The story of the poet tempering poetry

Wang Anshi's

Boarding Guazhou

Guazhou is at the mouth of Beijing, separated by several mountains.

Jiang Nanan spring breeze is green, when will the bright moon shine on me?

The third sentence is spring breeze and green Jiang Nanan.

The spring breeze blows Jiang Nanan, etc. , later changed to.

The spring breeze in Jiang Nanan is green.

Mr. Zhu Ziqing's beautiful lyric prose "Moonlight on the Lotus Pond" describes the scene of the author strolling alone and enjoying the moonlight on the lotus pond, expressing the author's dissatisfaction with the dark social reality at that time and longing to go to the natural scenery and find a quiet place to relieve boredom. The structure and layout of the article are rigorous and meticulous, and the words are beautiful and euphemistic, which makes a quiet lotus pond full of poetry and painting, giving people a strong sense of art. The last paragraph used the word "push": "This makes me miss Jiangnan after all. -think like this, suddenly look up and feel that it is already your own door; Gently push the door in, there is no sound, and my wife has been sleeping for a long time. " Mr. Zhu Ziqing's prose has always been famous for its rigorous and profound use of words, and he attaches great importance to the consideration and deliberation of words. There are profound reasons why the word "push" is used instead of "knock" in this paper. There are four reasons: first, in connection with the content mentioned in the article, the author walked out of the house alone and went for a walk in the lotus pond under the moon because "my heart is quite uneasy these days." At that time, "my wife was patting leap in the room and humming a sleep song in a daze." In this case, "I quietly put on a big shirt and ran out the door." He took it with him. He didn't close the door, let alone lock it, so he came back from a walk and naturally "pushed" into the house without knocking at the door. Second, his wife has been in a daze for a long time, and when he returns home, he will "sleep for a long time". And the wife knows that her husband hasn't come back yet, of course, she won't close the door, let alone lock it, otherwise it's unreasonable, just push the door and don't knock. Third, Zhu Ziqing entered his own door, not visiting relatives and friends at night. Naturally, you don't have to knock. Besides, his wife and children are already asleep, so knocking at the door can't disturb them. Fourth, the atmosphere of the full text is quiet: quiet lotus pond, quiet moonlight, quiet trees, everything is quiet. In such an atmosphere, if the word "knock" is played, although the sound is strong, it brings vitality to the quiet night, but does it not destroy the harmony and unity of the article's emotions? At the same time, it also violates the author's psychological modality of "detachment and quietness".