Teach you how to write poetry: Poetry techniques 56

Shiyun talks about poetry and teaches you how to write poetry: Poetry techniques 56? Change without changing the appearance

Learn a poetic technique in one minute without changing the appearance

Poetry/Xuanyuan Shike

Official, what should I say to you?

You don’t listen to the law, but listen to Fahai.

You don’t listen to Zheng Xiaolu, but you listen to Bald Donkey

You abandon Jinshan and go to Jinshan Temple instead

You should just talk and listen< /p>

Is it better to be a wooden fish or a fish in water

Is it better to be compassionate or to have my heart

Is it better to chant sutras or to be serious?

If I hadn't been so smart

I had prepared a rubber boat when the water flooded the temple

You would have turned into seafood

If I hadn't had a wingspan longer than Liu Xuande's

You have been cut into pieces

Xiaoqing will not agree, the angry youth will not agree, and the people will not agree either Human heart

They made a video of you and posted it on the Internet

Human flesh search, human skin search, even the pubic bone can be searched

How will you lose your face then? Yu Shicun

By then you won’t be able to find the Water Cube even if you cry

Taking advantage of today’s college entrance examination, the forum has been closed

Follow me home and browse

Make a pot of realgar wine and cook six tea eggs with Pu'er

Two Xiaoqings, one big one for me, you eat Xiaosan

?Technique:

A change of appearance without a change of appearance? A change of appearance without a change of appearance? I think the most relevant thing in the world is Peking Opera. Take the red-faced Guan Gong as an example. From ancient times to today, no matter who plays Guan Gong, he always has that face. As long as you recognize the red painted face and what kind of head is behind the face, it doesn't matter.

Reshaping without changing the appearance refers to the technical method of changing the non-core part of a fixed combination into another fixed combination in poetry creation. Through this technique, the novelty and strangeness of the poem can be greatly enhanced.

?Poem:

By then you won’t be able to find the Water Cube even if you cry

The first draft should be:

By then You can't even find a place to cry

The poet cunningly replaced the "land" that is a fixed collocation of "place" with "water cube", forming another fixed collocation "water cube". It gives readers a refreshing, novel, and non-greasy feeling.

?Sentence:

1.

First draft:

She glanced out the window

The sky was blue. Wuyun

Final draft:

She glanced out the window

The sky was so blue that she couldn't understand it

2.

First draft:

In spring, dive into the dark underbelly of the subway

It’s better to take a bus

Final draft:

In spring, dive into Entering the dark hinterland of the subway

It is better to take a bus of Honest Bus

3. Changing the phonetic and phonetic characters is also a kind of "not changing the face"

First draft:

You will have a cup of brandy

I will have a cup of coffee

Final draft:

You will have a cup of brandy

I will have a cup Garfield

?Key points:

1. Before and after the change, the combination must be a well-known fixed combination, otherwise it will not be effective.

2. There must be a wide gap between before and after the change, otherwise the effect will still not be achieved. Give an example of failure:

First draft: The summit discusses the iceberg, and heads of countries are present

Final draft: The summit discusses the iceberg, and the leaders of all countries are present

First Compared to the leader, there is still nothing new.

Modify again: The summit discusses the iceberg, and all countries attend without a clue

3. The "face" that remains unchanged, that is, the part that remains unchanged, must It needs to be identifiable, otherwise it will confuse people. Give an example of failure:

First draft: The girl is greedy and wants to eat a bowl of ice cream

Final draft: The girl is greedy and wants to eat a bowl of ice cream to take a shower

Change It's so unrecognizable that readers can't guess the original meaning.

Modification: The girl is greedy and wants to eat a bowl of ice and snow.

?Perception:

Some techniques are eccentric and can save lives at critical moments.

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