To write an article about a person, we must first determine the characteristics of this person and what to write about him. For example. For example, you want to write about a good friend of yours. Write that he is very enthusiastic and loves to help others, so think of some examples first, such as how to help the children next door, how to help you and your classmates, how to help the old man who is about to cross the road on the way, and so on. Remember! Examples are a good way, which can not only enrich your articles, but also give people an empty feeling and increase the number of words instantly. Write in detail, write one thing in detail, and then write a few things briefly. Just use the most pleasing structure-the total score. Grasp the composition of primary school students in general. First, improve the ability to understand and express things. Mr. Ye Shengtao, a famous educator in China, pointed out: "Writing anything depends on knowledge and experience. What kind of knowledge and experience can make you write something. On the other hand, if you don't have the ability to express understanding, you can't write a good composition. " Second, take the cognitive structure as the core of the composition, including learning knowledge, observing accumulation, memory storage, training thinking, enriching imagination, cultivating emotion and exercising will; From talking about writing, scrutinizing and revising, reading more books and writing more. Third, establish the concept of big composition and combine listening, speaking, reading and writing organically. The second is to make clear the purpose of writing and be innovative; Third, the selection of materials should be based on evidence; Fourth, we should pay attention to writing skills and arrange the structure of the article; Fifth, we should pay attention to the segmentation of the article and list the subheadings and composition outlines in advance; Sixth, we should pay attention to the writing and usage of the article; Seventh, we should use language skillfully and use thought to schedule language. Learn five ways to conceive: praise people with things, express their feelings directly, reason with things, touch the scene and express their feelings with things. Fourth, the composition goal is decomposed year by year: first-level words, second-level sentences, third-level fragments, fourth-level chapters, fifth-level synthesis and sixth-level improvement. V. Implementing Five Trainings According to the principle that cognition is the core of composition, around the core of developing students' psychological mechanism, five trainings have been carried out in a down-to-earth manner: (1) Word training. Learn to master many words. Master the golden key to using words: contact with things you are familiar with; Contact your own life reality; Contact your knowledge of language and writing. Use the method of "ten quotations" to combine word learning with oral training. The "Top Ten Quotations" are: 1, analyzing glyphs; 2. Use teaching AIDS; 3. Look at the pictures and learn words; 4. Word formation and expansion; 5. Choose words to fill in the blanks; 6. collocation of words; 7. Adjust the word order; 8. Words used to move the scene; 9. Word classification; 10, conjunctions into sentences. Enrich the content of oral training, so that I can accumulate a large number of words that I can speak and use, and lay a solid foundation for writing. (2) Sentence training. As long as it is a sentence, it includes two aspects: one is about people, things, things and scenery, and the other is about purpose. However, some teachers do not use pictures and things to seriously teach students the methods of observation, understanding, analysis and expression when instructing students to say a sentence. They just take out a picture or something for students to say and write a sentence. Students don't know why to say and write a sentence, how to say and write a sentence, and what sentence patterns to say and write, which leads to a single, dull and lifeless composition tone. Students can be taught to speak and write a sentence with four complete elements, four sentence patterns and nine sentence patterns, according to pictures, things, dialogues and exercises. Students will use different sentence patterns and sentence patterns to express different thoughts, feelings, attitudes and purposes in their compositions. (3) Paragraph training. Combination of eight segments: the development of things is a sequential segment, time is a sequential segment, and spatial transformation is a sequential segment, a general and substructure segment, a causal segment, a turning segment, a progressive segment, and a parallel segment. In order to understand the law of occurrence and development of objective things. No matter what kind of paragraph, it describes the development of things and people's understanding of things, that is, the content and the center of the paragraph. Like a sentence, it is also a description of people, things, things and scenery, and it also expresses a meaning. Just to make a sentence clearer and deeper. (4) Text training. A chapter consists of paragraphs. Through the knowledge and methods of examining topics, making ideas, selecting materials, planning articles, defining methods and terms, through the four expression methods of narration, description, lyricism and discussion, the methods of beginning and end of articles, transition and echo, and the knowledge and methods of various article genres. Learn to write narrative and practical articles with clear center, complete meaning and appropriate details. (5) On-site training. Use on-site training to better understand writing from the content. Through various composition teaching activities such as "centering", "selecting materials", "composition consultation meeting", "Xiao Zhuge grade examination meeting" and "wonderful word competition meeting", we can learn composition knowledge and writing methods vividly and concretely from the activities. In addition, you can also carry out various activities inside and outside the school, such as skipping rope, tug-of-war, kicking shuttlecock, ball games, endorsement competitions, etc., and learn how to write competition compositions; Carry out voluntary labor inside and outside the school and learn how to write labor scenes; Hold poetry recitals and lectures to learn how to write conference scenes and experiences; Learn how to write travel notes and travel notes by visiting and browsing places of interest. Learn to observe methods and pay attention to things around you. "Pay attention to everything and you will learn. The cultivation of human feelings is the article." Through on-site life composition, I further realized that life is fertile ground for composition. So as to learn to describe things, express true feelings, cultivate the sentiments of truth, goodness and beauty, and cultivate a good style of writing. Implement "mutual evaluation and mutual reform" to cultivate students' thinking independence and creativity. After students write their compositions, organize group comments. Learn the advantages of other people's compositions first, and then point out the shortcomings in their own compositions with critical eyes and suggestions for improvement. Rewrite on this basis, so that students can learn something from each article they write. Writing an honest self "writing an honest self" is what the old educator Mr. Ye Shengtao said. It aims to create a colorful "independent" composition world. The so-called "autonomy" means that students are free to think and write without being restricted by rules and regulations. "Independent" composition means "speaking from the heart", acting spontaneously, showing self-style, and embodying distinctive personality. We should break away from the old composition teaching method, let students write in an "independent" state, shed affectation and imitation, give them fresh imagination and rich creativity, and what is waiting for harvest will be colorful colors, fresh fruits and full of vitality. When writing, it often happens in the classroom: some students are exhausted and pour out what they want to say in a few words, which is shriveled; Some students are full of thoughts, and if there is running water in their minds, or gurgling, or ups and downs, their works are eloquent. The reason is, of course, closely related to the adequacy of writing materials. However, another important factor must not be ignored, that is, how well imagination is played. According to the research of modern brain physiology, the human brain can be divided into four functional parts, namely, perception part, judgment part, storage part and imagination part. For most people, the first three parts focus on development, while the imaginary part is ignored. According to the research and test, the average person only uses 15% of his imagination, which has great potential. When learning to write, we must attach importance to the development of imagination. People say that science begins with imagination. If people don't fantasize about flying like birds and swimming like fish, where will there be today's planes and submarines? The same is true of writing articles. If you use your imagination and let your thoughts have wings, you will be able to explore up and down, roam in the wild and get very rich writing materials. To develop imagination, we should choose a non-directional, jumping and free way, that is, to extrapolate and think without restriction. Generally speaking, people often think about problems according to certain conventions and angles, and the scope of thinking is relatively narrow, while imagination is not thinking step by step, but thinking freely without any constraints, and thinking is fully divergent. Divergent thinking can form images of many things that have never been seen before and create unprecedented new images. Simple mistakes often made in writing The most common mistakes made by primary school students in writing are writing off topic or off topic. Another common problem is poor writing and insufficient vocabulary. If you add the content of "unconstrained style", write an impossible thing in real life at random, or make trouble or have a negative impact, it will be miserable. There are several reasons: (1) improper selection of materials: especially the composition based on pictures, not according to the pictures, and "creating" at will. (2) Lack of vocabulary: the whole description of "happy" is "happy" and there are no other adjectives; (3) Inconsistent sentences: especially English-style Chinese, such as "Xiaoli dropped her textbook" (the correct statement is "Xiaoli dropped her textbook"). (4) Incomplete conception and improper details: I wrote more than half at the beginning, and when I got to the central idea of the theme, I took two sentences, and the ending was even more hasty, making the mistake of not highlighting the theme. (5) Insufficient observation and description: For example, there are no specific examples for the description of naughty younger brother. Elementary school composition: The easiest way to write a composition by looking at pictures is to make sentences according to a single picture, then connect the sentences of a single picture together and add some coherent words, descriptions and adjectives to meet the basic requirements. Middle school composition: Narrative is the easiest way to master: First, don't worry about the number of words, describe and explain a person (such as my beloved) and an event (such as my unforgettable event) in one breath, as long as the words are fluent, you can pass the test; If you work hard on content and skills, you can get high marks. The mistakes that students often make include not grasping the key points, insufficient vocabulary, insufficient subject matter, and poor association. You should practice more.
I praise the faithful pine and cypress, I praise the hedge chrysanthemum against the west wind, I praise the proud sludge of the lotus, but I praise the proud snow bloom of the plum blossom.
When all the flowers wither, only plum blossoms are full of vitality. Facing the snowflakes flying all over the sky, standing proudly in the cold wind. In the middle of winter, the ground is frozen, the weather is cold, and the plum blossoms in the snow are so beautiful. Stock trading is fragrant and refreshing.
White flowers are red, and the petals are smooth and transparent, carved like platinum or jasper, which is somewhat elegant. Some are as bright as the morning glow, some are as white as snow, and some are as green as jasper. Plum blossoms bloom sooner or later. On the same plum tree, you can see all kinds of flowers. Some shy, pink buds are fresh and lovely; Some just bloomed, and a few little bees got in and greedily sucked pollen; Some bloom for a long time, and the pink petals make people love; Plum blossoms, which used to be bustling, now have withered petals. When the wind blows the flowers, don't worry that the petals will break. Plum blossoms are not delicate flowers. The colder the weather, the more snow, the more vitality and delicacy it will bloom. There is a saying in the ancients: "The sword front comes from sharpening, and the plum blossom fragrance comes from bitter cold." It is not the gentle spring breeze that blows it, but the cold wind; It is not the cool and sweet rain that moistens it, but the cold ice and snow; It is not the bright sunshine that shines on it, but a ray of setting sun in the cold. Only a challenging life is a good life. It was a proud fragrance in the cold, and she smiled more brightly in the face of fluttering snowflakes. It never competes with flowers for bright spring and never shows off its beauty. It has a pair of pride and is never arrogant. Every winter morning, a charming and elegant fragrance wafts from the window.
What makes poets and painters in ancient and modern times full of praise is not only elegant and graceful, but also regarded as the national essence for its ice muscle jade bone and sharp Liuxiang. Plum blossom, with its noble, strong and modest character, gives people the motivation to work hard.
The color of plum blossoms is gorgeous but not demon.
The fragrance of plum blossoms is elegant.
Meihua's posture is ancient and exquisite.
Isn't this our construction worker? Whether the weather is cold or hot, whether it is windy or rainy, whether it is cold or freezing, they all work hard in their jobs.
I want to learn plum blossom, and I want to be like plum blossom.
Reflecting the truth with a little thing is a public service advertisement to welcome the Olympic Games. If everyone does a little, society will take a big step forward. For another example, things should be small and good, not small and evil. It is said that murder and arson all start from life, usually petty theft, and over time, murder and robbery. Doing good deeds often will definitely pay off in the future. Just plug in a few examples.
That maternal love remains in my heart.
5? 12 after the Wenchuan earthquake, news reports and pictures from the disaster area have been lingering in people's minds. People lament the fragility and tenacity of life. Countless touching scenes let us re-examine the world we are used to, re-measure the distance between greatness and ordinary, and re-recognize the brilliance of human nature and true love.
Mother, the greatest person in the world, maternal love is an eternal topic in the world.
The earthquake happened on the first day after Mother's Day, which was undoubtedly a heavy blow to the lives and hearts of countless mothers.
That is a woman who has just been a mother for three or four months. When she was found, there was no trace of life. When she died, she still kept her knees on the ground, and the whole upper body crawled forward, supporting her body with her hands and protecting her baby with her body. "Dear baby, if you can live, you must remember that I love you." This is the last sentence she left to her child by text message, which is the best proof of a mother's unreserved love for her child.
Or a baby of 3 or 4 months, or a mother who is far away from the world. She held her beloved child in her arms. When people found them, the children were lucky to be alive, and their red faces were in sharp contrast with their mothers' faces.
Death means that they will never hear their children say to them rationally, "Mom, I love you!" " "
Those mothers who lost their souls lost their beloved children forever, and their pain made everyone who saw them heartache. Take a wooden comb, son, and let mom comb your hair for the last time! Climb up the ruins and call your name, child, child, answer! Mom is waiting for you! Hold the hand of the dead child and shake it silently. Wake up! Kid! Open your eyes! Mom is by your side!
How many teachers died under the ruins in this earthquake? There are many mothers among them. There is such a mother as a teacher. Saved thirteen students, but was ruthlessly taken away by death, leaving a one-and-a-half-year-old daughter. A mother and son are staring at both sides of the glass. They are victims. At the same time, mother is also a medical worker. She wants to wake up from the grief of the "small family" and devote herself to the help of "everyone". She conveyed her apologies to the children with her eyes, but she was so determined.
Mom, dear mom, maternal love is absolutely invisible. She propped up the sky, paved the road and set up the sail with her weak body.
Mother, lovely mother, in such an era that people always criticize "people are not old", maternal love is still the main theme of true feelings.
Mother, dear mother, she is great in the ordinary and blooms in the wind and rain.
Stand back, stick to it, and don't make moms cry again!
Appreciation: They are only a small part of hundreds of millions of mothers, but their greatness is enough to shine on our hearts. We have praised their love countless times. But every time we don't accept its touch! As Roman Roland said: Motherly love is a huge flame. Wenchuan earthquake, a lot of selfless maternal love appeared in a short time. The heat they give off heats our hearts. In fact, my mother's love for us is also great at ordinary times, but we take it for granted and rarely. So we should repay our mother in ordinary dribs and drabs. Help mom with housework, hit her back, and care more about her. Don't let mom worry, it's also the best reward for mom!