Comment on the Spring Water in The Spring Water of the Stars

foreword

Mom!

This fragmented article,

Can you have a look?

These words,

Before I go,

Always hidden in your heart.

Appreciation: It embodies the author's praise for maternal love.

Haruichi

spring

Another year

Therefore, it blows slightly.

Can I take another photo?

"My friend!

I never left a shadow.

Not just for you. "

Appreciation: express selfless praise and praise for nature, and reflect the beauty of nature with vivid language.

two

Four o'clock passed slowly—

Flowers whisper to each other

"We are just the weak!

a sweet dream

Do it in turn.

A thin cup

Also take turns drinking.

God arranged it this way!

Appreciation: Everything is born and must be destroyed. You can't resist the cycle of life. In the face of nature, everyone is weak.

three

Young man!

You can't fly like the wind.

It should be as still as a mountain

Like a floating cloud

A helpless life

I only did the poet's information!

Appreciation: shows the shortcomings of young people, impetuous, unstable, gorgeous in appearance, but lacking in practice internally.

four

Ludi

Only this kind of yellow wave?

Take the wind to Jiangnan!

Appreciation: Write your inner feelings through reeds and express the poet's thoughts and feelings for his hometown in the south of the Yangtze River.

five

A small river

The running water will flow downwards.

Only through Pingsha Wan Li-

free

Boring

He has no happy voice.

A small river

The winding water will go down.

Only through mountains and valleys—

dangerous

unavailing

He also has no happy voice.

My friend!

Thank you for your answers.

My long-standing boring question

In the flat and tortuous water flow

The happiness of youth

Ripple in it!

Appreciation: explaining philosophy with flowing water. Tell young people that the road to growth is smooth and tortuous, and they should work hard to make progress, enjoy this happiness and make efforts to make a difference.

six

Poet!

Don't wronged nature.

A beautiful picture.

What a good description!

Appreciation: Life and creation should be pure and simple. Express your true feelings and sense of reality, and don't moan.

seven

Step by step to help-

Semi-hidden blue peaks

Why is it so high?

Appreciation: Through description and questioning, it is written that the mountain road is difficult to walk, that is, the poet's difficulty in realizing his ideal.

eight

Moon!

What made your dignity?

In the distant sky

You're the only one.

Appreciation: asking for the moon is lyrical, expressing the poet's lonely feelings on the road of self-respect and self-love and realizing his ideal.

nine

If I can achieve it

Oh, my god

Where is the end of your heart?

Maybe let me know.

Far away!

Far away!

I'm so small!

Appreciation: human beings are always small and ignorant in front of nature and need to explore constantly.

Yiling

Suddenly it was midnight.

The mood of the day!

Don't invade this field.

Appreciation: Don't be disturbed by the troubles during the day, because night is for poets to think about, and the best time to enjoy creation is time. The south wind is blowing.

Jiang Chun's smile

Brought it from the water town!

Appreciation: integrating feelings into the scenery, showing the poet's yearning for Jiangnan and his hometown.

several

The string is nearby.

Here comes the blind man.

The string is in the distance.

The fate of ignorant people

Did you go with him?

Appreciation: To live, we must grasp our own destiny, set goals, rise consciously and pursue constantly.

One three

Bai Lianhua!

Cleanliness binds you-

But why not let Honglian go into the water?

Come to the ceremony

Appreciation: Bai Lianhua, which stands out from the mud without being defiled, is holy and noble, but it also needs to learn humility and tolerance.

Easy

Nature's call theory

"Put your pen down.

Immerse yourself in my ocean!

The human heart is so boring. "

Appreciation: Go deep into nature and feel it. Only by purifying the soul in harmony with nature can we have better creation.

15

voicelessly

A triumph full of winners!

Appreciation: in the process of realizing your ideal, you often have to be willing to be lonely and work hard to gain something.

Yi Liu

Heart!

When is it worth worrying about?

For the universe.

For all life.

Appreciation: in front of this, you are small, and it is great to worry about being upset about these things.

FAW Group Corporation

Sunset on the red wall and hay!

Let's drop quickly.

You have aged many young people!

Appreciation: Writing scenery and expressing feelings, expressing the poet's feelings about the passage of time, and telling young people to cherish time.

18

Plum blossoms in the ice and snow!

You took the lead in spring.

Look at the flowers everywhere.

When you open it occasionally

Appreciation: Plum blossom is the messenger of spring and the pioneer of flowering. Call on young people to set up ideals, cut through thorns and dare to be the first in the world.

Yijiu

Poet!

Be careful with your pen!

The boredom of all living things

I want you to comfort me.

Appreciation: creation should be full of emotion and comfort all beings, and literature should reflect reality and serve all beings.

Erling

Shantou independence

Is the universe occupied by only one person?

Appreciation: the lonely feeling of the poet in the process of realizing his ideal. Eryi

Can only carry the pot.

Look at her haggard appearance-

Water of sympathy

Where to irrigate?

She is a flower in the column!

Appreciation: Flowers fall off the fence, which shows the poet's introspection, love for nature and helplessness in the disappearance of life.

two two

Pioneer!

You should open up a future for all beings.

Tighten your heart belt!

Appreciation: praise the pioneers and call on young people to set up their ideals and work hard.

Ersan

Ordinary pool water—

The sunset is shining.

It will become a sea of gold!

Appreciation: things interact, and greatness is nurtured in the ordinary.

Erwu

Blowing snow and blooming flowers-

The north wind is also mild.

Appreciation: Only dialectical thinking can discover the beauty of things.

Erliu

I'm just a weak person!

Cross of light

Let me carry it

I want to abandon sex.

Dim stars!

Appreciation: we should constantly reflect on ourselves, abandon mistakes and shortcomings, adhere to the bright and ideal, and strive for perfection.

sixteen

The shadow deceived everyone.

Beyond the sky-

Was the moon once round?

Appreciation: Nature has its laws, and we can only discover the nature of things through phenomena.

Erjiu

General Green.

A little gentler.

Xihu river

Are you Hai's sister?

Appreciation: The poet's deep affection for the West Lake shows his innocence by comparing the West Lake to the little sister of the sea.

Sanling

The sky is high.

The stars have fallen.

Xiaofeng is embarrassed with the sleeper again!

Appreciation: A day's work lies in the morning, striving for the ideal.

three three

Flowers in the corner!

When you are narcissistic

Heaven and earth will become smaller.

Appreciation: Persuade people to be modest and not proud.

Three or four.

Young!

From the white ground

Looking for sympathy.

Appreciation: loving, compassionate, and learn to care about others.

Sanliu

The "past" of the elderly

Young people's "future"

In contemplation

It's all the same

Appreciation: define the life cycle, and strive to make life more meaningful.

pseudo-ginseng

Space!

Uncover your star network

Let me see your bright hope.

Appreciation: the pursuit of nature, the experience of life, how small people are in front of nature.

Sanba

Autumn is deep!

The leaves are red!

Appreciation: Use anthropomorphic methods to write praises to nature with the changes of seasons and scenery.

The third nine-day solstice after beginning of winter-the coldest day in winter.

The water flows eastward.

The moon sets in the west-

poet

Your mood

Can you catch them?

Appreciation: conform to nature, praise nature, and create literature according to natural laws.

navigate by water/air

Dusk-late at night

The strong wind under the locust tree

Honey rain on the vine

Maybe I can stop you for a while.

Sick brother

I just fell asleep!

Appreciation: Love your sick brother deeply.

forty-two

Lonely sails in the sunset.

Unconsciously,

Completed the "natural" picture.

Appreciation: The figurative writing describes the scenery where man and nature live in harmony, and the poet's love for nature.

Xisan

Has Chun spoken?

But her hidden great power

It's already like this

Be gentle with the world!

Appreciation: praise for spring

Four or five

These mountains sometimes tilt.

The sea sometimes rises.

The mind of a mediocre person

But it was erected in ancient times!

Appreciation: establish ideals, make unremitting efforts and keep making progress.

Liu Si

Unforgettable behavior

Created a free mind!

Appreciation: Although the behavior is restrained, the mind must be free and learn to think independently.

Siba

The firefly flew away freely.

Weak residual load!

Appreciation: the technique of line drawing, the helplessness of life, and the feeling of time passing.

Jiu Si

In the natural smile

dissolve

Human resentment

Appreciation: the greatness of nature has dissolved people's resentment and praised nature.

Wuling

Waiting to write?

Poet himself

It's poetry

Appreciation: The poet himself is full of poetry. Chicken-

Inspired others!

Has he ever been comforted himself?

Appreciation: praise for the dedication of the pioneers.

Wuer

In a slightly tired meditation

The string wind of pigeons

Blow out the poem!

Appreciation: the tranquility of creation is broken by the pigeon string of nature, so you should blend in with nature.

53

Spring comes from green grass.

Talk to young people

"My lamp is on you.

From the cold and dry environment

Create your living personality!

Appreciation: Encourage young people to realize their ideals and show the poet's concern for young people.

May Fourth Movement

Where did the daytime grow?

The shadows of trees on the wall in the distance

I'm too sleepy to move.

Appreciation: nature alternates, the days are long and the nights are short, and anthropomorphic methods are used to express concern and thinking about nature.

Five five

Lily in the field

Only nature

Is it your friend?

Appreciation: Willing to be alone with nature, showing the author's love for nature.

May 6(th)

In the gale—

All the trees in the distance are lakes.

The creator smeared his Twilight pictures.

Appreciation: Metaphor personification, writing about the changes and love of nature.

May 7th.

Little spider!

Stop your work.

Just clean up some dust!

Appreciation: Tell people to make real efforts to do meaningful work, not seemingly meaningless work.

Wuba

Silence is like ice.

Mountains flow like water.

Can a poet dominate him like this?

Appreciation: Paying attention to and learning from nature is the source of the poet's creation, which shows how natural the poet is.

Wujiu

The passenger called and said

"helmsman!

Be careful of the rocks in the fog. "

The helmsman said with a calm smile

"I know when the waterway.

Enough! "

Appreciation: explain philosophy in the form of dialogue, pay attention to yourself, do your job well, and ignore others.

Liu Ling

Meteor-

Only the human sky will be bright.

He flew in from the darkness.

Fly to the darkness again.

Is life also the ambiguity of this ship?

Appreciation: The poet's thinking about the meaning of life is expressed by the falling of meteors.

June 1 day

Brother!

I'm glad to see you again

You in my memory

That can be as clear as this.

Appreciate: See your brother's joy and express your deep affection for him.

Liuer

I want to hold the light of the past.

But in the longitude and latitude of time

It is made of "now" silk!

Appreciation: The poet tells us with images that time flies, time is fleeting, and warns us to cherish time.

Sanliu

Liu Hua Shi Fei

Here comes the swallow.

Lu huafei's poems

The swallow is gone again.

But they are equally white!

Appreciation: Nature has its own laws and everything is equal. We should pay attention to and respect nature.

June 4(th)

baby

In his trembling cries

There are infinite mysterious words.

Brought from the primitive soul

Tell the world

Appreciation: the baby's heart is the purest, praise innocence.

Sixty-five

Just a lone star!

In the boundless darkness

I wrote all about the loneliness of the universe.

Appreciation: Express the endless loneliness and loneliness in the author's heart.

66

Awakening-

Is it quiet or clear?

Only standing walls.

fontanesia

What's wrong with cold?

Walk into the white in the painting!

Appreciation: Describe the cold and desolation of the snow scene.

Six or seven.

Faith will make young people

After climbing the tower of "obedience"

He removed the ladder of thought.

Appreciation: metaphor tells young people not to blindly follow, but to learn to think, and thinking will create.

Liuba

When I walk on a dark and distant road

Walk carefully and slowly.

I only listen to my own footsteps.

Appreciation: On the way to realize your ideal growth, be willing to be lonely and pay attention to your own growth.

Liujiu

Silent bottom

But according to

Forever red spring flowers

Appreciation: In contrast, we should strengthen our confidence and ideals in the predicament, work hard and make progress, and success will surely come.

the 1970s

The crimson color of roses.

Shine before my eyes

Reach out and take it off.

She withered on my lapel.

My heart whispered to comfort me and said

"You cut her off from nature.

This thick red will return to dust.

Young man!

Pay attention to your boring soul. "

Appreciation: If the flowers wither and fail, tell young people to respect the laws of nature, set up ideals, keep forging ahead and reap success, otherwise the flowers will fail.

July 1 day

When I float like a cloud

When you come and go.

Really feel that the universe is too lonely!

Appreciation: The author is unwilling to be lonely and hopes that life can be more colorful.

seventy-two

Tired spring breeze

Just a little "restless"!

City wall—

Green willow-

Are hidden in the flying dust.

This is also the boredom of life fragments!

Appreciation: when you grow up, you will always be bored. Be optimistic. Growing pains are always temporary.

Qisan

My friend!

If the flowers in spring are free to bloom.

Accidentally depressed you.

You should forgive him for in our nature.

Appreciation: spring flowers are brilliant, and people should not worry. This is the law of nature and we should follow it.

VII VII IV

In the fuzzy world—

I forgot the first sentence.

I don't know the last sentence.

Appreciation: Poet's Thoughts on the Beginning and End of Life

Seven five

I swam the lake yesterday.

Listen to the rain tonight

This raindrop has fallen on the lake in my heart.

There are countless overlapping patterns!

Appreciation: The poet remembers the beauty of time and space.

Liu Qi

Loneliness increases depression.

Busy rooting out troubles-

My friend!

Happiness lies in continuous work!

Appreciation: strive to enrich yourself and make yourself happy and gain something in your busy life.

The last seven-day memorial ceremony

Just sitting on the edge of the steps joking-

Balcony on the mountain

The setting sun is shining

Why do you never want to board the plane?

Don't enjoy your happiness in one day!

Appreciation: Don't just immerse yourself in enjoying a moment's happiness. Only by being down-to-earth and making progress can you enjoy happiness continuously.

Seven or eight

Have you ever had one?

Fishing for alum and sitting alone—

Full lake soft wave

Look at people in spring.

Appreciation: the beauty of boating in spring

Qijiu

I think before I leave this world

Can you tell him in a low voice?

"This world!

I know you completely! "

Appreciation: The mystery of the world is hard to understand, and it needs lifelong study and exploration.

bale

When I see the green leaves coming again

I am happy and sad in my heart.

Brave green leaves!

Remember to talk about autumn parting?

Appreciation: Learn to forget past sentimentality, face it bravely and innovate life.

Eight—

I'm alone.

After the pine and cypress

Climb up the stone steps

Hall of Prayer for the New Year [in Beijing]

Solemnly in the yellow dust

I

I can only bow my head deeply!

Appreciation: Pray for a bumper harvest, but destroy nature and make it dusty, so we should respect nature.

Written sheepskin

Under the drizzling mountain gate.

The stone steps are wet—

Only I am independent.

And wisps of floating clouds

Is this also "keeping secrets with the same staff"

Appreciation: Encourage all living beings to explore together, confirm the universe and life, and show the poet's reverence for nature.

Beixi beverage

Under the lamp, the sword was drawn from its sheath.

Look carefully-meditate

Only a cavity of heroism.

forget

The blood beads are bright red.

Teardrop crystal white

Appreciation: By writing blood beads and tears, the focus of the matter is highlighted. Human life is precious and feelings are fragile.

Eight Banners'

Young man!

Just looking back?

The world cannot stop moving forward.

Appreciation: We are warned not to be complacent, arrogant and stagnant after making some achievements, not to be immersed in happy review all the time, and to be cautious and innovative.

Bajiu

Peach blossoms are in bloom, and there is no owner.

The grass is green and has no owner.

What a stupid world!

Why do you ask for natural love to comfort you?

Appreciation: Flowers bloom and fall from people, and there is love in the world sometimes.

ninety; The 90s; Millennial; Generation Y; the Post-90s generation

Smart guy!

In this lonely world

Can only carry the lamp of "confidence"

March in the dark

Appreciation: Smart people know that self-confidence is a bright light in the dark and your spiritual pillar. If you have confidence in yourself, there will be no obstacles in the world.

Jiuyi

Staring at the beautiful flowers

For the fruits of the future

Had to leave him on the branch!

Appreciation: Don't rush for success, wait patiently for a good opportunity, and don't be tempted by the beautiful scene in front of you while waiting.

gibberellin

Star!

The whole world is watching you.

Guide their eyes

Beyond space!

Appreciation: seeing far, magnifying and farsighted.

Emperor throne

Yueer

In the water mirror of the world

It's very bright here

Dark talk over there

But there is only one in the sky.

Appreciation: the moon in the water, no matter how beautiful, is illusory. There is only one real moon, and it is unique.

Jiuliu

"When will you come to enjoy the snow?"

"Come tomorrow."

Tomorrow is over.

"When will you visit this lake?"

"Come next year."

The coming year has passed.

"When will you come to work?

The afterlife? "

I smiled and was shocked!

Appreciation: Tomorrow seems to be the reason for our laziness. Maybe time will pass in a hurry under the excuses of "come back tomorrow", "come back next year" and "next life". Time is always ruthless. What he is waiting for is when you find him panicked and helpless.

97

The vast dusk

Where am I wandering?

Mom!

I just want to turn to you.

Lakes and mountains outside the heart

Let me abandon it!

Appreciation: Motherly love always gives people an all-encompassing feeling. The mother described by the poet is the nest of birds, the destination of the soul, and the object she confides in when she is hesitant and depressed.

99

"Orchids!

Too lonely.

Don't want friends? "

"I'm looking for it

But there are no other flowers.

Ken is driving in an empty valley. "

Appreciation: Orchids live for the persistent pursuit in their hearts. Write the difference between orchids. We live not for others, but for our own pursuit. At any time, we keep a calm mind and face the world calmly.

Yilingling

When the burden on the shoulders of young people

When suddenly unloaded

His brave heart

Will be sad because of loneliness!

Appreciation: Emphasize the importance of responsibility to young people.