'. Xiangling smiled and said, "I only love Lu Fangweng's poem' A curtain doesn't roll for a long time, but an ancient inkstone is slightly concave and gathers more ink'. It's really interesting!" Daiyu said, "Never learn this kind of poem.
Because I don't know poetry, I love it when I see it. Once you enter this mode, you will never learn again. Listen to me. If you really want to learn, I have the complete works of Wang Samadhi here. Read one hundred of his five-character laws carefully, then one or two hundred of Lao Du's seven-character laws and one or two hundred of Li Qinglian's seven-character quatrains.
I laid a foundation with these three people first, and then I looked at Tao Yuanming, Xie, Ruan, Yu, Bao and others. You are also a very smart person. You won't need a year's work to become a poet! Xiangling said with a smile, "In that case, good girl, just help me take this book out. It's good for me to take home and read some songs at night. "
Hearing this, Daiyu ordered Zijuan to bring Wang Youcheng's five-character poems and give them to Xiangling, and said, "You just watch me pick out all the red circles and read them one by one. Ask your girl if you don't understand, or come to see me, and I'll tell you. "
Xiangling took the poem and returned to Wu Hengyuan. She ignored everything and looked at it one by one under the lamp. Baochai urged him to sleep several times, but he didn't sleep.
Baochai saw that he was so painstaking that she had to go with him. One day, after washing and dressing, Daiyu saw Xiangling happily send a book and wanted to exchange it for Dulu.
Daiyu said with a smile, "How many songs do you remember?" Xiangling smiled and said, "I have seen all the ones selected by the red circle." "Have you tasted it?" Daiyu asked. Xiangling smiled and said, "I've tasted some, and I don't know if it's true. I'll tell you. "
Daiyu said with a smile, "This can only be improved through discussion. Come and listen to me. "
Xiangling said with a smile, "In my opinion, the benefits of poetry are unspeakable, but when I want to go, it is vivid. It seems unreasonable, but it is reasonable to want to go. "
Daiyu said with a smile, "This is a bit interesting, but I wonder where you got it?" Xiangling said with a smile, "I have read his poem Bunker, and the couplet says,' The desert is lonely and straight, and the long river sets the yen. "How do you want to smoke straight? The sun is born round: the word "straight" seems unreasonable, and the word "round" seems too vulgar.
When I closed the book and remembered, I seemed to have seen this scene. You said you could find two more words, but you still can't find two words.
Then there is' the rivers and lakes are white at sunset and sky blue at high tide': the words' white' and' green' also seem unreasonable. Let me see, these two words can only be used to describe it. It sounds like an olive weighing thousands of pounds in my mouth.
"Sunset lingers at the ferry, and midnight snack smoke wafts from the room": the words "Yu" and "Shang" are hard for him to think of! When we came to Beijing that year, we took a boat in the bay that night. There is no one on the shore, only a few trees, and several families are cooking dinner in the distance. The smoke turned out to be blue, and the clouds were straight up. Who knows, I read these two sentences last night, and it seems that I went to that place again. "
Just then, Baoyu and Tanchun came and sat down to listen to his poems. Baoyu said with a smile, "In that case, there is no need to read poetry.
Not really. After listening to these two sentences, I know you have samadhi. Dai-yu said with a smile, "You said he smoked alone, but you didn't know he cheated his predecessors." .
Let me show you this sentence, which is lighter and more ready-made than this sentence. "He said, and put the Tao Yuanming's" Wenmin Village, Yi Yi Market Smoke "turned out and handed it to Xiangling.
Xiangling looked at it, nodded, sighed and smiled: "It turns out that the word' Shang' is derived from the word' Yi Yi'." Baoyu said with a smile, "You are right. You don't need to talk about it. You're getting confused.
If only you had done it. Tanchun said with a smile, "I'll make up a contract tomorrow and invite you to join us." . "
Xiangling said with a smile, "Miss, why bother teasing me? I learned to be stubborn only because I was jealous. " Tanchun Daiyu said with a smile, "Who is not stubborn? Are we serious about writing poetry? For example, we have become a poem seriously, and when we leave this garden, we will laugh our heads off. "
Baoyu said, "This is self-destruction. The day before yesterday, I was outside discussing the painting with Xianggong. They heard that we started a poetry club and begged me to show them the manuscript.
I just wrote a few songs to show them, and everyone didn't really admire them. It's all copied and engraved. "
Tanchun Daiyu asked quickly, "Is this the truth?" Baoyu said with a smile, "That's Ying Ge lying on that shelf." When Daiyu heard about Tanchun, she said, "You are really fooling around! Let's not say that it is not a poem, it is a poem, and our pen and ink should not be spread outside. "
Baoyu.
7. Xiangling learns the details of poetry. "If you want to write poetry, you should worship me as a teacher. Although I don't understand, I can probably teach you. " Xiangling smiled and said, "Fruit
In that case, I will learn from you. You can't be bored. Daiyu said, "Anything difficult is worth learning!
It's just a connection, in which there are two pairs of connections, flat sound to sound, virtual to real, real to virtual,
If there is a strange sentence, even the truth is wrong. "Xiangling laughed." I often get an old one.
I took the time to read one or two poems, some of which were right and some were wrong. I heard the saying,' No matter 135, two.
Four or six different ones. Looking at the poems of the ancients, some are very fluent, and some are 246 wrong, and I wonder every day. such as
Now listen to you, it turns out that these styles and rules are the last things, as long as the text is novel. "Yes," said Daiyu. .
It is for this reason that whether words are the last thing or not, the first idea is very important. If the meaning is true, even the words don't need to be revised.
Nature is good, which is called' don't hurt your meaning with words'. "Xiangling laughed." I only like Lu Fangweng's poem Double Curtains.
It's interesting to say that the volume stays fragrant for a long time, but the ancient ink stone is slightly concave and gathers more ink. Daiyu said, "Don't learn this kind of poem. "。
Because I don't know poetry, I love it when I see it. Once you enter this mode, you will never learn again. Only you
Listen to me, if you really want to learn, I have the complete works of King Shaman here, and you can read one hundred copies of his five-word method.
Think it over carefully, then read one or two hundred of Lao Du's seven-character poems, and then read one of Li Qinglian's seven-character quatrains.
Two hundred songs. On the basis of these three people, Tao Yuanming, Xie, Ruan, Yu,
Bao et al. You are also a very smart person. You won't need a year's work to become a poet! "
Xiangling said with a smile, "In that case, good girl, just help me take this book out and I'll take it home to read it at night.
A few songs are also good. "Dai jade heard that, then life fine will bring the five-word method, handed it to Xiangling, added:
"You only see the red circle is my choice, there is a song to read. If you don't understand, ask your girl or come to see me.
I just want to talk to you. Xiangling took the poem and went back to the garden, regardless of everything, just reading it one by one. "。
Read it. Baochai urged him to sleep several times, but he didn't sleep. Baochai saw that he was so painstaking that she had to go with him.
One day, after washing and dressing, Daiyu saw Xiangling happily send a book and wanted to exchange it for Dulu. Dai yuxiao
Tao: "* * * How many songs do you remember?" Xiangling smiled and said, "I have seen all the ones selected by the red circle." "Yes," said Daiyu.
Have you tried some? Xiangling smiled and said, "I've tasted some, and I don't know if it's true. I'll tell you. "
Daiyu said with a smile, "This can only be improved through discussion. Come and listen to me. " Xiangling said with a smile, "In my opinion.
Please, the benefits of poetry can't be said, but if you want to leave, you can leave vividly. Some people seem unreasonable and want to leave.
It turns out that it is reasonable and affectionate. "Daiyu said with a smile," That's a bit interesting. I wonder where it came from? " ? "Sweet!
Ling said with a smile, "I have read his poem" Bunker ",which says:' The desert is lonely and the long river sets the yen. "think about it
How straight is the cigarette? The sun is born round: the word "straight" seems unreasonable, and the word "round" seems too vulgar. Close the book and think about it.
8.x If Lin Daiyu teaches Xiangling to learn poetry, what does it say about your writing, that is, from shallow to deep, step by step? How did Lin Daiyu do it? He gave Xiangling the title "Singing the Moon", and this poem "I (Lin Daiyu) was about to write a poem, but I didn't succeed." An excellent poet like Lin Daiyu can't do it, so it's easy to imagine the difficulty of Xiangling as a beginner. Lin Daiyu did not give any affirmation to Xiangling's previous two poems. If Xiangling doesn't make up her mind and study poetry persistently, the result is likely to be. A good composition is written, so what you write is of course important. Teachers' propositions should be close to students' lives. Let the students write about the things around them, the things around them and the things they really feel. From self-writing, to family, school, to relatives, friends, teachers and society, propositions should be close to students' lives, so that students can have something to say and articles can be fresh and natural. Mr. Ye Shengtao said. Fountains are abundant and inexhaustible, and streams naturally flow endlessly. "Writing from life is attractive to students, which makes them willing to talk to others about their observation, thinking and experience of life through writing. In addition, at first, don't set obstacles for students in terms of words and styles, so as not to interfere with students' thinking, but to stimulate students' thinking creativity to the maximum extent. Teachers should criticize students' writing, whether it is self-criticism, mutual criticism or teacher criticism. Let students know the importance of writing in Chinese learning. There is no doubt that Lin Daiyu is an excellent teacher. Under her guidance, Xiangling entered the poetry club and entered the literary palace she dreamed of. But we should also inspire students to understand that the fundamental reason for Xiangling's success is her own efforts and enterprising spirit. Baoyu once said with emotion, "It's a pity that he is so vulgar. Who knows today?" Although she is humble, she is not vulgar.