Title: INSIDE THE RIVER
dark, deeply, a red
all levels moving
a given surface
< p>break this, step downfollow your right
foot naked in
to another body
put on the river
p>like a fleeing coat
a garment of motion
tremendous, immortal
find a still root
to hold you in it
let flowing create
a new, inner being:
as the source in the mountain
gives water in pulses
these can be felt at
the heart of the current
and here it is only
one wandering step
forth, to the sea
your freed hair floating
out of your brain
wait for a coming
and swimming idea
live like the dead
in their flying feeling
loom as a ghost
when life pours throught it
crouch in the secret
released underground
with the earth of the fields
all around you, gone
into purposeful grains
that stream like dust
in a holy hallway
weight more changed
than that of one
now being born
let go the root
move with the world
as the deep dead move
opposed to nothing
p>
release. enter the sea
like a winding wind
no. rise. draw breath
sing.see no one is very stream of consciousness A little poem. . .
It is about the whole process of the author walking barefoot in the river, letting the river water submerge him to the ends of his hair, and gaining some insights in the ethereal environment. (Considering the specific difficulty of this behavior, it is probably just a dream of the author... haha~)
The first paragraph is walking on the river
The deep and dark river, It looks like layers of surging fluid. . .
The author walked leisurely across the surface of the river, and the river water wrapped around him like a flowing coat.
The environment that should be noisy and abnormal (such as the rushing river) also appears to be extremely peaceful due to the author's decomposition of actions (look at the verbs: break, step down, follow). The sense of tranquility here is enhanced by the last sentence: a motionless bottom, does it refer to the river bed, the author's feet, or the peace after the restless restlessness in his heart?
Second paragraph: The still water flows deeply, but the rhythm is leisurely
The root at the end of the above article becomes the subject here. The river is still flowing, you stand and watch, and realize with your heart: It turns out that you can actually hear the pulse of the river in this void. This pulse gives life to the river and tempts you to wander outside. Your hair spreads out like water plants in the water, just like your free thoughts. .
The third paragraph: The Call of Styx
Only after reading this paragraph can you have a general understanding of the author's intention. . .
When your thoughts are floating in this ethereal space, you will feel that the idea of ??death (live like the dead) is calling to you unconsciously. When you are full of life, this feeling will loom like a ghost hiding in the corner. But now. . . Death feels like a sea of ??quicksand, staining life with rust and slowly eating away at it. . .
Paragraph 4: Ending
Above the Styx, is the weight of life really lighter than in this world? Leave it alone.
Let go and let yourself float in the long river, like a dead body,
Until. . .
The scenery of blue sea and blue sky at the mouth of the sea attracted me again like fate.
My body slowly floated up in the sea water, breathed, and then opened my eyes. The ballads I hummed to my heart sounded like fairy music at this moment. . .
Looking around, the surroundings are ethereal. . .
The river in the poem may refer to the flow of the author's thoughts, or it may refer to the hustle and bustle of the world.
A little opinion, for reference only.