Among the famous articles selected from junior high school Chinese textbooks by People's Education Press, many are quoted from poems. In "Spring", Zhu Ziqing quoted "Blowing the face without cold wind" in the poem "Jueju" by a monk from Zhinan to describe the softness of the spring breeze. In order to express the scientific workers' spirit of exploration, Hao Mingjian quoted "The road is long, Xiu Yuan and Xiu Yuan are Xi, and I will go up and down to seek" in Li Sao, a poet of Chu State.
In "Litchi Honey", Yang Shuo wrote the beauty of litchi with only "300 lychees a day, but he didn't hesitate to grow up to be a Lingnan person" (from Su Shi's "A Unique Skill in Huizhou"). Some excellent compositions are also brilliant by quoting poems.
Example 1. Today's basketball game ... our class lost the last basketball game, and this is the last chance. I don't know how to feel the tragic feeling that "the wind is rustling and the water is cold, and the strong man is gone forever."
Teacher Chen's whistle sounded, and my heart tightened: "It's time to play!" " "I really appreciate Mencius' efforts from' Heaven will descend to Sri Lanka, and he must first suffer his mind, his bones and muscles, his body and skin, and his body'. From "Spring silkworms will keep spinning until they die, and candles will cry dry every night", I understand the depth of responsibility. From the story of "How much love there is for every inch of grass, I get three spring rays", I understand the contribution that children make to their parents.
From a small photo of Lu Xun, I understand the broad mind of "I recommend Xuanyuan with blood" selected from Call of Responsibility 3. Looking for the ancients in Japan and China is Tao Qian's leisure to "pick chrysanthemums under the east fence and see Nanshan leisurely"; It is the magnificence of Di Wei's "bleak autumn wind and surging waves"; It is the joy of Yi 'an's "returning to the boat at night and straying into the depths of the lotus"; Releasing Weng's "Julian Waghann Beiding Central Plains Day, Family Sacrifice Never Forgets" is a free and easy way; Looking for the past in Japan and China is the firmness of "clothes are getting wider and wider, never regret, and languish for Iraq"; "The Arctic court does not change, and the western hills steal from each other" is Du Gongbu's confidence; It is a surprise of "looking for her with thousands of Baidu, suddenly looking back".
-from "Classic Plot" 4. I found a kind of pride in "the great river does not return, the waves are exhausted, and the eternal romantic figures"; "When is the moon in spring? How much do you know about the past? " I found a way to look back; "I made an appointment not to come in the middle of the night, knocked on a chess piece and fell to my death." I found a silence; "I smile at the sky from the horizontal knife, leaving two Kunlun mountains in my liver and gallbladder." I found a kind of heroism; "Clear water produces hibiscus, and carving is natural." I found a simple. -"Pursuing Your Dreams" These paragraphs are all selected from the perfect composition of the senior high school entrance examination.
It is precisely because the author makes good use of poetic sentences that the language of the article is bright and poetic, such as the refreshing and exciting smell of tea. It also makes the author's thoughts penetrate into some classic plots and become more and more heavy.
It better reflects the candidates' literary accumulation and accomplishment, giving people a refreshing feeling. This is also the main reason why these articles can stand out from many compositions.
There are many ways to add icing on the cake at the end of a poem, or to summarize the whole text to reveal the main idea; Or show the future to boost morale; Or express your feelings to enhance the appeal of the article; Or the language is implicit, making readers cover their books and daydream. 1, quoting the end of a poem, has a strong appeal and often gives readers a strong sense of regret.
For example, according to the sea and heaven, at the end: "Didn't you see how the water of the Yellow River came out of the sky into the sea and never came back?" . You can't see the lovely hair in the bright mirror of the high room. Although it is silky black in the morning, it has turned into snow at night. "
Time flies like water, time flies like electricity. Perhaps, only history can make the "inscription on the tombstone without words" full. Perhaps, only history can best interpret Zeng Guofan's sentence of writing down his life's mood when the sky is broken and the yellow robe is about to be added: leaning on the sky shines countless flowers on the sea, the water is high, and the heart knows itself. Candidates quote Li Bai's poems and Zeng Guofan's own poems as the conclusion, which further deepens the author's point of view and leaves readers with endless reflection.
2. Use the philosophical characteristics of famous poems to summarize the full text and deepen the theme. Good poems and your good articles are icing on the cake, and people will agree with you after reading your articles.
This has played a "finishing touch" role. At the end of the junior high school Chinese textbook "Pear Blossoms in the Post Road", I wrote: "I look at these energetic Hani girls and the white pears, and I can't help but think of a poem:' Pears in the Post Road are everywhere'."
This ending not only describes the natural pear flower, but also describes the futile spirit of Lei Feng, which takes care of the theme in structure, deepens the theme in content and has rich implications. Quoting poems skillfully closes the full text, which is memorable and thought-provoking.
This is the charm of quoting poetry. If the beginning and end of the article can flexibly quote poems and echo them back and forth, the effect will be better.
For example, in 2003, the perfect composition "Youth Sorrow" was written like this. Beginning: Xin Qiji once sang such a sentence: "Teenagers don't know the taste of sorrow and fall in love with the floor;" Fall in love with the floor, say worry gives new words. "
Our cross-century teenagers have long tasted sadness. This is not "arguing irrationally", but "telling the truth", which is a heavy burden for us young students every day.
..... Conclusion: But in any case, I still want to say to all the students who "don't know what to worry about" and have tasted the taste of worry: "Teenagers should understand the taste of worry, look forward to it, never forget it and never be afraid of it." -Xin Qiji was quoted at the beginning; The ending is flexible and plays a sublimation role; Of course, when quoting poetry, it must be natural and harmonious, and never quote for the sake of quoting.
In a word, clever quotations and flexible use of ancient poems can make your composition language vivid, and also show the author's profound literary accomplishment and unusual writing skills. I hope that teachers can guide students to accumulate more famous sentences flexibly, which can not only make students' compositions shine, but also carry forward our classical culture and make ancient poetry shine today.
2. Quote poetry to write a composition and recognize self-worth in pursuit.
Populus euphratica, which stands proudly in the desert of flying sand and stones, has created the miracle of "not dying for 300 years, not falling for 300 years, and being immortal for 300 years". What they pursue is the tenacity and unyielding struggle against the desert, but they never yearn for the water town in the south of the Yangtze River where the breeze blows and the drizzle falls. In the pursuit of unyielding beliefs, they kept their truest selves and realized their true value.
So is life. People should pursue something, but not blindly. Only by keeping a clear head and recognizing yourself can we better realize the value of life.
Qu Yuan, a great patriotic poet, can keep the truest pursuit of life. He didn't collude in the intrigue of officialdom, but sent out the feeling that "I am alone in the world, and everyone is drunk and I am alone"; He didn't "go with the flow, raise his bad habits and sip his oars" in the dirty officialdom. He would rather join Miluo than pollute his pursuit. In the pursuit of life, he never forgets his true value. Facing the test of reality, he left us an immortal reputation.
The pursuit of life should be varied, just as graceful willows yearn for colorful spring and birds yearn for blue sky and white clouds. They should always remember their true identity, recognize their self-worth, and can't go beyond this boundary and do something they can't chew.
Li Bai, a great romantic poet, left us with endless wealth and wisdom. He didn't forget his value because of the frustration of his career. His free and easy "Oh, how can I bow and scrape to those high-ranking officials whose sincere faces will never be seen?" is a true portrayal of his inner quality. Tao Yuanming's quiet leisure brings us endless enjoyment. In their own pursuit, they found their own life value and did not lose themselves in setbacks.
Only by finding a value orientation that suits you can you better appreciate the interest of life, instead of blindly pursuing and forgetting your true identity.
We felt great ambition in Su Shi's lofty sentiments of "flying stones over the air, crashing into the shore and rolling up thousands of piles of snow". Recognizing self-worth in pursuit is a kind of wisdom and a choice of life.
People say that the pursuit of life should not be the same, otherwise, everyone will lose themselves and the richness of life.
The long road of life requires us to struggle. In the pursuit of life, we can clearly understand the value of ourselves and create the glory of life in the journey of life!
3. The topic of the composition is ancient poetry. I like ancient poems. I love Chinese very much, and I prefer ancient poetry. Classical Chinese is one of my favorite types of ancient poetry, and my favorite type of ancient poetry is ancient poetry.
I love ancient poems, probably because of my cousin. When I was young, my cousin loved Chinese very much. She likes classical Chinese very much. Although her favorite is classical Chinese, she used to recite ancient poems for me. My cousin not only recited poems, but also told me the general poems and artistic conception of ancient poems.
Those ancient poems are not only beautiful in poetry, but also in artistic conception. "Yellow four maiden flowers full, thousands of flowers low.
Butterflies dance from time to time, which is in harmony with Yingying and Chacha Dance. "This is" Looking for Flowers Alone by the Riverside "written by Du Fu, a poet in the Tang Dynasty. I still remember what my cousin told me about poetry at that time: how beautiful it was to walk by the river and watch the flowers bloom on the path in front of Huang Si's mother's house. Even the lovely butterflies are reluctant to leave, dancing among the flowers, and the free little oriole is also singing for the flowers: "How beautiful! How beautiful! "Listening to my cousin's poems, I imagined the beautiful rural customs, how beautiful it was, just like a fairyland on earth! Gradually, I found that poetry, poetry and artistic conception alone could not satisfy my thirst for knowledge.
I began to try my best to investigate and understand the poet. "The lake is full of moonlight, and there is no windless mirror on the pool surface.
Looking at Dongting from a distance, there is a green snail in the silver plate. "This is" Looking at Dongting "written by Liu Yuxi, a writer and philosopher in the Tang Dynasty.
Liu Yuxi was born in Luoyang (now Luoyang, Henan). Liu Yuxi's poems are full of fighting colors, strong flavor of life, popular and fresh language, and good at using metaphors to give political content. He was an important poet in the Tang Dynasty and was called "the Great Poet".
Liu Yuxi and Liu Zongyuan are both top scholars and have a lot of contacts. They are called "Liu Liu" and have a deep friendship with Bai Juyi, who is collectively called "Bai Liu" by the world. His works include Collected Works of Liu Mengde.
Such beautiful and magnificent ancient poems not only cultivated my own sentiment, but also increased my knowledge of Chinese. It's killing two birds with one stone! I like ancient poems.
4. How to skillfully decorate the composition with ancient poems and famous sentences? China's ancient poetry is a rich treasure-house, which has nurtured generations of literati with profound ideological connotations and superb artistic techniques. The ancients often said that "poetry and books are full of energy." Classical poetry contains profound cultural and emotional resources, and the clever use of ancient poetry can activate language expression and highlight the connotation of the article. This is undoubtedly an effective and convenient way to "shine" and "innovate" the college entrance examination composition. 1 Poetic topics are good at quoting classics in propositions, making the topic the focus of the composition, so that readers will have a sense of cohesion when they first see the full text, and they will feel thousands of miles away after writing. If you want to show the diversity of heroes' personalities, you can "be colorful and have four seasons like spring." The characters "ten thousand" and "thousand" show that heroes are talented people, the characters "purple" and "red" show heroes' distinctive and diverse personalities, and the characters "spring" describe the role of heroes in social development. It is these colorful "flowers" that dress up our poor and white inner world. These poems are amazing because of their ingenious and unique use. Poetic titles can make a composition move all over the body, and we only need to quote a suitable poem. 2 The structure of poetry Ancient literati paid great attention to composition in their poems. Poetry has its complete frame structure and emotional context. In addition, the poem itself is concise and meaningful, and the rhyme is harmonious. Using ancient poetry to conceive the writing structure of the article can not only make the composition clear, but also give people a feeling of elegance and beauty. Can impress readers in the shortest time. This is a good demonstration of the excellent composition "Pipa parents have feelings" in Hunan college entrance examination in 2004. These verses are the key verses that connect the poetic content and run through the emotional context of the full text in Pipa Story. They are cited as signs of composition transformation and emotional turning point, which not only skillfully string together some life details of parents' concern and education for "I". But also make the writing structure of the article wide open. Read from it, don't have a lasting appeal and feelings. In order to stand out in the college entrance examination, in addition to lofty ideals, beautiful language and ingenious structure are also indispensable. Using the emotional clues of ancient poems to arrange the structure of the article will make your composition blossom a spark of innovation. 3.6438+0 quotes famous poems and sentences, which can make the original pale and powerless words vivid and more touching. Sometimes, it can make the finishing point. Proper use of famous sentences can really add interest to the language and enhance the effect of expressing feelings. "How can you ask the canal so clearly, because it has flowing water at its source?" Famous sentences are undoubtedly such living water, which makes our language canal cool. Proper quotation of famous sentences in writing can really make witty remarks and show your accumulation to others. For example, in "Wild Goose", "Picking chrysanthemums under the east fence and seeing Nanshan leisurely" I found a kind of leisure; "I didn't go on a date until midnight, so I knocked on a chess piece and my snuff dropped." I found an elegant; "But before he could conquer, he was already dead, and the heroes cried on their coats from then on." I found a tragic feeling. -"Dreams after 90s" These paragraphs are all selected from students' compositions. It is because the author makes good use of poetic sentences that the language of the article is beautiful and poetic, such as the fragrance of tea, which makes people ecstatic. It also allows the author's thoughts to penetrate into some classic plots, which are more and more heavy and better reflect the candidates. Give people a refreshing feeling. 3.2 Using poems around the theme of the composition, using the meaning of story scenes, literary allusions and famous sayings, using one's own "meaning" to blend into the "environment" of others, using one's own unique perception of poetry and combining the ideas of the composition to decorate the full text can make the article meaningful and produce a long and heavy aesthetic feeling. For example, the composition "My Favorite Plum" You are standing on a cliff. Who is in charge of ups and downs? " Because of such boldness of vision, during the difficult Long March, you regarded Wuling as a small spray and Wumeng as a mud pill. Against the background of war and smoke, you walk through countless long iron gates like a stroll. All the dangers and setbacks are just the cold snow on your branches, expressing your unparalleled elegance and extraordinary wisdom. Standing on the top of the cliff, you left a height you can never trust and created a whole. She is laughing from it, and she is laughing at an open plum soul. The author skillfully uses the original sentences of Du Fu's and * * *' s poems, and sticks to the topic of "My favorite plum" with his own understanding of the poet's works, or praises others, or is bold and free, and interprets the national spirit and soul from different angles. The translated poem conforms to the content of the article, enhances the expressive force and appeal of the language, and supplements and adds to the original poem. In a word, writing is a process of reading a lot and accumulating constantly. If students are good at observation, diligent in thinking, constantly feeling and accumulating the essence of traditional culture, they can apply ancient poems and famous sentences to the text according to the above methods to improve their language expression ability and add icing on the cake to your composition.