Thank you for your poem. Please correct it. I hope to be more literary and sincere.

Flowers are grateful.

Selfless nourishment of rain and dew

Eagle Thanksgiving Day

Soaring in the sky

Gaoshan thanksgiving

The solid arms of the earth

I'm more grateful.

The teacher's stern eyes

Three-foot platform,

Is the world where you display your talents;

New teaching methods,

Use the magic of turning stone into gold.

Sweating, working hard,

For the early maturity of today's seedlings;

Pour your heart into the water,

Let the flowers of the motherland be more beautiful.

Late at night, you correct your homework,

Accompanied by your lover's snoring;

Dawn, you write a lesson plan,

What soothes you is the child's dream.

You are the sunrise reflecting the red east.

Hold up hope and the rising sun at first;

You are a shining red candle,

Illuminate others and burn yourself.

Birds encounter wind and rain.

Will always hide in its nest

There is a storm in my heart.

Always hiding in your arms

You are my umbrella and wall against the rain.

Three years of follow-up guidance

How can I repay you?

Whether Qin Xin and Yi Yan are cold or not.

Peaches are ripe, plums are ripe, and skills are incomplete.

It is easy to grow flowers, but difficult to educate people.

The smell of the valley is extraordinary.

Poetry is full of people, and paintings are full of people.

People laugh together.

It is you! Teacher!

You use hard sweat.

Raising the tender seedlings that have just broken ground in spring.

Think about our days together.

You said it was like watching a movie.

can't forget it

The seeds we planted when we studied agriculture.

* * * can also be like us.

Grow sturdily under the baptism of sunshine

can't forget it

We are heroic in the sports field.

Enthusiastic cheerleaders in the audience

What a United group this used to be.

can't forget it

We smile with tears in class.

More memorable.

The deep feeling of parting.

The name engraved on the slate may not last forever.

A name engraved on a stone cannot last long.

However, the teacher's name

But it is deeply engraved in our hearts.

No matter how time goes by, things are changing.

Will be remembered forever.

I'll compare mine with yours. Almost all unreasonable expressions or untidy sentences have been changed, but the meaning has not changed, but it is more intimate.