Author/Jiao Wenlin
"Intention" is the center of establishing the article. Because of the particularity of the composition in the examination room, the conception must meet the life requirements of the proposer. This requires candidates to grasp the essence of composition questions and the core of composition materials, and establish the main idea of their own articles on this basis.
Below, I will talk about some conception skills with examples, hoping to help students prepare for the exam.
Practical skills 1 get to the point
The key words of the test material are words that reveal the center of the material and contain the range of ideas set by the proposer. Metaphorical sentences, argumentative essays, opening and closing sentences, opinion sentences of argumentative essays and closing sentences of lyric materials are often the key words we want to search for.
Application example
Read the following materials and write an article of not less than 800 words as required. (20 12 college entrance examination outline volume)
On weekends, I go home from school to help with farm work. It's raining hard today, and the road is muddy. I picked a load of seedlings and walked a few steps on the wet ridge. My heart beat faster, my legs trembled and my burden shook, so I had to put it down and stand there at a loss.
My mother grew rice in the field and saw my embarrassment. She shouted, "Son, take off your coat and shoes and try again!" " "
I took off my coat, shoes and socks, rolled up my trouser legs and shouldered the burden again. Gee, I suddenly felt a sense of security under my feet and the burden was light, so I quickly picked up the seedlings and showed them to my mother.
Mother said, "It's not that you can't carry this burden. You're worried about falling, getting your clothes dirty and losing your concentration. Take off your coat and shoes and socks, and you will get rid of unnecessary worries. "
It is required to choose a good angle, define the concept, clarify the style and draw up a good title; Don't deviate from the content and meaning of the material, don't copy it, and don't copy it.
Conceptual example
Worry about falling, worry about getting dirty clothes, and if you don't pay attention, naturally you can't pick the seedlings well. Take off your coat and shoes, and you will have less trouble. Naturally, your feet will be stable. It can be seen that only by putting down the heavy burden and going into battle lightly can life be successful.
(Guangxi candidates "put down their burdens and reap success")
Technical appreciation
Narrative materials and argumentative sentences are often the key. "Argumentative essay" may be the comments and opinions of the characters on the phenomena and characters in the story, or the comments and opinions of the proposer on the phenomena and characters. It usually appears at the end of narrative materials. In the last paragraph of the material, mom's words "get rid of unnecessary worries" played a finishing touch, and candidates can use this idea to write articles that fit the meaning of the question.
The examinee's composition skillfully quotes the key sentences of the material, puts forward the view that "putting down the burden and going into battle lightly can make life successful", and grasps the key to the examination of the topic.
Practical Skills 2 Purify Personality
If the story-telling materials focus on the activities of the characters, they can purify their personality spirit through the words and deeds of the characters, or the evaluation of other characters and the tips of the presenters. It can be a noble personality such as honesty, kindness and generosity, or a personality defect such as hypocrisy, selfishness and jealousy. Candidates' composition is intended to express their views on a certain personality, and the main purpose is to meet the meaning of the question.
Application example
Read the following materials and write an article of not less than 800 words.
A young man went through a lot of hardships to find treasure, and finally found a plant that could emit fragrance in the tropical rain forest, but it sank to the bottom of the water. He thought it must be a treasure, so he confidently transported the fragrant wood to the market for sale, but no one cared. The charcoal next door is always sold out quickly. At first, he trusted his own judgment, but in the end he changed his mind and burned the incense wood into charcoal, which was quickly robbed. He was very happy and went back. Father burst into tears. It turns out that the fragrant wood burned by young people is the most precious tree in the world-agarwood. As long as you cut a piece and grind it into powder, its value will exceed that of a car full of charcoal.
You need to have a comprehensive understanding of the material, but you can choose a side and an angle to conceive the composition. Independently determine the concept, style and title; Don't deviate from the meaning of the material, and don't copy it. Don't copy.
Conceptual example
In Taisha in the Ming Dynasty, Hu Youlian said: "You are constant, why do you sleep at night?" The most useless thing is to be frozen for ten days. Among them, the true meaning is beyond words: persistence is the key to success! Persistence is a powerful force. The strength of persistence comes from faith and will. It is the persistence of the goal that gives us the motivation to walk silently through the first long journey. "If you don't accumulate small streams, you can't make rivers and seas" is the fruit of persistence. (Li Xiaowei's "Because of persistence, so harvest")
Technical appreciation
The materials are allegorical, and candidates can choose from many angles. If we use the method of "purifying personality", it will be more direct and more in line with the spirit of the material. This young man, who originally owned valuable agarwood, abandoned his agarwood because he envied the charcoal in other people's hands, showing such personality defects as "no self-confidence", "unable to adhere to established beliefs …", "impetuous" and "quick success". It is through the materials that Li Xiaowei's article saw from a positive perspective that young people "can't stick to their established beliefs ... do things rashly" and set up the view that "because of persistence, there is gain".
Practical Skill 3: Cracking Metaphors
Determining figurative meaning is the primary task of figurative materials. To confirm its metaphorical meaning, we must contact the content of the material.
Application example
According to the following materials, choose an angle, do your own topic, and write an article of not less than 800 words (don't write poetry). (20 12 college entrance examination Shanghai volume)
People often give up the glimmer of light in their hearts, just because it is their own thing. However, from the works of genius, people realize the glimmer of light that they have abandoned.
Conceptual example
Casual whimsy is often more creative and novel than deliberation. People don't care about the flashing light in their minds, or even pay attention to this seemingly "something for nothing" product: people value modest ideas and opinions, thinking that this is the right way for social progress, but what is the truth?
(Shanghai examinee "Grasp the dusk and act bravely")
Technical appreciation
The material is descriptive, and the key words are "shimmer in the heart" and "give up", but the material itself does not point out the meaning of "shimmer", so the task of conception focuses on the meaning of "shimmer".
According to the following article, "From the works of genius, people realize the shimmer abandoned by themselves", it shows that "shimmer" is something of value that has already appeared in their minds-insignificant, tiny, beautiful, unique inspiration, spirit, quality, beautiful thoughts, ideals and so on. From this, we can determine the following intentions-to capture fleeting inspiration, cherish the spirit of independence, and enlarge the good thoughts in our hearts.
Candidates are bent on understanding "twilight" as "whimsy" and criticize people for ignoring this valuable "whimsy". The first paragraph clearly puts forward the point of view that fits the meaning of the question.
Practical Skills 4 Distinguishing Relationships
There are two (or more) concepts in the title, which are connected by words such as "he" and "he". We should focus on the relationship between concepts and think and analyze dialectically.
Application example
Read the following materials and write as required. (College Entrance Examination Jiangsu Volume 20 12)
The mother used the needle and thread in her hand to make clothes for her long-distance son. Before leaving, I had a stitch for fear that my son would come back late and his clothes would be damaged. -Meng Jiao
Why do I often cry? Because I love this land deeply. —— Ai Qing
In these sacred hearts, there is a clear power and strong love, which flies like a torrent. You don't even need to listen to their voices. From their eyes and behaviors, you can see that life has never been so great, so full and so happy as when you are in trouble. -romain rolland
Please write an article of not less than 800 words on the topic of "Worry and Love".
Requirements: ① Independent decision; 2 angle selection; (3) Besides poetry, the style is optional.
Conceptual example
The spider web of life is woven by two closely intertwined silk threads: worry and love. It passes through the hourglass of time without a trace of dust. ..... When sadness and love go hand in hand, it is a beautiful scenery in the world. Because worry is deep because of love, and love is warm because of worry!
(Jiangsu examinee "Trouble and Love")
Technical appreciation
The most basic requirement for writing this topic is that the content of the article must involve two aspects: "worry" and "love", and the relationship between them can be clearly explained. Whether writing a narrative or an argumentative essay, we should stick to these two points and understand that "worry" is born of "love" and "love" is stronger because of "worry".
Candidates mentioned the relationship between "worry" and "love" in writing, and after the story, they had a more clear lyric explanation.
In addition, the composition questions composed of single words should be written according to the dictionary explanation or the established meaning in society; In the composition questions composed of phrases with modifiers and restrictive words, while paying attention to the central word, don't ignore the modifiers and restrictive words.