Altair, you look so slim.
Do you know that the pure weaver girl on the other side is looking far away?
She stretched out her slender white hands.
Work hard on the loom
You can't knit cloth all day.
Tears of missing wet the clothes.
The clear Tianhe is actually not deep.
But we are far apart.
The gurgling river separates us.
We can only be speechless and heartbroken.
Original text:
Distant Altair
Distant Altair, Jiao Jiao Hehan girl.
Skillful hands, make a loom.
There is no chapter all day, and tears are pouring down.
What's the difference between a clear river and a shallow one?
Between water and water, there are no words.
Distant Altair
(1) common sense of literature
Jumping Altair is selected from Nineteen Ancient Poems. Nineteen Ancient Poems is a set of mature five-character poems based on Yuefu folk songs in Han Dynasty and spread to the Six Dynasties. Because it is difficult to determine their authors and writing years, they are collectively called? Ancient poetry? Zhao Ming Wen Xuan received 19 poems, so it was called 19 ancient poems. His poems show the turbulent and dark social life and express his "sadness" about fate and life. Its artistic value is very high, its language is plain and simple, and it integrates narration, scenery description and lyricism, which indicates that the skills of five-character poetry have reached a mature stage.
(2) Appreciation point analysis
(1) Narrative and lyrical. Every sentence is narrative, and every sentence is lyrical; It not only concisely describes the story of the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl in the myth, but also truly expresses the sorrow and hatred linked through the ages.
(2) The use of overlapping words. There are ten sentences in the whole poem, six of which use overlapping words, which can turn monotony into fullness, play a very good auxiliary role in shaping the images of characters and scenery in the poem and beautify the rhythm of the poem.
Text annotation
This poem consisting of ten sentences can actually be divided into two parts. The first six sentences describe the sadness of women. The first two sentences are about the scene in the sky, which has both inspiring effects. There are many stars in the night sky, and only Altair and Vega are written here, because they have a beautiful and touching love legend. According to legend, the weaver girl is the granddaughter of the Emperor of Heaven, and she brocade all the year round. Because she married the cowherd in Tianhe privately, the brocade work was interrupted. The Emperor of Heaven was very angry and separated them. They were only allowed to meet once a year on July 7th. Thinking about women? The weaver girl on the earth will naturally think of her love when she sees these two stars. Three or four sentences explain Sifu's identity, and she is also a weaver girl. The third sentence describes her delicate hands, from which she can be associated with her beautiful figure. The fourth sentence says that she started the loom. Although the loom started, she couldn't knit a piece of cloth all day because she was too absorbed to knit. I still cry like rain when I am sad. This is written in five or six sentences. The first two sentences of the second part, that is, the seven or eight sentences of the whole poem, take care of the beginning of the poem, saying that the Milky Way between Altair and Vega is shallow, how far apart? The ninth and twelfth sentences further point out that although they are only separated by a clear and shallow galaxy, they are deeply attached to each other, but they can't get together to speak their minds. On the surface, she seems to be talking about Penny Weaver, but she doesn't seem to be talking about herself. However, why can't she knit sweaters all day? Why? Crying like rain? In fact, she used the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl as a metaphor, and wrote that she and her lover were in love, but they could not meet, reunite and tell their love together, so their hearts were very uncomfortable, so they were extremely sad, so they had the above? No chapters? 、? Zero as rain? The performance of. This second part also explains why she was sad before.
Textbook analysis
Overall appreciation: the transformation and blending of scenery, events, people and feelings, the in-depth conception at different levels, and the expression effect of overlapping words.
Introduce the text with the folk stories of Cowherd and Weaver Girl.
Distant Altair, Jiao Jiao Hehan girl.
? All the way? , write the distance; ? Bright? Write the bright stars. Overlap? All the way? And then what? Bright? Writing Altair and Vega at the same time gives people a visual feeling of vast night sky and bright stars. This is the poet looking at Altair and Vega in the Milky Way. Write from a perspective.
Skillful hands, make a loom.
The poet turned his attention to Vega and wrote Vega's weave. ? Slim? The beauty of hand shape, Zaza? Busy knitting, one shape and one sound. From far to near, the ancestors will leave things behind. ? Slim? And then what? Zaza? Shape, sound.
There is no chapter all day, and tears are pouring down. What's the difference between a clear river and a shallow one?
The weaver weaves cloth to meet the cowherd. However, I can't knit all day and cry like rain. The Milky Way is clear and shallow. How far apart can it be? But we can't meet. Reveal the contradiction between reality and desire. Things here (no chapter) people (no rain), and then people's minds.
Between water and water, there are no words.
? Yingying? Write the appearance of water, simple appearance; ? Pulse? Write about people's feelings and looks. ? Yingying? And then what? Pulse? The water looks and feels beautiful.
But across the water, but? Nothing to say Can only be affectionate, across the river. Scenes and feelings coexist, sad and moving. The contradictions revealed in these two sentences are clear, the expressions are profound, the scenes are mixed, the sounds and feelings are rich, and both refined and popular tastes are enjoyed, which is a masterpiece.