The whole poem "Mistake" has only nine lines and is divided into three sections. The poet expresses the loneliness, expectation and disappointment of a young woman who is tired of spring. There are only two lines in the first verse of the poem: "I walked through the south of the Yangtze River/I looked like a lotus flower opening and falling in the season". These two lines are arranged in the middle and lower space of all bars, which play the role of "poetic preface" and control the whole poem in meaning and mood. The first short sentence of six words implies that passers-by are in a hurry, and the second long sentence of fifteen words implies that the thinking woman has been waiting for a long time. In the second season, the five elements are the scenery imagined by passers-by, and what is really written is the thinking about women. Missing in my heart forever is an eternal theme in China's traditional poems. From The Book of Songs Lei to The Book of Songs Gentleman's Battle, from Li Yi's Jiangnan Qu to Li Bai's Bodhisattva Man in The Ancestor of One Hundred Generations of Songs: "There are people upstairs who are worried about the high-rise buildings", especially Bai Juyi's Sauvignon Blanc. Most of these poems were written by literati, but they expressed their thoughts and complaints about women in the guise of women. But "Mistaken by mistake" is innovative, observing the small town in the south of the Yangtze River with the eyes of prodigal passers-by, and imagining the feelings and mentality of a woman thinking alone in an empty room. It was spring in the south of the Yangtze River, and the poet rode alone through an empty city. Perhaps it is because he is also thinking about his lover, so he seems to feel the lonely heart of thinking about women upstairs "like a lonely small city", and spring has become the season when the east wind does not come and catkins do not fly. She heard the pounding of hooves in the street in the distance. Is that him coming back in the distance? But when I went to Qiu Lai in spring, how much waiting and expectation turned into bursts of melancholy? She didn't open the curtain of spring, but she was listening, looking forward to the approach of footsteps and knocking on her closed heart window. But-after all, it is "silence"-it is another "beautiful mistake". The poet seems to feel deeper sadness after deep expectation and disappointment, so the poet expresses his inner guilt in the last section: "My horseshoe is a beautiful mistake/I am not a passer-by." The lyric perspective of the poem and the whole poem is clear, and the lingering sound lingers for a long time.
Just nine lines, unique conception and rich imagination. The whole poem is clear, but unforgettable, just like falling asleep. This can not but be attributed to the author's careful application of the artistic skills of combining Chinese and western.