Zhang Xian
Pavilion, Yi Shuibi. Whenever flowers are in music, they are happy everywhere. At other times, watch the spring scenery hand in hand. Fireflies fly over autumn nights now.
Bianhe is like a narrow band. As light as a leaf, how to take it? Broken clouds and lonely mountains. Wandering upstairs, endless memories.
(1) What kind of picture does the word begin with "Ting Bai Ping, Heng Shui Bi"? A brief comment. (4 points)
(2) What is the main expression of homesickness in this word? Please analyze it briefly. (4 points)
(1) The answer example depicts a bright picture: the apples on the pavilion are in full bloom, as white as snow; Tiaoxi is full of green waves and clear water. (4 points)
Analysis of this topic mainly examines the ability to understand the content of poetry. To answer such questions, we need to grasp the characteristics of a given scene and grasp its tone as a whole. For example, from "white" and "blue", we can know that this scene is a happy scene and this situation is a happy mood, and then summarize the characteristics of the artistic conception or picture, and then describe it in concise language.
(2) Comparison of answer examples. (65,438+0) The poet compares the gorgeous spring scenery in his hometown with the bleak autumn scenery in a foreign land today, and compares the indulgence and high spirits in the past with the loneliness and depression of high-rise buildings today, and deduces people's homesickness layer by layer in the alternation of festivals and events. (3 points) (if meaningful)
Analyze this topic to examine and analyze the ability of poetry expression skills. When answering, first point out the expression skills. Judging from the content of the upper and lower films, this word mainly expresses homesickness through the comparison between spring and autumn, the joy of the past and the loneliness of today.
Make an appreciative comment
This is a homesick remark. The whole word transforms time and space with great openness and harmony, and deduces the alternation of plot order and the change of events. The poet compares the gorgeous spring scenery in his hometown in the past with the bleak autumn scenery in a foreign land today, and compares the indulgence and high spirits in the past with the loneliness and depression of today's lonely building. Through the overall layout of the comparison between the past and the present, the depth and intensity of emotions are strengthened vertically.
The first part recalls the scenes of spring outing, feasting and parting in the past, and shows the great changes of life in the past and present through the contrast of scenery color and environmental atmosphere. The first two sentences begin with the spring scenery of the day, indicating the time, present and place. Diving is jumping stones. The author's hometown is Xing Wu, Zhejiang. Tiaoxi area is famous for its beautiful scenery. Ci writes about the spring scenery of hometown, and forms a bright picture with unique scenery with bright colors such as white apples and clear water: the apples on Tingshang are in full bloom, as white as snow; Tiaoxi is full of green waves and clear water. The words "white" and "blue" are colored in appropriate shades, which shows the infinite spring in the south of the Yangtze River. Because of the scenery, three or four sentences deliberately depict the beautiful scenery of the past, wander among the flowers, feel the mountains and rivers, and revel in the joys of the feast. In two sentences, the time is "whenever" and the space is "everywhere". Emphasize that you are always there, happy when you meet flowers and happy when you meet seats, so as to improve your writing style and promote your feelings. Enjoying yourself is an armchair strategist. Then use "watching the spring scenery hand in hand at other times" to pack the memories of the old tour. Parting and meeting, the feelings of words have changed. This sentence is a connecting link between the preceding and the following, turning around in secret, and falling directly from the sentence of "firefly" in the last movie. The hometown party in the past has suddenly become a lonely place in today's foreign land; The beautiful spring scenery in my memory suddenly turned into the bleak scene of fireflies in autumn night. In the blink of an eye, the scene suddenly changed. The first five sentences of the last movie are virtual scenes, which are opened layer by layer; The last two sentences changed from the past to the present.
Through the movie "Bian River, Like a Narrow Belt", two sentences were born out of love and melted into the scene, blending the winding river with endless homesickness, creating an artistic conception of endless water and homesickness. At the bottom, "I am as light as a leaf, how can I get it?" It is the infinite hope from the scene. The leaves on the waves are afraid to drift with the tide, and they can drift to the hometown where they miss day and night. But the author said that even if the river is narrow and light as a leaf, it is still difficult to go home, so he wrote the sad feelings of wanting to go home. Then change it, from overlooking to looking up. The author yearns for his hometown, stares at the distance, but looks at the vast sky, only seeing the broken clouds floating leisurely and the loneliness of drifting away; At the end of the day, a touch of green hills covered my eyes. Judging from the whole word, this sentence is particularly high and wide. The wider the scope of this word, the longer the emotion it arouses. In this sentence, the cloud is a floating "broken cloud", and the emu is a "loner" who has lost himself from the group, so as to set off his wandering life and lonely situation, which is a wonderful combination. At the end of the day, the distant shadow of the green hills gives people a feeling of returning to the road and the future. At the end of the word, the scenery overlooking from a height naturally transitions to people overlooking from a height. The sentence "Endless Memories" is extremely sensational. The word "Don't forget" echoes the last movie from a distance, conveying a kind of melancholy that we can't meet each other because of lovesickness. Looking back on the past, it is difficult to celebrate, and the past is empty; In front of my thoughts, I wander upstairs, and I can't take it back. The whole word ends with the self-image of wandering upstairs, which is sad and touching, more than enough.