Author: Bing Xin
I never refuse to throw away a piece of paper.
Save it forever.-Save it,
Folding into a very small boat,
Throw it into the sea from the boat.
Some were blown into the window of the ship by the wind,
Some are wet by the waves and stick to the bow.
I still fold every day and never give up.
I always hope that a place can only flow where I want it to go.
Mom, if you see a small white boat in your dream,
Don't be surprised that it dreams for no reason.
This was folded by your beloved daughter in tears.
Wanshui Qian Shan, please bring her love and sorrow home. There are many poems expressing maternal love in ancient and modern China and abroad, but this poem has its own uniqueness. With childlike innocence and innocence, the poet found an intermediary from children's game world-a paper boat, and used it to expand his feelings. In the first and second verses of the poem, I wrote: "I never refuse to throw away a piece of paper,/I always keep it", which means that the poet didn't do this until he went out on a long trip this time, but missed his mother for a long time. Folding into a Tiny Boat shows the number of stacked paper boats and deep thoughts for mother. After the poet "threw the paper boat from the ship into the sea", "some were blown to the window of the ship by the wind,/some were wet by the waves and stuck to the bow", and after throwing the carefully folded paper boat into the sea, he immediately wrote a heartbreaking result, suggesting that it is actually impossible for readers to cross the ocean to reach their mother, giving people a feeling of pessimism and despair; But the poet is still "not discouraged and superimposed every day, always hoping that one can only flow where I want it to go", which is convenient for my mother! As the saying goes, "Sincerity opens the stone". Can the poet's wish come true? In fact, this question is no longer important. Most importantly, this is the only way for poets to express their thoughts. Only in this way can the poet dispel his sadness and fully express his unforgettable thoughts.
In the third section, the poet misses him so much that he imagines: "Mother, if you see a very small white boat in your dream, don't be surprised that it will dream for no reason." If the paper boat can't float to mother's side, enter her dream! "This is your beloved daughter with tears in her eyes. Wanshui Qian Shan begged it to bring her love and sadness home. " Point out the theme, and the feelings reach the strongest state, which makes people feel disappointed. This is the most wonderful stroke in the whole poem. In this poem, it symbolizes the heart of missing mother and motherland and the poet's pure and beautiful wish. Bing Xin's poem is based on the style of a childlike child, and through the childlike action of "folding paper boats", she pinned her thoughts on her mother. The child's heart is the simplest, and the child's expectation is the single. However, this simple mind and single hope contain children's deepest feelings for their mothers. Over the years, thousands of children in Qian Qian and thousands of mothers in Qian Qian have been moved by this little poem, precisely because it "bears" the endless affection. (It has been compiled into the seventh-grade Chinese textbook for junior middle school published by Jiangsu Education Publishing House, the seventh-grade Chinese textbook for middle school published by People's Education Publishing House and the fifth-grade Chinese textbook for primary school published by People's Education Publishing House)
Bing Xin has been writing for children all her life. She once wrote essays on travel notes and foreign experiences, praising her mother's love and nature, which is the ideological core of her works. "With love, there is everything" is her famous saying. 1923 In early summer, Bing Xin graduated from yenching university. In August 17 of the same year, she went to study in the United States by mail ship Yorkshire from Shanghai. Arrived in Kobe, Japan on August 19, and visited Yokohama on August 2 1. Judging from the writing time, this poem was written by the poet on a seagoing ship that continued to sail to the other side of the ocean on the sixth day after his visit to Yokohama.
The sparkling waves and surging tides revived the poet's childlike innocence of loving the sea; Green sea water and flying seagulls make the poet close to nature again. In the sea life about ten days after starting from Wusongkou, the three pillars of Bingxin's early philosophy of "love"-maternal love, childlike innocence and nature, only "childlike innocence" and "nature" can be revived and reappeared at this time, while "maternal love" can't be close because it is far away from her mother. Therefore, the poet especially misses his mother, and even gets sick because he misses her, and recovers because he sees her in his dream. This poem expresses the poet's deep affection for his mother.
The first verse of the poem begins with his childish behavior-folding paper into a boat, saying that he refused to abandon a piece of paper on a seagoing ship and kept folding it into a boat and throwing it into the sea. Seemingly dull quatrains pave the way for the outbreak of feelings. The second section describes the whereabouts of the paper boat thrown from the ship. "Some were blown into the window of the ship by the wind, and some were wet by the waves and stained on the bow." All these destinations are not in line with the poet's sincere wishes. She "always wants a place that can only flow where I want it to go." To this end, she "is still not discouraged and folds every day." This shows the intensity and sincerity of her desire. As for where the paper boat is expected to flow, the poet did not make it clear in this section, which caused suspense and thought-provoking. The poet naturally understood that the paper boat could not flow to his mother, so the third verse of the poem turned out new ideas. The poet dreamed of seeing a white boat in his mother's dream. If this kind of imagination is still general, "don't wonder that it dreams for no reason" shows the strangeness of the poet's imagination. So, why not let mom be surprised by the dream of the boat? Poets use the method of "dying to show their will". At the end of the poem, he pointed out that the imaginary paper boat that entered his mother's dream was folded by her with tears. She prayed that the paper boat would bring her love for her mother and the sadness caused by being away from her mother to her side. This ending is the climax of the whole poem.
Missing my mother's feelings is abstract and easy to be vague. This poem is novel in conception, and the poet uses the technique of expressing emotion by supporting things, so the expression of feelings is vivid, concrete, implicit and profound. In addition, the lines of this poem are very long, and the intonation is slow, which echoes the long-standing yearning for the mother. "Never leave" means that feelings are persistent; "Abandon", discard at will. "One, one" shows a big number.
"Never lose heart" and "Everyday Up" have sincere feelings and strong wishes.
Tears in My Eyes and Sadness are unforgettable.
Folding into a Boat Although the boat is small, it contains deep feelings and strong wishes.
"Qian Shan is full of water, please bring her love and sorrow home." Because love and sorrow are integrated, because there is love missing, because there are endless worries about loneliness, she can only tell her mother, so love and sorrow should be taken away.
"Sorrow" refers to the loneliness, melancholy and pain of missing mother.
The last sentence: Pointing out the meaning of the question, the poet's feelings are expressed to the extreme, which makes people feel disappointed.
The "paper boat" in the poem symbolizes wandering loneliness, missing the heart of the motherland and the poet's pure and beautiful wish.
(To hold something to express one's ambition and to borrow something to express one's expression)
teaching program
Learning paper boat
(a), familiar with the whole poem to guide reading.
1. Please read the whole poem by yourself.
2. Teachers demonstrate reading. Read deeply. Some sentences need to be read in a sad and choked tone. Rhythm and stress are divided as follows:
Paper boat-send it to mom
backbone
I/never refuse/throw away/a piece of paper,
Always/keep-keep.
Stacked/one after another/very small/boats,
From the boat/into the sea.
Some were blown into the boat/window by the strong wind,
Some of them/got wet by the waves/stuck to the bow.
I/still/not discouraged/everyday/stack,
I always hope/have a place/where I can flow/I miss it/go.
Mom, if you/dream/see/a small/white boat,
Don't/surprise/dream for no reason.
This is/your beloved/daughter/tearful/folded,
Wanshui/Qian Shan, ask it/carrying/her love/and sorrow/going home.
(2) Analyze and interpret the whole poem.
1. Please imagine under what circumstances this poem was written by a poet according to the information given in the poem.
The waves are rough and the wind is strong. The poet sat on a bumpy cruise ship in the Pacific Ocean, far away from his relatives and heading for a strange country. I don't know when he can return to the embrace of his motherland and relatives. Poets feel more lonely and melancholy because they miss their motherland and relatives strongly.
2. Which poems in the first section express the poet's deep yearning for his mother and have a long history?
"Never refuse" and "forever" show that the poet didn't do this on this long trip, but his attachment to his mother has been strong for a long time. "11" points out that there are a large number of paper folding boats, which shows that the poet misses his mother deeply.
3. In the second season, the poet wrote about the heartbreaking results that happened immediately after the carefully folded paper boat was thrown into the sea, and wrote about the folding that he knew had no result or would not give up. What role did it play in expressing his feelings?
Whether it is possible in practice and whether the wish can be realized is not important to the poet. Most importantly, it is the only way for a poet to pin his thoughts and relieve loneliness and sadness. Only in this way can the poet's unforgettable feelings be fully expressed.
4. The third part is the imagination of the poet. What are the characteristics of this imagination? What role does it play in poetry?
Although the paper boat can't drift to her mother's side, it can certainly drift into her dream. This kind of imagination is novel, bold and magnificent, which fully shows the poet's strong yearning for his mother and points out the theme.
5. origami boat was originally a children's game. What does this behavior mean in the poem? What does the paper boat in the poem symbolize?
The poet takes paper boats as the topic and conveys feelings with things, which endows paper boats with special significance. The paper boat symbolizes the loneliness of wandering, the fragility of the soul at this time, the heart of missing the mother and the motherland, and the poet's pure and beautiful wish. The poet's origami boat shows that the poet's love for his mother and motherland is very deep.
(3) Solving problems
1. Why did the poet fold the paper boat and throw it into the sea?
The poet can't communicate with his mother on the boat, but he can only imagine that the paper boat thrown into the sea can hold her love for her mother in her arms.
2. Some paper boats folded by the poet were swept into the window by the wind, and some were wet by the waves and stuck to the bow, but why did she still fold them every day and never give up?
Because the poet holds eternal hope in his heart.
3. What is the crowning touch of the whole poem?
"This is your beloved daughter with tears, Wan Shui Qian Shan. Please let it bring her love and sadness home. "
4. Why does the origami boat burst into tears and make people sad?
Because I am far away from my mother, Qian Shan, I miss my mother very much. It is the hardest thing to miss her, so I'm in tears and heartbroken.
5. What kind of thoughts and feelings does this poem express?
This poem expresses love and yearning for mother; Expressed gratitude and return to maternal love.
6. What are the advantages of using a "paper boat" as the title of this poem?
Poets use paper boats to spread their feelings, making abstract feelings concrete and sensible, full of childlike innocence, and suitable for expressing children's mentality. I never waste a piece of paper,
Keep it-keep it,
Fold a boat,
Abandon the ship into the sea.
Some were blown to the boat to shake the window,
Some waves are wet and soaked in the bow.
I'm not disappointed every day,
One can only hope that it always flows where I want it to go.
Mom, if you dream of a small white boat,
Don't be surprised if this is an unfounded dream.
This is your beloved daughter with tears in her eyes.
The test of long-distance travel, it carries her love and sadness.