original text
I love the moonlit night, but I also love the starry sky. Once upon a time, in July and August in my hometown, when I was enjoying the cool in the yard, I loved to watch the dense stars in the sky.
Three years ago, there was a back door where I lived in Nanjing. Every night when I open the back door, I see a quiet night. Below is the vegetable garden, and above is the starry blue sky. Although starlight is tiny to our naked eyes, it makes us feel that light is everywhere.
Now at sea, facing the stars every night, I know them very well. I lay on the deck and looked up at the sky. There are countless stars hanging in the dark blue sky. The ship is moving, and so are the stars. They're so low, they're really shaky! Gradually my eyes blurred, and I seemed to see countless fireflies flying around me. The night at sea is soft, silent and dreamy. I look at many stars I know, and I seem to see them winking at me, and I seem to hear them whispering. And then forget everything. In the arms of the stars, I fell asleep laughing. I feel like a child, sleeping in my mother's arms now.
Learning point
First, polyphonic characters
Feel sleep
Count Shi (countless) Shi (countless)
Second, synonyms
Silence-quiet dream-tiny dream-tiny.
Third, antonyms
Vague, clear, silent-noisy
Dense-sparse
It's shaky, but it's safe.
Fourth, understand words.
Stars: Many dense stars.
Enjoy the cool: enjoy the cool.
Silence: no sound; Very quiet.
Stellar secret: Like the stars in the sky, it describes many things.
Tottering: It is very dangerous and is about to fall or collapse.
Half bright and half dark: sometimes bright and sometimes dark.
Dream: a dreamlike dreamland; Dream on.
Verb (abbreviation of verb) collocation
(Dense) Stars (Silent) Night (Starry) Blue Sky
Sixth, the expansion of words.
AABC words: faltering, gushing, clear-cut, polite, generous, Kan Kan talked with relish.
ABAC-style words: half bright and half dark, talking to yourself unhurried, vivid, vivid.
Seven, sentence analysis
1. Gradually my eyes blurred, and I seemed to see countless fireflies flying around me.
This sentence compares the swaying modality of countless stars I see when my eyes are blurred to "countless fireflies flying around me", which is very vivid and interesting and has a hazy and dreamy beauty.
2. The night at sea is soft, silent and dreamy.
Using rhetorical devices of parallelism, the author writes the softness, quietness and wonder of the sea in turn from the perspectives of touch, hearing and illusion, creating a fairy-tale artistic conception, giving people a dreamy aesthetic feeling and making readers strongly infected.
I look at many stars I know, and I seem to see them winking at me, and I seem to hear them whispering.
In this way, I am integrated with nature, and I pursue artistic conception, which makes people feel as if they are there, listening to their voices, getting their feelings and generating endless reverie.
Eight, problem induction
1. Read the text and think about the content.
In this paper, the "stars" are described in chronological order, and the scenes of "I" looking at the stars at different times and places are described.
2. In what order are these texts written?
In chronological order. Once upon a time, three years ago, now, there is another night.
3. Why does it feel different to look at the starry sky three times?
Because with the growth of the author's age and experience, the observation and understanding of the starry sky are gradually deepened and refined.
Nine, the theme of the text
In this paper, the "stars" are described closely in chronological order, and the scenes of "I" looking at the stars in different periods and places are described, expressing my love for the stars, nature, pursuit of light and yearning for a better life. For more textbooks, please pay attention to the official account of WeChat Yumeng School.
The author introduces Ba Jin (1904 ~ 2005), formerly known as Li Yaotang, born in Chengdu, Sichuan in 1904. After the founding of People's Republic of China (PRC), he served as vice chairman of the China Federation of Literary and Art Circles, vice chairman and chairman of the Chinese Writers Association, chairman of the Shanghai branch of the Writers Association, chairman of the Shanghai Federation of Literary and Art Circles and editor-in-chief of Harvest. The main works are: novel love trilogy (fog, rain and electricity) and torrent trilogy (home, spring and autumn); Novellas "Resting Garden" and "Cold Night"; Prose collections "People who defend peace", "Friendship Collection" and "Random Thoughts"; Prose, novel, close-up collection "New Sound Collection", "Anthem Collection", and many short stories, fairy tales, essays, etc.