Write a composition with Yanmen Taishouhang

1. Learn the narrative of the Wild Goose Gate

Autumn wind whizzes by, rolling up the dead leaves and dust scattered outside the city wall, accompanied by the depressing sound of drums. The vast sky is squeezed by dark clouds, and the sun can't penetrate at all, like a burning war raging wildly in the distance. Under the city wall, countless hostile soldiers roar, golden armor shines with light. The sound of trumpets resounds around. Like countless sad autumn winds, it is cold and bitter. There are countless purple soils attached to the inside and outside of the Great Wall, which reflect each other under the dark night. The cold wind passes against the military flag and also hits the soldiers. Just like the troops of the long snake have passed through the frost condensed by Xiao Shui, which is extremely cold. The drum skin on the chariot was wet by the wind, and the drums of drums sounded dull. In order to defend the territory and repay the emperor. 2. Change "Wild Goose Gate Taishouxing" into a 6-word composition

Please refer to it ~ You still have to write this composition yourself ~ `````````` Wild Goose Gate Taishouxing (1) Li He's dark clouds are crushing the city, and the light is spreading to the sun.

The role is full of autumn colors, and it is filled with rouge to make the night purple. Half a roll of red flag is near Xiao (2), and the frost is heavy and cold.

rolling on the golden platform of Jun means that Jade Dragon (3) will be your death. Note 1 The Great Guard of Yanmen: The Old Title of Yue Fu's Xiang He Ge Se Diao Qu.

The ancient Yanmen County occupies the present northwest of Shanxi. ② Yishui: In Yixian County, Hebei Province today.

③ Yulong: refers to the sword. Comments on many poems by Li He are difficult to understand. There are different interpretations of this poem, but they are unable to agree.

The understanding of poetry is also very different. After this short poem, it says that the enemy is in danger of Xiao, and the sword is vowed to the death? Its theme is really related to fighting.

However, the first four sentences focus on the scenery, except that "Jia Hua" and "the sound of horns" indicate that there are soldiers here, and there is no clear description of besieged city and breakthrough. Therefore, the differences in interpretation are mostly due to different experiences of "implication".

although the meaning beyond words is beyond words, it still comes from words. A poem accumulates words into sentences and sentences into articles, becoming an internally related whole.

the first four sentences of this poem are quite difficult to understand, but the last four sentences are quite clear. After explaining the last four sentences clearly and looking back at the first four sentences, the meaning of the whole article is not difficult to understand.

read the last four sentences first. "Half-rolled red flag near Yishui" implies that there was a marching process before "near Yishui".

the "half-rolled red flag" is to reduce resistance, which is a feature of marching, such as "the red flag is half-rolled out of Yuanmen". The word "pro" also shows the momentum of marching.

So, did you meet the enemy after Lin Yishui? If so, what is the strength contrast? Who is the situation in favor of? All this is not described positively in the last three sentences, but the implication is clear: first, "facing the Yi River" indicates that progress is blocked, and it is reminiscent of "Song of Yi River": "The wind is rustling and the water is cold, and the strong man will never return." Second, drumming for marching, but "the frost is heavy and the drums are cold" implies the seriousness of the war situation through the unfavorable natural conditions.

in the last two sentences, it is written that the Lord will go into battle with a sword and swear to fight to the death to repay your kindness, so it is self-evident that the enemy is now. The first sentence is marked with the word "black" on the "cloud", and the atmosphere is already heavy.

And this "dark cloud" has "overwhelmed the city" and even overwhelmed it, which is obviously symbolic. The word "black" on the "cloud" is naturally not used to symbolize our army but the enemy.

The enemy forces are besieging the city so fiercely that our army can only survive if it is surrounded by deus ex. "A bright light spreads to the sun", which is in sharp contrast with the previous sentence in color and form. It clearly contains joy and praise, and of course refers to our army.

At first, the city was besieged by dark clouds, but then the dark clouds collapsed and the red sun was in the sky. The golden armor of our soldiers was like patches of gold scales in the sunlight, dazzling people's eyes. That is to say, we have fought our way out of the isolated city and defeated the enemy soldiers.

one or two sentences write siege and breakthrough, which constitute a unit of meaning. The following eight sentences are written to pursue victory until the enemy arrives in Xiao, which is another unit of meaning.

"Jiao" is an ancient military musical instrument. There is a record of "blowing the horn and withdrawing troops" in the biography of Northern History of Wang Yanzong of Chiande.

in the context, the phrase "the sound of horns is full of autumn colors" is based on virtual realism. Show the magnificent scene of the enemy retreating and chasing in the reader's imagination.

The word "night" in "Plugging rouge to coagulate night purple" takes care of the word "day" in the first sentence, indicating that it has been a long time since the breakthrough, and both sides have killed each other. "Put rouge on it", the old explanation quoted in "Notes on Ancient and Modern Times", "Qin built the Great Wall, and the soil color is purple, so it is called purple plug", which is generally good.

closely following the sound of "horn" and "autumn color", it makes people want to see the blood of war; Adding a word "coagulation" before "purple" further strengthens this association. From "day" to "night" and even "frost" in the middle of the night, the pursuers have already arrived in Yishui, and the enemy naturally arrived in Yishui first.

If the enemy wants to cross the water, the whole army may resume its service, so it can only be last stand. When you think of Han Xin's backwater array, you will know how severe the situation facing the pursuers is! It is a reflection of this grim situation that the drums can't afford to beat and the Lord will swear to death.

As for the result of the quick war, let readers imagine. Poets use special artistic techniques to express their unique artistic imagination, or use symbols, hints, or contrasts, or use virtual reality, sound visualization, and part for the whole, leaving readers with too broad imagination space, so readers' understanding varies from person to person.

The outstanding features of Li He's poems are novel imagery, bright colors, novel modeling and rich and strange imagination. In The Wild Goose Gate, these characteristics are fully and fully reflected.

Take the last two sentences as an example to see how he pays attention to coloring and modeling. These two sentences say that the Lord will repay the monarch's kindness in meeting him, and he will fight to the death, but without conceptual language, he will highlight the external image and inner activities of the Lord through modeling and coloring.

During the Warring States Period, Yan Zhaowang built a platform to attract talents, because it was called "Huang Jintai". "Jade Dragon" was used as a sword in the Tang Dynasty.

gold and white jade are valued by the world for their texture and color. "Dragon" is a noble animal in ancient legends, and "Huang Jintai" is a symbol of thirst for talent.

The poet chose the shapes of "Jade Dragon" and "Huang Jintai" to create the poem "Celebrating the King's Golden Platform, Supporting Jade Dragon to Die for the King", and the image of a high-spirited general will be in sight. His lofty spirit of not sacrificing his life for the country and the virtue of the monarch's reuse of talents give readers a strong and beautiful feeling.

Note first: Yanmen County is now the north of Ningwu, Shanxi Province and the south of Shuoxian County. Eastern Datong.

northern and other places. Taishou, official name, county head.

Yuefu Poetry Collection includes Wild Goose Gate Taishouxing, which is one of the thirty-eight songs of Xianghe Gese Tune. This poem is a quasi-ancient Yuefu poem.

Dark clouds: The Book of Jin explains: "(There is a dark cloud like a house above a fortified city, and it is known as the essence of the army). Horn: a device blown by the army, such as the present horn.

(Swallow's fat congeals purple at night) "Notes on Ancient and Modern Times": "Qin built the Great Wall, and the soil color is all purple, so it is called Zisai" {I feel here. "Yanzhi" is probably another word.

it should be "rouge". My personal opinion is this. Because in order to set off the word "night purple" behind.

lay out the colors first. Rouge is red.

So the purple in the red is even more shocking. Plus the color of "rouge" is like blood.

focus on the fierceness of the war. Rivers of blood, coupled with the cold weather, are even more terrifying at night.

add the darkness of night. More infectious.

but it may not be that my point of view is correct. } Yi Shui: "Yi Shui" is recorded in Justice in Historical Records. 3. Change "Wild Goose Gate Taishouxing" into a 6-word composition

Please refer to it ~ You still have to write this composition yourself ~ `````````` Wild Goose Gate Taishouxing (1) Li He's dark clouds are crushing the city, and the light is spreading to the sun.

The role is full of autumn colors, and it is filled with rouge to make the night purple. Half a roll of red flag is near Xiao (2), and the frost is heavy and cold.

rolling on the golden platform of Jun means that Jade Dragon (3) will be your death. Note 1 The Great Guard of Yanmen: The Old Title of Yue Fu's Xiang He Ge Se Diao Qu.

The ancient Yanmen County occupies the present northwest of Shanxi. ② Yishui: In Yixian County, Hebei Province today.

③ Yulong: refers to the sword. Comments on many poems by Li He are difficult to understand. There are different interpretations of this poem, but they are unable to agree.

The understanding of poetry is also very different. After this short poem, it says that the enemy is in danger of Xiao, and the sword is vowed to the death? Its theme is really related to fighting.

However, the first four sentences focus on the scenery, except that "Jia Hua" and "the sound of horns" indicate that there are soldiers here, and there is no clear description of besieged city and breakthrough. Therefore, the differences in interpretation are mostly due to different experiences of "implication".

although the meaning beyond words is beyond words, it still comes from words. A poem accumulates words into sentences and sentences into articles, becoming an internally related whole.

the first four sentences of this poem are quite difficult to understand, but the last four sentences are quite clear. After explaining the last four sentences clearly and looking back at the first four sentences, the meaning of the whole article is not difficult to understand.

read the last four sentences first. "Half-rolled red flag near Yishui" implies that there was a marching process before "near Yishui".

the "half-rolled red flag" is to reduce resistance, which is a feature of marching, such as "the red flag is half-rolled out of Yuanmen". The word "pro" also shows the momentum of marching.

So, did you meet the enemy after Lin Yishui? If so, what is the strength contrast? Who is the situation in favor of? All this is not described positively in the last three sentences, but the implication is clear: first, "facing the Yi River" indicates that progress is blocked, and it is reminiscent of "Song of Yi River": "The wind is rustling and the water is cold, and the strong man will never return." Second, drumming for marching, but "the frost is heavy and the drums are cold" implies the seriousness of the war situation through the unfavorable natural conditions.

in the last two sentences, it is written that the Lord will go into battle with a sword and swear to fight to the death to repay your kindness, so it is self-evident that the enemy is now. The first sentence is marked with the word "black" on the "cloud", and the atmosphere is already heavy.

And this "dark cloud" has "overwhelmed the city" and even overwhelmed it, which is obviously symbolic. The word "black" on the "cloud" is naturally not used to symbolize our army but the enemy.

The enemy forces are besieging the city so fiercely, so our army can only survive if it is surrounded by deus ex. "A bright light spreads to the sun", which is in sharp contrast with the previous sentence in color and form. It clearly contains joy and praise, and of course refers to our army.

At first, the city was besieged by dark clouds, but then the dark clouds collapsed and the red sun was in the sky. The golden armor of our soldiers was like patches of gold scales in the sunlight, dazzling people's eyes. That is to say, we have fought our way out of the isolated city and defeated the enemy soldiers.

one or two sentences write siege and breakthrough, which constitute a unit of meaning. The following eight sentences are written to pursue victory until the enemy arrives in Xiao, which is another unit of meaning.

"Jiao" is an ancient military musical instrument. There is a record of "blowing horns and withdrawing troops" in the biography of Northern History of Wang Yanzong of Chiande.

in the context, the phrase "the sound of horns is full of autumn colors" is based on virtual realism. Show the magnificent scene of the enemy retreating and chasing in the reader's imagination.

The word "night" in "Plugging rouge to coagulate night purple" takes care of the word "day" in the first sentence, indicating that it has been a long time since the breakthrough, and both sides have killed each other. "Put rouge on it", the old explanation quoted in "Notes on Ancient and Modern Times", "Qin built the Great Wall, and the soil color is purple, so it is called purple plug", which is generally good.

closely following the sound of "horn" and "autumn color", it makes people want to see the blood of war; Adding a word "coagulation" before "purple" further strengthens this association. From "day" to "night" and even "frost" in the middle of the night, the pursuers have already arrived in Yishui, and the enemy naturally arrived in Yishui first.

If the enemy wants to cross the water, the whole army may resume its service, so it can only be last stand. When you think of Han Xin's backwater array, you will know how severe the situation facing the pursuers is! It is a reflection of this grim situation that the drums can't afford to beat and the Lord will swear to death.

As for the result of the quick war, let readers imagine. Poets use special artistic techniques to express their unique artistic imagination, or use symbols, hints, or contrasts, or use virtual reality, sound visualization, and part for the whole, leaving readers with too broad imagination space, so readers' understanding varies from person to person.

The outstanding features of Li He's poems are novel imagery, bright colors, novel modeling and rich and strange imagination. In The Wild Goose Gate, these characteristics are fully and fully reflected.

Take the last two sentences as an example to see how he pays attention to coloring and modeling. These two sentences say that the Lord will repay the monarch's kindness in meeting him, and he will fight to the death, but without conceptual language, he will highlight the external image and inner activities of the Lord through modeling and coloring.

During the Warring States Period, Yan Zhaowang built a platform to attract talents, because it was called "Huang Jintai". "Jade Dragon" was used as a sword in the Tang Dynasty.

gold and white jade are valued by the world for their texture and color. "Dragon" is a noble animal in ancient legends, and "Huang Jintai" is a symbol of thirst for talent.

The poet chooses the shapes of "Jade Dragon" and "Huang Jintai" to create the poem "Celebrating the King's Golden Platform and Supporting Jade Dragon to Die for the King", and the image of a high-spirited general will be in sight. His lofty spirit of not sacrificing his life for the country and the virtue of the monarch's reuse of talents give readers a strong and beautiful feeling.

Note first: Yanmen County is now the north of Ningwu, Shanxi Province and the south of Shuoxian County. Eastern Datong.

northern and other places. Taishou, official name, county head.

Yuefu Poetry Collection includes Wild Goose Gate Taishouxing, which is one of the thirty-eight songs of Xianghe Gese Tune. This poem is a quasi-ancient Yuefu poem.

Dark clouds: The Book of Jin explains: "(There is a dark cloud like a house above a fortified city, and it is known as the essence of the army). Horn: a device blown by the army, such as the present horn.

(Swallow's fat congeals purple at night) "Notes on Ancient and Modern Times": "Qin built the Great Wall, and the soil color is all purple, so it is called Zisai" {I feel here. "Yanzhi" is probably another word.

it should be "rouge". My personal opinion is this. Because in order to set off the word "night purple" behind.

lay out the colors first. Rouge is red.

So the purple in the red is even more shocking. Plus the color of "rouge" is like blood.

focus on the fierceness of the war. Rivers of blood, coupled with the cold weather, are even more terrifying at night.

add the darkness of night. More infectious.

but it may not be that my point of view is correct. } Yi Shui: "Yi Shui" is recorded in Justice in Historical Records. 4. Rewrite the Wild Goose Gate Taishouxing into a narrative essay of about 5 words, with the title

A setting sun, an isolated city, a warrior and a poet.

He, Li He, is at least a relative of the country, but now he can only be Shi Gui who uses poetry as his sword and lives in the frontier. Let it be, let it be It's worth dying for Datang! He knew about the enemy's situation long ago, but he Li He didn't expect it to be so fast. As soon as night fell, the enemy's army came like a dark cloud.

how long can he hold on to tens of thousands of defenders in the face of the dense and endless enemy soldiers? Enemy at the Gates, his heart seems to rise in general awe-inspiring, "people are inherently mortal, or heavier than Mount Tai, or lighter than a feather", which was originally filled.