1, a fisherman on the river.
Original text:
Look at those poor fishermen, floating up and down in the big waves and rocking in the boats.
Pedestrians coming and going on the river only like delicious perch.
Look, the fisherman is driving a flat boat, going in and out in the wind and waves.
Appreciation: This poem is simple in language, vivid in image, strong in contrast and intriguing, which reflects the hardships of fishermen's work and arouses people's concern about people's livelihood.
The first sentence is about people coming and going on the river bank, which is very lively. The second sentence describes the mentality of people on the shore and reveals the reasons for "communication". The line of sight drawn in the last two sentences indicates that the fishing boat is swaying in the wind and waves, and pay attention to the fishing site. Although the perch is delicious, it is difficult to catch, which expresses the poet's sympathy for the fishermen's sufferings and deeply exhorts the people on the shore who love the beauty of perch.
2. Waterfall.
Original text:
Different, higher birth, more lonely.
The downhill is still straight and clear about the sea.
Waterfalls are different from ordinary streams. They poured down from the mountains and stood out from the crowd.
How magnificent it is to pour down from the height of the mountain, and I wonder if you can keep yourself clean when you flow into the sea.
Appreciation: Waterfall is a landscape poem with deep feelings. Through the vivid description of the waterfall, it highlights the magnificence of the mountains and rivers of the motherland and expresses the author's incomparable love for the mountains and rivers of the motherland.
The whole poem consists of three paragraphs, which describe hearing the sound of waterfalls, seeing waterfalls far away and seeing waterfalls far away.
This poem is concise in language, full of charm, vivid in metaphor and appropriate in words, depicting the magnificence of waterfalls and expressing the author's love for nature. Poetry uses overlapping sentences, antithesis and parallelism, which is very rhythmic. It reads catchy.
3. Hunting.
Original text:
In the wind, the horn sounded and the general was hunting outside the borehole.
The grass is yellow in autumn, and the eagle eye is sharper; When the ice and snow melt, the horseshoe is extraordinarily brisk.
The arrow on the horn bow shot out, and the string sound roared with the wind! The hunting and horseback riding of generals and soldiers sped in the suburbs of Weicheng. Withered weeds can't cover up sharp eagle eyes; The snow melts, and the galloping hooves are more like the wind chasing leaves.
Appreciation: The content of the poem is just an ordinary hunting activity, but it is written with passion, boldness and strength.
The whole poem is divided into two parts. The first four sentences are the first part, writing the process of hunting; The last four sentences describe the general returning to camp in the evening. As for its artistic skills, Shen Deqian of A Qing Dynasty marveled at it: "Its composition, syntax and typesetting are excellent.