Rhyme: catchy and rhythmic. Obviously, the rhyme of Untitled is much better than that of Song of Eternal Sorrow. They are all placed on the body, and parallel prose is also very particular. Take parallel prose as an example. "Spring silkworms will weave until they die, and they will shed tears every night." "Even prose is prose. It's melodious to read in this way.
Content: Because the plot of obscure poems is not required to be complete, the application method is more flexible. In Untitled, the scenes of the east wind and flowers blend together, and with the homophonic sound of "silk" and the allusions of the bluebird, the poem is more abundant and intriguing. Or "Spring Silkworm ……", because the technique is obscure, the meaning can be understood in many ways. Now we can also use this sentence to describe those who have done their best, such as Zhou Enlai, and "We want two birds to be one, fly in the sky, grow together on the ground, two branches on a tree." Are not as rich in meaning as Spring Silkworm.
Theme: You can insinuate politics, express your resentment without being noticed, and avoid getting into trouble. There is an understanding that this untitled poem expresses resentment against Li Shangyin's talent. The poem is the poet's imaginary lover, referring to the ruler of the country, such as the emperor. Although the individual does not agree, it is also reasonable to combine Li Shangyin's own situation.
summary
Untitled is a poem about the poet's own love, and Song of Eternal Sorrow is about the love of others, both of which are very touching. But Untitled is richer in skill, content and theme than Song of Eternal Sorrow. Although its length is short, it contains no less emotion than Song of Eternal Sorrow, which is intriguing.
disadvantage?
Both the theme and the content of Untitled are too vague and obscure to accurately grasp the poet's intention. There are too many allusions to understand, not as well as the Song of Eternal Sorrow, which is suitable for all ages. The Song of Eternal Sorrow has a complete narrative, twists and turns, and it is moving. Untitled is purely emotional, so that readers and poets will be moved by the voice of * * *, which will be more difficult. In fact, it is still too obscure to reveal the bottom.
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