1. Modern Chinese Reading (1)(* * 18)
1. Answer B (mostly C and D)(A: The statement of "not loud" is inconsistent with the original text; C: The expression "in any form" is too absolute; D: there is no causal relationship before and after; E: "Rewriter" should be "reader". )
2. Scoring standard: 1 point will be given if the words "imitation", "imitation", "imitation writing" and "imitation writing" and their synonyms appear; The combination of realm and poetic language gives 1 point (if realm or poetic language appears alone, no points will be added); If the answer is "imitate the realm and poetic language in the works of Acheng and Wang Zengqi", give full marks)
3. Scoring criteria: ① ② Give 3 points for any writing. (3) 3 points must be written.
6 points are adjusted to 2 points and 3 points each: cause 1 point, hazard 2 points. The answer can be found in paragraph (2), (3) and (4).
The main problem: most students just copied the original text without summarizing it, some students didn't summarize it, and many students only answered the reasons or harm, which led to points deduction.
4. The feasible suggestion is: (1) Make a reading plan for individuals, step by step, and finish reading famous books in a certain period of time. (2) Take notes while reading, and write down your own thoughts after reading. (3) The school will incorporate the reading of famous books into the curriculum plan. (4) Invite experts to teach regularly to guide the reading of famous books.
Question: (1) Many students suggested being vague, such as having a correct attitude, reading quietly and strengthening publicity.
(2) Some suggestions are nothing new, and many are already being done, such as opening a library and adding excerpts from famous books to teaching materials.
(3) Some suggestions do not meet the requirements of the topic, and no points are given. For example, it is forbidden to publish abridged versions of famous works, to read original works instead of abridged versions, and to watch movies, TV plays and dramas adapted from famous works.
5. Scoring requirements: You don't need to quote the original text, but you can translate the original content in your own words (1), summarize the content accurately when analyzing (1), express your feelings accurately (1), and express (1).
Accurate selection:
(1) The steps are quiet, and birds peck at them from time to time. (2) There are many small doors inside and outside, but the walls are often. Guests have a banquet, and chickens live in the hall. (3) (Mother) closed the door with her finger and said, "Is the child cold? Want to eat? " (4) Compared with the past, I closed the door with my hand and said, "My family's study has been ineffective for a long time, but if my children succeed, they can wait." (5) Hold an elephant to (6) for a long time, and you can distinguish people with your feet. I planted it myself the year my wife died, and now it is as graceful as the cover.
There is a problem:
(1) The text is extremely unfamiliar. Zhang Guan Dai Li's original content, especially the details of grandmother and mother, people, time, place and events are all confusing and even wrong. Some students can't even give examples, just talk in general.
(2) The generalization of the text content and characters' emotions is inaccurate.
(3) The selected example is not typical. For example, many people wrote that "there is only an abbot in the room, and one person can live" and "three to five nights". . . . . . Shanshan is very cute. "If the following analysis is correct, give 2 points at most.
(4) If the example is wrong, but the analysis is good, give 1.
Second, modern reading (2)
Marker analysis of ivy growth in history
The full score of this big question is 20, and the score is estimated to be around 13 and 14, which is better.
6, marking situation
Standard answer: Dai Wangshu. ( 1)
The main problem: the main works are confused with the author's memory of relevant literary common sense.
7, marking situation
Standard answer: ③, tied; (1), assuming. (Grade and relationship are 1 min respectively)
The main problem: the concept of knowledge related to the division of complex sentences is unclear.
8, marking situation
Standard answer: Because the author sees the huge gap between himself and Xu Wei, he lacks self-confidence and independent spiritual territory in the face of the test of fate. (Keywords "self-confidence" and "spiritual territory")
The main problems: the generalization of the text and the extraction of effective information need to be strengthened.
9, marking situation
Standard answers: a, d;
Main problems:
10, tag:
Author's original text: If he doesn't flaunt his personality like that and get ahead in the imperial examination with his talent, then he will become a few big names, luxurious and luxurious, and BMW cars will be rare? Even if the imperial examination is not successful, it is always possible to be easy-going, forbearing, looking for relationships, holding the door, taking your own work as a gift and being a follower under a powerful door! You can also have food and clothing and avoid hunger and cold.
(The supplementary writing should be combined with the word "situation" above, and supplemented around the relevant content in the following paragraph 10; Pay attention to the connection with the context, especially the echo above, which should be another life of Xu Wei under a hypothesis; Narration and discussion should be reflected in the expression of narration and discussion)
The main problems are: lack of relevant training and insufficient grasp of contextual cohesion.
1 1, marking situation
The standard answer: ① It not only collected the full text, but also sublimated the main idea of the article; ② Take care of the theme of the article; ③ Expressed the author's reverence for Xu Wei; ④ Using the green vine to symbolize (metaphorically) Xu Wei's lonely, confident and anti-traditional spirit, with vivid image; ⑤ Use a set of parallelism to strengthen the language situation and emphasize the misfortune that Xu Wei once encountered.
(Write two points at will and make a brief analysis according to the text. Write two points and analyze two points; )
The main problem: the concept of paragraph function and writing characteristics is confused. The lack of analysis is due to the neglect of the requirements of the stem.
12, marking situation
(works and characters are accurate 1 minute; 3 points combined with text analysis; Counterexample does not score; )
Main problems: the examples of works and characters are not typical or the works and characters are wrong; Analysis can't start from the context; The connotation of "spiritual highland" has no specific explanation; Small composition also needs basic structure, and some students are confused in thinking and structure.
Example of perfect answer:
(1) People can't lose their spiritual territory. For example, Madame Curie, who dedicated her youth to science, wrote in Liang Heng's "Beauty Over a Hundred Years" that although she had beauty, she did not use it as a capital to show off, because she only focused on the vast world of science; Although she endured the hardships of the experiment and the poor conditions, she never gave up because she was convinced of the existence of radioactive elements and their great significance to mankind. Therefore, she has always adhered to her spiritual territory without regrets.
(2) Thoreau, who wrote Walden, stuck to his spiritual realm. In the tide of industrialization, he avoided the disturbance of the world and came to Walden Lake to blend in with nature. He found real peace in Walden Lake. In a materialistic society, Thoreau understood that the most important thing for people is not to lose their spiritual territory.
(3) Su Zhe fully demonstrated his spiritual realm in Huangzhou Kuaizai Pavilion-not to hurt things, but to be quick. Because he has his own spiritual realm, although the world has declined, he has seen through and put it down, so he can do anything. Once people have faith in their hearts and their own spiritual territory, they will be detached, otherwise they will only indulge in small gains and losses and lose themselves.
(4) Santiago in Hemingway's The Old Man and the Sea not only fought to the death with sharks, but also stuck to his spiritual territory. He wants to prove people's tenacity and perseverance in the struggle. It is this spirit that makes him fearless in the face of disaster. "People are not born to be defeated", which is the spiritual realm of Santiago. He persevered and became a real great man.
(5) People can't lose their spiritual territory. Just like Wen Tianxiang in the Preface to the Guide to Nanlu, the envoy Yuan Jun was detained, endured torture and gossip, and remained loyal to his country under coercion and inducement. With the belief of serving the country wholeheartedly, he wrote famous works such as Crossing Zero and Ding Yang on his way to escape, expressed his unyielding belief in poetry, and safeguarded his spiritual territory, which was praised by future generations.
(6) Everyone should stick to his spiritual territory. For example, Bai Mang, one of the five martyrs of the Left League, mentioned by Lu Xun in the article "Remembering Forgetting" is an example. He persisted in his revolutionary beliefs in white terror and betrayal, and even rejected his brother's official hat of "another class". Even if the future is difficult, he still sticks to his beliefs, stubbornly defends his beliefs, and sticks to his spiritual territory, which is praised by people.
Three. Dictation: ellipsis
Four. Appreciation of ancient poetry (***8 points)
14, 1 point per space
Correct answer: drinking (drinking, drinking, drinking); Poetry (harmony, poetry, poetry, songs)
Common mistakes: monk, Babali, brewing wine, chatting, singing.
15, per space 1 point
Correct answer: (1) Dou E's injustice.
(2) irony (contrast, irony)
(3) boredom and hatred of officialdom (injustice, dissatisfaction, contempt and resentment)
Error and reason:
(1) "Yuan" is written correctly, but the word "Dou" can't be written, and the word "E" is written as "moth", and the word "Yuan" is missing a little.
(2) The concept of rhetorical devices is unclear: duality, irony, analogy, intertextuality, contrast, line drawing and comparison.
(3) The idea of examining the questions is unclear, lacking core words, and it is impossible to deduct the expression of "the feeling of ..."
16, requirements: example 1, expression effect of "true colors" 1, theme 1.
Error and reason:
(1) The exam questions are unclear and the answers are not standardized.
(2) Examples are selected from the second song.
(3) We can't appreciate the expressive effect of the language art of "being loyal to nature", or misunderstand it as Guan Hanqing's personality.
(4) Lack of "theme" consciousness
Verb (abbreviation of verb) Reading in Classical Chinese (1)
17.(2), (3) and (4) The scores are low; (2) and (3) are in the wrong order.
(1) Just: approach, approach, approach, trend.
(2) Poor: the same as "illness", recovery from illness, and recovery (general leave does not necessarily appear)
(3) Including: collection, collection, gathering and collection.
(4) Value: Encounter, encounter
18. The score rate is high.
19.( 1) "Nothing is. . . . . "Hu" is a fixed sentence, which means "I'm afraid. . . . 。” "Murphy. . . . . . "Students lose more points.
(2) "Legacy" is interpreted as "forgetting" and "discarding", and some students interpret it as "ignoring". Sentence translation should strengthen the awareness of "stepping on the spot" and implement key words.
20.
2 1. "Talk about things by things", "make sense" and "talk about things by things" are all right, and the score of "seeing the big from the small" 1.
22.* * * Two scoring points, the first scoring point "I hope doctors don't be quacks" was answered by very few students.
Six, classical Chinese reading (2)
23. About a quarter of the students wrote it, but some of them wrote it correctly and the words were not standardized.
24. The beauty of rhythm and rhythm can basically be written, and "lively" and "prosperous" can also be noticed, but it is rare to write "the dense arrangement of incense markets or the huge scale".
25. Satire can be written in half, but the object of satire is uncertain and the specific content can hardly be written. Part of the wording "reflecting people's miserable life experiences" was also given 1 point.
26. The scoring rate is high. The main mistake is to write "comparison" as "comparison" and "description".
27. The content of landscape writing mostly ignores generalization, and is written separately, but two aspects are clearly written and 1 point is given, and only one aspect is not given points, and most of them can write an expression.
After the answers are adjusted and supplemented, the scoring standard is:
23. The fifth day of May 1
24. The rhythm is lively (catchy, rhythmic and beautiful) 1.
It shows that the incense market has a dense layout (or a huge scale), and the score is 1.
Highlight the prosperity (or liveliness) of the fragrant city, 1 minute (write noisy and disorderly miscalculation)
25. Satire on the behaviors of Hangzhou Taishou (65,438+0) and Fisherman (65,438+0) (or write a tragic experience or scene that shows that West Lake people are not well off) 65,438+0.
26. Contrast (or control)1; Prosperity (prosperous, lively and prosperous) is 1, and decline (dilapidated, decadent and desolate) is 1.
27. Write the prosperity and wasteland of Shixiang, 1 min; Expressed the author's nostalgia for the past prosperity (nostalgia, nostalgia); Or the ups and downs of sadness in the past; Or regret the decline of Shi Xiang; Compassion for the people is1; It contains the author's dissatisfaction with the incompetence of the rulers (court, satrap); Anxiety about the decline of the times. 1 point