The person I love-
Like the elves around the devil!
Personality is always unpredictable,
I willingly fell into this beautiful swamp.
The best in the world,
I want to dedicate them to you.
As I swore under the laurel tree—
I'd rather subvert the whole world, I just want to straighten your reflection.
But time is always passing!
I'm afraid our life is too late. ...
Maybe we are getting old.
At that time, I had to, before that,
Tell you a secret slowly-
I like you when you were young,
But I love your beauty destroyed by years.
1 the use of words like this in basic metaphorical poems is probably a metaphor: "I love you-like an elf around the devil!"
2 exaggeration deliberately exaggerates or reduces the nature and characteristics of things. Used to remind the essence of things, contrast the atmosphere, strengthen the rendering power, and cause the associative effect: "I would rather subvert the whole world, I just want to straighten your reflection." Obviously I don't have that ability, but I strengthened my rendering power.
3 Synaesthesia The so-called synaesthesia is a rhetorical way that uses various senses to communicate with each other and uses one sense to describe another. The application of synaesthesia can get unforgettable results, and its expressive function is irreplaceable. It can turn abstraction into image and make readers understand it better. It can arouse people's rich associations; Can be eclectic and lively; It can be accurately expressed and has far-reaching influence; It can enrich the artistic conception of poetry and form a special artistic beauty: "My personality is always unpredictable, but I willingly fall into this beautiful swamp." The mystery and beauty of the swamp show abstract characteristics.
Empathy in order to highlight a strong feeling, the writer consciously gives objective things some characteristics that are consistent with his own feelings, but actually do not exist. This rhetorical device is called empathy. Using empathy rhetoric, we should first move subjective feelings to things, and then set off subjective emotions with infected things, so that things and people can better express people's strong feelings and exert rhetorical effects: "I want to give the best in the world to you who is equally beautiful."
Contrast is a figure of speech that compares two different things or two aspects of the same thing together. Using contrast, we must have a deep understanding of the contradiction of what we want to express. Two things to be compared or two aspects of the same thing should be opposite, otherwise there will be no contrast: "I like what you looked like when you were young, but I love your beauty destroyed by years." Beautiful faces of young women and faces destroyed by years.
Quote and quote ready-made words (idioms, poems, aphorisms, allusions, etc. ) to improve the effect of language expression can be divided into two types. The argument is conclusive, convincing, inspiring, concise and elegant: "I like the way you looked when you were young, but I love your beauty destroyed by years." This sentence is from marguerite duras's "Lover". I modified it a little, adding a little rhyme.
Look at another song I wrote.
Snow in winter
But very superficial.
Covered everything in my memory
The autumn flowers have withered.
The wind is swaying.
It's too late to say goodbye to this world.
The season to meet you is summer.
Our backs are gilded on that long street.
On that cloudy day, I lost my mood.
Walking alone
Once the horizon of two people
A windy summer
You start sitting by the window.
Look at the flames all over the sky
Every day when the wind blows
I crossed again.
Your lonely window
7 parallelism arranges three or more sentences with similar structural length, consistent tone, related meaning or the same meaning. Strengthen the language situation and language atmosphere, make the article more rhythmic, more organized, and more conducive to expressing strong feelings (expression effect). At first I only wrote two paragraphs, winter and autumn. If I add a spring or summer, it constitutes a parallelism.
A pair of phrases or sentences with the same number of words, the same structure and symmetrical meaning, expressing two opposite or similar meanings. They are neat and symmetrical, with strong sense of rhythm, strong generality, easy to remember and musical aesthetic feeling: the first two paragraphs are basically dual.
Metaphor is rich in imagination, writing things into adults, or writing people into things, or writing things into things, writing things into things, writing things into things. It can stimulate readers' imagination and make the article more vivid. Analogy can be divided into personification and imitation: "Autumn flowers have no time to bid farewell to this world." Flowers don't say goodbye to the world as people write.
10 Repeat a word and sentence repeatedly in order to emphasize a certain meaning and express a certain feeling: "
A windy summer
You start sitting by the window.
Look at the flames all over the sky
Every day when the wind blows
I crossed again.
Your lonely window "
Blown by the wind ... repeated.
165438+ makes people think, and makes the expression have outstanding images, distinctive features, concrete and vivid effects: "The season to meet you is summer, and our backs are gilded on that long street." Xiachang Street summed up all the time and place where I met her.
I won't give the rest of the examples one by one, but only the definition and function.
12 asking questions in order to attract others' attention, deliberately ask questions first and then answer them yourself. Function: attract attention and inspire readers to think; Contribute to clear hierarchy and compact structure; It can better describe the ideological activities of the characters.
13 rhetorical question (provocation, rhetorical question, rhetorical question): express definite meaning in the form of a question, negative in the form of a positive, positive in the form of a negative, only ask without answering, and the answer is implied in the rhetorical question. Function: strengthen tone, make people think, stimulate readers' feelings, deepen readers' impression, and enhance the momentum and persuasiveness of words.
14 irony: use words or sentences that are contrary to the original intention to enhance the expression effect. Some satirize and expose, while others express intimate and friendly feelings.
15 association: seeing something will lead to association with something, that is, imagination.
16 pun: Using the polysemy and homophonic (or homophonic) conditions of words, a sentence is intentionally made to have a double meaning, that is, pun. Function: It can make the language express implicit humor, deepen the meaning and impress people.
17 Ding Zhen: Ding Zhen is also used as a thimble. Use the end of the previous article as the beginning of the next article, and connect it from beginning to end for more than two times, so that the adjacent sentences or fragments or chapters can be handed down and connected end to end, which is symbolized as "ABC, CDE". This rhetorical device is also called thimble, thimble or couplet bead. The use of definite figures of speech not only makes the sentence structure neat and the tone coherent, but also.
18 intertextuality: intertextuality, also known as intertextuality, is a rhetoric method commonly used in China's ancient poems. In China's ancient poems, the meaning of a sentence (or phrase) is divided into two sentences (or phrases), and the meanings of the upper and lower sentences should be complementary in interpretation, which is intertextuality. The old saying goes like this: "cross-reference, but see the text."
19 loop: In short, loop is a kind of forward reading and reverse reading.
Call: When writing an article, call someone or something that is not in front of you directly and talk to him or her. This rhetorical device is called calling.