Ask Jiang Yang about Lao Wang's evaluation

First, the overall grasp

This article wrote several fragments of Lao Wang's life. Lao Wang has suffered all his life. Survive on an old tricycle. During the "Cultural Revolution", the tricycle carrying passengers was banned, and his livelihood was even more embarrassing, so he had to make do with it. He has been a bachelor all his life and is very lonely. He lives in a remote alley, with a shabby hut and bad eyes. His life is bleak and difficult.

But Lao Wang is kind-hearted, upright, responsible and caring. He needs money, but he never charges a penny more for doing business, and he is very affectionate and righteous. He is often willing to do his duty or charge less.

Novels, poems and literary works were all written during the Cultural Revolution, which was a turbulent and absurd era. Academic authority was regarded as "reactionary academic authority", which was pushed to the ground by the rebels and trampled on wantonly. However, any bad style has no influence on Lao Wang. He still respects the author and his wife. He recognized them as good people, thanked them for their kindness, and thanked them when he died. Although the Lao Wang described by the author is poor and humble, his spirit has not been polluted. He has a moral conscience and is an extremely simple and kind person.

Second, the problem research

1. Why can the author's family care and love such an unfortunate person as Lao Wang so much? People with superior social status and living conditions often look down on humble people. What kind of spirit should we have to respect, understand and care for people like authors?

Judging from the article, the most important thing is the concept of equality. In the author's opinion, people are born equal, with different circumstances, even great differences, but the differences are caused by luck and misfortune. The so-called luck and misfortune include natural conditions, growth conditions and physical conditions. Lucky people only have the responsibility to take care of the unfortunate people, and there is no reason to discriminate against the unfortunate people. With the sense of equality, we can talk on an equal footing and feel that people have come to our door. It is a pity that we didn't invite him to sit down and have a cup of tea.

Then there is the humanitarian spirit. This spirit requires the society to care for and sympathize with individuals, respect their contribution to society, respect their personality, safeguard the basic rights of social members and promote the all-round development of all workers. The author's family has this spirit towards Lao Wang. Knowing that Lao Wang had night blindness, he sent a large bottle of cod liver oil. They always take care of Lao Wang's business, take his car and let him make some money. Lao Wang is always polite to collect money. They always pay at the original price. I don't dare to sit flat for three rounds, but I still care about whether old Wang Can can support his life. In a word, only by caring about the unfortunate people can we care and love people so much.

In the last few days of his life, Lao Wang was stiff and looked very scary. There is only sympathy and sadness in the author's heart. Lao Wang has been dead for several years, and I always feel ashamed of this unfortunate person when I think about it. He always felt that he didn't care enough about him before his death. These are all the socialist humanitarian spirits advocated by citizen's moral construction.

The material of this essay is trivial, but it has become an organic whole through the organization of the author. How is the author organized?

To study this problem, we can make an outline first, and then explore why we should arrange it this way. It can be seen that the author uses both logical order and chronological order to arrange. The first four paragraphs first write three basic information about Lao Wang. These three points are arranged in logical order. One is occupation, which is Lao Wang's means of making a living, the other is physical defect, which is Lao Wang's difficulty in making a living, and the third is living conditions, which are the results of the first two points. With less income, life is of course bitter. The following three paragraphs, in chronological order, recall Lao Wang's work and life. Two paragraphs describe him as a good man, and one describes that during the Cultural Revolution, his livelihood became more and more difficult. The last episode is the day before Lao Wang died, which can best reflect Lao Wang's kindness.

In addition to the orderly arrangement of paragraphs, we should also dig out clues that run through the whole text. It can be seen that the communication between the author and Lao Wang is a clue. Sitting in Lao Wang's tricycle, chatting all the way, the author is approachable and Lao Wang is willing to tell his life story. Writing about Lao Wang's eye disease, he said that his daughter gave him a large bottle of cod liver oil, which shows that the family took care of Lao Wang. Lao Wang is kind to Qian's family, and both sides are always very polite in service charges. You can't sit on the platform after changing from three to three rounds. The author is still very concerned about Lao Wang, which is good for Lao Wang, so Lao Wang always feels indebted and wants to express his gratitude in the last days of his life. Taking each other's communication as a clue, the full text comes down in one continuous line and becomes an organic whole.